Withering Petals

by PonySlayer

Rating: mature
Tags: Other, Romance, Sex, Slice of Life, Roseluck, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 5639

Rose battles herself with suppressed feelings for Lily... Do they become more than friends or will their friendship wither and fall apart.

(Now with 100% more editing!) Rose and Lily have been together for almost their whole lives. Now, Rose must keep her feeling suppressed for the time being until the right time comes along to show her affection for her favorite mare, Lily. Dealing with the hardships of hypocrisy , Rose has to cope with the different feelings she has for Lily.

Published 2013-10-03 00:50:04 UTC
Last updated 2013-10-03 00:50:04 UTC

Something Beautiful

Something Beautiful

Withering Petals

Time, love, and care are all that is required to have a friendship bloom.
Take any one of them away and the friendship will begin to wilt.
Soon it will be nothing more than a dried petal
That has lost all its beautiful color and its
Unique scent.
-J. Wright

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The day was coming to its end, street lights turning on and stores locking their doors. Bars, clubs, and some cafés were opening for the night life, giving those who dwell in night’s lore a place to relax… or to get completely drunk. For Lily and I, we liked to take things a little easy. For example, we liked to sit outside a café, sipping on rose tea while watching the stars sparkle way up in the sky. We do occasionally go out to a party or two, but those are for special occasions--

“Rose, are you writing out loud again?” Lily called through the door to my room.

“Uh… yeah, sorry! I’m writing in my journal at the moment, can you bother me later?” I asked nicely.

“Sure, but stop talking to yourself, I-it’s weird,” Lily chuckled before she trotted off.

I sat on my bed, thinking of the point I was trying to get across in my journal.
“Hmm… where was I?”

A long pause. “Crap! I forgot!” I groaned, slamming the journal shut.

Trotting out of my room I made my way to the kitchen, thinking of making a nice cup of tea. Stepping into the kitchen I couldn’t help but frown at a large pile of dishes.
“Lily! Why are there a bunch of dirty dishes?!” I yelled angrily.

“Well... probably because you haven’t done them yet,” she replied sarcastically as she read a book on the couch.

“Oh it’s my turn?” I said sheepishly.

“Yep!” Lily rolled her eyes as she flipped a page.

Ever since Lily and I moved in together there had been a power struggle on who does dishes, but laundry and tending the garden is a group activity we both actually enjoy doing… it is the dishes that are the chore brought by Discord himself.
Turning on the faucet, I began to fill the sink up with hot water, putting a dollop of soap in the water as well. Watching the bubbles form, I began to feel a soft tickling sensation in my ear, looking over to my right; Lily was blowing into my ear, softly.

“W-what are you doing Lily?” I stammered, cringing.

“Tryin’ to turn you on.”

“You know I’m not a fillyfooler,” I blushed, smacking her away with my tail.

Lily looked at the back of my head before speaking again. “You say you’re not a fillyfooler, but I know down deep inside your craving me.”

Turning my head towards Lily’s I gave her a sinister look before completely shooing her out of the kitchen, listening to her as she giggled back to the couch. Turning the water off, I began to clean the chaos of dishes, thinking quietly to myself as I scrubbed a plate with a wash rag. I wasn’t a fillyfooler I never thought it was right to be with someone of the same sex, but there was deep warmth I felt whenever I’m around her. She was a good friend of mine ever since we were just fillies. We did everything together. Now, thinking of it I do like her a little more than I should. The way she smiles at me, her continuous attempts to flirt with me, and her big seller the treacherous ear blowing. It didn’t matter how much I liked her, I just never felt right with the thought of me with another mare.

Now snapping out of my thought bubble I noticed that I had only cleaned the same plate for about ten minutes. “Ugh!”

“What’s wrong with you?” Lily asked, confused at my frustration.

Recollecting myself, I was able to respond to Lily. “It’s nothing… I was just, thinking again.”

“Do you want to talk about it Rose?” Her tone was sympathetic.

“No it's fine, thanks.” I bore a fake yet convincing smile.

