Raptsure

by CorruptionHD

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Tragedy, Adventure, Crossover
Length: 608

Corrupt takes a deadly job in Raptsure.

Corrupt takes a job in Raptsure, a city built under the sea. He finds out that many have been exposed to "adam", which is a type of drug that can make you control people if you use it correctly. Sofia Mare might have something to do with this….

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-10-16 07:53:58 UTC

Prologue: Discovering Raptsure

Corrupt took a submarine to Raptsure, which was in the depths of the sea with many others. No-pony really spoke to any-pony on the way there. He wanted to talk but found nothing in his head to speak about. When they finally reached Raptsure, they all talked in awe. Corrupt knew they were going to awe when the got off the submarine. He went to go speak with a pony to find where to sign up for jobs were, but right then he saw it. He went over to the booth to see what kind of jobs there were, there was the Orphanage job, the Janitor job, and the Fix-man job, which were the only three that were available jobs. He took the Fix-man job because he knew alot about fixing things. Corrupt went down to an area where there was huge suits and drills that connect to them. One of the suits of named "Corrupt" which was fitted perfectly for him. He looked at a note with chores on it, one that caught his eye was to not speak with any other Fix-men.

Corrupt went to go get a crack fixed. He went in an elevator and switched the crank that said "drain" to "flood". The elevator, what it seemed to be, was not an elevator. It was a door to the sea. He went to go fix the crack when he saw the lights go out in Raptsure. He saw what seemed to be gunshots. He hurried back inside and switched the crank. It opened up and he saw a man standing right outside with a shotgun levitated with his horn. He aimed it and Corrupt and then Corrupt fired up his drill and drilled him into pieces. He saw a grey mare looking at him from the top of the staircase. She ran as fast as she could up the stairs.

Corrupt saw a little filly who had a bow tie and bright yellow eyes and a black and white dress. "Your not gonna hurt me, are you?" said the little filly calmly. He nodded. He felt like he needed her so he let her on to his shoulder. He went upstairs into a hallway and saw many people running away from him. He collected money because the machines still work so he could get something to eat for his little sister, or at least that's what she calls her. He picked up a rail gun that was on the floor next to another Fix-man, who lay dead.

Corrupt knew it wasn't safe here so he let out a roar that can sign that a Fix-man was here and wants to protect his little one. Corrupt then went down a flooded place to get some rail spikes for his gun and left his little sister on the top of the staircase. He heard her scream and then he slowly walked up making no sounds except from emerging out of the water and then the crazed man looked behind him to see a big hoof get smacked right into his face. He went over to the dazed man and drilled right through his guts.

Corrupt saw that the little sister was harvesting a type of blood from the corpse and then she was drinking it. He let her drink it and then they carried on. He couldn't help but notice a red circle from outside the window next to him, he jumped back to see it was a figure of a woman with a woman's drill suit on, put it looked different with the harpoon attached to the suit. She looked deadly