Mad Pony: The Chaser’s Tale

by Ginkyofu13

Arc 1: Jack Meet the Mane 6: Chapter 5: Jack Meets Rainbow Dash and Derpy

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Arc 1: Jack Meet the Mane 6: Chapter 5: Jack Meets Rainbow Dash and Derpy

Arc 1: Jack Meet the Mane 6:

Chapter 5: Jack Meets Rainbow Dash and Derpy

Meanwhile, back in Ponyville, Jack continued on with the tour with the CMC and Fluttershy. Suddenly they heard a lightning bolt they looked up and saw a cyan Pegasus with Rainbow Dash manes arguing with a gray one with blonde mane.

"Watch it, Derpy!" The cyan Pegasus shouted, "You don't want to cause more damage than you've already done!"

"I just don't know what went wrong!" The Gray Pegasus, Derpy, said.

"That makes two of us now,” the cyan Pegasus said in her mind.

"What is going on up there?" Jack asked Fluttershy and the CMC as he watched the two Pegasuses argue.

"Oh my, it seems Derpy did something wrong and made Rainbow Dash upset,” Fluttershy said as she watched.

Jack didn't say a word when he knew what the disable people have been though, but he knew it wasn't Derpy's fault. He couldn't help when he noticed that her eyes are both awkward, but he doesn't want to disrespect her. He has a gut feeling that to defend Derpy, but he looked at Fluttershy. Then he looked at Rainbow Dash as he ended up telling her straight.

Jack said to Fluttershy in calm, "I don't think Derpy did something wrong since her eyes tells another story due to the fact that she is disable. Your friend should never be hard on her, you are Pegasus too right?"

Fluttershy knew about Derpy's disadvantage, but she saw the damage around the place. She understood what Jack was saying because it was the eyes that is giving a disadvantage to Derpy. Fluttershy sighed when she have to help them out as Jack got Rainbow Dash and Derpy's attention by a whistle.

"Oh! A new pony," Rainbow Dash exclaimed in surprise on seeing Jack.

Jack noticed something was going to happen to Derpy as his instinct began to kick in. He saw a mysterious hand came out of the portal, but felt the wind flowing. He saw the sky turning uncolored except it was odd as he saw something was going to fall upon Derpy. He rushed in as quickly as possible to save Derpy before a tragic strike.

Thinking fast, Jack shouted urgently, "Watch out!"

Rainbow Dash reacted in surprise that Jack shows his athletic skills. Jack noticed something odd when the color was gone and he saw an unknown entity chuckling in the background. He flinched when he saw former contestant tries to attack Derpy, but he could see them. The other ponies don’t when Rainbow Dash noticed something wrong with the equipment.

Rainbow Dash was astonished of Jack's moves as he saved Derpy as Jack knew that the building was falling apart.

"Get out of the way," Jack shouted as everyone ended up getting out of the way.

"What's going on?" Twilight asked in shock and surprise as soon as she and the ponies got out of the way.

The building fell apart as everyone got out of the way as it crumbled down into rubble. Rainbow Dash destroyed parts of the debris flying from the town, but that never did happen in Ponyville before. Jack looked up as the sky became normal again and the contestants that he could see. They disappeared before him as the memories haunt him except he saw the silhouette looking out from the portal before it disappeared.

"What in Equestria was that?" Rainbow Dash asked in concern.

"Oh dear, is every pony alright?" Fluttershy asked in concern.

Twilight doesn't believe such thing since she didn't see anything or the sky turning uncolored. She didn't see the silhouette disappeared within the portal as she looked back at the others. She got a gut feeling something is wrong when she feels the wind except she looked at Jack. Spike suddenly looked like he was about to throw up, but then he burps out a green flame, which then changed into a scroll, the message from Princess Celestia.

"Did that just happen?" Jack asked in surprise, hiding his disgust from the message coming out of the dragon's mouth.

Jack saw people spitting out a fire or removing the dagger from their mouth, but it isn't more disturbing in his opinion. He didn't say a word when he imagined someone throwing up a message from the mouth like a cat coughed out hairball.

"Celestia must've replied,” Twilight said before she took the scroll with her message, "Let's see what she said..,”

She expected Celestia to allow her to do something about Jack except Spike was a bit nervous when he looked at the letter. He knew it was going to happen...

