the tale of that guy... or... mare?

by rainbow_shy

Rating: everyone
Tags: Dark, Sad, Tragedy, Adventure
Length: 7693

i fell into equstria, but, i feel diffrent...........like...... i have changed form........

i fell into equestria, but, i feel different……. like… i have changed……..

f.y.i. this is my first (soon to be) published fiction, so criticism is gladly welcome. also looking for a good cover art to replace the cover art i have right now, it sucks. so if you have a website with a good picture on it, please send me a link and i might put it as the cover art. thank you!

im also looking for pre-readers. i would gladly accept.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-03-13 00:44:01 UTC

chapter 1

it was a lonley walk towards home, where i have been dying to get to. it has been rough for me for the past few years. school, girlfriends, homework, family crisis's,  issue's, etc. but, i have been wanting to just end it all, with a quick slice of the neck, and it would all be over........ but something has been holding me back........ and that feeling was, guilt. me, causing all my friends and family members in tragedy. i have been close to destroying my life, and just putting a complete stop to it all, but i just cant do it. i was walking into the living room and i saw my little brother watching my little pony, i was very bored at the time, so i just sat there and watched it. i am glad i did, becasue that show has enlightened me and showed me that just ending my life would not be a choice. that show has also taught me that even if someone being mean- ok i should just get to the story.

where were we? oh yes. i got to my door, but i didnt open it, my mom did, she wanted to take me to...... well i didnt know at the time. it was about a 20-30 minute drive untill we got the the movie theater,"what are we doing here?" i said. "well, i thought you looked down, so i decided to take you to the movie theater!!!" my mom said."o...k? thanks!" about 2 hours later, the movie was finished."that was a great movie! i thank you very much for taking me" i said. "your welcome!!! now,how 'bout we go to the libary?" my mom said. "good idea, i should get reading anyways" i said. as soon as i walked into the libbary, i saw that the  diary of a wimpy kid book cabin fever was in stocked and i instinctively looked at my mom with puppy eyes, and it worked. i was home, reading my new book super excited on how greg would get him self in trouble and then solve his problem. i was getting tired, so i decided to not pull an all nighter this day and went to sleep. as soon as i woke up, i realized it was 2:00 am. "i wonder what got me up THIS time" i said in the usual morning voice. i figured out what woke me up, it was a loud bang in the kitchen. i went to the kitchen and saw a great white and bright light from the kitchen and i was almost blinded from it. the next thing i knew i was in a dark void, so dark the i couldnt even see myself. but then i drifted out of consciousness.

i awoke, but it was still dark, but the scenery was different from my house, I WAS OUTSIDE!!!!!!! i also soon realized i was in a fountain, i looked at my image, and i was a very black pony with a very white mane and also a little dark grey in it, i also had a tail that was completely  white, with some black going down the middle, i also had the cutie ma- WAIT A SECOND A CUTIE MARK!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

i fainted at the sight of a black and white hood and a bloody dagger as a cutie mark," i guess im an assassin!!! i said, apparently to loud because i heard another pony scream and run away, i didnt get a close look at the pony, or even get to look at it at all, but i recognized the voice. it was fluttershy, i remebered the show "my little pony" and soon realized that i was in there universe. i went through the quick, but yet long list of things i couldnt eat or do, like video games, and meat, and t.v., etc..

i guess i caused myself boredom after a while because i passed out on the dirt ground. after i woke up i heard some yelps and squee's, so i quickly shut my eyes and opened them a tiny bit, just enough to look at my surroundings and make sure nopony saw that i was awake. i saw what seemed like the entire town of ponyville just gathered around me, just staring at me, then i saw the mane 6 just looking at me with curiosity. of course pinkie pie ran to her hosue to start the "welcome to ponyville" party or something, i didnt know at the time. i also saw rainbow dash looking a little bit worried, i mean who wouldnt be if i have a black and white hood with a dagger as a cutie mark! i finally opened my eyes and everypony- even the mane 6 - ran away. i walked around ponyville, it kinda looked like a ghost town right now, i guess everypony was really scared of me, i wonder why. i knocked on someponys door and i aksed "where am i, what am i, and who are yo-" before i could finished, the door slammed shut. "well somepony doesnt have any manners!" i said. i saw pinkie pie coming over to me, and i knew what was going to happen, but then i realized that i was an alicorn, witch was kinda surprising, but not then, i just flew off and didnt know where i was headed. i crashed right into pinkies house on sugarcube corner and landed into pumpkin cakes and pound cakes room. mr. and mrs. cake ran upstairs over to the source of the extremely loud bang. pound and pumpkin cake actually liked me, but i couldnt play, so i pretended to play dead. wrong plan. as soon as i laid down, wings ruffled, legs in weird spots, looking dead, pund cake and pumpkin cake hopped on top of me and started bouncing on me, i couldnt help but laugh,i guess i laughed to loudly and i saw mr. and mrs. cake run through the door and scream at the sight of me and called the royal gaurds, about 5 minutes later, i heard the door slam open from downstairs and i had to fly away, but again, my wings were broken and i knew no knowledge on even HOW to use my horn, but pound cake (i think thats the one with the horn) looked at me and knew what was going on, i saw her horn glow, and the royal guards came bursting in the room, only to see pumpkin and pound cake floating in midair. i was invisible, thanks to pound cake. the royal guards looked at mr. and mrs. cake in confusion."she must of gotten away!!" wait, SHE?!?!?!?!?!? i had NO IDEA that i was a mare alicorn. as soon as that got out of my head, the royal guards were gone, and pound cake turned me visible again and healed my wings and i flew off, should have waited..

