Mack's Mad Adventuresby makmixChaptersStory 1: "Intro for Mack" and "The Love Story for the AgesStory 2: "The Dischord Incident and how he Reacted" and "Making Friends"Story 3: "The Big End" and "Epilouge"Story 1: "Intro for Mack" and "The Love Story for the AgesMack was lying on his cloud, enjoying the day. His cutie mark as obvious as a haystack on fire. You see he was not a normal seraph. He was quite insane in fact. He talks to inanimate objects and just creeps the living hell out of the other folk in Ponyville. He was raised in Cloudsdale with his parents. The Spinnersons were delighted that they had a son, though they knew they had an insane child on their hands. So they sent him to Junior Speedster Flight Camp (or what ever it is called). They had thought right. The day Rainbow Dash did the sonic rainboom, he was on a shifty cloud. The boom itself had sent Mack spinning off his cloud. He soon harnessed that spin and he made it into his own personal art form. He had spun faster and faster as the tiny whiteish-gray twister spun through. As he whipped by clouds, he had made them into a perfect shape. Any cloud within a foot or was in the path of Mack, they were either improved or shaped into a magnificent sculpture. Once he stopped, his flank (or in this case his upper thigh) had his cutie mark. The black twister. He grew up loving it. He had followed Dash to Ponyville. He had decided to stay at the town. He knew the town and the town eventually grew on to know him. So, when he had heard that the Princess’s own protégé had came, he had to meet her. “’Ello lass, good day to you.” Mack greeted. “Well, good day to you.” Twilight said. “Finally a pony who isn’t crazy.” Twi thought. “Well, I do be askin’ what are ya doin’ here?” Mack asked. “I’m here to supervise the celebration, and dare I ask what you are doing.” Twi inquired. “I’m supposed to be helpin’ out Dash clear the sky, but since ya sweet talked her into doing it, I took a break.” Mack said. “Ah, so I’ll be on my way then.” Twi said. “Ok then lass, watch out for flying pigs and talking spiders.” Mack stated Twi walked away head hung low disappointed. “He is a crazy one….” Twi thought. So, Mack had left his impression and well, you all know what happens. If you don’t, here it is in a nutshell. Nightmare Moon revealed her self, kidnapped Celestia, makes it night forever, the mane six gets the elements of harmony and beat her. All that while he was asleep in the town hall where Celestia would have been greeted. If he was awake, he would be laughing his damn arse off. So, after that fiasco, he wakes up in Fluttershy’s yard. Knowing himself, he had sleep flown. A common trait for Mack. As he got up, he met Fluttershy face to face both nearly in each others eyes. They both stand six inches from one another. Fluttershy in her turtleneck sweater and her long skirt instead of her shortened pants and her slippers. Mack in his loose shirt and bell bottom jeans and tennis shoes. Both have wings as majestic as a Pegasus. Seraphs, they are, Mack’s wings a nice white, while Fluttershy’s a nice lemon yellow. Once Mack had looked into those eyes, he fell in love. Though the same could not be said for Fluttershy. She shied away, but Mack whistled a tune. As if he had Fluttershy’s gift, the birds whistled back. Fluttershy looked amazed. They are very different in appearance. Her healthy, white skin and her long flowing pink hair. His red, spiky short hair and nine o’ clock shave, and his light tan skin. Fluttershy was first to break the silence, if she did at all. “U-U-ummm, who are you?” asked Fluttershy quietly. “The names, Mack, Mack Spinnerson, but you can call me Mack.” He replied heavily still deep in love. “Hi, umm, I’m Fluttershy, nice to meet you.” She said with her head still turned aside. “Ahem, I got a little somethin’ for ya.” Mack said as he blasted off straight up to a cloud. He started spinning and he shaped a cloud into a heart, shrunk it and stuffed it into a jar and sealed it. He flew back down spinning and as he stopped, the twister stopped from bottom to top like a curtain rising up. “Here ya go lass, a present from me to you.” Mack said as he bowed down and presented the gift. Fluttershy blushed red as she took the cloud in a jar, “T-T-Thank you….” Fluttershy look dumbfounded as she walked into her house with Angel following her, and before he went in, he turned around and he gave a wink to Mack. So, as time passes by, he watches over the mane six and helps them here and there. Fluttershy and the others were a bit apprehensive to the help from the insane seraph of Ponyville. His case doesn’t help as he talks to the inanimate objects he moves around as he helps. Like the apples, the books, the pastries, the dresses, and the items around Fluttershy’s home. They eventually got used to his assistance and Fluttershy, a little bit more. The day it was Pinkie’s birthday, he was sent to watch over Pinkie. He signaled the others information about Pinkie. When Pinkie went nuts, he took it upon himself to watch over her. He observed the mental breakdown and, well was intrigued by it. He had flown off when Dash came in to get Pinkie. He took notes, though, how Pinkie Pie developed others out of objects just to be with parties and how her hair became straight and not a poofy mess it usually is. In all honest, his own insanity has died down. His desire to want Fluttershy to be his one and only has changed his daily life. Instead of spins that cause chaos to the town, it helps now. He has came to be known not as the insane seraph, but the helper of the town. This is where we left off in the intro. Mack on his cloud, looking up at the sky. “So, Puffy, do you think I should talk to her?” He asked the cloud. The cloud didn’t reply, but Mack heard it reply. “You sure Puffy, I think it’s a wee bit too early.” Mack said as he flipped over. The cloud stayed silent. “Ok Puffy, you are one persistent cloud you are lad.” Mack zoomed off to Fluttershy’s house. Though the thought of her had caused him to go off balance and he lost control. As he was coming in, Fluttershy was leaving here house. As he came in he landed on his feet and started skidding. Fluttershy gave a little scream before impact. Like it is seen in the movies and TV shows, their lips came together in an accidental kiss. They didn’t stop like some people would, however they kept on kissing. His tough look meeting her feminine, graceful look. They look like they would be a couple. Mack broke the kiss and was the first to speak. “WELL, that was one way to greet someone.” Mack said with a bit of a chuckle, his cheeks red. “Yes, yes it is. A very different way also. Nice landing by the way.” She giggled. They have that awkward moment of silence as both of them with red cheeks. Then, Fluttershy started. “I was, umm, actually going out to find you.” “Oh ya did lass?” Mack said surprised. Fluttershy nodded, “I kinda’, sorta’ started to like you. That’s why I was heading out to find you so I could ask you something… Oh this is embarrassing.” “Nothing is embarrassing around me lass.” Mack stated Fluttershy is a bright red when she blurted it out. “Willyoucometocanterlotwithmetomorrownight!!!! EEP!” She stopped as she put her hands over her mouth and pointed her head down, her eyes closed. Mack moved his hand under her chin and slowly lifted her head up, her eyes open and looking into his own. While the moment was ripe, Mack said. “If ya be askin’ me on a date, stop askin’ because I accept lass…. err, Fluttershy.” She squeed with joy as she kissed him on the cheek and left to go with the animals. Mack had darted off back into the skies to prepare at his parents. Mack has no real home as he goes from house to house asking to stay. They usually let him as he fixes his own bed and leaves with out breakfast. He stays at his parents every once in a while and this is one of those every once in a while. As he prepares his parents come in. “Oh, how I have waited for this day. Our son has a girlfriend and is going on their first