The sun shines bright (REWRITTEN)

by Lillyfroo

Ironic (rewritten)

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Rainbow woke up, the darkness of her vision not surprising her.

The ironic feeling was still there. She had prayed that someday Scoot would be smiling next to a proud, loving wonderbolt idol - but she didn't mean Spitfire! The wonderful, ego-filled Rainbow Dash - that was who!

'Who am I kidding?' Rainbow thought. 'Spitfire is popular, fast, strong, good looking - I'm losing my trail of thought. And if she'd of stuck with me? She would of got a blind, earthbound pegasus,

with no natural skill.'

That last comment was correct. Spitfire's skill was natural, but Rainbow's was forced by intense training. She suddenly had a great idea - she could hang out with Spitfire!

~~~~~Meanwhile, with Scootaloo~~~~~

"What did she say, to make you so upset?"

"She said I replaced her."

Spitfire suddenly noticed her mistake. She was simply taking care of the filly - she didn't mean to harm Rainbow any more. Twilight and all of the other elements of harmony were heartbroken, and she hadn't even noticed!

So many incidents had happened at once - Spike had been turned down by Rarity, Rarity had been... 'dumped', to put it lightly... by Fancy Pants, Rainbow had been banished to the sun, Twilight

had started going out with Flash Sentry, Fluttershy was famous for her beauty, yet heartbroken by the sudden 'incidents', Applejack had been extremely busy but was diognosed with a severe condition called

'the werepony disease', and Pinkie was so tangled up in party planning business that she had no time to catch up!

Yet, Spitfire had sat there, ignoring the tears and sadness of the ponies around her, not knowing that she was driving one certain mare to insanity by taking the filly she cared for so much away.

"It's your fault," Spitfire muttered to herself.

"All your fault."

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