now im in ponyville, getting chased by two armored pegasi. well, this is a fantastic first day in ponyville!!

chapter 3: the crazy day

i was in a dark alley way, i was still crying about what happened about an hour ago. then, i heard some hoofsteps, i quickly looked up to see that the mane 6 were standing in front of me looking sad and guilty about what happened earlier. "we're sorry..... sorry, we still dont have your name" twilight said. "my name is Aeris Vince James, but you can call me Vince. i shouldnt of stormed off like that." i said. "what a weird name!!!!" pinkie said "aerisaerisaerisaeris aerisaerisaeis-" "ok pinkie thats enough" i said "sooo...... what are you girls all doing here?" "we thought that we went a little-" twilight said, but i interrupted her. "a little!?!" twilight continued "ok, maybe alot....... never mind that though, we just wanted to take you out, like, a girls night." "no, sorry, i still dont know ANYTHING about you girls" even though i did know almost everything about them. but then, of course, pinkie did her puppy eyes, its actually easy to say no to them. "no, im not going to this 'girls night' with you girls" i said, immediately, they all gasped, i had no idea why untill i remembered pinkie did those puppy eyes. "nopony can say no to pinkies puppy eye look!!!" rarity said."ya! unless they have no heart!!!!" rainbow dash said, still not trusting me."what is wrong with rainbow dash?" shouldnt of said that. "you know RAINBOW DASH!!!" they all said in unison."ummmm..... well....... ehhh..........." why must my brsin troll me by bursting out words *face hoof*. "she doesnt know me, but i know her name, thats all, i also know apple jacks, and pinkies, and twilight, and fluttershy, and rarity." they al just stared at me. i fecking hate my stupid troll brain.

the next day was greeted by mr. garbage bag, and mrs. recycling box. (they werent real ponys, look at the names) i was also greeted by rainbow dash, who looked like she was going to try to beat me like i was a mortal enemy, or, maybe its immortal, because im an alicorn. "why would you stalk us and try to learn our weaknesses!!!!" rainbow dash said in an angry tone. "of course, you ponys always just jump to conclusions......" i said, then RD started to talk "well its plainly there that you DO STALK us all, you know our names, what if you know i like a-" she just stopped there, and i knew what she was going to say. "apple jack?" i said. RD blushed a bit..... ok alot. "i wont tell anyone, i pinkie promise. "ok, nopony breaks a pinkie promise."  "and also next time, when you think im doing something that might hurt somepony or doing something bad to somepony, just ask me, i dont want rumors going all over the town" i said. "HEY LOOK, ITS THE STALKER!!!!!" somepony said. "really?" i said just staring at RD in a 'why would you do that' stare."heh, i must of told somepony, and he told everypony...... " RD said "i hate you" i said.

i flew off into where ever praying that i wouldnt crash again. should of paid attention. i crashed right into twilights library. "what was that!!!" i heard spike say. "uh oh. i wonder if spike thinks im a stalker trying to stalk twilight right now. i tried to fly away, but my luck has been far from good, my wings were broken."HEY YOU, STOP RIGHT THERE!!!" spike said "EEP!!" i jumped off the balcony, suprisingly not breahing any ar- i mean legs. after ours of running from a little baby dragon, i ended up at what seemed to be a rave party. there was a sign that said 'open mic night tomorrow'. so i went inside, and the first thing i see is vinyl scratch up at a dj studio. nopony saw me, probably because my fur is completely  black, still there were rave lights everywhere, so i was kinda suprised that nopony saw me, untill one pony bumped into me. looked like this pony was scared half to death, then vinyl scratch noticed me. she walked up next to me and said "wel wel wel, it seems like we have the town stalker walking inside the tavern. whos your next victim?" vinyl said. "im not a stalker, that was just a rumor spreaded by rainbow dash. plus, if i was stalking, why do you think i would be here?" i said. "hmmm...... good point, well, anyways. welcome to to the best bar in town, need anything to drink?" vinyl said. "i dont drink, i might accidentally kill somepony." i said. "awww, to bad" vinyl said in a kinda sad tone. "how 'bout you meet me out back." vinyl said. "wait, why?" i said, but with no answer. i headed out back, awaiting my 'suprise'.