Some time went by and I was finally on my last pan. Using a scrubber, I put as much force as I could possibly can on an annoying spot of encrusted food.
“Out damn spot!” I screamed scraping the indestructible encrusted spot with all my strength.

“Wow, calm down Rose, just let it soak overnight!”

Lily sounded worried; walking next to me she took the scrubber from my hoof and walked me over to the couch. Sitting on the couch Lily began to speak.
“Okay Rose... tell me what’s going on in that beautiful mind of yours.”

“I told you it’s nothing,” I said, avoiding eye contact.

“Come on Rose you can’t keep blowing me off like this.” She began to sound more annoyed as she continued. “I’m your best friend, and roommate! You can tell me anything, I’m all ears.”

Looking at the floor below me I started to spill as much beans as I could.
“I-I’m just confused about some things.”

“What are you confused about?” Lily asked, reaching her hoof out and resting it on my shoulder.

“I don’t know how to explain it Lily. It’s just festering inside me and I can’t find the words to say it!” I yelped rubbing a tear from my eye.

Lily scooted herself closer to me wrapping a hoof around my back as she talked to me. “It’s okay Rose,” Lily whispered. “I’m sure whatever it is we could get passed it.”

Whipping a tear from my cheek I looked up at Lily’s face, giving her a small peck on the cheek before getting up.
“Thanks Lily.”

“Sure thing Rose.”
Wiping another tear from my cheek I gave Lily my last words for the day. “I-I think I’m going to go to bed now. Good night Lily.”

“Good night Rose,” Lily replied, her voice relaxing.

The next morning....

The warm sun found a path through my curtains, harassing my eyes with its bright light. Rolling onto my stomach, I buried my face into my pillow trying to escape the light. Removing my muzzle from the pillow, I gasped for air as a result of nearly suffocating myself. Rolling out of bed, the smell of something cooking filled my nostrils, heading closer to the kitchen, my eyes witnessed the impossible.

“Li-Lily? Are you cooking?” I said in surprise.

“Uh, yeah. I got hungry so I started to make me some toast…. Want some?”

I nodded my head as I walked sluggishly towards the light raspberry mare, resting my head on her shoulder. I watched her prepare my toast; she put a nice thin layer of butter before smothering it with jelly.

“Oh that looks good,” I said drooling over Lily’s shoulder.

“Ew! Get off!” she yelped, shrugging me off of her shoulder.

Giggling softly I grabbed my toast. “Thank you Lil,” I snorted softly.

Hopping on the couch with the toast tightly grasped in my teeth, I picked up Lily’s book and began to read the first page.
“You better not get any jelly on that,” she warned.

“I won’t,” I reassured her.

Lily sat on the cushion next to me getting comfortable before nibbling on the toast. The crispy crunching sounds that were being produced by Lily’s chew annoyed me, reading out loud I tried to block the noises.
“The heated mare pulled herself up on the stallions… oh geez! Moaning from the pressure, the stallion’s massive member began to stretch out the… Oh Celestia! Lily, is this what you read all day?”

I couldn’t stop reading the erotic book, showing disgust though at the same time I aroused by its brutal nature.

“Well I have another book that’s about two forbidden lovers that are also siblings, oh the romance in that book made me cry, it’s really sad.”

My eye began to twitch at Lily’s weird book fetishes, hardly able to spit out the words I just sat there, gawking at her with a worried look.

“Rose quit glaring at me and eat your toast,” she said creeped out by the staring.

“Oh sorry about that. I think I spaced out into weirdo land.”

It wasn’t long 'till I completely inhaled my toast, licking the extra jelly that coated my lips. Lily watched me as my licking began to get more vigorous, trying to get all of the jelly off. Scotching over aroused by my behavior, Lily reached a hoof to my face, wiping some jelly off before licking it from her hoof. Now blushing, she made her way closer towards my face, climbing over me so I couldn’t run away.

“L-Lily!” I yelp trying to get her off of me.

She pressed a hoof over my mouth. “Shhh. No talking.”

