Pinkie's Scare

by Legendoflink

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Dark, Sad
Length: 219

a fast-paced story my friend is writing. Criticism needed.

Will add later.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-10-14 17:53:32 UTC

Prologue:Pinkie's Suprise

It was a cold, wet Autumn evening in Ponyville. Pinkie Pie was on a midnight stroll when she saw Twilight Sparkle."Hey Twilight! What's up?" Said Pinkie."Hello Pinkie. Do you by chance know the time?" Twilight asked."Sure! A quarter till' twelve! Why?" Asked Pinkie."Mother of Celestia" Twilight said before running to the Everfree Forest. "Hmm, I guess I will see her tomorrow" Pinkie said.

The next morning Pinkie went out to get sugar for the cupcakes. As she walks to the store, she sees a crowd of ponies. Gathering around the entrance of the Everfree Forest. She walks over and pushes her way through.As she made her way through the last waves of ponies before being stopped by a gruff police officer, she sees on of her five best friends lying on the ground motionless: her skull shattered, twenty two stab wounds to the torso and neck, her left arm and leg broken and the rest of her body was beaten. You wouldn't be able to tell it was her if it wasn't for her cutie mark. " TWILIGHT!" Pinkie yells. The police officer sees it's one of the victims friends and lets her through. Pinkie runs to the mangled body, crying. Applejack see's her and walks over to Pinkie. "Come on sugarcube." Applejack said to pinkie.