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chapter 5: the long night

as i walked to princess celestias room, i couldnt help but notice someponys just staring at me, it was kinda freaky. "celestia, im not very comfortable with all these ponys just staring at me...." i said "oh dont worry, they'll just stop sooner or later". they didnt stop staring at me untill i got to celestias room. "oh how fun this is going to be!!" celestia said in a very happy tone. "i cant WAIT to learn about your culture and your interests!" celestia said."oh dont worry, i have alot of stuff to tell you." i said. it was about an hour later until me and celestia were friends. "oh yes, those strange green things, what are they called again??" celestia said. "those 'green things' are called creepers" i replied "and what do they do again?" celestia asked, "they explode when they get to close to you, i dont really like them" i said. "i can tell why. and what is this 'video game' you speak of again?" celestia asked. "its called 'minecraft'. i play it all the time, its super fun. also there's this other game called 'call of duty: modern warfare 3' that i just love." i said "and what is this 'game' about?" celestia asked. "its where you kill people and save the world from total destruction and play with other people online and shoot the hell outa them" i said. "MY GOD THAT SOUNDS HORRIBLE!!!!" celestia said, with a very shocked expression on her face. "dont worry, they arent real people, there just animated-computer animated to be exact-characters that dont really resemble any other living being. and in no way, hurts any living being at all." i said. "oh..... ok then, i guess its not all that bad, at least if 'people' in 'real life' dont do that stuff." celestia said. "they do" CRAP. "WHAT" celestia said "HOW COULD ANYPO- i mean- ANYONE DO THAT!!!" celestia said. "well, you see....... ummm.... how should i put this......... guns" i said, celestia looked puzzled, so i said "guns are things that shoot out of these things called 'bullets', they are very dangerous and can kill someone almost instantly if you shoot in the right place. its an instant kill if you shoot right here *points at head*. lodes of people back on my planet un-support these things, and also the main use of these guns. wars." i said. celestia still looked puzzled, "yes, i have broken her poker face" i thought to myself. "what does my poker face have to do with anything?!??" celestia said. "crap, i forgot she could read minds" i thought. "you know i can hear you right?" celestia said. "crap, gotta think of... ummm... CHICKENS!!!!!!" i thought. "what?? chickens???" celestia said, while she facehoofed."no, not chickens you stupid. ummm....... yes!! perfect." i thought (i was thinking of this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CcTy7nixr84) "that has a nice tone to it, whats it called??" celestia said. "its called electric rock, the song is called 'party cannon'. as you can tell, its a youtube video" (FUCK I DID IT AGAIN!!!)

TO E CONTINUED............. NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

chapter 6: EVERYTHING IS CHAOS NOW!!!!

the next day was like no other. its was utter chaos. princess celestia(surprisingly) found out how to make the computers and make the internet, so for me, it seemed like it would be heaven, but it was utter hell. i looked around to see there were also video cameras, and just regular photo cameras, and mixed up cameras. then i thought to myself. "hey, if celestia got the idea from me, then i should get a free computer and free wifi!!!!!" "nope!" i heard a voice in my head and immediately knew it was celestia. "i will get you trollestia!!!" i thought. "HEY DONT CALL ME THAT!!!" celestia said suddenly appearing beside me."how come? do you not like that name, trollestia!!!!" i was going to have some fun. "i swear to.... umm... myself!!! that i will get you back!!!" celestia said. she suddenly teleported back to her castle. "that was.... awkward." i said. i saw twilight super happy about the fact that computers were made, now she could study easier. "hey twi, how are you?" i asked. "oh im fine, you?" twi replied. "oh nothing, except that I made the internet here!!!" i said. big mistake. everypony else within 5-10 meters heard me, suprisingly, because theres alot of racket going on and it would seem impossible to even hear me within 2 meters, even in the voice i just used.

