The Clockwork planet

                Prologue

Unknown stallion: It was a peaceful day in equestria, ponies playing without a care in the world not knowing what is to come. But for four specific ponies there Destin...

Unknown mare: Is that really how your going start the story?! I mean seriously that’s such a CLICHAE beggining!

Unknown stallion: Well how else should I start a epic tale like this one?

Unknown mare: Ohh I don’t know maybe something with more PIZASAS. You know to get the readers attention, instead of this sappy beginning.

Unknown stallion: Ok how about this, “Four ponies wake up on a mysterious clockwork planet where time is slowly fading.” Is that better?

Unknown mare: Ya I guess.

Unknown stallion: thank you for making me tell the beginning of the second chapter. I mean there was suppose to be a epic beginning but noooo you wanted a different beginning well fine now we will start on the second chapter!!!

Unknown mare: Ok fine!

[crosses hooves with a pouty face]