Crusaders Forever (Unedited)

by Brohgue

Chapter 1

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"CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS MANTICORE TAMERS, YAY!"

The three crusaders ran to Scootaloos scooter and hitched Sweetie's wagon to it. Sweetie and Applebloom got in the wagon and Scootaloo jumped on the scooter.

"You guys ready!?" Scootaloo said in an obviously excited voice.

"YEAH!" The other two said in unison.

"Okay, helmets on!"

"Uh, Scoots?"

"Yeah?" Said Scootaloo while turning to Applebloom.

"Ah forgot mah helmet at the farm." She said with a sheepish smile.

"Come on!" Said Scootaloo looking very annoyed.

"It's fine. Ah really don' need one."

"Are you sure? We might get in a accident," Said a concerned Sweetie Belle.

"Ahm sure! Scoots is way to good to git in an accident."

"Of course I am! Now let just go, I have to be home in a hour!"

"Okay fine but if something happens don't say I didn't warn you!"

Scootaloo's wings started to flap, propelling the scooter into high speeds. Soon she was speeding through Ponyville.

She loved the adrenaline of high speeds the wind blowing through her mane, the vibrations the handle bars made as she sped on the gravel road. But she realized something and came to a halt.

"Why did you stop?" The two said in unison.

"Where are we going to find a Manticore? Because I'm NOT going in to the Everfree."

They all drooped they're heads. "AWWWWWW!" They all said in unison.

"Lets just head back to the clubhouse." Said an annoyed Sweetie Belle.

Scootaloo started to flap her wings once again propelling her at full speed again. She was speeding through Ponyville once again. Her wings were flapping so fast the scooter was nearly flying of the ground.

"SCOOTALOO! SLOW DOWN THERE ARE BUMPS UP AHE-." Sweetie was cut of as Scootaloo hit a speed bump making them fly through the air.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" They were all screaming as they hit the ground with a hard thud, knocking Scootaloo and Applebloom out cold.


Scootaloo was awoken by a familiar voice.

"Scootaloo!? SCOOTALOO!? WAKE UP!"

"Sweetie?" Scootaloo was still dizzy from the fall. To her surprise, Sweetie started to hug her.

"I thought I lost you!" She said with tears in her eyes.

"What? Why? I just fell off my scooter."

Sweetie pointed to her helmet which was cracked right in half. "That's why." She said still with tears in her eyes.

"Woah! Its lucky I was wearing it!" She said giving her friend a smile.

"Where's Applebloom?" Sweeties face dropped. She was so busy tending to Scootaloo that she had completely forgot about her friend.

Scootaloo's smirk quickly faded to a look of fear.

They both started shouting for Applebloom. But nopony shouted back.

Then Scootaloo went silent when she saw a familiar yellow coated filly lying motionless on the ground. She walked closer hoping her friend was unconscious or playing some sort of sick joke. Sweetie was not far behind her more scared then she has ever been.

"A- Appleblo-." Scootaloo stopped mid-sentence at what she saw. Applebloom coat was pale and their was a large gash starting at the base of her skull and continuing down to the top of her muzzle.

"APPLEBLOOM!" Scootaloo ran full speed towards her friend. Sweetie just stared at her motionless friend with her hoof covering her mouth and a stream of tears running down her cheeks.

"WAKE UP! WAKE UP!" Scootaloo was now openly bawling while shaking her friend violently.

"APPLEBLOOM YOU HAVE NEVER GAVE UP IN YOUR LIFE NOW FIGHT! FIGHT IT!" Scootaloo stared at Sweetie who was crying harder then Scootaloo.

"GO GET HELP! Sweetie was still motionless staring at her friend. "GO! NOW!" At that Sweetie snapped back to reality and started to run towards Fluttershy's cottage as she was the closest pony to them that she considered a friend.

"Applebloom, p- please d- don't leave m- me." She was now quietly sobbing with her motionless friend in her arms.


Sweetie galloped towards Fluttershy's cottage leaving a trail of wet ground behind her from her tears. She arrived to the small house and started to pound on the door violently. Fluttershy opened her door a little frightened to who was their. Once she saw Sweetie. She greeted her with a smile and politely answered.

"Hello Sweetie Belle what can I help you with?" She noticed that the filly was crying and looked panicked.

"What's wrong Sweetie?"

"COMEHELPQUICKAPPLEBLOOMISHURTANDSHEISBLEEDINGANDWENEEDTOGETTOADOCTORNOW!"

"Oh, dear Sweetie please slow down I can't understand you."

"APPLEBLOOM IS HURT AND SHE MIGHT NOT WAKE UP!" Fluttershy faced turned from a look of sympathy to a look of fear.

Fluttershy quickly got a piece of paper, she scribbled something down on it and handed it to one of her birds. "Please take this to Rainbow Dash immediatly! If that's alright with you." The bird saluted and flew off. Fluttershy trotted to Sweetie.

"Sweetie please lead the way!"

Sweetie quickly bolted off. Fluttershy flew behind her as fast as she could even though that was barley enough to keep up with the filly.


"WAKE UP! FOR THE LOVE OF TARTARUS WAKE UP! Scootaloo was bawling louder then ever. She saw Fluttershy and Sweetie running towards her.

"Oh no this is bad this is very bad!" Fluttershy started to panic. She pulled a first aid kit out of her saddle bag and sat next to the yellow filly. She quickly banddaged up her wound and started to run to the center of town with the filly on her back where Rainbow Dash was waiting there for her.


"UGH! What could she possibly need that is so IMPORTANT to skip my practice!" Rainbow then saw Fluttershy galloping towards her.

"RAINBOW!" Fluttershy was yelling for her. Fluttershy never yelled so she knew something was very wrong, she also saw Scootaloo and Sweetie running along side her. She flew over to them at about half speed. As she got closer she saw Fluttershy carrying a small ball of yellow curled up against her. She figured one of her animals were hurt so she sped up.

"What happened!?" Rainbow was now close enough to see that it was a filly curled up in her arms.

"Apple. Bloom. Got. In. An. Accident!" Said Fluttershy between heavy pants. "Take her to the hospital, she needs medical attention!"

Rainbow didn't hesitate to take the filly and quickly flew off with her in her arms.

"Please save her Rainbow." Said Scootaloo barley audible as a whisper.

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