(listen to this)

i ran and ran and ran, but some unicorns tried to levitate me to them, but they failed, because celestia (during our little hangout) taught me a spell that tore through the levitation spell. some pegasi were trying to grab me and literally take me away high in the sky and (you know what). they didnt get a grasp on me(pause music). i instantly teleported out of the town completely and ended up in canterlot. i saw rarity and asked her why she was there. "oh im here to find photo finish and try to get my fashion career on track!" she said "and why are you here darling?" i said>"i guess i teleport to a random place when im in distress." "and what happened so bad that you were in distress and teleported here?" she asked. "do you like the internet?" i said "YES!!!!! it really helps me with advertising my fashion!" she said. "then never mind." i said. "what is it?" she asked. "never mind......" i said, "you can tell me anything darling" she said. "ok, everypony in pony ville loves the internet-" i said, but got interrupted by rarity "how come thats so bad?" she said. "just let me finish. everypony in pony ville loves the internet, and im the one who basically created it" i said. rarity gave me a huge hug after i said that "OH THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!" she said, and everypony around me just stared at me and her. "oh.... sorry about the, scene." rarity said, slightly blushing . "its ok, just as long as nopony heard about me creating the internet. thast all im worried about right now" i whispered to rarity. "why not! you'll be famous about the fact the YOU, the smartest pony in all of equestria, made the internet!!!!" rarity said. "IM GOING TO FUCKING KILL YOU RARITY!!!!!" i thought. (resume music) then out of the blue, almost everypony started to run after me.... again. this time, nopony tried to do it with me (im so happy about that!). but they still  ran after me. and MAN they were violent. i think someponys even pulled my mane back and my tail. after that happened, a blast of magic 'blasted' everypony near me away with the force of a train running at full speed. i kinda blacked out when this happened, but i have heard storys, and i think this is how'd it go.

my eyes were very dark with a little slim white aura outside of them, i was like the grim reaper him self. everypony was terrified as there was a pulsing black-ish white aura around me, circling me like a force field. "FOR YOUR CRIMES AGAINST MY PRIVACY AND WELL BEING, YOU SHALL PAY!!!!!! FIRST, I WILL KILL YOU, THEN, I WILL GUT YOU, THEN I WILL TAKE YOUR SOUL AND FEED IT THE THE DEVILS IN THE UNDERWORLD!!!!!" everypony was scared literally half to death, i slowly walked up to my first victim and almost killed him, if it wasnt for princess celestia to knock me out with a "knock-out-spell". i woke up in the hospital, restrained, as they still thought i was dangerous."where am i!!! how'd i get here!!! and why am i restrained!!!" i said pretty scared about what was going to happen next. "you went crazy, and almost killed everypony in all of equestria. you were on a rampage" celestia said "and i knocked you out with a 'knock-out-spell' that i know. its a very strong one to, it usually lasts for about a week, but, surprisingly, you only got knocked out for a day." celstia finished. "what?!?! you knocked me out!!! WHY!!! oh yah, forgot about the rampage for a sec there...." i said."twilight is very suprise at the amount of dark amgic in you, nopony has that amount of dark magic, and doesnt use it." celestia said. "how much is it?" i said. "i cant quite say exactly how much, but if it would fill your body, it would fill about 95%" celestia said. my jaw dropped when she finished saying that one sentence. "how!!!" i said. "i dont know how you suppress that magic, but you were doing a good job untill everypony started rampaging on you about the fact that you made the internet idea." celestia said, "oh ya, forgot that. oh and also, thanks alot for reading my mind, I REALLY appreciate it. i said sarcastically."sorry..... i shouldnt invade your personal space like that...." celestia said. i guess the mane six (minus twilight) were sitting outside in the waiting room, even though we have only been acquainted, they still worried about me, what nice mares. i went out to the waiting room/exit/entrance and saw that they were all waiting(hehe, get it? because its... the... waiting room?? hehe, yeah..... ok lets get back to the story) "oh i was SO worried about you!!" rarity said. "ah hope yeh aint hurt much vince!" apple jack said. "oh it would just hurt me super-duper much if you werent ok!!" pinkie said. "i hope that you arent hurt to much......" fluttershy said, but in a quite voice as she was still shy to me. "wheres rainbow dash?" i said. "she 'ad teh go teh work" apple jack said. "oh bummer" i said. "hey! how about we throw a 'glad your well vince' party!!!" pinkie said. "i dont think thats a good idea pinkie" i said. "oh.... ok...." pinkie said. i swear i saw her hair deflate a little. "ok, how about we just go to my ho- oh......" i said remembering i STILL have no place to stay. "whats wrong vince?" rainbow dash said as she suddenly flew in from the door. "i have no place to stay. and also, i dont think i want to be called vince anymore, thats my middle name after all, just call me by my first name, aeris" i said. "okiey dokiey lokiey!!!!" pinkie said. "your welcome to stay with me vin- i mean- aeris" RD said. "that seems fine" i said. "oh this is going to be fun!" RD said.