date!” his mom, Kite, said. “Oi, I agree with ya honey, especially since he was asked to go with her to the Gala. Oh how great will this be eh? Our lad has grown up…” his dad, Speedy, said. Once Mack had heard “Gala” he darted off as his parents were about to give something to him. He darted off to Rarity’s shop to get a better suit that what he has. He barged in yelling. “RARITY, I NEED A NEW SUIT LASS!” Rarity responded with disgust, “Well, that was certainly rude of you barging in. Now, why would YOU need a suit? I did owe you a favor, but I thought it would be finding you a house.” “It’s Fluttershy, she asked me out to the Gala.” Mack replied. “My, my, I didn’t know she had a fancy for you. Well darling, tell me the design and I’ll have the design in about 2 hours tops.” Rarity said. Mack said it in the kindest of tones. “I want a sleek black jacket with a white undershirt and black tie, with white stripes. Accompanied by sleek black pants and black loafers and to top it off, a white fedora with my cutie mark, the black twister.” Rarity took it all in and responded, “Ok, this should not take more than 2 hours like I said. Be here by then ok.” Mack nodded and bolted out the door and met his parent’s right outside. “You left before we could give you something.” His mom said as she handed him a gold ticket to the Grand Galloping Gala. “Have fun sport and ya be careful lad, ya hear me.” His dad said. Mack nodded as his parents started to fly off back to their home. Their entrails a spiral of clouds. Mack darted off himself as he was just spinning in the air shaping clouds into random figures and shapes. The 2 hours blew by like it was nothing as he returned to Rarity’s shop. His suit is perfection as he walked in. Included a neatly designed hole for his wings. “Ah right on time, the suit is finished. Also included some onyx for the inside flaps near your buttons and button holes.” Rarity said. “Thank ya lass, thank ya very much.” Mack said as praised her work. “All for a friend of ours. I’ll see you there dear and take care of Fluttershy.” Rarity replied. He took his suit home in a plastic cover as he flew home normally for once. Rare sight for Ponyville with no whirls and clouds shifting out of pattern. He went to bed in his parents and dozed thinking about Fluttershy and his date at the Gala. So story tells itself for this part. If you don’t know what happened at the Gala, hear it is in a nutshell. Everything was pure chaos as Mack left Fluttershy to have fun in the Royal Garden. Pinkie Pie got bored, Rarity realized her boyfriend is a snobby, stuck up, spoiled brat, Rainbow Dash tried to get noticed by the Wonderbolts and ultimately destroys the area where they were at, Twilight gets barely any mentor to protégé time, Applejack tries to fancy up her food, and Fluttershy does not get loved by the animals and goes insane. All while Mack was asleep, once again, and good thing to otherwise the Gala would have imploded. Anyway, the great Princess Celestia considered a nice change to the usually boring Gala. After they wrap up, Fluttershy finds Mack in the garden right before they are about to leave. “It didn’t go very well at all, it was pure chaos.” Fluttershy said. “And I missed it, man I never get to have any fun at all.” Mack sighed. “I know something that will cheer you up though.” Mack whistled a tune and some of the animals came out. He hummed and some more came out. Soon, all the animals were out and about. “Come on, don’t be afraid. You just gotta’ let them come to you and not be scared to just sit with new animals. Now here hold your hand out.” Mack said He put a bird on her arm and soon some of the animals came to Fluttershy and soon they were surrounded by animals. They spent some time in the garden and soon it was time to go. They both flew home to Fluttershy’s cottage hand in hand and kissing. “I had a great night. And thank you for the time with the animals.” Fluttershy said. “Anythin’ for my girl, so I think this is where I say good night.” Mack said. “Umm, why don’t you stay with me for now? You know since you don’t have a place at all.” Fluttershy said as she blushed velvet red. “Ya really lettin’ me stay with ya?” Mack asked in confusion. Fluttershy nodded as she walked in. Mack followed and he noticed all the animals and chuckled at the sight. Angel nodded in approval, or something like it, and they both sat and chatted. Eventually it was time for them to hit the hay and go to bed. Fluttershy took him upstairs and undressed. Mack did the same as they both stopped at their underwear. His tan skin in his boxers that were a red plaid and her white skin in her panties and her bra both white with pink lacing around the edges and butterflies dotted here and there like on the straps of her bra. Mack has enough personal morals to not try to do anything while they sleep together. He will be waiting after he proposes and she says yes. Though he knows that takes time, he hopes that they become together forever. They both climbed into the bed and kissed. “Goodnight dear.” Fluttershy said. “G’night lass.” Mack said as they both drifted off to sleep cuddling under the blanket. Author's Log Well, well, well, this is quite a surprise to me. I thought I would never ever watch the show, but I did and here I am. The first story I ever wrote, I feel very proud, I have another 4 to go. So yea, just give me feedback and tell me if anything is wrong or something bothers you. The last paragraph with the part where they undress is from the Flim Flam episode (don't know the name, don't tell me I'll figure it out) in the beginning. Just imagine if Fluttershy was human.......... Yea so, anyway can some one tell me if I have to do the whole copyright, owned by Hasbro and Lauren Faust stuff. If not yay, if so, damn more typing. Have a good day lads. Story 2: "The Dischord Incident and how he Reacted" and "Making Friends"As their love drew on, Mack started living with Fluttershy. Not surprising in all reality. Rarity was the one who knew for sure that Mack was going to move in with her and honestly, she was glad. Her friend is happy and she doesn't have to help him find a home. Though, it was going to be a great day the day after he moved in. Why is that so? Good question, Dischord broke his seal and is free to roam. Why is that good? Because he is insane. Sure it died down, but it's still there. Morning came and Mack was waken by the shaking of his girl. His hearing still a bit fuzzy, but he did hear her tell him something important. "........ Get up! I need to go out and save Equestria........... Dischord is free and-." Fluttershy said or better to say what Mack heard. As soon as he said Dischord was free, he jumped out of bed only wearing his boxers, rushed downstairs and came back up fully dressed. "Why din't ya wake me up earlier? What is happening so far?" Mack asked. Fluttershy pointed to the window. Mack went and looked out and what he saw was pure chaos. Cotton candy clouds raining chocolate milk, animals are altered in some way that isn't natural, and most importantly, the sun and moon are switching positions unnaturally. To any other person, they would be freaking out. Mack however got a bucket and yelled something to Fluttershy before he left. "Well Fluttershy, I am going to enjoy mah self in the chaos, I'll know when you defeated him. GOOD LUCK LASS! I'LL SEE YOU SOON!" Mack yelled as he zoomed out the door. Before the main six go confront Dischord, they ask Fluttershy about her new roommate. "So, where is that crazy boyfriend of yours, hmm?" Rarity asked. "Oh, umm. he is enjoying himself out over there." She replied as she pointed out into the distance. All they say was him jumping at least 40 feet without using his wings. "Man, why can't I have fun, I want to go flying everywhere..." Pinkie complained. "Pinkie, you already do, more than him in all honesty. Now come on, he doesn't have to fight Dischord right?" RD said. "That's true...... I wish I could have fun." Pinkie complained even more. "Come on girls, we