Lily’s lips slowly pushed against mine; turning my face the same shade as her raspberry coat. Pushing her away from me, I began fill with emotions that I have been suppressing for some time. Secrets hidden beneath the thoughts of me becoming a fillyfooler pushed me the edge; making me cry. Putting my hoofs over my eyes I started to sob.

“Wow Rose, I was playing around,” Lily said, now feeling bad for making her friend cry.

“It’s not you Lily.” I sobbed. “It’s me! I-I like you… more than a friend, but... my feeling on two fillies being together....”

“Rose, don’t let that silly rule get in the way of your feelings. Give your heart what it wants--”

Lily’s sentence was stopped as I forcefully pushed my lips against hers, hugging her body for comfort. Breaking the kiss I buried my muzzle into her shoulder sniffling as I regained my cool. Lily was caressing my mane with long gentle strokes calming me with soft words.

“It’s okay, let it out Rose.”

Looking up from Lily’s shoulder, I could see her golden eyes looking down at me, she bared a gentle smile before licking my nose.

“Feel better now?” she asked.

Nodding my head, I moved to her chest nuzzling my cheek into her smooth coat using her as a pillow. Still stroking my mane, Lily grabbed my hoof, gripping it tightly comforting me with a friendly touch. Reaching an arm around Lily I softly rubbed her back with a hoof. Gazing back into her golden eyes I gave her a smile.

“Are you blushing Lily?” I asked her.

“Maybe, it’s hard to tell sometimes,” she replied, holding an arm out showing her raspberry red coat.

“Don’t hide it from me,” I scowled playfully. “I can see it in those big golden eyes of yours.”

Lilly bent her head down giving me a kiss on the head. “Well I am kinda snuggled with the mare I crushed on my whole life.”

Giggling into her chest I flopped around a little so I could get in a better position for what I was about to do. In the spur of the moment I set all morals aside so I may express my feelings to Lily. Removing my head from her chest I inched my way to her neck, kissing it as she shuttered.

“R-Rose, w-what are you ahh!” Her words where broken by the sudden nibbling sensation on her neck.

Her heavy breathing wasn’t helping me control myself. Licking up her neck I made my way towards her ear nibbling on it playfully, her ears must have been sensitive or something because they were twitching like crazy. Finally able to catch her ear I resumed the nibbling, cooing seductively into her ear. Grabbing my hips Lily rubbed the spot above my cutie mark, slowly making her way to my flank, spanking it with one large slap.

“Ahh~… L-Lily, not… s-so hard!” I muttered.

“Don’t be such a foal,” she hissed.

Having enough of the foreplay Lily pushed me off of her, throwing me on my back before crawling over me.
“I’m not going any further unless we are officially dating,” Lily stated as she dominated me with a single push.

“But!” I whimpered.

“No buts!” she scolded.

“Fine, were dating. Kiss me please.” I barked annoyingly.

“Oh, no, no! It doesn’t work like that. You need to take me on a date first.”

“But everypony would see me as a hypocrite!” I shouted panickedly.

Her smile slowly went away as she knocked sense into me. “No one will care Rose. And why should you care on what they think about you? Their opinions are theirs to worry about, not yours! If you truly do like me Rose, then you would not be ashamed to be with me.”

Lily’s eyes started to turn red as her emotions got the best of her.
“Now look at what you did,” she whimpered. “You’re making me cry....”

A tear dropped on my face as she shook her head.

Wiping a tear off of her cheek, I began to comfort her. “Lily, please don’t cry. I’m not ashamed of you at all, I’m just confused.”

“Confused about me!” she bawled.

“No! It’s more complex than it seems. I honestly don’t know what to think anymore.”

“What do you mean?” she sniffled.

“My feelings say be with you, but I don’t know if this deep feeling of regret will overcome me!” I whimpered, now starting to cry as well.

“Rose, what do you have to regret?” she squeaked, trying to hold back more tears.

“I don’t know.”