+----(about 5 hours later)----+

me and the mane six (including twilight this time) went to the bar so i could ease up a bit."i hope we all dont get to drunk on our ass's" rainbow said. "me too, that would be a COMPLETE mess" i said. we got to the bar and the first thing i see is vinyl. "i think we should go somewhere else" i said, "why aeris? whats wrong about this palce? its the best bar in town!" twilight said. "its because of the dj thats here tonight, its vinyl, we have some..... history..... bad history." i said. before i could get out, vinyl noticed me and teleported to me." hey vince." vinyl said. "my name is now aeris, vinyl" i said. "well well well, trying to get a new life i see." vinyl said. "no, vince is my middle name, aeris, my first" i said reassuring her."whatever, you are boring me, plus this song is almost over and i gotta go put a new record in, cya!" vinyl took off towards the dj set. "well, that was kinda awkward." twi' said. "pinkie, can i talk to you for a second?" i said. "okiey dokiey lokiey!" pinkiy replied. "i heard you can break through the fourth wall." i said. "mmhmm!!!" pinkie replied. "can you get me back to my universe for a second?" i said. "nope! cant do that!" pinkie said. "oh why not!" i said in a whiny tone. "because it doesnt work like hat you silly!" pinkie said. "alright then , i guess ill just have to leave my mp3 player back at home." i said. i walked over to twilight and me and her started to have a conversation about the incident about 2 days ago in canterlot.....

chapter 7: dark magic

i walked over to twilights house to go learn some new spells. before i got there though, i bumped into pinkie, "oh great" i thought."yes pinkie? what is it?" i asked pinkie pie."oh nothing! i just wondered if you wanted to go to sugarcube corner for a delicious cupcake!!!"OH GAWD NO, NOT THIS" i thought ."why you looking surprised aeris?" pinkie asked in her regular voice. "oh... umm.... nothing.... lets go now" i answered. as soon as i got to sugar cube corner, i saw that there were some cupcakes that had rainbow frosting on them and my jaw dropped in horror."whats wrong?" pinkie asked. "do you mind telling me how you made rainbow frosting?" i asked. "oh, i just got the right colors and mixed them all up!" pinkie replied. "with what?" i asked. "frosting you silly!" pinkie replied. "what was the frosting made of?" i asked. "i dunno. mr and mrs cake made it for me!" pinkie replied. "wheres rainbow dash?" i asked. "she's at somewhere, doing something!" she replied. "do you mind if i check downstairs?" i asked. "why so aeris? do you think there might be some super-duper scary monsters down there!!!" pinkie replied. "are you making up excuses?" i said. "excuses for what?" pinkie replied. man, this is hard. i stopped talking and ran to the basement door but got stopped by a pink blur stepping on top of the hatch leading to the basement. i didnt know the levitation spell quite yet, so i tried getting her off of it. "hey pinkie, is that oven over there, is that light suppose to be flashing red?" i said. "yes! that means its done heating up!!" she replied. it worked and i opened the basement door to see that it was pitch black. i found a light switch and turned it on, just to see there is a bunch of disgusting, wet, dried up, frosting ingredients. (haha, i got you there didnt i?) "oh no! not the vanilla extract!!" pinkie said as she was running to the broken vanilla extract bottles, screaming "WHY!!!" over and over again like in those romance movies when someone dies."oookkk....... pinkie, im going to go to twilights house now. GOTTAGOSEEYOULATERBYE!!!!" i said as i ran out of pinkies house and towards twilights place.

+----(1 hour later)----+

i got to twilights house and knocked on her door and when i did that, i heard some expected crashes coming from inside. i expected spike to come and answer the door, but twilight answered it instead. i saw that there was a pile of books, which i assumed spike was under, and then twilight invited me in the door. "so why are you here tonight aeris?" twi' asked. "oh, i just wanted to learn a few spells, make this horn on my head useful." i said. "oh, ok, lets start with a simple levitation spell" twi' said. +----(10 minutes later)----+  "ok, i got all this set-up and ready to go!" spike said. there was three tables in front of me, all of them small and high, about a half a foot in radius, and two and a half feet tall. all of them had vase's on top of them which i assumed i had to pick up with the levitation spell. the tables were in the ranges of close, far, and farther. "ok, you ready aeris!" twi' said excitedly. "yes si- i mean ma'am!" i said. twilight giggled a bit, but quickly regained perfect posture. "ready! aim! levitate!" twilight said. i tried the first one, without ease, then the second one, again, without ease, then the last one, with the tiniest bit of difficulty. "your a natural aeris!" twilight said. i kinda lost focus their and accidentally dropped the last vase. "sorry!" i said. "oh dont worry, i'll fix it up in seconds" twilight said with her "i know what im doing" voice. she fixed it up literally in seconds. looked like it was brand new! "oh hey twilight, the princess taught me a spell that can tear through unicorns 'magical grab'. i think its pretty cool, it saved my life when*shudder* all those unicorns chased me" i said glaring at twilight a little. "hehe...." twilight said, embarrassed. "lets see if your speaking the truth." twi said. i suddenly got lifted up in the air by a purple aura, and then i used my spell to cut it open.. twilights jaw dropped when i did that. then she lifted me up again..... and again...... and again..... and again.......+----(5 minutes later)----+ "wow, you weren't kidding when you said you can break through fields" twilight said. she looked pretty tired, so i said my goodbyes and left. i went to go fly towards rainbow dashs house because it was what it seemed like midnight and i was tired. very. tired. but the most unexpected thing happened, i fell asleep in midair.