gotta go now. I feel we should leave him to his fun." Twilight said. "Ah', agree wit' ya sugarcube. Let's get a move on." Applejack stated. All nodded their heads and well, the rest is episode 1 & 2 of season 2. If you don't know, then here it is in a nutshell. Dischord uses his powers to take away the magical powers from Rarity and Twi and the wings from Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash. He puts the 6 into a maze all seperated from each other. Manipulates them thats makes them the opposite of their element. So he declares himself the winner and the 6 losers. And now lets see how Dischord goes up against the Insane Seraph of Ponyville. Mack was enjoying his fun, causing more madness than there already was. Some how finding dimension holes in Ponyville. As he was having his fun, he runs into Dischord. "Well, well, well, what do we have here. A seraph enjoying him self." DC said with his suit and goatee and 2 pointed hair. "Yep, Mack Spinnerson is the name, love your work, no time to chat, waiting for my girl and her friends to beat ya, now time for me to moonwalk into nowhere." Mack said quickly. "Now hold on." DC said as he grabbed Mack's leg. "You said your girl..... hmm that means you going out with Fluttershy then, or should I say Flutterbrute." Mack's anger shot up. "You did what now." His fist clenched in anger, ready to punch the living chaos out of him. "Oh nothing, your girlfriend lost my challenge and I turned her into a mean little miss hurt everyone." DC said pridefully. Last straw, Mack fired away his fist straight for his face. Dischord caught his fist with his own hand. "Ah, ah, ahhh, you really think I'll be down like that. Let's see how you like a personality change!" DC said as he laughed, but he stopped as he felt the feeling of being flipped followed by his face hitting the ground, THEN an elbow drop into his back leaving him stunned. Mack flew up and stopped around 200 feet, he hovered then just let gravity do the work for him, delivering the biggest body splash in all history driving him and Dischord into the ground a good 10 feet. Mack was the first to climb out of the hole. "Wow, never thought that woulda worked. Keen. Hah, take that Dischord, how do you like good ol' scottish brutality." He said as he was gloating though, DC climbed out of the hole, reached to his foot, touched him and poofed him into a baby. "WELL, *cough cough cough* did not expect a hand to hand man combat that wasn't from her royal pain's guard." DC said. "Now that that is fixed, I think it's time to- AHHHHH!" DC yelled as he is flipped again by Baby Mack. "AGH, I better get going before he starts teething on my leg, here little guy have a cotton candy cloud." DC said as he handed Mack a cloud of cotton candy that rained chocolate milk. He started chewing on it as DC left him. So the story continues on. Twilight is sent all her old reports, saves her friends with a memory spell, gathers them all together, defeats Dischord and restores everything to a non chaotic world once more. Everything goes back to normal as Mack poofs back to his older self, still chewing on a cloud, his red spiked hair, baggy shirt, and jeans with his desinger tennis shoes. "Mmm, good cloud, GAH, gotta find Fluttershy!!!" He yelled as he zoomed off to find her. Through dumb luck or the innate sense of him loving Fluttershy, he found himself in Canterlot, charging straight to the princess's court with no guards. It was the hour of guard change. So, he started spinning and carved a silouette like image of his running in one of the doors. Guards were about to arrest him, but Fluttershy came running into his arms, burying her face into his shoulder. "Ahem, who is this man that carved his image into the doors?" Celestia asked. "Sorry, yer highness. I am Mack Spinnerson, artisan of clouds from Ponyville. I came here looking for Fluttershy." Mack replied. "Yes, umm sorry for his doings........." Fluttershy said quietly as she gave him a kiss on the cheeks. "It seems she loves you very much and you love her back." Celestia replied as her rainbow hair defied physics and her white business suit glowed with power. "Aye, that much be true, though I wish for it to be more." Mack said almost poetically. Fluttershy just kept her embrace as the princess gave her thanks to the heroes and looked at the couple as they left. Smiling in an approval-like way. It was a sight for Canterlot, a man who wasn't a bearer leaving the castle with no warrants for breaking into the castle. It was a sight when the group left. Rarity and Applejack having an arguement, Twilight and little Spike walking together talking about tomorrows schedule, RD is laughing to Pinkie's crazy antics, why, well it was funny to her, Mack didn't know. At the head of the group though, Fluttershy getting a piggyback ride from Mack, her head resting on his shoulder, both looks contrasting. His tan skin, red spiked hair, 9 o' clock shave, flanel shirt with a white undershirt, jean shorts, and running shoes meets her cream colored skin, long flowing pink hair, boots, black tights, booty shorts, and a sweater. If you were there, it would really be a sight. Just as Mack and Fluttershy were almost home, they crusaders intercepted them. By then, Mack and Fluttershy had been holding hands walking together so the girls saw a perfect chance to ask them. "So, how has it been going between you two, heh." Scootaloo asked. "Heh heh, that's an adult question that I only answer wit' an adult answer. But lets just say everything is going well." Mack replied. "So, I jes' wanna get this straight, ya barged right into the royal castle, an' din't get arrested fer it? How did ya do that?" Applebloom asked. "Oh, umm, I kinda ran into his arms...." Fluttershy replied. Mack continued, "Which is apparantly enough ta' convince the princess not to arrest me.... SO, you lassies want to hear a story?" "YEA!" "Ok." "Just make sure Rarity doesn't get mad at me for coming home late." They entered their cottage as the girls took a seat on the couch and Mack sat on the ground pow wow style. "Ok lasses, no dialogue from the characters, don't really remember the story..." 'Aww, oh ok then' *Lets get it on, I hope it is action filled like RD's story.* "That's just it then, it is about RD, herself. How we became friends in all reality." *So wait your telling us how you became friends with Equestria's best junior flier!* "Yep, so lets get it started." Growing up as a little boy in Cloudsdale, well, was awesome. My mom and dad moved to Cloudsdale, mom from the Fillypines, ma' pa from the United Coltdom. Though flying was something that came when I was 3. My parents had realized I was insane after an explosion happened. Though back to point, my parents knew I had potential to be a great flyer and live up to the Spinnerson name. Ma, ol' pa sent me to Junior Speedster flying camp. That was before the Sonic Rainboom and what not so Dash was still tryin' to find her true skill. The counsulers saw I had some skill, but most of it was raw flying power. Being as crazy as I was led to crazy speed. I could meet RD on speed, though I din't know that at the time. Heck din't even know anyone at the camp. But one fateful day, Dash was feeling extra confident and challenged anyone to a race. Being me, I took up the offer. A one lap race through the course at the camp. She thought nothing of me, so when we started, I blasted off faster than she did. She gained on me, but I was able to keep my lead. *So you were actually winning in that race?* "Yep, was hard." 