Lily got off of me and sat upright on the couch with her eyes clenched shut, allowing a tear to trickle down her cheek. Standing up, I wiped the tear with a hoof. Taking a deep breath, Lily looked into my eyes as she rubbed her nose against mine.

“Feels good to let it all out, doesn’t it?” Lily smiled

“I guess I do feel better now that it’s not festering inside me,” I sniffled back at Lily.

After pecking me on the lips, Lily jumped off the couch and made her way to the kitchen sink.
“I’ll scrub this pan for you Rose,” she said, picking up the scrubber. “You have a date to plan out for tonight.”

“Do you think it’s a little soon to just jump into a date?” I asked nervously.

“No, it's fine,” she reassured excitedly. “Besides you where kinda getting crazy with the foreplay just a few moments ago.”

Tripping on my words, I gave in to the forced date. “But, I… uh, never mind… the date will happen.”
Sighing lightly, I got off the couch and walked up to Lily, kissing her cheek before speaking. “We’ll go someplace nice tonight.”

Lily’s smile made me feel better about myself, knowing that she will always be there for me even if my feelings gets in the way of my morals.

Later that day….

Evening was coming quickly, and it was about time to take Lily on the date. Brushing my mane, I thought of how my first date with a filly would be, and what others would think.

“Would it be like going to dinner with a friend, or will she expect me to hold her hoof or something?”

I didn’t delve too deep into my thoughts... I didn’t want to have another emotional breakdown or something. Tonight is going to be special; Lily and I are going on a date.

Knocking on my door, Lily called through the wood. “Rose, are you ready?”

I sat my brush in front of my mirror and walked to the door opening it to leave with my friend. “I’m ready, let’s go.”

The evening was calm, the sun about to set and end its day. The streets where a little more busy than usual. Ponies were littering the streets, minding their own business. As Lily and I walked to a nice café, I noticed that there were a lot of ponies here. It kinda made me uncomfortable. But I couldn’t ruin this date for Lily, so I toughed it out. We sat at a table outside the café. Lily gave me a look confidence before speaking.
“Isn’t this fun?” she asked, smiling widely at me.

“I guess, we really haven’t done anything yet,” I said, looking for the waiter.

“You know… just being with you is fun enough for me,” Lily giggled as her tail brushed up against mine.

My face turned a faint shade of pink as our tails wrapped together, looking at Lily I’ve noticed she had taken out the lily that was in her hair.
“What happened to your lily, Lily?” I giggled, amusing myself as I played with words.

“Oh, is it not there? Silly me, I guess I forgot to put it back in after I took my shower.” Her face glowed from the slight feeling of embarrassment.

After waiting for longer than we wanted, the waitress finally made her way to our table. Using her horn to pull a notepad and a quill, she began to take our order.
“Good evening, what would you like to start off with on this fine night?”

Looking at the menu I pointed my hoof at the English Tart. “Can I get the tart please?” I requested nicely to the waitress.

Scribbling in her note pad she asked for anything I would like to put on my tart. “Would you like your tart to be plain?”

“Can I get raspberry jelly with it?” I asked, causing her to raise an eyebrow.

“Sure thing ma’am.” She continued scribbling into her notepad.

The waitress turned her head over to Lily. “Have you found anything you may like?”

Lily looked at the waitress already knowing what she wanted. “Yes, I would like to try your carrot cake please.”

Jotting down her order, the waitress looked at the both of us and smiled. “Your meals will be here shortly.”

Waiting for our food I grabbed a napkin and placed it flat on the table, folding the napkin. Lily sat there with curiosity. Watching every fold and crease I made she seemed to not blink, not even once. Trying not to break my concentration, Lily refrained from speaking, even when our food arrived she sat there in awe.
“Finished!” I proudly showed off, holding up a neatly folded napkin.

Lily eye’s widened in awe as she gazed at the unknown creation.
“What is it Rose?” she asked in complete amazement.

“It’s a lily,” I said, being more proud of myself than ever.

