a new trixie part 27.5-28

by MidnightFMare

Rating: mature
Tags: Trixie, Octavia, Comedy, Random, Sex, Twilight Sparkle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, DJ P0N-3, Romance
Length: 1414

a continuation of comics that i enjoed on deviantart, a mature and not mature scenario is played out, all concepts and such are property of owners... blah blah blah... all that copyright junk.

the PG and M form of an alternate timeline when they weren't interupted by the block man. the first is the shorter, less... "risque" shall we say piece, where as the second is when things get hotter, and has a bit of pinkie in it... please enjoy
http://www.deviantart.com/?q=a+new+twilight+part+27#/art/A-new-trixie-27-End-390330143?_sid=7980bc0
http://kuronekoking.deviantart.com/gallery/#/art/A-new-Trixie-part-28-392466881?_sid=d7fdcd8

Published 2013-10-26 22:00:03 UTC
Last updated 2013-10-26 22:00:03 UTC

chapter 28

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I4-hNwJ9Xxs (NOW for the non-non-mature outcome)

" Why is Twilight kissing Trixie?! It... Feels... Weird but... Feels... So good!" Trixie thinks, letting her friend explore her mouth.

" Oh Celestia, She's letting me give her toungue! Ahn... Getting hot...losing control... " Twilight thinks, grabbing her friends face>

(for those who are wondering what chrysalis and Fluffle Puff are doing, watch PFUDOR)

this argument winner here
" Maan... I am not going to show this to Octi, this is home movie gold! But my mind says turn away... but my body says record..." Vinyl thinks, getting a close-up.

As they pull apart, Trixie says " Twilight, you are nice and all.. but we are both mares!"

" Maybe Zecora has a potion for that!' Twilight muses, wiping the drool off her face.

Running backback to her house, Vinyl calls to her friend " Octiiii~ I'm going out, be back later, k?"

" if you are going out, make sure to buy shampoo!" her friend replies.

AT ZECORA'S

" Hm, a potion

to change gender?

why such a notion

for a gender bender?" Zecora asks, confused.

" It's for an experiment, to see the effects of gender on magic" Twilight explains.

" I think I have something,
but you both must bring me one thing" Zecora muses, looking through her cabinents.

" Okay, Trixie will do what you want!" Trixie says.

" Good, bring me a dragon scale,
and a hair of something pale" she says, pulling down a bottle.

" Here!' the two unicorns say, pulling out a bag of dragon scales and a lock of Rarities hair (how she got it, I do not know)

" Thank you,
you two" Zecora says, exchanging the goods.

(BACK AT THE LIBRARY)

" Alrighty then, Trixie is ready!" Trixie cheers.

" So am I Trixie, but who goes first?" Twilight asks

" Trixie will!" Trixie says, pouring a drop onto her head.

" Cool! Trixie is a stallion!, wait, let trixie check... Yep! Trixie is a guy!"

" So... shall we get to it?" Twilight says, closing her eyes.

" Ah, so you want Trixie to lead, well that is just - PBTTTTHH! - what in the name of Celestia was that?" Trixie starts, when Trixie is interupted. (seriously, she STILL has me doing it?)

" Go away kitty! I'm trying to watch this! Oh, hello neighbor! I was taken in by your flowers! And, you are not buying this, are you?" Vinyl yells at the fluffy pink filly that blew a raspberry, then looking up at Twilight.

" No, I do not, if you must film, send us a copy if you will" Twilight commands, returning to Trixie.

" WOW! That's the first time anyone HASEN'T gotten mad at me for eavesdropping!" Vinyl says, relieved (purr~) " Eheh, good kitty"

(a few seconds later)

" MMMM~<3 OH Trixie! MORE!" Twilight mutters into her friend's chest.

" Only because your so cute!" Trixie smirks, kissing her again.

" Ugh... Trixie is... about to C-C-CUUUUUMMMMM~!!!" Trixie moans, muscles contracting.

" Come then, come on me!!" Twilight commands, through tears of ecstasy.

" AA-AH-AAAA!! T-Trixie Came~!!!" Trixie screams, falling on her friend. (yes, I quoted it, For those who do not know what I am talking about, watch " Princess Molestia")

so wrong in sooooo many ways... i had to cuddle ditzy for an hour before i felt better

" That was wonderfull, but I didn't!" Twilight grumbled.

" Just... give Trixie... a second... to get her breath..." Trixie sighs

" Man, you have horrible hang time what was that? like 20 minutes?" Vinyl whines from the window.

" Silence that was Trixie's first time" Trixie says, relaxing. " Twilight, could you help Trixie, Trixie's muscles are sore, but I want to get you off" Trixie says, Rolling onto her back.

" But Trixie, I may hurt you!" Twilight exclaims, looking at her panting friend.

" Trixie doesn't care if Trixie gets hurt, if Trixie gets hurt, Trixie will be able to spend more time with Twilight. And it's not fair that only Trixie climaxes." Trixie moans, looking at her friend with a weak smile.