'Did ya beat her? Did ya, did ya, did ya' "I'm gettin' ta' it lass, calm ya horses." As the race was nearing the end, she was closing in on me, we both agreed we have our arms down for the last leg of the race. We matched in speed but at the end Dash had 1 percent more than me. I landed farther away from the finish mostly due to my lack of self control. "Though, I landed farther, I wish I can say that I won, but I can't, but hell we both had our fun, broke the sound barrier before we hit the finish line and we became buddies that day. Ahh what a time it was." Mack finished. Applebloom had no words to describe the story. Scootaloo was all jittery with the race and Sweetie Belle, was satisfied with the story. Fluttershy looked like she was remembering something and she did. "Wait so you were the one who lost to Dash in that race. I admired you from a distance trying to come to you, but you kept on moving away from my grasp. I wondered why I didn't recognize you?" Fluttershy said. "I had longer hair....." Mack replied. Something compelled Fluttershy to dive into Mack and she gave him a big loving hug, tears of joy coming from her face as she kissed him multiple times. "Ewwwww." All 3 crusaders said. "I think this is a little too much love for us to handle." Sweetie Belle said. Someone had barged in while the two were picking themselves up. She had been listening to the whole story and decided that she hadto come in. "So you are tellin' me that you fell in love with him even though he lost." The lass said. "Oi, Dash stop ruining a good moment for me and Fluttershy. This ain't what good buddies do ta' each other. Don't ya have manners lass." Mack chuckled. "Oh Dash what are you doing here. I thought you went home?" Fluttershy asked. "I did, but I flew over you guys and then I heard a story so I had to listen in. Anyway, here is also what happened. Apparantly, someone had a camera and took a photo finish well....... You won that race Mack." RD muttered. Everyone was dumbstruck. Even Mack who got to his feet just fell over like a tree. Just the surprise that he won along with the picture and RD admitting herself was shocking to him. He saw the picture and noticed that an age old manuver won him that race. The old stick your tongue out for that extra milimeter got him victory. "Well, shave ma' hair and call me Bessie, I won that race..... Ya' want a rematch eh?" Mack asked. "Man, ya know me all to well, shouldn't be surprised really." RD replied. "I'll take that as a yes, then. Get ya flag Fluttershy, its gona be a race from here to Cloudsdale and back!" Mack exclaimed. Fluttershy got her old checkered flag and signaled for the racers to be ready. Mack and RD lined up, him in his casual clothes, a white tee and sport shorts with old running shoes and RD, with a sports tank and jogging pants and tennis shoes all being topped off with her rainbow hair ready to fly and fingerless gloves. Fluttershy swung her flag and they took off. Two friends racing once more, older and more experienced. They fly once more. Story 3: "The Big End" and "Epilouge"Mack was getting ready for the big moment. He asked Fluttershy to a picnic and prepped everything for the special moment, he even prepped a nice diamond ring that was fashioned from a diamond that Rarity had found. Today was going to be the best day ever. The sun is setting creating a nice ambient orange glow. "It's beautiful isn't it." Fluttershy said. "Not as beautiful as you lass, not as beautiful." Mack responded. They giggled at the statement. Mack knew it was time so he put his plan into motion. Putting the basket enough away for it not to be suspicious but not close enough for a grab and go. "Hey, can ya get the napkins lass. Got a little somethin' on ma mouth." He asked. As she got up to get the item, he prepped the area without Fluttershy looking. He set up the candle, roses and prepared himself. Mack got on his knees and readied the ring. When Fluttershy turned around, she just dropped the napkins and covered her mouth, her eyes full of tears. "Fluttershy, will you give me the honor of marrying you?" Mack asked on his knees, with a red face, barely getting those simple words out. One answer and one answer alone came into her mind. It made her jump onto Mack and give him a kiss. "YES!!" She yelled. Both had to spread the news of their new plans and had to prepare also. They went to work doing everything needed. The invites, the church, the parties, and most of all the cake. "Congrats you two. Spike make room on my schedule for the wedding." Twilight said. "Well, hoo dawgy, you two are finally gettin' hitched! BIG MAC GET MAH' GOOD CLOTHES!" Applejack yelled. "You finally asked her Mack. Took you long enough in my opinion. OH!! THE DRESSES!! I ALMOST FORGOT!!!" Rarity yelled as she zoomed off to work on them. "Remember lass, hers is white mine is black." Mack reminded her. "I can't believe your getting married to Fluttershy, TO FLUTTERSHY!!! I thought you would go with someone more, well you....." RD said. "Well, I settled with her and she settled with me so it works out." He replied. "OO, OO, OO, can I host the parties?" Pinkie Pie asked. "Well, it wouldn't be a party with out you Pinkie." Fluttershy said. "Also, you bring the party cannon, and you get to have a layer from the cake all to yourself." Mack said. WAAAAAIIIIITTTTTTT!!!!!!!! "Why in Celestia's name would you want the party cannon?" RD asked. "I kinda want to shoot myself out of it....:" Mack replied. "Mack, we only asked you how you met Fluttershy-" Twi was cut off. "And I did." Mack interjected. "-you did, but you didn't need to give us a backstory all the way and tell us your future plans. Honestly, I don't think you body slammed Discord. It would have been near impossible. ALSO, it Discord with out the "h" Mack." Twi explained. "It was a good story though eh?" Mack asked. "Yea, bit' crazy you are though, shuda' known, since ye' are crazy." Applejack said. "I like the part with the party cannon. OO, I HAVE IT WITH ME!" Pinkie blurted out as she pulled the cannon out of nowhere. "YEA!!! LEMME GET IN IT LASS!!!" He shouted as he climbed in. Pinkie readed the powder, Twi, RD, Applejack, and Rarity stood back. Pinkie gave a smile, Mack gave the thumbs up and she pulled the string that sent Mack flying. He just felt so free that he forgot he had wings. So he kept on going and landed right onto Fluttershy's front door. It opened showing her feet. He got onto his knees and showed the ring that was from his stories. Fluttershy cried, but not of joy. She stopped to talk. "Oh, Mack I want to say yes, but I can't... It's just something about you. I can't explain..... I think its just me, but I'm sorry." Fluttershy said still with teary eyes as she closed the door leaving Mack out on the front door mat. He is devastated, he just stayed on his knees. A few minutes later, he flew off with a shattered heart. He put the ring back in his pocket and just flew. It was dark when he flew and he gathered his items. All his belongings were packed into a strap bag and he just traveled. The other 5 came to Fluttershy's cottage hoping to hear good news. All they saw was Fluttershy crying on her chair. They knew to expect bad news. Their fear was right. "Oh darling, it must have been hard...." Rarity said to try to condone her. "Wow, Mack must be devastated." Twi said as she wondered. "Ah wonder where, he could be righ' now?" Applejack asked. "I have a feeling that, he just packed up and left. He said he always wanted to explore. I think this is his chance now that he doesn't have Fluttershy. He's probably long gone by now." RD explained. Everyone is sad and Pinkie is crying like she did at the return of Luna. Mack was off to explore and try to regain his hapiness. It may be a longshot, but he is sure that he will find it. If only we know for sure. This is the end for now. OI, WRITER MAN!!! ARE YA GONA GIVE ME ANOTHER CHANCE!! Most likely my ol' insane creation. AWESOME, THANK YE FOR GIVIN' ME ANOTHER CHANCE!!!! Your welcome. *ahem* Back to what I was saying. We end this story line for now. Thank you for being through this story with us. To all you readers a good day or a good night. Author's Note Holy jesus. Amen. Man, this story sucked. Pain to write, so I just decided to end this on story 3. Watch out for another story coming soon. It involves him and Vinyl Scratch. Possibly the worst idea I ever had, but I have to write it on hear or my mind will tear itself apart so, yes watch out for that story. Going to be another train wreck I can feel it. Hopefully less people will die this time around.........