As Lily was still amazed I walked around the table placed the flower I made for her in her hair, adoring the new look on Lily.
“Lily, this lily is my gift to you and I want it to represent our first date as a couple.”

My words clearly filled Lily with joy, causing her to jump up suddenly to hug me.
“Oh, thank you Rose!” she shouted gleefully.

“You’re welcome Lily.”

Before I took my seat again I gave her a quick peck on the cheek, making sure nopony was watching when I did it. By this time our food had been sitting out for about twenty minutes. Slowly enjoying our cold meals Lily told me some of her dreams that she had the other night.
“So I was just drifting in space at that point and I couldn’t tell if I was riding a rainbow or if I was just floating freely.”

I twitched my eye out of confusion. “Wait you where what?” I yelped, snapping out of my confusion.
“Never mind, it was a stupid dream anyway,” she pouted, crossing her hoofs.

“No, it was a good dream… I... uh... kinda have a hard time following it though,” I mumbled giving her a fake grin.

On the walk home I scooched my body closer to Lily’s huddling with her to keep warm while walking through the night’s cool air.
“Lily,” I cooed.

“Yes Rose?” she cooed back.

“Would you like to walk through the park?” I asked, giving Lily puppy dog eyes.

“Yeah I guess, we could walk through the park, all alone with each other.” Lily’s sentence ended with a wink and a peck on the cheek.

The park was quiet and nopony besides us could be seen. Walking on one of the park trails, we stopped at a bench that overlooked the pond.
“You wanna snuggle Rose?” Lily asked pulling me to the bench

Lily plopped her rump right in the middle of the bench scooting over slightly to let me on. Once we got comfortable we stared into the pond enchanted by the reflection of the moonlight. I rested my head on Lily’s shoulder rubbing my cheek on her warm coat showing my affection to the red mare. Wrapping her arm around me, she pulled me in closer to her until eventually we were hugging.
“Rose,” Lily spoke nervously. “If we are to be together I want you to show it. I noticed you looking around when you kissed me at the café earlier, and I feel like you really don’t like me.”

“Lily, I do like you--” My words didn’t get far before I was interrupted by Lily shouting.

“Rose! Don’t lie to me! You even said you were confused about dating another mare. Maybe this is just a weird mistake, maybe you’ll never drop that stupid bull crap about love being between a colt and a mare. I love you Rose! I’m not a colt, is that why you can’t just love me back!?”

Lily jumped off of the bench, running through the dark trails of the park. Leaving me to cry alone on the bench. Looking for Lily, her sobs could be heard clearly but I couldn’t see much of anything while my eyes were being blurred my tears.

Looking for her I yelled through the night “Lily! Where are you?”

“Go away Rose!” Lily shouted from behind a tree.

Lily was curled up in a tight ball crying heavily into her hoofs, walking up to her I pushed my face against her back hoping that she will look at me.

“Don’t touch me!” she hissed.

Trying to calm Lily down I lowered my tone to a softer setting. “Lily I-I’m sorry. Please get off of the ground, and let’s talk about it.”

“Rose, I know exactly what’s wrong! You love me, but you can’t handle the fact that I’m a mare. Why are you so dense? Why can’t you just let go and be with me?”

Squeezing my eyes shut I yelled the whole truth about my love. “Lily! I loved you ever since we were fillies, I-I always wanted to be with you but I didn’t want to risk anything to go wrong between us. I couldn’t stop thinking about what would happen if we would break up. I didn’t want to risk our friendship being ruined over something as stupid as that… so I’ve been hiding my emotions behind my prejudice.”

“You were... hiding your feeling for me with prejudice?” Lily hissed.

My ears folded downward in shame of my answer. “Y-yes.”

“Rose! I’m offended you would do something as selfish and hateful as this! Even if we did break up I wouldn’t let that ruin our friendship, but the fact that you lied about the whole 'not liking the thought of same sex relationships' just to cover you true feeling, may be enough. Rose, I want to be left alone. Please, leave me.”

Her voice was like a sharp knife stabbing me in the chest, letting me bleed out and suffer.
“Lil…” I whined, only to stop in mid-sentence.