+----(about 12 hours later)----+

(listen to this it really puts on the mood of this part of the story)

i woke up to a new sight and i had no idea what happened, how i got here, or what this place even is. it looked REALLY old, the windows were broken, the ceiling was almost completely torn off, and nopony was in sight. the place looked like it was made of rock or a cement like substance. i heard nothing except the wind. it was a little bit foggy, and...... a shadow in the fog was there. i ran towards it, but it ran to, i didnt get a good look at the color nor who it was. i finally caught up to him or her. but when i started to ask where i was, the shadow just vanished. not like a magical vanish, but a mysteriously just went *poof*. i thought i was seeing things, but when i turned around, i saw a glowing piece of rock. i picked it up and it just glowed there. i also saw some fire where a big drag mark, about the width of the glowing rock, marked in the ground. it wasnt next to where the rock was, but it was the same size. i started looking around to see if i recognized the area i was in just a little bit. the fog started to fog up more intensely, and more and more until i couldn't see three feet in front of me. i started to worry about what was going on, then, i went into-what seemed like- limbo........  (listen to music until end. its awesome)

chapter 8: dark magic part two

(listen to this)while i walked aimlessly in the empty universe, i saw that everything around me, was gone. just completely gone. nopony was in sight. no peace of debris was in sight. only complete whiteness. i walked for what seemed about hours, though i think there is no time in this so called  "limbo". i tried to speak, but i was mute in this place. i walked about another hour, still nothing. but then my horn glowed, it started to glow brighter, and brighter, and brighter! until i blacked out, great.

+----(about 96 hours later)----+

i awoke, but i wasnt in limbo anymore, i was in a hell-ridden pony ville. everything was burnt down, everypony was dead, and every peace of life...... gone. not until i heard someponys walk around the corner. it was the mane six! and spike. "hey, whats going on here?!?! i was in limbo and now i woke up in some rubble and see that this place went to hell!" i said. they all just glared at me like i knew all about what happened here, except twilight, she knew what i was talking about."limbo.... limbo.... i know i heard that word before....." twilight started to say. "aha! limbo is the state where when one dies and does not go to heaven nor hell. but, if you were in limbo, then how are you standing here in front of us?" twilight said. "i dont know, but if this is true, then how did all..... THIS happen?" i said.twilight began to tell me "an evil sprit, looking alot like you, came and destroyed all of equestria, luckily, i didnt kill the princesses. the princesses are after the evil spirit, but if they realize that its the unstble side of you, then you wont get ki-" "HEY LOOK, ITS HIM!!!! GET 'EM!!!!!" i heard a guard yell. "RUN!!!" twilight said as we all ran towards sugar cube corner as pinkie suggested earlier to the girls when i was still in the limbo state. we got to sugar cube corner and pinkie rushed us all to the basement where we all hid. bad idea. i forgot-and i guess twilight did also-that celestia could teleport to anypony at any time, except ponys with very migh magic levels, like me and twilight. but she teleported to somepony else and grabbed me and teleported me to the castle, or her private chambers."aeris!!! are you ok?!?!?!" celestia said, i was as confused as a 5 year old in a stripper club. "WHAT THE BUCK IS GOING ON HERE!!!!!!! first, theres an evil spirit that looks alot like me. second, your guards are trying to kill me. and third, i think this is all a set-up to trying to kill me secretly!!" i blurted out. "what? you dont know what happened to equestria?!?" celestia said. i guess she cant tell when i pony has been in limbo for  weeks. "i have been in limbo for weeks celestia, didnt you know that??? i mean i was dead for weeks!!!" i blurted out angrily. celestia was a little shocked about the fact that i was in limbo for weeks. "oh my.... that must have been terrible" celestia said. "no, it was full of colorful rainbows and chocolate waterfalls and free bit dispenser and also i think i saw a huge statue of you...." i said sarcastically. "really!!!!" celestia said. i just facehoofed. "really?" i said.