She expected Celestia to allow her to do something about Jack except Spike was a bit nervous when he looked at the letter. He knew that Twilight should never get her hopes up when he was shaking. Twilight wondered what Celestia writes when she decided to read it herself.

After reading the message, Twilight got a look of worry on her face as she said, "Oh no…”

Derpy was shaking after what happen after Jack saved her life when she walked up to him. As Twilight ended up reading the letter before them, Jack was offered a muffin for her thanks for saving her life.

"Thanks for saving me, mister,” Derpy said, "Here, have a muffin, my way of repaying you.”

Then she gave Jack a muffin.

Jack didn't say a word, but he was reminded that he have never offered a reward before. He accepted it as he never tried a muffin before except this was going to be the first time. Rainbow Dash ended up introducing herself before Jack after the performance.

Jack said to Derpy, "Thank you, I think…”

Jack noticed Twilight's expression when he ended up asking her a question, "Is there something wrong?"

Twilight ignored Jack's question when she looked through the letter when Fluttershy walked up to her. As Spike was smirking to tell Twilight that he told her so except it wasn't going to help her mood to change. She grumbled under her breath that she never expected this to happen, but she is still going to keep an eye on Jack.

"Well Twilight, I hate to say I've told you so!" Spike smirked victoriously, "You shouldn't get your hopes too high like that.”

"Whatever Spike..,” Twilight groaned.

Jack said, "Uh care to explain?"

Jack hoped that Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy to shed some lights.

Spike ended up explaining to Jack about it except Twilight doesn't want Spike to know since they don't trust him. Fluttershy sighed when she doesn't understand when Twilight and Spike departed from the scene.

"I just don't understand why Twilight is like this, acting all unfriendly toward you," Fluttershy said to Jack. "You just saved Derpy's life..."

Rainbow Dash sighed when she would like to have a word with Twilight Sparkles. She and Fluttershy will consider Jack a friend, but she needed to have to word with Twilight alone. Rainbow Dash gives a word to the Cutie Mark Crusaders to give Jack a tour alone.

Derpy accompanied Jack to show him around, but he seemed to understand about why Twilight was distrusted. Apple Bloom got an idea to give Jack a tour to Sweet Apple Acres, but Twilight was one step ahead of them.

Rainbow Dash flew up to Twilight and gave her the glare.

She said, "Twilight, we needed to have a word?"

Twilight said, "You have been friendly to the other ponies, but why Jack?"

"Seriously? He just saved Derpy from certain death!" Rainbow Dash exclaimed.

"If it wasn't for him, Derpy would be dead by now!" Rainbow Dash continued. "Isn't that enough for you to trust him?!"

Twilight shook her head when she doesn't trust him at all, but she wanted more to prove to be her that she could trust Jack.

"No, it's not. I need more proof he could be trusted," Twilight said.

"Like what?" Rainbow Dash asked.

Twilight tries to think of one as Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy waited for an answer. Twilight ended up coming up one excuse.

"Well, uh..." Twilight said as she tried to think of what kind of proof.

Twilight ended up coming up one as she ended up jumping into conclusion instead of listening to her heart. Rainbow Dash ended up making a bet with her to prove that Jack isn't what she thinks he is.

Rainbow Dash said, "If you want us to prove us wrong, how about a bet?"

"Alright, I'll prove to you that he isn't trustworthy and when I do, you're going to have to take Spike's place as my assistant for a month!" Twilight said.

"You're on! And if we prove you wrong, you're going to have to buy us all the sweets and drinks at Sugar Cube Corner, with all of your money!" Rainbow Dash said with a smirk.

"Plus, you have to apologize to Mr. Jack for being so mean to him," Fluttershy added.

"So what do you say Twilight? Do you take it, or are you chicken?" Rainbow Dash taunted Twilight.

"Fine, you’re on!" Twilight said.

Spike nodded when he smiled except he was going to be on Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's side of the bet. He knew that Twilight was stubborn to prove that Jack was evil, but after what he was told. He began to gradually trust Jack slowly. Twilight isn't going to let Spike be on their side since she needed his help to spy on Jack.

"I am not going to let them win the bet," said Twilight in her mind as she was confident that she was going to win the bet.

To Be Continued.

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