" O-Okay Trixie, H-here goes..." Twilight says as she straddles Trixie's face.

" Oh my! Twilight Tastes better than candy! So delicious!" Trixie mumbles into Twilights hot folds.

" Stop it! That's embarissing!" Twilight manages between gasps

" Hm... Trixie wonders how Trixies horn would feel in Twilight's plot" Trixie muses, shifting Twilight's bum. " PREPARE YOUR ANUS!!" (yes, I quoted " Princess Molestia... again...)

" What?! No! Not my PLO-HHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHTTTTT!!!!" Twilight screams as Trixie slides her horn into Twilights enflamed rear.

" OH BUCK, that hurts sooooo GOOOOOOD!" Twilight yelps, twisting the ring of muscles around the corkscrew of her friend's horn.

" OH BUCK! Trixie is so horny!! (unicorn pun I made while talking to luna about celestia's "deviant acts", it still makes me laugh).

" Heyguys!Wow,it'sslipperyinhere,hey,Twilightissittingonaunicorn'shorn,doesn'tthathurt?anyways,Ijustwantedtoborrowabookonbirds,soI'llgetoutofyourhair!Oh,foundit!byebye!Oh,wait,tellTrixie,I'mplanningahousewarmingpartyforher,k?" Pinkie says, running in and out of the library without breathing

" ... What in Starswirl's name was that creature?" Trixie asks.

" Never mind her, keep licking." Twilight says, gyrating her hips.

" Oooh... Something is comeing..." Trixie Moans.

" Your coming again? Wow!" Twilight squeeks.

" No, something from Trixies H-H-Horn!!" Trixie screams, biting her lower lip, making tears stream down her face.

*FSHEEEEEEEEN!!!!*

" AAAA-AAA-AAA!!! SWEET BUCKING MOTHER OF LITERATURE!!!! I-I'm C-CUUUUUMMMMMING!!~" Twilight screams at the top of her lungs, waking Chrysalis and Fluffle Puff from their nap. Twilight releases her hot liquid over Trixie's face, easing off Trixie's bloody horn. (Twilight's blood, You have to ask? Them thing are pointy!)

" Did... Trixie... Hurt you?" Trixie gasps, exhausted.

" No... Just... Bleeding... a little" Twilight moans, licking her friend clean. Catching on, Trixie starts licking Twilight.

" OH, I AM GOING TO GO SHOW THIS TO OCTAVIA!!!" Vinyl yells, hoofing it back to her house.

Down comes Chrysalis, carrying up the hearts that float above the two cuddling mares.

Returning to the loft, munching on the hearts, tossing a ball to keep Fluffle Puff intertained.

chapter 27.5 i think...

" T-T-Trixie..." Twilight mumbles, blushing more than Flutter shy did when she walked in on Big Mac bathing " I-I l-l-lov-love you!!" The mare screams, waking the neigh-bors. (horse pun!)

" Trixie loves you too, even though you could have turned your back on Trixie, you took Trixie in and helped her! If you need anything, just ask ---" Trixie says when she senses somepony watching them.

Across the street, a white unicorn with electric blue and cyan hair with purple shades, holds a camera and microphone " HEY! stop looking at the camera! Just act like I'm not here, k?" She asks, shooing them away.

" Vinyl, what in Celestia's name are you doing?" A female's voice calls from within the house.

" Not now, Octi! I'm testing out my camera!" the unicorn yells over her shoulder.

" O-kay... as Trixie was saying, anything you want, Trixie will do it!" Trixie says, bowing.

" Trixie, close your eyes" Twilight commands.

" Trixie does not know why, but okay" Trixie closes her eyes.

" WHOOOOO! Good stuff! Now hold that pose! Lemme zoom-in..." The unicorns yells, nearly falling out of the window.

(Now for the non-mature out come)

"..." Trixie pauses, eyes wide.

" Uh, I'm sorry Trixie... Trixie? Equestria to Trixie!" Twilight apologizes, starting to panic at her companion's lack of reaction.

" I think I broke trixie..." Twilight whines.

" Kiss her again!" The white unicorn yells. " Terribly sorry Twilight, Vinyl is very excitable, though she is right"

Octavia appears in the window after bonking Vinyl. " And use tounge! That should work!" Vinyl yells, running down the stairs. " Vinyl! Filter your comments!" Octavia yells.

"yes, mother!"

" If you say so..." Twilight says, stepping up to twilight.

" MMM...MMMM...(puts hoof around her friend's) MMMM... Gasp! it didn't work..." twilight mumbles.

" Give it a sec...' Vinyl says, reassuringly.

" Huh? What happened to Trixie? Why does Trixie's mouth feel weird? Meh, off to Trixie's new house!" Trixie says, trotting away.

" Well that was anti-climactic... Ah well, at least I got it on camera!" Vinyl moans, bored.

" I enjoyed it!" Twilight says, smiling.

Author's Note

if this fails moderation, i may need to purchase a sound canceling head to give to lyra while i curse in eldar... or rage quit... iono, maybe... meh, i'll think of something