+------(about one hour later)------+

(this adds effect on this)

"ok, i have been waiting to tell you this....... theres a special.... part...... in every evil pony that gets out when that certain pony dies, that spirit then destroys the area of which its habitant lived in. it will also try to destroy the habitants of the area within it to. but the farther it gets from the hosts body, the weaker it gets. but for some reason, yours didnt get weaker nor stronger, i guess its because of the limbo you were in. but if we destroy this spirit, everything will turn back to normal, and everypony, except me and luna because we need the knowledge for future battles, will loose their memory of all this trouble. and we will not erase yours either. but you need to promise that you wont tell anypony at all, and i mean nopony. for if you do, we must banish you from equestria and force all the memory about you, out of everyponys head. if your spirit wins, then the entire world might be in deep trouble. we gotta work together to do this. and get the mane six and the elements of harmony to put this spirit to justice!" celestia said. "i honestly think the elements wont help this time, i will have to do it alone." i said. celestia was shocked about what i said and then just glared at me a little. "how come you dont think harmony will help this time aeris?" celestia asked. "its an evil spirit, the total opposite of harmony, and i have to go do this myself because its part of me, and i know it best" i said. "but...... discord was the total opposite of harmony to, but the mane six all destroyed him." celestia said trying to argue about the fact that it just wont work. "listen, you cant know everything about everything, sometimes, you just gotta accept the fact that theres no way the anypony except me can take on an evil spirit." i said. celestia looked very angry at me, but then she regained composure and put on her poker face. "i know..... your right...... i cant know everything (her poker face began to break a little). but when all of twilights friends and herself beat discord, i thought that nothing can break in there paths and that they could accomplish anything." celestias poker face broke and she started crying a little. then luna came in and said "sister!!! the evil spirit is here!!! and he says that if you dont come out that he will burn this place to dust!!!" luna didnt even notice me or the fact that celestia was crying until now. "whats wrong sister? did aeris do something!!!" "no, its just, that aeris has to do this by himself and that the elements cant help this time, and sometimes you just gotta accept stuff for what it is." celestia said. "well..... what do you gotta say for yourself aeris?!?" luna said. "i say that i gotta go kill an evil spirit!" i said. i walked outside the room, only to see.......... well thats what is saw.... complete nothingness. i was in limbo again, DAMMIT!!!!!

chapter 9: awakening

(perspective: third person)

"Do you think hes going to be ok?" Rarity said.

"I hope so, i would just hate it if he died right 'ere!" Apple Jack said.

"I would be all lonley-wonley if aeris died right here......" said Pinkie as her hair was deflated noting that she was very sad.

"i think he might be waking up!" said Fluttershy.

" nhggnn....... ughn......."

"I dont really think hes going to wake up" Twilight said.

"NO MORE MORE EVIL PIZZA!!!!!!" i suddenly shouted causing everypony to jump-scream-hide- etc.

(perspective:first person)