Interrupting me Lily stood up quickly and started to shout before walking off, “Don’t say another word!”
Sitting on the cold ground I didn’t do anything to stop her from walking away, watching my best friend vanish into the dark vale of night.

“Lily! Don’t leave me alone! I need you!” My sobbing didn’t affect her in the slightest way.

It was a couple of hours later when I was able to think straight, standing up from the dirt I began to make my way home. Walking in the cold alone was not enough of a punishment: I deserved to lose her. Any good friend wouldn’t use prejudice to hide her feelings....

I deserved to be alone and to never see Lily again.
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Very late at night….

The house's lights where on and the door was unlocked, making my way into the house I found Lily sleeping on the couch with a tear stained book. Walking past her I made my way to my room. Digging through my closet I pulled out a saddle bag and began to fill it with clothes and my journal. Hearing hoofsteps behind me, I turned around to confront Lily.
“Rose, what are you doing?” she asked, her voice full of worry.

Folding my ears back I spoke tonelessly. “I’m leaving.”

“Where are you going to go?” Lily whimpered, ready to start crying again.

Choking on tears, I was able to calm down enough to speak. “Somewhere where I can’t hurt you anymore.”
Lily walked up to me, pulling the saddle strap with her teeth trying to unlatch the bag.
“Rose don’t do this, you can’t leave me.”

“You left me Lily. You left me all alone to think about my actions, and this is my way to fix things.”

“Rose I’m sorry, I-I just didn’t know what to do.”

My voice grew weak from all the yelling and crying, it was just better if I didn’t say anything anymore. Making my way to the door I stopped next to Lily, brushing my cheek to hers one last time before I continued to walk out of the room, and soon into the dark streets.

Hearing the sound of Lily trotting behind me I didn’t look back, I continued walking before I felt a sharp pain engulfing my cheek.

Pulling her hoof back from hitting me Lily looked into my eyes, talking softly now she had my attention.
“Rose, you can’t leave! What would become of our lives if we just end everything with anger and regret? You did what you thought was right to protect our friendship, even if it was stupid and selfish. I should have listened to you instead of running off. Rose I love you more than anything in Equestria, and I want you to be happy with me. Please don’t run away! I can understand why you want to leave, but… stay with me and well try to get through this together.”

Touched by Lily’s pleas of forgiveness, I started to cry once more, dropping my bags as I hugged Lily with all of the strength I had left.

Weeping heavily I tried to clear my mind from my guilt. “Lil… I-I’m sorry I lied to you! I don’t want to lose you!”
Petting my mane gently Lily let out soft shushing noises. “Shh, it’s fine. Let’s go home.”
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A week had gone by and since we had our fight. We talked it out for a bit and we decided to start our relationship from the beginning, not keeping any secrets from each other we were completely honest when we talked about our feelings to one another. I also came clean to my friends that I was in love with a filly. They really didn’t care but it was good to clear my head from all my lies. I know that my actions had cut deep in my relationship with Lily, but over time love will nurse us back to health--

“Rose, are you writing out loud again?” Lily shouted from across the house, interrupting my writing again.

“Not anymore!” I shouted back, slamming my journal shut.

Trotting happily into my room, Lily climbed up on my bed smiling at me as she swiped my journal away from me.
“Hey, that’s secret!” I hollered.

“Didn’t we talk about keeping secrets just the other day?” she teased as she pried open my journal.

“Well this is different Lil… that’s my whole life right there. Down to the very last detail.”

“Good, then I should be reading a lot about me then would I?”

Her remark made me blush as I let her enjoy the contents of my journal.
“Just please don’t get too carried away with it,” I sighed, lying down on my bed.

Rolling her eyes at Rose, Lily tossed the journal. “Rose I’m not going to read your journal, I’m just messing with you,” she snickered playfully.

Sitting back up I took my journal and placed it in a dresser next to my bed. Giggling as I closed the dresser behind me knowing that Lily saw where I hidden my journal, I waved my arms in a mysterious manner.
“You didn’t see anything.”

