Redeemer: Guardian of Equestria

by Hardcase9855

Rating: mature
Tags: Cutie Mark Crusaders, Tragedy, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Human, Main 6, Princess Luna, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Sad, Other
Length: 1663

an Archangel in Equestria

An Archangel known only as the Redeemer, a true hero,forged by gold and Divine Blood, is sent by the Holy Father to protect the innocent lives of Equestria, from Satan and his legions of Hell, and his arch-nemesis, Redaki

Published 2013-11-07 17:00:02 UTC
Last updated 2014-03-25 01:16:43 UTC

The Assignment

Earth...the ever-lasting pisshole for heaven and hell.

humans, created in the Lords good image, have been violated by Satan and his lies.

I should know, I was tasked with protecting them from the Legions of Hell.

I will never stop, rest or die, until they are truly immune to sin

I...am...REDEEMER, GUARDIAN OF THE HUMAN RACE!

........or at least, I used to be...

......I suppose I should start from the begining, I used to be your standard warrior angel, I was created to protect the Holy Lord. But then Lucifer, a trusted angel and my...friend, betrayed us, tried to overthrow the Father, and for what? Greed and power. He ws defeated and banished to the fiery pit of Hell. But in the battle, I was nearly killed. As I lay dying, the Lord came to me with a choice, a chance to live, and protect innocent lives from Lucifer's acidic speech of lies. I accepted.

But the choice came with a price, I was to have a new body, new strength, but the price...I HAD to stay on Earth, the Third Kingdom. I could only enter heaven when the Lord called for my presence.

As I stepped into a pool of gold and heavenly fire, I could feel all my fears and pain wash away, only to be replaced by strength, and a hatred for sin.

And there was also another feeling, a feeling I have never felt before...I was INVINCIBLE!

And now to the present, I was stabding on a church roof in Las Angelas, the so-called "City of Angels", when I was magically transported to the Lord's throne room, where I say the holy one sitting on a throne of gold and silver.

He had dark brown hair with grey streaks in it, signifying his age, running down to his shoulders. he had a beard that resembled that of a certain human, what was his name, Chuck...Norris, sounds about right. He was wearing a plain white suit.

"Father,"I spoke,"What have you called me for?"

"Come Redeemer,"the Lord said,"I need to show you something"

The two beings walked down a hall filled with other warrior angels. Most bowed or nodded their heads in repect. Whilst others were so obsorbed in their dutied that they didn't notice the two celestial beings walk past. We then a room the likes of which I had never seen. But that wasn't the strange part. Inside the room were two equines.

One was white with a rainbow mane & tail, it had a horn and wings, and a picture of the sun on its flank. The other was dark blue with a mane & tail that resembled the night sky. It also had a horn and wings, and a picture of a crescent moon on its flank.

"Uhhh...Lord?,"I said,"What exactly am I looking at?"

"Redeemer, I'd like for you to meet Princess Celestia and her younger sister, Princess Luna,"

The white one, Celestia, was the first to speak,"It is a pleasure to meet you Redeemer"

The blue one, Luna, nodded,"Indeed, we have heard so much about you!"

I simply stared,"The pleasure...is mine"I turned my head to the Father,"Why are they here?"

The Lord looked down,"Remember our deal, Redilous?"

I was shocked, Redilous was my old name, before I was turned into Redeemer, the only time the Lord used my old name was when...he...was telling me something has changed,"Indeed, I remember"

"Well, Equestria, the princesses world, is in danger of subcoming to sin,"he took a breath before continuing,"I told the princesses that there was an angel that had an unregistered strength and determination, that would never stop until he is dead or until his job is complete"

I gasped,"Lord, you don't mean..."

"Indeed I do, Redilous,"He smiled,"You...are to be Equestria's newest guardian"

Meet the Elements of Harmony & Toby

*Third-Person Perspective*

That was five hours ago; since then Redeemer has been taken on a tour throughout Canterlot Castle, a personal tour led by the princesses themselves. They were eager to show their new Guardian of Equestria how they’re government worked.

“So…,”Luna started,” What do you think of our castle?”

Redeemer thought about the question before answering, “It’s…marvelous, from my perspective.”

The princesses smiled and bowed their heads, accepting the compliment. Two guards opened the doors to the room they were in and walked through; following them were six female ponies and a small human, who looked around nine-years-old.

“Your majesties,” the guards bowed, “the Elements of Harmony, and your nephew are here as you requested.”

Celestia nodded at the guard, “Thank you guardsman. You may leave us.”

The guards did as they were told and left the room, leaving the princesses, the elements, the human boy, and the Archangel in the room alone.