Story 1: "Intro for Mack" and "The Love Story for the AgesMack was lying on his cloud, enjoying the day. His cutie mark as obvious as a haystack on fire. You see he was not a normal seraph. He was quite insane in fact. He talks to inanimate objects and just creeps the living hell out of the other folk in Ponyville. He was raised in Cloudsdale with his parents. The Spinnersons were delighted that they had a son, though they knew they had an insane child on their hands. So they sent him to Junior Speedster Flight Camp (or what ever it is called). They had thought right. The day Rainbow Dash did the sonic rainboom, he was on a shifty cloud. The boom itself had sent Mack spinning off his cloud. He soon harnessed that spin and he made it into his own personal art form. He had spun faster and faster as the tiny whiteish-gray twister spun through. As he whipped by clouds, he had made them into a perfect shape. Any cloud within a foot or was in the path of Mack, they were either improved or shaped into a magnificent sculpture. Once he stopped, his flank (or in this case his upper thigh) had his cutie mark. The black twister. He grew up loving it. He had followed Dash to Ponyville. He had decided to stay at the town. He knew the town and the town eventually grew on to know him. So, when he had heard that the Princess’s own protégé had came, he had to meet her. “’Ello lass, good day to you.” Mack greeted. “Well, good day to you.” Twilight said. “Finally a pony who isn’t crazy.” Twi thought. “Well, I do be askin’ what are ya doin’ here?” Mack asked. “I’m here to supervise the celebration, and dare I ask what you are doing.” Twi inquired. “I’m supposed to be helpin’ out Dash clear the sky, but since ya sweet talked her into doing it, I took a break.” Mack said. “Ah, so I’ll be on my way then.” Twi said. “Ok then lass, watch out for flying pigs and talking spiders.” Mack stated Twi walked away head hung low disappointed. “He is a crazy one….” Twi thought. So, Mack had left his impression and well, you all know what happens. If you don’t, here it is in a nutshell. Nightmare Moon revealed her self, kidnapped Celestia, makes it night forever, the mane six gets the elements of harmony and beat her. All that while he was asleep in the town hall where Celestia would have been greeted. If he was awake, he would be laughing his damn arse off. So, after that fiasco, he wakes up in Fluttershy’s yard. Knowing himself, he had sleep flown. A common trait for Mack. As he got up, he met Fluttershy face to face both nearly in each others eyes. They both stand six inches from one another. Fluttershy in her turtleneck sweater and her long skirt instead of her shortened pants and her slippers. Mack in his loose shirt and bell bottom jeans and tennis shoes. Both have wings as majestic as a Pegasus. Seraphs, they are, Mack’s wings a nice white, while Fluttershy’s a nice lemon yellow. Once Mack had looked into those eyes, he fell in love. Though the same could not be said for Fluttershy. She shied away, but Mack whistled a tune. As if he had Fluttershy’s gift, the birds whistled back. Fluttershy looked amazed. They are very different in appearance. Her healthy, white skin and her long flowing pink hair. His red, spiky short hair and nine o’ clock shave, and his light tan skin. Fluttershy was first to break the silence, if she did at all. “U-U-ummm, who are you?” asked Fluttershy quietly. “The names, Mack, Mack Spinnerson, but you can call me Mack.” He replied heavily still deep in love. “Hi, umm, I’m Fluttershy, nice to meet you.” She said with her head still turned aside. “Ahem, I got a little somethin’ for ya.” Mack said as he blasted off straight up to a cloud. He started spinning and he shaped a cloud into a heart, shrunk it and stuffed it into a jar and sealed it. He flew back down spinning and as he stopped, the twister stopped from bottom to top like a curtain rising up. “Here ya go lass, a present from me to you.” Mack said as he bowed down and presented the gift. Fluttershy blushed red as she took the cloud in a jar, “T-T-Thank you….” Fluttershy look dumbfounded as she walked into her house with Angel following her, and before he went in, he turned around and he gave a wink to Mack. So, as time passes by, he watches over the mane six and helps them here and there. Fluttershy and the others were a bit apprehensive to the help from the insane seraph of Ponyville. His case doesn’t help as he talks to the inanimate objects he moves around as he helps. Like the apples, the books, the pastries, the dresses, and the items around Fluttershy’s home. They eventually got used to his assistance and Fluttershy, a little bit more. The day it was Pinkie’s birthday, he was sent to watch over Pinkie. He signaled the others information about Pinkie. When Pinkie went nuts, he took it upon himself to watch over her. He observed the mental breakdown and, well was intrigued by it. He had flown off when Dash came in to get Pinkie. He took notes, though, how Pinkie Pie developed others out of objects just to be with parties and how her hair became straight and not a poofy mess it usually is. In all honest, his own insanity has died down. His desire to want Fluttershy to be his one and only has changed his daily life. Instead of spins that cause chaos to the town, it helps now. He has came to be known not as the insane seraph, but the helper of the town. This is where we left off in the intro. Mack on his cloud, looking up at the sky. “So, Puffy, do you think I should talk to her?” He asked the cloud. The cloud didn’t reply, but Mack heard it reply. “You sure Puffy, I think it’s a wee bit too early.” Mack said as he flipped over. The cloud stayed silent. “Ok Puffy, you are one persistent cloud you are lad.” Mack zoomed off to Fluttershy’s house. Though the thought of her had caused him to go off balance and he lost control. As he was coming in, Fluttershy was leaving here house. As he came in he landed on his feet and started skidding. Fluttershy gave a little scream before impact. Like it is seen in the movies and TV shows, their lips came together in an accidental kiss. They didn’t stop like some people would, however they kept on kissing. His tough look meeting her feminine, graceful look. They look like they would be a couple. Mack broke the kiss and was the first to speak. “WELL, that was one way to greet someone.” Mack said with a bit of a chuckle, his cheeks red. “Yes, yes it is. A very different way also. Nice landing by the way.” She giggled. They have that awkward moment of silence as both of them with red cheeks. Then, Fluttershy started. “I was, umm, actually going out to find you.” “Oh ya did lass?” Mack said surprised. Fluttershy nodded, “I kinda’, sorta’ started to like you. That’s why I was heading out to find you so I could ask you something… Oh this is embarrassing.” “Nothing is embarrassing around me lass.” Mack stated Fluttershy is a bright red when she blurted it out. “Willyoucometocanterlotwithmetomorrownight!!!! EEP!” She stopped as she put her hands over her mouth and pointed her head down, her eyes closed. Mack moved his hand under her chin and slowly lifted her head up, her eyes open and looking into his own. While the moment was ripe, Mack said. “If ya be askin’ me on a date, stop askin’ because I accept lass…. err, Fluttershy.” She squeed with joy as she kissed him on the cheek and left to go with the animals. Mack had darted off back into the skies to prepare at his parents. Mack has no real home as he goes from house to house asking to stay. They usually let him as he fixes his own bed and leaves with out breakfast. He stays at his parents every once in a while and this is one of those every once in a while. As he prepares his parents come in. “Oh, how I have waited for this day. Our son has a girlfriend and is going on their first date!” his mom, Kite, said. “Oi, I agree with ya honey, especially since he was asked to go with her