Lily giggled at my little display. She patting a spot on the bed next to her, an invitation to sit on the bed.
“Come here Rose, I wanna talk to ya.”

Taking a seat next to her Lily pushed me onto my back, once again dominating me in one shot.
“I’ve waited to long for this,” Lily growled sexually, looking into my eye.

Crawling over to my side Lily put a hoof under my chin directing my lips as we made contact.
Pushing against Lily’s teeth with my tongue she opened her jaw allowing me access to her mouth. Wrapping my tongue with hers, I moaned into her mouth urging her to do the same. Still locked in the kiss I rolled on top of Lily allowing her to wrap her arms around my neck. Pulling my tongue back into my mouth I gave Lily full access to do what she wanted. Slightly pulling away from the kiss she bit down gently on my lower lip moaning as she gives it a little tug.

Panting softly, I leaned over to Lily’s ear delicately whispering inside, causing her ear to twitch. “I-I want you to m-make me scream.”

Pushing me over on my back the golden eyed mare locked lips with me before placing her hoof amongst my legs, lightly rubbing my marehood. Before she got too devoted with my area she pulled out, her hoof licking off the sweet nectar with one long lick.
“Mhhh,” Lilly moaned as she took another long lick of her hoof.

Seductively cooing to Lily I tried to urge her to use her muzzle on my marehood. “If you like it so much why don’t you just dig right in?”

Not wasting any time, the raspberry mare pushed her muzzle in-between my legs, licking along my slit before circling her tongue around my bud. Heavily panting, I placed my hoofs on Lily’s head pushing her face deeper into my wet mound, begging her to go faster. Flicking the tip of her tongue on my swollen clit, my back began to arch as I was about to experience orgasm.
“L-li… I-I…Ahhhh!” I screamed before spilling everything I had.

Pulling her muzzle out of me, Lily licked her lips clean before going in for another kiss.
Reaching my hoof around Lily’s thigh, I started to caress her pussy from behind welcoming the heat that came from within.
“Oh, Lily you’re soaked!” I cooed after breaking the kiss.

“I want you to taste me Rose!” The raspberry shouted mare as she dropped onto her back.

Making my way to Lily’s marehood I stopped at her thighs, kissing them before running my tongue up one thigh and straight into Lily. Enjoying the movements of my tongue, Lily’s body began to shutter. Wrapping her hind legs around my head, Lily had me in an inescapable hold… but who wanted to escape? Reaching her peak, Lily climaxed with little warning, arching her back as it happened.
“I-I’m gonna c-cum!” Lilly moaned pushing me muzzle deeper inside her.

“Oh yes! Yes! Ooooh.”

Taking a moment, I lapped up as much of Lily’s juices as I could before pulling my muzzle out of the spent mare. The fur around my mouth was wet and matted from Lily’s cum. Licking it clean I rolled next to the exhausted mare and lightly tickled her stomach with my hoof.
“Sooo?” I cooed.

“Sooo? What?” Lily asked, collecting her breath.

“Did you like it?” I asked hoping to get a good report on her performance.

Grinning widely, Lily critiqued, “Well… since it’s your first time doing something like this to another mare, I guess you did alright.”

Playfully punching her in the arm I argued about my performance. “Alright! I think I was a good eight out of ten.”

“Eh,” Lily squeaked, rolling her hoof side to side.

“Lily!” I shouted in annoyance.

“What! I was kidding you were good… I mean great!” Lily chocked trying to get out the right word.

“That’s what I thought,” I threatened playfully.

Turning my body towards Lily’s side, I wrapped an arm around her stomach, nuzzling my cheek into her chest. Her hoof crawled up from my side making its way to my mane, stroking it gently. I let out soft purring sounds imitating a cat. Giggling at me, Lily bent her head over kissing my cheek.
“Rose.”

“Yes?”

“I love you.”

I love you too, Lil.”

Author's Note

I hope you guy's like the newly edited Withering Petals.

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