sapphires promise

by ponygurl12321

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance, Adventure
Length: 1556

My first ff its about my OC saphire flame!! She has to save equestria? Will she find love ?? who knos? READ IT NOW

My first ff its about my OC saphire shimmer!! She has to save equestria? Will she find love ?? who knos? READ IT NOW you will love it so much i had alonger description to put here but forgot it lol JUST READ IT OK!!!!!!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-09-27 04:01:51 UTC

ch 1 ponyvile

AN: ok I just read THE BEST STORy EVERRRRR! It s called fallout equestria, u may have herd (get it) of it. It's superrr long (and kinda borin lol) so I figured I can write an even better story! Ok here goes… oh yeah my sister halped with this 1 but I did the rest my self

Oh btw I don't own MLP (if I did there would be no twilight lol)

No flames… ok here it is

It was a beatiful day in PonyVille. I woke up and loked in the mirror. I sighed. My life is so borin.

My name is Sapphire. My full name is Sapphire Shimmer, but I don't like Shimmer. I just like Sapphire, and that's all (if u know where this is from u rock!) I'm part pony part zebra an also pat griffin, so I have some strips but no beak and a normal pony face but pretier than normal. I have a long, loose curl white main with white strips that I usually wear a bow on. My tail is pink and in a pony tail (obvs) Oh and did I mention my coat is sapphire thats how I got my name. My cutie mark is of a blue fire. The blue matches with the bracelet I wear my special zebra bracelet. I wear it AT ALL TIMES mostly cause I'm part zebra but also its realy pretty.

I live in Ponyville with my friends Fluttershy, Apple jack, Rares (aka rarity), Rainbowdash, Pinky Pie, oh and Twilight(I really don't like her, she's whinny (lol) and likes to complane, ugh) I have to live in Ponyville because I got dropped off when I was a foal and Applejack's family adopted me. Oh yeah and my parents are dead to. Lot's of ponies don't like me because I'm pat zebra. Idk why. It's not like I talk in rymes or anything weird like that or anything.

Today I was walking down the street with all my friends, accept forTwilight, she's SOOO annoying! Well she was their but shes not my friend so… We were talking about the Pone Direction (that means One direction) concert that was going too happen in Canterlot next week. We were so mad that we couldn't get tickets, since Pone Direction is all of our favorite band.

"Twilight are u sure your brother can't get tickets?" I asked. Twilight's brother lives in Canterlot so I hoped he could atleast get us some backstage pases. I had to ask even tho I don't like her.

"No," sighed Twilight. "Shining Armor has to take his girlfrind out on a date. Besides he hates Pone direction."

"How can you hate Pone Direction?" question Pinky, boing like a pink rubber ball. It was real annoying

"Do u know who I hate?" said Rainbow Dash. We all yelled "tailer swift" at the same time, because no pony likes that little fatso snob earth pony.

Then we hoofbumped, because were bffs. And we all HATE tailer swift (who doesnt?)

"Rares whose your favorite buck of Pone Direction," I asked, already knowing the answer.

"Mayn of curse," te preppy unicorn replied. "He's the hottest for sure."

"Hes ok but I like Hairy better"

"Too bad hes dating that little snob Tailer Swift," Rainbow Dash said.

"I hate her guts," I said. All my friends nodded yes.

"Lets go too Starbuck and get some coffee," said Apple Jack. I agreed. "But only decaf so I dont get fat like tailer swift." We all laughed out loud loudly. Then we went to t Starbucks.

Suddenly my head started hurting, and than I passed out! I started experencing a vision. Or atleast thats what I think it was. In the vison I was at Pone Direction direction concert. But just as they stared singing all the lights went out and the strob lights started spwing out bloobs of black smoke! Soon everything was coved in smoke even the stage and everypony in the audience disapeared to. I was alone with a gigunormous clod of black smoke and the evil sound of creepy laughter ringed all around me! It sunded ;ike a pedofile on the prowl!

"Whats GOIN ON HERE!" I yelled real angry. But all I could here was evil laughter. I started chokin on smoke.

"SAPPHIRE! ARE YOU OK?" asked Rarety. I was lyin on the side walk.

"Yeah I'm fine but I think I had a vison!" I said brushing dirt off my shiny sparkly coat.

"Oooh! Was it about apples?" Apple Jack excited. That girls too obsessed with apples for her own good!

"No, it wasn't about stupid apples you dumby!" I yelled. "It's about the fate of Equestria!"

Twilight looked warried as usual. "We better go see princess Cellestia than! I wonder why you would get it, not the princesses favorite student aka ME." Ug what a little brat!