"Where the hell am i?" I asked. my vision was very blurry, so i couldnt see my surroundings. "crap, i cant see very well! can somepony help me! i know there is somepony here, or someponys." i said. "oh... um... here... let me help" Fluttershy said, leading me back to the couch. "why would you scare all of us like that!" RD said. "i didnt mean to....... im sorry......" i said. "dont be, you just had a nightmare about........ wait a sec...... what are 'pizzas'?" twilight said. "ummm..... excuse me? you dont know what a pizza is? i thought you were a 'know-it-all'." i said. that kinda made twilight cry a little, but my vision was still to blurry to see my surroundings. "i still cant see a thing." i said. "you made twilight cry! you meanie-weeny-bo-beany!" i heard pinkie say. "oh, sorry twilight... oh crap... i just realized what i sa- wait a sec. i was in limbo, and ponyville was demolished, and a evil spirit was causing all of this, and you girls were there, so was celestia!!!" i said. twilight stopped crying immediately "'limbo'?" all the girls said in unison. "yah, limbo, twilight, you know what it is." i said. "what? you expect me to know what limbo is when i dont know anything!!!" twilight started crying again, this time more violently. i tried comforting her, but my vision was still blurry and i was pretty weak, so i couldnt really get up. "twilight, im sorry for saying that, its just i have been in a traumatic nightmare. it was pretty scary. i think i might be scarred." Fluttershy immediately sat up next to me and said "where where!! i cant stand to see you hurt, or anypony for that matter!" "im fine, i meant mentally scarred." "oh.... ok". after twilights crying fit was over and i regained my vision, i saw that i was in Fluttershys cottage, with the mane six standing around me, with fluttershy sitting next to me. i had a big gash down both of my front legs, they both being bandaged and partially healed. i looked at twilight and said my 'sorrys' to make sure me and her were still friends. "im kinda bored here, how 'bout we go into to- AAGGHH!!!!" i forgot about my legs and just fell down screaming in pain. twilight quickly levitated me back to the couch. "you should really be more careful" twilight said. "what happened to my legs!!!" i said. "you dont remember?" Rarity said. "no, of course i dont remember, if i did, then why would i be asking this question!" i snapped. rarity whimpered a bit. "oh god, why cant i just think before i speak" i thought. "look, im sorry rarity, i didnt mean to say that, its just that im going through alot right now, first i get teleported to equestria, then a bunch of weird stuff happens in the first two days im here, now im having weird nightmares and now i have a weird injury about my legs and have no idea what happened to them" i said all in one breath. pinkie did the *not bad* face, i could tell she was impressed. "about your leg..." twilight began to say "somepony might of broke them...." i began "who broke them!! tell me so i can give them a piece of my mind!!" "why would you do that!" pinkie said, oh yah, her hair was back to its normal state. "its somepony in this room" twilight said with a guilty expression on her face. "oh, then if its somepony in this room, i wont hurt them." i said with a poker face. "oh then if thats the case, i accidentally broke your legs while trying out a spell for you to learn." twilight said. "hey twilight" "yes aeris?" "i was lying. COME HERE YOU STUPID PONY!" twilight squee'ed in horror and tried to run, but i bit her tail, making her unable to run. she tried levitating me to free herself, but she forgot about that spell celestia taught me, and i grabbed hold of her again, not until the rest of the mane six (leaving out fluttershy) grabbed on to me and restrained me. "*huf huf* I AM GOING TO KILL YOU TWILIGHT!!!!!!! *huff huff*" twilight once again squee'ed in horror and teleported herself to her library. "what is the matter with you dudett!!!" rainbow said. "SHE BROKE MY TWO FRONT LEGS!!!!! AND I WANT TO GET REVENGE ON HER!!!" i replied. "later" apple jack said.

+----(the next day-- time: about 12:00 pm)----+

twilight has been avoiding me all day and i think it was because of my.... "little".... outburst last night. (CHAPTER NOT FINISHED)

chapter 4: why must karma get to me all the time

i walked behind the bar. but there was nopony out back, i thought that vinyl was pulling a prank on me. but then i lost vision, the only thing i remember is a tight small pain on the back of my neck. i woke up in a dark room (seems familiar dont ya think???) and the only light was a lamp hanging above me. then i heard hoofsteps, and then i saw vinyl with a quizzical expression on her face."who are you?" vinyl said. "my name is vince, why?" i replied. "because you seem different then everpony else, and im kinda suspicious about how you got here." vinyl was kinda mad at this point."look, i have NO idea how i got here. so can you please let me go now?" i said in a mad voice."no, you cant go untill you tell me how you got here, and WHY your here!!!" vinyl said."look lady, i have NO IDEA how i got here, or why im here, the only memory i have of it is i was in a planet called earth and i heard a loud bang in the kitchen, there was a breat light in the kitchen, and before i knew it, i lost consciousness and then i ended up in the ponyville fountain, does that answer your question?!?!?!" i said in a very angry tone."ok, i believe you, your free to go" vinyl said, but before she could untie me, i got teleported to princess celestias castle.

princess celestia was kinda shocked when i just randomly teleported to her castle. "what are you doing here vince?!?!" celestia said. "im asking you the same question!!!" i said."well, i have no idea why you are here. just so i can waste some time. can i talk to you vince?" celestia said, i facehoofed  and said yes.she asked me almost the exact questions vinyl asked me and i answered all of them the same way."wow, and you didnt get the picture of what caused the light???" celestia said, "no" i replied."you probably need a job, dont you?" celestia said. i repleid with a simple "yes". "i think AJ needs some help with the farm." celestia said. "ok, where is this farm???" i said. "its in the middle of the night...." celestia said "oh, right, i also have no place to stay to....." i said "you can stay with me. the guest room is taken so i guess you will either have to sleep with me, or luna" celestia said, i immediately asked "wheres luna?!?!?! i wanna meet her!!!!", celestia mood went down a little bit, but she recovered and leaded me to lunas room, "are you sure you want to sleep with luna vince? i mean, im ok with you not sleeping with me, i just wanted some company...." celestia said, with puppy eyes. "why must you do those puppy eyes on me???" i said. "sorry, its instinctively comes sometimes....." celestia said. "Well if you really want me to sleep with you, im fine with that." i said, "yippee!!! i cant wait to tell you about me and my life!!!" celestia said, i thought to myself "this is going to be a long night...."