Cutie Mark Crusaters and the Seventh Element

by lexgirl

Rating: everyone
Tags: Slice of Life, Romance, Comedy, Random
Length: 465

Shadow Cloak is Rainbow Dash's long lost lil' bro. He cant find her, but when he visits PonyVille something changes.

"Help!" Yelled a young filly. He had a dark coat, and magenta eyes. He had a mane, which was the rainbow backwards. His tail was the rainbow forwards. But he had no Cutie Mark
"Ah'm comin'" Storm Cloak heard another young pony galloping towards him. Then he saw a filly. She had a bow in her hair, and had a pink mane. Her coat was yellow, and she had orange eyes. She didn't have a cutie mark either. She looked at his flank and saw all of his cuts. She started to gallup off, yelling after her,
"Ah'm goin' tah be back in a second! Lemme get AJ!" Shadow Cloak, curiose, and in to much pain to move, stayed. He kept wondering who this 'AJ' person was, then finally, he blacked out.

Yay! First fan Fic on this site!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-10-02 13:04:34 UTC

Chapter 2

StormzCloak's POV

'Whoah.... That was a weird dream...' He thought.  He knew where Twilight was, and she was using her spell again.  The spell that makes it so he can meet her new friends.  He had met Pinkypie, she was throwing a party for Him, Rarity, she was disining clothes for Him,  FlutterShy, she was having all of her animals meet Him, and now AppleJack, of which this new dream was.  He was confused.  Why was this one like a nightmare?  Then it hit him.  His mother, NightMare Moon, was trying to take over again.  The dark side of Princess Luna was taking over, and of course, his sister, Rainbow Dash, of which didn't know she was royalty, had the same dreams, but there was something wrong....  RainBow is losing her royalty and now is a regular peggesi.  He racked his brain for help, for he was the smartest pony in Equestria.  Then he did something he hadn't done in a while, contact his aunt.

"Aunt? Aunty Celestia?" He called through the portal he just made.

"Yes, StormCloak?" She asked.

"It's happening again." StormCloak said.

"You are sure?"

"As could be"

"I shall wait, and see what Twilight says.  She will surely be reading the sings again."

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"WHAT?!?!?! PRINCESSS! NO! SHE CAN'T!" Twilight was shouting.

"She is.  And I know how."

"Wha..What?'

"There is a seventh element of harmony.   I have important... Needs... That should be attended to."

"Goo...Good Bye Princess." Twilight Stammered.

Twilight's POV

How, How can she come back? A seventh element of harmony? Which pony could that be?   SunsetShimmer?  No... Derpy? No, unlesss its the element of muffins...  Ummmm........  Somepony from the cutie mark crusaders? No... Too young...  StormCloak!

Chapter 1.5

When StormCloak woke up, he was in a barn.  His cuts were healed, and he realized that his horn isn't hidden.  'oh no! If anybody saw my horn, they would know!' he thought. He got up, started to gal lap towards the barn, but then a girl with an orange mane, and a yellow body stopped him.

"Wooahh Nellie! Yah gotta just listen yah me fer a sec!"

"Oh... Okay..." StormCloak said.  He realized this must be the filly that saved him sister.

"Twilight Sparkle contacted the princess.  She said that you might be someone we need.  She's comin in a bit, so just sit an wait."

"Okay..." StormCloak said.

"Now what's yer name?" She asked in her thick country accent.

"S.. StormCloak." He said.

"You from canter lot?" She asked.

"Ye..yea" he said, "how did you know?"

" You've got an accent like Twilight's."

"Wait... Twilight Sparkle?" He asked.

"Yep!" She said.

"I KNOW HER!!!! WHERE IS SHE?!?!?" He asked, clearly excited.

"I'm right here." Came a familiar voice.

"TWILY!!!!!" Shouted StormCloak!

"Stormy!" She said back, with the same amount of enthusiasm.

"What's going on here?" Asked another familiar voice.

"Celestia!" Said StormCloak!

"Hello, my nephew." She said.