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Come the rain

by some weird guy
Life can be difficult. Especially when you're caught in a civil war on the far side of the planet, with a small fighting force, and not the slightest idea whether or not you'll make it back home.

Comet is a colt that just wants to take a moment to breathe. He just finished a contract for a corrupt Somareian military group and is expecting some nice time off to relax and recharge his batteries. Too bad none of his plans ever seem to go the way he wants them to. With conflict arising from both foe and friend alike, he'll have to find a way to face his demons, both new and old, to make it out of his newest and most dangerous contract yet.

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The first of my "brain children," it is also my first shot at fanfiction (ever)! That being said, I urge you to not only read, but heavily criticize! If you liked it: why? If you didn't: again why? Just give me some feedback, is all I ask. Tags will be added as necessary, some minor language, yada yada yada... Oh! Oh, oh, oh! I also don't have an editor or anyone, really, that I can run these through before posting them, so be prepared for that! This is starting to get a little long, so I'll just say: I hope you like this and have as much fun reading as I did making it up!



What? Are you still here? Go read already!

Teen
Incomplete
Alternate Universe
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Comedy
Tragedy
Adventure
 
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20553 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

8 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 2013-10-21 04:09:13 UTC
    2051
  2. Team Huddle 2013-10-30 02:34:28 UTC
    3063
  3. Welcome to the jungle 2013-12-22 06:03:34 UTC
    1765
  4. Ninety nine problems... 2013-12-25 00:39:56 UTC
    2463
  5. Awkward not-so-small-talk 2014-02-15 04:08:24 UTC
    3588
  6. Rolling with the pack 2014-03-22 18:36:33 UTC
    2273
  7. Forest of Death 2014-05-28 03:15:38 UTC
    3418
  8. Manual labor 2014-10-25 02:51:30 UTC
    1932