A Night For Two

by Shayminlove

Rating: everyone
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Original Character, Rarity
Length: 1288

Chocolate Krunch has a secret crush on Bowen Aero, but she's not sure if he'll accept her love for him. When he accepts the date invite, will it go weird or will they both figure out they love each other?

Published 2012-03-04 02:24:02 UTC
Last updated 2012-03-04 02:24:02 UTC

A Night For Two

Hi. Its me, Chocolate Krunch. As you can see, I've got a new story.

It all started when I began to live in Cloudsdale. The Pony I liked was... Bowen Aero. He was charming, quiet, and brave. I wanted to confess my love to him, but at first . . . I didn't think he would really care. It broke my heart if I told him, and he had ignored me, but.. I still wanted to tell him. So one day, I had found him near my Cloud house. As I came up, he looked at me, and smiled. "Hello, Chocolate Krunch.." He said. My heart thumped. My stomach lurched. My mouth felt glued.

"Would you... Would you... uh... um... uh... Go on a date with me Saturday night....?" I said, and sighed in relief that I had gotten the words out of my mouth.

He looked at my oddly. Please, dear Celestia, I hope I didn't say anything wrong.. I thought to myself. He opened and closed his mouth a few times, looked down at his paper, then said, "Of course. I would love to. I never had the courage to say anything like that to you..." His last words were just a mumble to me.

I nodded, and grinned, then said, "Meet me at.. Hmm.. that Pretty Lake by Ponyville?" He nodded in agreement. As I walked away, I ran in my house. I listened Intently to the wall to see if he murmured anything to himself.

"Why couldn't you just say you love her, Bowen, you idiot? What kind of a pony are you? A Filly, or a Stallion? I can't believe you let her say it, not you. Dumbass Bowen.."

I was quite shocked at how much he tormented himself over all that. But I didn't even realize that he said he LOVED ME. My brain processed it, then told me it. I was quite shocked that he loved me. It felt like too much, at first, but those pretty words. Those pretty little, 3 little words: I Love you. I had to get ready for the Date night. It was Thursday, so I didn't have much time. I needed advice, and FAST.

Friday Morning, 8:30 AM

I awoke to a disturbing dream of me and Bowen doing - Never mind. Forget it. Anyways, I had flown down to ponyville to see Rarity, a good dressmaker and also, I knew, she would be able to give me advice. As I met with her, I told her how much I loved Bowen. She nodded, and said, sharply, "Now dear, you need to be polite. If your kind to other ponies, and him, he will love you much more. Also, try act like a proper pony. If you truly love him, he may ask you to marry him.." She sighed, and I noticed she began to daydream.

"I need a dress, too. One that shows who I am."

"Well of course dear, you can always ask me. I have some of the best dresses. It will make you shine. It will be done by this afternoon, alright? And if you need more Relationship advice, go ask Twilight. Not like she'll have any, but she does live in the Library. She can give you a book about Dating. My favorite is "A la Dating". But thats just me, of course! Oh, who am I, to run my mouth like this! I'm turning into Twilight myself! Alright Dear, scoot along. I need to start your dress."

I ran over to the Library to meet Twilight. She was busy studying, so she gave me a few books, and "A la Dating". I prayed to Celestia that these books would help me.

Friday, Afternoon 5:30 PM

I had gotten my dress from Rarity. It was a beautiful, Black sparkly and laced dress. I tried it on at my home, and thought about it. Would Bowen have a suit? Or not.. I was very excited for our date tomorrow night. I had just prayed that it would go along right... not weird or silent. I fell asleep early, so I would be energized for tomorrow....

Saturday, Morning 10:47 AM

I had gotten up late on accident, because I had many dreams I wanted to continue until they ended. It was a brand new day, and as I looked outside, I saw Bowen - Hugging and nuzzling another pony. Frustrated, I waited until she left, then ran outside and crashed into him. "Who was that pony you were nuzzling?!" I yelled.

"Who, Rico? She's my sister!" He yelled back.

"Oh...I feel so stupid.." I felt like crying, because of what I blamed on him.

"Its alright, Krunch. It wasn't your fault. It was only an accident. You didn't know." He said, smiling. The bright sun blurred him out of my eyes, when he nuzzled me, and kissed me on the lips for a second. His saliva tasted like cherries. I blushed at him, and he winked at me and said, "I'm excited for our date night, tonight." I smiled and nodded.

"I have to go to the bakery today to pick up some treats... So, later.." I said, still blushing, hard. He nodded, and I trotted off to the Cloudsdale bakery to pick up a Heart cake. I had specific orders for the cake to have a note on the right side, so when I cut it, and he bit it and opened it, it would say, "I love you, too". I had also ordered some cookies. They had given me my order just the way I wanted it. I payed the 50 bits I needed to pay, and went back home to put them in the big basket. I had to make sure the cake wouldn't get crushed. As I set it on the counter, I fell back in bed, taking alittle nap before the date night.

Saturday Night, 8:00 PM

I woke up around 7:30 PM to get up in my dress. The food was still fresh. I flew down to the pond where the moon lay on it, relaxing on the water. I found him there, dressed up very nicely. I smiled, and landed on the ground. I knew this would be a night to remember. As I set the picnic basket on a blanket he brought, we both lay down.

"So, tonight is the date.." He said, smiling. I lay, curled up with him, when he kissed me again. Our mouths and saliva mixed. I tasted his, and he tasted mine. "I love your dress."

"I got it at Rarity's Boutique. Thank you, Bowen.." I started another move. I kissed him longer than he did, and I saw him gasp for a moment. I loved him so much, but was there really a way to express my TRUE love? The cake couldn't.

"Lets not go..too far, Okay? Its just a date..after all..." He said, but still smiled. I needed to show him how I felt. NOW.

"Want to have some cake..?" I asked.

"Sure." I cut the right side, and noticed the note. I pushed it in more inside the slice. I handed it to him and got myself a piece of cake. I ate, and he took the bite. He pulled the note out of his mouth and read it aloud:

"I love you... Krunch.. You..Love me?" I nodded to him, and swallowed my cake. He was so happy. He kissed me and nuzzled me as long as he could. I kissed him again too, and we lay, rested with each other, looking into the starry sky. This was a Night for Two. Two Lovers.

END. <3