to the Gala. Oh how great will this be eh? Our lad has grown up…” his dad, Speedy, said. Once Mack had heard “Gala” he darted off as his parents were about to give something to him. He darted off to Rarity’s shop to get a better suit that what he has. He barged in yelling. “RARITY, I NEED A NEW SUIT LASS!” Rarity responded with disgust, “Well, that was certainly rude of you barging in. Now, why would YOU need a suit? I did owe you a favor, but I thought it would be finding you a house.” “It’s Fluttershy, she asked me out to the Gala.” Mack replied. “My, my, I didn’t know she had a fancy for you. Well darling, tell me the design and I’ll have the design in about 2 hours tops.” Rarity said. Mack said it in the kindest of tones. “I want a sleek black jacket with a white undershirt and black tie, with white stripes. Accompanied by sleek black pants and black loafers and to top it off, a white fedora with my cutie mark, the black twister.” Rarity took it all in and responded, “Ok, this should not take more than 2 hours like I said. Be here by then ok.” Mack nodded and bolted out the door and met his parent’s right outside. “You left before we could give you something.” His mom said as she handed him a gold ticket to the Grand Galloping Gala. “Have fun sport and ya be careful lad, ya hear me.” His dad said. Mack nodded as his parents started to fly off back to their home. Their entrails a spiral of clouds. Mack darted off himself as he was just spinning in the air shaping clouds into random figures and shapes. The 2 hours blew by like it was nothing as he returned to Rarity’s shop. His suit is perfection as he walked in. Included a neatly designed hole for his wings. “Ah right on time, the suit is finished. Also included some onyx for the inside flaps near your buttons and button holes.” Rarity said. “Thank ya lass, thank ya very much.” Mack said as praised her work. “All for a friend of ours. I’ll see you there dear and take care of Fluttershy.” Rarity replied. He took his suit home in a plastic cover as he flew home normally for once. Rare sight for Ponyville with no whirls and clouds shifting out of pattern. He went to bed in his parents and dozed thinking about Fluttershy and his date at the Gala. So story tells itself for this part. If you don’t know what happened at the Gala, hear it is in a nutshell. Everything was pure chaos as Mack left Fluttershy to have fun in the Royal Garden. Pinkie Pie got bored, Rarity realized her boyfriend is a snobby, stuck up, spoiled brat, Rainbow Dash tried to get noticed by the Wonderbolts and ultimately destroys the area where they were at, Twilight gets barely any mentor to protégé time, Applejack tries to fancy up her food, and Fluttershy does not get loved by the animals and goes insane. All while Mack was asleep, once again, and good thing to otherwise the Gala would have imploded. Anyway, the great Princess Celestia considered a nice change to the usually boring Gala. After they wrap up, Fluttershy finds Mack in the garden right before they are about to leave. “It didn’t go very well at all, it was pure chaos.” Fluttershy said. “And I missed it, man I never get to have any fun at all.” Mack sighed. “I know something that will cheer you up though.” Mack whistled a tune and some of the animals came out. He hummed and some more came out. Soon, all the animals were out and about. “Come on, don’t be afraid. You just gotta’ let them come to you and not be scared to just sit with new animals. Now here hold your hand out.” Mack said He put a bird on her arm and soon some of the animals came to Fluttershy and soon they were surrounded by animals. They spent some time in the garden and soon it was time to go. They both flew home to Fluttershy’s cottage hand in hand and kissing. “I had a great night. And thank you for the time with the animals.” Fluttershy said. “Anythin’ for my girl, so I think this is where I say good night.” Mack said. “Umm, why don’t you stay with me for now? You know since you don’t have a place at all.” Fluttershy said as she blushed velvet red. “Ya really lettin’ me stay with ya?” Mack asked in confusion. Fluttershy nodded as she walked in. Mack followed and he noticed all the animals and chuckled at the sight. Angel nodded in approval, or something like it, and they both sat and chatted. Eventually it was time for them to hit the hay and go to bed. Fluttershy took him upstairs and undressed. Mack did the same as they both stopped at their underwear. His tan skin in his boxers that were a red plaid and her white skin in her panties and her bra both white with pink lacing around the edges and butterflies dotted here and there like on the straps of her bra. Mack has enough personal morals to not try to do anything while they sleep together. He will be waiting after he proposes and she says yes. Though he knows that takes time, he hopes that they become together forever. They both climbed into the bed and kissed. “Goodnight dear.” Fluttershy said. “G’night lass.” Mack said as they both drifted off to sleep cuddling under the blanket. Author's Log Well, well, well, this is quite a surprise to me. I thought I would never ever watch the show, but I did and here I am. The first story I ever wrote, I feel very proud, I have another 4 to go. So yea, just give me feedback and tell me if anything is wrong or something bothers you. The last paragraph with the part where they undress is from the Flim Flam episode (don't know the name, don't tell me I'll figure it out) in the beginning. Just imagine if Fluttershy was human.......... Yea so, anyway can some one tell me if I have to do the whole copyright, owned by Hasbro and Lauren Faust stuff. If not yay, if so, damn more typing. Have a good day lads.
Story 2: "The Dischord Incident and how he Reacted" and "Making Friends"As their love drew on, Mack started living with Fluttershy. Not surprising in all reality. Rarity was the one who knew for sure that Mack was going to move in with her and honestly, she was glad. Her friend is happy and she doesn't have to help him find a home. Though, it was going to be a great day the day after he moved in. Why is that so? Good question, Dischord broke his seal and is free to roam. Why is that good? Because he is insane. Sure it died down, but it's still there. Morning came and Mack was waken by the shaking of his girl. His hearing still a bit fuzzy, but he did hear her tell him something important. "........ Get up! I need to go out and save Equestria........... Dischord is free and-." Fluttershy said or better to say what Mack heard. As soon as he said Dischord was free, he jumped out of bed only wearing his boxers, rushed downstairs and came back up fully dressed. "Why din't ya wake me up earlier? What is happening so far?" Mack asked. Fluttershy pointed to the window. Mack went and looked out and what he saw was pure chaos. Cotton candy clouds raining chocolate milk, animals are altered in some way that isn't natural, and most importantly, the sun and moon are switching positions unnaturally. To any other person, they would be freaking out. Mack however got a bucket and yelled something to Fluttershy before he left. "Well Fluttershy, I am going to enjoy mah self in the chaos, I'll know when you defeated him. GOOD LUCK LASS! I'LL SEE YOU SOON!" Mack yelled as he zoomed out the door. Before the main six go confront Dischord, they ask Fluttershy about her new roommate. "So, where is that crazy boyfriend of yours, hmm?" Rarity asked. "Oh, umm. he is enjoying himself out over there." She replied as she pointed out into the distance. All they say was him jumping at least 40 feet without using his wings. "Man, why can't I have fun, I want to go flying everywhere..." Pinkie complained. "Pinkie, you already do, more than him in all honesty. Now come on, he doesn't have to fight Dischord right?" RD said. "That's true...... I wish I could have fun." Pinkie complained even more. "Come on girls, we gotta go now. I feel we should leave him to his fun." Twilight said. "Ah', agree wit' ya sugarcube. Let's