Celestia pointed to each of the ponies, “Redeemer, these are the Elements of Harmony: Twilight Sparkle, Princess and Element of Magic, Rarity Belle the Element of Generosity, Pinkie Pie the Element of Laughter, Applejack the Element of Honesty, Rainbow Dash the Element of Loyalty, and Fluttershy the Element of Kindness.”

The Element/Princess of Magic, Twilight Sparkle, had a lavender-colored coat, with a dark purple mane & tail with violet and pink streaks through it. Her cutie mark was a symbol of the North Star.

The Element of Generosity, Rarity Belle, had a pearl-white coat, with a dark violet mane & tail. Her cutie mark was symbol of three diamonds.

The Element of Laughter, Pinkie Pie, had a pink coat, with a hot pink mane & tail. Her cutie mark was a symbol of three balloons, two blue ones and one gold/yellow one.

The Element of Honesty, Applejack, had an orange coat, with a blonde mane & tail. Her cutie mark was a symbol of three apples.

The Element of Loyalty, Rainbow Dash, had a cyan blue coat, with a rainbow main & tail. Her cutie mark was a symbol was a cloud with a rainbow-colored lightning bolt.

And finally, the Element of Kindness, Fluttershy, had a soft yellow coat, with a light pink mane & tail. Her cutie mark was a symbol of three butterflies.

Redeemer nodded his head to the six ponies. But stopped to look at the small boy. He was wearing a red sweatshirt, blue jeans, and black sneakers. He had Caucasian skin, with dark, chocolate-ish brown hair. He had brown eyes and black glasses.

Redeemer bent down to where he was making eye-contact with the boy, “Hello there little one,” He said softly, “what’s your name and what brings you this far away from home?”

The boy looked at the Archangel and smiled, “My names Toby, Mr. Angel, and this IS my home. Fluttershy is my momma, and her friends & princesses are my aunties!”

Redeemer put his hand to his chin in thought, and nodded, remembering that Celestia spoke of her nephew, but he never thought that this young boy would be said nephew.

“Well Toby it is a pleasure to meet you,” The Archangel said proudly, “and no need to call me ‘Mr. Angel’, Redeemer is fine.”

Toby smiled and nodded vigorously, “Okay Redeemer!”

Redeemer smiled, ‘Maybe being the Guardian of Equestria, won’t be so bad after all…’

Meeting the Devil, and the Anti-Redeemer

'Maybe being the Guardian of Equestria, won't be so bad after-all', Redeemer thought

Just then, the doors to the throne room opened up and in limped a fatally wounded guard. His rear end was covered in blood, as if something or someone tried to rape him. There were several gashes across his chest and forehooves. And finally, there was blood trickling from his snout and right corner of his mouth.

Toby, the Mane Six, and the princesses stared at the guard in horror. Except for Redeemer, who immediately dashed to help the guard, his dark, sage green cape rippling through the wind he made as he did. He caught the guard as he fell, and looked at the wounded stallion, "What happened to you guardsman?"

The guard looked at the golden cross that covered his face, " I-I don't know, sir a-a-a beast...I-it came from the ground, a-as if he was born from the flames of the sun-errr-himself ", the guard took a breath before continuing, " He was followed by a being that looked...looked a LOT like yourself... he-he...killed all my comrades. I-I barely escaped with my life, but it appears, I didn't escape fast enough..."

And with a final breath, the passed away, Redeemer stared at the body in disbelief. He then looked to the ponies, who were all crying and trembling, but none were more scared than Toby, who was practically bawling into Fluttershy's fur

'Poor child', Redeemer thought,' mustn't have seen a dead body in his entire life'

Suddenly, a frighteningly familiar shadow appeared behind him, and Redeemer turned around, only to be greeted by a fist smashing into his face and sending flying across the room into Celestia's throne. The ponies and child, surprised that something could knock the Archangel off his feet, turned to see something horribly surprising. They saw the Redeemer, but...it WASN'T the Redeemer.

This...thing was different in several ways. Instead of having blue armor, gold trims and armor, and a green cape. This thing had black armor, silver trims and armor, and a dark, violet-purple cape. AND, also unlike the Redeemer, who had an aura of pure heart and justice. This guy had an aura, if you could call it that, of hatred, rape, greed basically everything that the Redeemer stood against.

"Redaki"

So that's what this thing is called. Redaki.

Then a figure came through the entrance. The figure was male, with bright red skin, bat wings on his back and two fairly big horns coming out of the side of his head. His black hair was greased back, and he gave a sneer that screamed sin. Just being in the presence of this guy send shivers down everybody's spine...except for Redeemer, who looked at the figure and growled...

"Lucifer"