"Probably cause I'm part zebra," I said. My bracelet was twitchin like it did whenever something big. Which is almost never considering we live in Ponyville.

"Well no need to wait! Let's head for canterlot pronto!" said Pinky.

So we all went for Canterlot!

Excited huh? It's heatin up

ch 2 a foalnaping D:

*********CHAPTR 2 A FOALNAPPING!*********

AN: Wow I update fast don’t i?????  ok next chapta comin your way

We came into Canterlot and ran stright into the castle.

“Wheres the princess??” I asked.  I wasn’t out of breath but my friends were.

The gaurd looked bored.  “IDK, but get out of here. Zebra.” He spat oat me!

My zebra bracelt started glowing and so did my horns.  I saw a wall of firy blue flames.  I hated getting call zebra!  Especially by some no name gaurd.  He probably liked tailer swift!!!

The guard turned into a spasm of light!!

“Wow how did u do that?” asked pinky.

“IDK,” I answer all confused.  It was the first time I did it (not that you sicko!)”

Then a white unicorn apeared in the doorway.  He had a blue main and he looked like twilight but more hot.

“Sapphire u need to come quick!” he yelled.  “EQUESTRIA IS UN DANGER!!!!”

“Sheesh Im comin!”  No need to get mad ok!!!

We ran into the castle.  Inside was a calastrophe.

“Rares whose that.” I wispered, pointing to the unicorn.

“Oh that’s Twilight’s brother.” Said the prurple unicorn

“He’s kinda cute don’t u think??”

Then a voice yelled “HELP MEE!”

Luna was sitting on her throne.  She looked flamin mad (like flamers lol)  but cellestia was missing!!!!

“Where’s cellestia!” I yelled. Luna started crying.  Baby.

Twilight’s hot brother came over too us.  “u see Cellestia got foalnapped this morning.”

“Gasp” went my friends.

“OH no! Whose gonna help me with my dream now!” I said.

“Wait wat dream?,” asked Twilight’s brother.

So I told him all about my ream. When I finished he gasped to.  “Oh no!  That must meany lordSombra is backk!”

“Who’s Lurd Somber?” I aked.  The name didn’t bring a bell.

Applejack rolled her eyes.  “Oh cum on.  Everypony knows who lrd Sombra is.”

“Well who is he??” I asked questionably.

“He’s an evil enchantres he does evil dances…” Pinky started signing.  “Oh wait that’s not rite…”  I sighed, that pink pony was dumb-er then a butload of rocks.

“He’s head of the chrystal empire.  Duh every pony knows that.”

“SO u mean he foalnapped (cause there horses) Princess cellestia right??”

“Yah.” He said handsomly.

“Com over her!!!” said luna.  We went over.

“Platinum u have to rescue mi sister,” she said crying.

“But y me???” I yelled.  It’s not like I know magic or sumthing!! “Is it cuz I’m zebra?”

“U are the one from the prophecy, u have to save the kingdom!” sad Luna.

“Ok I’ll do it.” I said. Lunas miled. “Thanks!”

Shiny Armor looked at Platinum.  She was 1 of the pretiest ponies he’d ever seen.  Much prettier then that b*tch Candace. Und she was brave to.

“I’m cumin with u,” he said.

Oh I’m glad he’s comin with us.  I don’t wanna be stuck with whinny fluttershy the whole way there.

“Heres ur armor” Lina said.  She gave us our armor.  “Don’t loose it.”

I put on a blue cape with purple stars ad a white collar and than I put on gold boots like uggs but not reall and then I put my hair into a messy bun on tap of my head and  I looked fab!

“Oh heres ur gun,” Luna said holdin out a machine gunwith gemstones on the side and a bow.

“Wait I’m nut gunna(lol) kill any pony!” I wailed.  I’m way to nice for that.

Just then a pink allcorn came into the room.  She was fugly and looked nasty.

“Oh yeah I am coming to,” said ugly pink allcorn.  Her pink coat was the color or roses, but it looked ratchet as heck.  She was super ugly to.

Candace was so mean too me when we where foals.  I hate her.

“Like heck u are!” I said. “Stop tryin to steal my thunder candace!!”

She started bowling like a stupid diaper baby.  “But WHY?????”

“Sorry no one likes u,” said Rainbow. Then we hoof bumped.

“We’ll u better get goin,” said Luna.

“UGH I don’t wanna walk!” said Fluttershy.  I rolled my eyes, ugh what a complainy little brat.

“That’s okay,” smild Twilight’s brother. “I have a motorcycle we can use that insted.”  I smiled. I know I liked hum for a raison!

Then we left!!

Don’t u hate Candace?? Next chapter theres more romance ☺