get a move on." Applejack stated. All nodded their heads and well, the rest is episode 1 & 2 of season 2. If you don't know, then here it is in a nutshell. Dischord uses his powers to take away the magical powers from Rarity and Twi and the wings from Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash. He puts the 6 into a maze all seperated from each other. Manipulates them thats makes them the opposite of their element. So he declares himself the winner and the 6 losers. And now lets see how Dischord goes up against the Insane Seraph of Ponyville. Mack was enjoying his fun, causing more madness than there already was. Some how finding dimension holes in Ponyville. As he was having his fun, he runs into Dischord. "Well, well, well, what do we have here. A seraph enjoying him self." DC said with his suit and goatee and 2 pointed hair. "Yep, Mack Spinnerson is the name, love your work, no time to chat, waiting for my girl and her friends to beat ya, now time for me to moonwalk into nowhere." Mack said quickly. "Now hold on." DC said as he grabbed Mack's leg. "You said your girl..... hmm that means you going out with Fluttershy then, or should I say Flutterbrute." Mack's anger shot up. "You did what now." His fist clenched in anger, ready to punch the living chaos out of him. "Oh nothing, your girlfriend lost my challenge and I turned her into a mean little miss hurt everyone." DC said pridefully. Last straw, Mack fired away his fist straight for his face. Dischord caught his fist with his own hand. "Ah, ah, ahhh, you really think I'll be down like that. Let's see how you like a personality change!" DC said as he laughed, but he stopped as he felt the feeling of being flipped followed by his face hitting the ground, THEN an elbow drop into his back leaving him stunned. Mack flew up and stopped around 200 feet, he hovered then just let gravity do the work for him, delivering the biggest body splash in all history driving him and Dischord into the ground a good 10 feet. Mack was the first to climb out of the hole. "Wow, never thought that woulda worked. Keen. Hah, take that Dischord, how do you like good ol' scottish brutality." He said as he was gloating though, DC climbed out of the hole, reached to his foot, touched him and poofed him into a baby. "WELL, *cough cough cough* did not expect a hand to hand man combat that wasn't from her royal pain's guard." DC said. "Now that that is fixed, I think it's time to- AHHHHH!" DC yelled as he is flipped again by Baby Mack. "AGH, I better get going before he starts teething on my leg, here little guy have a cotton candy cloud." DC said as he handed Mack a cloud of cotton candy that rained chocolate milk. He started chewing on it as DC left him. So the story continues on. Twilight is sent all her old reports, saves her friends with a memory spell, gathers them all together, defeats Dischord and restores everything to a non chaotic world once more. Everything goes back to normal as Mack poofs back to his older self, still chewing on a cloud, his red spiked hair, baggy shirt, and jeans with his desinger tennis shoes. "Mmm, good cloud, GAH, gotta find Fluttershy!!!" He yelled as he zoomed off to find her. Through dumb luck or the innate sense of him loving Fluttershy, he found himself in Canterlot, charging straight to the princess's court with no guards. It was the hour of guard change. So, he started spinning and carved a silouette like image of his running in one of the doors. Guards were about to arrest him, but Fluttershy came running into his arms, burying her face into his shoulder. "Ahem, who is this man that carved his image into the doors?" Celestia asked. "Sorry, yer highness. I am Mack Spinnerson, artisan of clouds from Ponyville. I came here looking for Fluttershy." Mack replied. "Yes, umm sorry for his doings........." Fluttershy said quietly as she gave him a kiss on the cheeks. "It seems she loves you very much and you love her back." Celestia replied as her rainbow hair defied physics and her white business suit glowed with power. "Aye, that much be true, though I wish for it to be more." Mack said almost poetically. Fluttershy just kept her embrace as the princess gave her thanks to the heroes and looked at the couple as they left. Smiling in an approval-like way. It was a sight for Canterlot, a man who wasn't a bearer leaving the castle with no warrants for breaking into the castle. It was a sight when the group left. Rarity and Applejack having an arguement, Twilight and little Spike walking together talking about tomorrows schedule, RD is laughing to Pinkie's crazy antics, why, well it was funny to her, Mack didn't know. At the head of the group though, Fluttershy getting a piggyback ride from Mack, her head resting on his shoulder, both looks contrasting. His tan skin, red spiked hair, 9 o' clock shave, flanel shirt with a white undershirt, jean shorts, and running shoes meets her cream colored skin, long flowing pink hair, boots, black tights, booty shorts, and a sweater. If you were there, it would really be a sight. Just as Mack and Fluttershy were almost home, they crusaders intercepted them. By then, Mack and Fluttershy had been holding hands walking together so the girls saw a perfect chance to ask them. "So, how has it been going between you two, heh." Scootaloo asked. "Heh heh, that's an adult question that I only answer wit' an adult answer. But lets just say everything is going well." Mack replied. "So, I jes' wanna get this straight, ya barged right into the royal castle, an' din't get arrested fer it? How did ya do that?" Applebloom asked. "Oh, umm, I kinda ran into his arms...." Fluttershy replied. Mack continued, "Which is apparantly enough ta' convince the princess not to arrest me.... SO, you lassies want to hear a story?" "YEA!" "Ok." "Just make sure Rarity doesn't get mad at me for coming home late." They entered their cottage as the girls took a seat on the couch and Mack sat on the ground pow wow style. "Ok lasses, no dialogue from the characters, don't really remember the story..." 'Aww, oh ok then' *Lets get it on, I hope it is action filled like RD's story.* "That's just it then, it is about RD, herself. How we became friends in all reality." *So wait your telling us how you became friends with Equestria's best junior flier!* "Yep, so lets get it started." Growing up as a little boy in Cloudsdale, well, was awesome. My mom and dad moved to Cloudsdale, mom from the Fillypines, ma' pa from the United Coltdom. Though flying was something that came when I was 3. My parents had realized I was insane after an explosion happened. Though back to point, my parents knew I had potential to be a great flyer and live up to the Spinnerson name. Ma, ol' pa sent me to Junior Speedster flying camp. That was before the Sonic Rainboom and what not so Dash was still tryin' to find her true skill. The counsulers saw I had some skill, but most of it was raw flying power. Being as crazy as I was led to crazy speed. I could meet RD on speed, though I din't know that at the time. Heck din't even know anyone at the camp. But one fateful day, Dash was feeling extra confident and challenged anyone to a race. Being me, I took up the offer. A one lap race through the course at the camp. She thought nothing of me, so when we started, I blasted off faster than she did. She gained on me, but I was able to keep my lead. *So you were actually winning in that race?* "Yep, was hard." 