Oh, Hey Big Macintosh!

by Brohgue

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark, Sad
Length: 1583

Is Big Macintosh the nice pony everypony thinks he is? Scootaloo is about to find out.

Is Big Macintosh the nice pony everypony thinks he is? Scootaloo is about to find out. After a long day of Crusading she takes a detour with her scooter. But things turn for the worse when she runs into Big Mac. But why?

Waring contains: Blood, strong language and violence. If you are offended easily do NOT read this story.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-10-13 07:40:02 UTC

Oh god! I'm late!

Scootaloo was woken up by her alarm.

"UGH! What time is it?" She turned to the clock it read 9:31. "Oh god! I'm late, Applebloom and Sweetie are going to be pissed! I've already missed two meetings this week!" She scrambled around her room looking for her scooter. "Where is it!?"

She was interrupted by a knock at the door. Her mom started to call for her. "SCOOTALOO!"  Scootaloo was afraid of who was at the door but she reluctantly answered. "What?!" She yelled through her closed door. "Your friends are here!"

She cursed louder then she meant too. "Oh, SHIT!"

"What did you say young lady?!"

"Nothing!"

She walked down the stairs out of her room to see Sweetie Belle and Applebloom with angry looks on they're faces.

"Lets just go we will talk about it later." Said Sweetie looking more annoyed then Applebloom.

They walked to the clubhouse in silence. Applebloom and Sweetie were walking on each side of Scootaloo still looking very pissed.

"So guys what do you want to do today?" Said Scootaloo a bit scared

At that they're faces beamed in excitement.

Maybe i'll get off the hook. Scootaloo thought to herself.

"Well we're going crusading of course, silly!"

"Yeah Applejack says we could get our cutie marks in Hoofball!"

"Aw, cool! My dad said he played Hoofball in High school!" Scootaloo loved to watch Hoofball so why not play it?

"CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS HOOFBALL PLAYERS YAY!" They all said in unison.

As was expected Scootaloo was the best at Hoofball due to her being a natural athlete. She loved the contact of the sport half for the fun of it and half to release all the anger from past fights on her friends. She loved it.

Applebloom wasn't terrible she was a good player once she got the hang of it. Scootaloo thought she was a decent player. She might make a good linebucker.

But Sweetie was an awful player so she just watched Scootaloo and Applebloom play "Crush the receiver".

After a couple of hours of Hoofball they all put they're flanks together only to see that they were still blank.

"AWWWWW!" They all said in unison.

"We ain't never gonna find our special talents!" We were actually good at Hoofball! Applebloom fell on her rump feeling disappointed in herself.

"Oh come on guys! We will find it eventually just like everypony says!" Said Sweetie trying to cheer her friends up.

"Ah guess..." Said Applebloom still sitting with her head low.

"Well I have to go home guys. My mom will flip if i'm home late again."

"Bye Scoots!" The other two said in unison.

Scootaloo hopped on her scooter and started to flap her wings propelling the scooter to go faster. She felt so alive whenever she was on her scooter. Feeling the wind through her mane. The vibrating from the handle bars making her legs tingle.

Soon she was speeding through Sweet apple acres without a care in the world. "Lets take a detour!" She thought to herself. She surely be punished for being home late but she didn't care. She loved feeling the pure adrenaline of speed.

She took a path down to the west orchard dodging trees in her wake.

She was going so fast she didn't see Big Macintosh bucking apple trees and ran strait into him knocking her out.

Scootaloo woke up her vision was hazy. As she started to regain her sight she found herself in a dark stone walled room. This place had a bad smell. It had the same smell of the dead bird she found near the Everfree last week.

"Where am I? Hello!?" She couldn't move. She was bound by ropes keeping her in place.

"What the hay!? Did I get foalnapped!? The last thing I saw before I blacked out was Big Macinto-." She gulped.

"H- Hello?" She tried to yell but it barley came out as a whisper.

"Well look who is awake!" Came a familiar voice.

"Who are you!?" She yelled trying to hide the obvious fear in her voice.

A red pony stepped from the darkness in to plain sight of Scootaloo. "Big Macintosh? What are you doing!? Let me out!" Scootaloo was furious with her friends older brother.

"Why are ya in such a hurry? We 'aven't even started!" Big Macintosh had a creepy wide smile on his face.

"Started what!? This isn't funny! Scootaloo was holding back from screaming.

Big Macintosh's penis started to harden in anticipation. Scootaloo took notice then immediately looked away and closed her eyes.