'Did ya beat her? Did ya, did ya, did ya' "I'm gettin' ta' it lass, calm ya horses." As the race was nearing the end, she was closing in on me, we both agreed we have our arms down for the last leg of the race. We matched in speed but at the end Dash had 1 percent more than me. I landed farther away from the finish mostly due to my lack of self control. "Though, I landed farther, I wish I can say that I won, but I can't, but hell we both had our fun, broke the sound barrier before we hit the finish line and we became buddies that day. Ahh what a time it was." Mack finished. Applebloom had no words to describe the story. Scootaloo was all jittery with the race and Sweetie Belle, was satisfied with the story. Fluttershy looked like she was remembering something and she did. "Wait so you were the one who lost to Dash in that race. I admired you from a distance trying to come to you, but you kept on moving away from my grasp. I wondered why I didn't recognize you?" Fluttershy said. "I had longer hair....." Mack replied. Something compelled Fluttershy to dive into Mack and she gave him a big loving hug, tears of joy coming from her face as she kissed him multiple times. "Ewwwww." All 3 crusaders said. "I think this is a little too much love for us to handle." Sweetie Belle said. Someone had barged in while the two were picking themselves up. She had been listening to the whole story and decided that she hadto come in. "So you are tellin' me that you fell in love with him even though he lost." The lass said. "Oi, Dash stop ruining a good moment for me and Fluttershy. This ain't what good buddies do ta' each other. Don't ya have manners lass." Mack chuckled. "Oh Dash what are you doing here. I thought you went home?" Fluttershy asked. "I did, but I flew over you guys and then I heard a story so I had to listen in. Anyway, here is also what happened. Apparantly, someone had a camera and took a photo finish well....... You won that race Mack." RD muttered. Everyone was dumbstruck. Even Mack who got to his feet just fell over like a tree. Just the surprise that he won along with the picture and RD admitting herself was shocking to him. He saw the picture and noticed that an age old manuver won him that race. The old stick your tongue out for that extra milimeter got him victory. "Well, shave ma' hair and call me Bessie, I won that race..... Ya' want a rematch eh?" Mack asked. "Man, ya know me all to well, shouldn't be surprised really." RD replied. "I'll take that as a yes, then. Get ya flag Fluttershy, its gona be a race from here to Cloudsdale and back!" Mack exclaimed. Fluttershy got her old checkered flag and signaled for the racers to be ready. Mack and RD lined up, him in his casual clothes, a white tee and sport shorts with old running shoes and RD, with a sports tank and jogging pants and tennis shoes all being topped off with her rainbow hair ready to fly and fingerless gloves. Fluttershy swung her flag and they took off. Two friends racing once more, older and more experienced. They fly once more.
Story 3: "The Big End" and "Epilouge"Mack was getting ready for the big moment. He asked Fluttershy to a picnic and prepped everything for the special moment, he even prepped a nice diamond ring that was fashioned from a diamond that Rarity had found. Today was going to be the best day ever. The sun is setting creating a nice ambient orange glow. "It's beautiful isn't it." Fluttershy said. "Not as beautiful as you lass, not as beautiful." Mack responded. They giggled at the statement. Mack knew it was time so he put his plan into motion. Putting the basket enough away for it not to be suspicious but not close enough for a grab and go. "Hey, can ya get the napkins lass. Got a little somethin' on ma mouth." He asked. As she got up to get the item, he prepped the area without Fluttershy looking. He set up the candle, roses and prepared himself. Mack got on his knees and readied the ring. When Fluttershy turned around, she just dropped the napkins and covered her mouth, her eyes full of tears. "Fluttershy, will you give me the honor of marrying you?" Mack asked on his knees, with a red face, barely getting those simple words out. One answer and one answer alone came into her mind. It made her jump onto Mack and give him a kiss. "YES!!" She yelled. Both had to spread the news of their new plans and had to prepare also. They went to work doing everything needed. The invites, the church, the parties, and most of all the cake. "Congrats you two. Spike make room on my schedule for the wedding." Twilight said. "Well, hoo dawgy, you two are finally gettin' hitched! BIG MAC GET MAH' GOOD CLOTHES!" Applejack yelled. "You finally asked her Mack. Took you long enough in my opinion. OH!! THE DRESSES!! I ALMOST FORGOT!!!" Rarity yelled as she zoomed off to work on them. "Remember lass, hers is white mine is black." Mack reminded her. "I can't believe your getting married to Fluttershy, TO FLUTTERSHY!!! I thought you would go with someone more, well you....." RD said. "Well, I settled with her and she settled with me so it works out." He replied. "OO, OO, OO, can I host the parties?" Pinkie Pie asked. "Well, it wouldn't be a party with out you Pinkie." Fluttershy said. "Also, you bring the party cannon, and you get to have a layer from the cake all to yourself." Mack said. WAAAAAIIIIITTTTTTT!!!!!!!! "Why in Celestia's name would you want the party cannon?" RD asked. "I kinda want to shoot myself out of it....:" Mack replied. "Mack, we only asked you how you met Fluttershy-" Twi was cut off. "And I did." Mack interjected. "-you did, but you didn't need to give us a backstory all the way and tell us your future plans. Honestly, I don't think you body slammed Discord. It would have been near impossible. ALSO, it Discord with out the "h" Mack." Twi explained. "It was a good story though eh?" Mack asked. "Yea, bit' crazy you are though, shuda' known, since ye' are crazy." Applejack said. "I like the part with the party cannon. OO, I HAVE IT WITH ME!" Pinkie blurted out as she pulled the cannon out of nowhere. "YEA!!! LEMME GET IN IT LASS!!!" He shouted as he climbed in. Pinkie readed the powder, Twi, RD, Applejack, and Rarity stood back. Pinkie gave a smile, Mack gave the thumbs up and she pulled the string that sent Mack flying. He just felt so free that he forgot he had wings. So he kept on going and landed right onto Fluttershy's front door. It opened showing her feet. He got onto his knees and showed the ring that was from his stories. Fluttershy cried, but not of joy. She stopped to talk. "Oh, Mack I want to say yes, but I can't... It's just something about you. I can't explain..... I think its just me, but I'm sorry." Fluttershy said still with teary eyes as she closed the door leaving Mack out on the front door mat. He is devastated, he just stayed on his knees. A few minutes later, he flew off with a shattered heart. He put the ring back in his pocket and just flew. It was dark when he flew and he gathered his items. All his belongings were packed into a strap bag and he just traveled. The other 5 came to Fluttershy's cottage hoping to hear good news. All they saw was Fluttershy crying on her chair. They knew to expect bad news. Their fear was right. "Oh darling, it must have been hard...." Rarity said to try to condone her. "Wow, Mack must be devastated." Twi said as she wondered. "Ah wonder where, he could be righ' now?" Applejack asked. "I have a feeling that, he just packed up and left. He said he always wanted to explore. I think this is his chance now that he doesn't have Fluttershy. He's probably long gone by now." RD explained. Everyone is sad and Pinkie is crying like she did at the return of Luna. Mack was off to explore and try to regain his hapiness. It may be a longshot, but he is sure that he will find it. If only we know for sure. This is the end for now. OI, WRITER MAN!!! ARE YA GONA GIVE ME ANOTHER CHANCE!! Most likely my ol' insane creation. AWESOME, THANK YE FOR GIVIN' ME ANOTHER CHANCE!!!! Your welcome. *ahem* Back to what I was saying. We end this story line for now. Thank you for being through this story with us. To all you readers a good day or a good night. Author's Note Holy jesus. Amen. Man, this story sucked. Pain to write, so I just decided to end this on story 3. Watch out for another story coming soon. It involves him and Vinyl Scratch. Possibly the worst idea I ever had, but I have to write it on hear or my mind will tear itself apart so, yes watch out for that story. Going to be another train wreck I can feel it. Hopefully less people will die this time around.........