"EWWWWWWW!" What the hell is wrong with you!?" At that Scootaloo widened her eyes in fear of what was going to happen.

"NONONONONONONONO! Please don't do this! Just let me go!" Scootaloo was now openly sobbing.

"Aw how cute! You were always the brave one! Now look at you! Yer scared shitless!" Big Macintosh was walking closer.

"Let me out! You you... EGGHEAD!" Big Macintosh walked right up to Scootaloo and struck her right on her nose at full force breaking her nose.

"AHHHHHHHHHH!" Scootaloo was screaming louder then ever. "YOU BUCKING ASSHOLE!" Scootaloo was bawling as she yelled at the massive earth pony standing only a few feet away from her.

"Shut yer goddamn mouth! Yer lucky ah ain't gonna kill you like the others!"

Scootaloo's eyes widened. "O- Others?" She said still with tears in her eyes.

Big Macintosh turned on a light revealing the room. It was filled with bodies some of which she knew.

"LYRA!? CLOUD KICKER!? NO!" She was screaming at the top of her lungs. "PLEASE! SOMEPONY HELP!"

Big Macintosh struck her again. "The walls are soundproof! Nopony can hear us and we can't hear anyone outside the room. Now... SHUT UP!" Big Macintosh struck her two more times leaving a black eye and increasing her nosebleed.

"Please! Stop! Let me go!" She said between sobs.

"But we haven't even started! Time for some fun."

Aftermath

NOTE: I will not be writing the rape. Sorry if your disappointed in anyway but I can't force myself to write Scootabuse and honestly the story would be better with out it.

Scootaloo was woken by her alarm. She could care less. She was in pain and not only on the outside but emotionally, She just sat in her bed and cried. The pain of her broken nose, bruises and swollen body didn't matter anymore.

"WHY! WHY DID HE DO SOMETHING SO HORRIBLE!?" She's been in her room for the past day. Nopony has seen her since before the... abuse.

"Should I tell Applebloom and Sweetie!? Should I tell Applebloom her brother is a demon from hell!?" Scootaloo was now sobbing between words.

She started to calm and decided one thing even if Big Macintosh told her not to.

"Applebloom has the right to know if her brother is a monster!"

She quickly got up but regretted it. The pain shot through her legs and she fell to the ground.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHH!"

"Scootaloo? Scootaloo gulped when she heard her dad walking up the stairs. She quickly locked the door."Sweetie are you alright?" She heard the doorknob jiggle.

She wanted to open the door and tell him everything that happened but instead she just sat there and silently cried.

"I'm fine!" She lied. She has never been in so much pain in her life.

"Scootaloo you know you can talk to me right?" She wanted the sympathy of her dad but she knew how over protective he was. She knew he would kill Big Mac himself.

"About what theirs nothing to talk about! Really dad i'm fine!" She was now trying to talk in a cheery voice.

"Okay get ready for school! You don't want to be late again. Scootaloo stopped herself from screaming.

"School!? I CAN'T GO TO SCHOOL LIKE THIS! She thought to herself. She needed a plan quick but failed to think of one.

She needed to talk to Applebloom and Sweetie right now. She waited for her dad to get to the bottom of the stairs. Once she heard the loud echos of his steps stop, she made a dash for the stairs she went down quickly and out the door.

Sweetie and Applebloom were both outside in the schoolyard waiting for there friend.

"Where is she!? She said to get here early to think of new ideas for crusading!" Sweetie Belle was now growing more angry by the second. She was normally good at hiding her anger but this was unacceptable.

"How dare she make plans to be at the school early and not even show up!"

Applebloom just sat their silently her face red with anger.

"H- Hey guys."

Once they heard they're friends voice from behind them they're anger grew.

"Scootaloo! How could yo-." Sweetie was cut off by a beaten Scootaloo who stood in front of her. She had bruises and welts all over her body.

"SCOOTALOO!" They both yelled in unison while running to her friend.

"WHAT HAPPENED!?" Sweeties anger had died away. All she cared about was her friends health. They both had tears in they're eyes.

Scootaloo sat there silently. Not saying a word.

"Ah need ta git Applejack or Big Macinto-."

"NO!" She screamed louder then ever and then broke in to tears.

"Scootaloo, please tell us whats wrong." Sweetie had sympathy in her voice and a pleading look in her eyes.

"O-Okay." Scootaloo stuttered.

"Applebloom i- its about your brother."