The Man Who Found Six Orphansby EdgarDoesEverythingChaptersChapter 1 - The deadly battle up aheadChapter 2 : Tragic pastChapter 3 : The battle is just beginningChapter 1 - The deadly battle up aheadTHE MAN WHO FOUND SIX ORPHANS THE DEADLY BATTLE UP AHEAD EdgarDoesEverything 2045 I find myself driving towards the graveyard where my family is buried. I drive inside the compound, passing the gates. It was 4:47 in the morning. Stopping in the deserted lot I get out and make the slow trek to the destination I had on my mind. I eventually approach three graves, two were close together and the other was a large one. I knee down on the grass, looking at the graves, kneeling down in front of the one in the middle. "Here lies Genna Dernen. 1998-2023 -R.I.P-" I look at my wife's grave and place my hand on the cold smooth stone, trying to fight back the tears. I sniff and looked to the right to read the other grave. "Here lies Koda Dernen 2023-2028 -R.I.P-" The sight of my daughter's grave pierced my heart, remembering the moment when she passed away in my arms. The feeling lingered in my heart and I could feel one of the tears fall down my face. It fell slowly, taunting me me that I couldn't hold on to it like I could with my daughter anymore. I blink back into reality when I heard the pit pat of more water. It was so quiet that I could even hear my heart beat increase slightly. I wiped my eyes and took out a small daisy out of my shirt pocket and settled it down between the graves. Eventually, I stood up and walked to the other tombstone and sat down this time and read the words slowly out loud, despite how there were no people around to hear them. "Here lies Duncan and Hannah Dernen. 1976-2028. 1980-2028 -R.I.P-" "it's my fault you're both dead, If only I stayed in the car that day..." I chocked on my words, making it hard to breath. "Its all my fault that your all dead!" I yelled, cursing myself how the ones I once held dear were now dead... "Its all my fucking fault" I dropped to the ground sobbing. I began to lose my mind, pounding the grass and ripping it out of its now muddy soil. Eventually, I feel a hoof rest gently on my back. I continue to cry as the sun just begins to crest the horizon behind me. I eventually find myself huddled on the ground, when six equine like shadows surround surround me and I can feel myself taken into a warm, loving embrace. "It's not your fault, Dad..." I hear one whisper in my ear. I cry as I hug them back in turn. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 2023 Snow started to come down heavily. Cars and trains stopped, as if the spirit of the city was paralyzed from an illness. Genna, my beautiful wife, Developed a fever. To make it worse, she was in labor around four weeks earlier than we had expected. I sat down next her, holding her hand as she breathed hard and moaned with pain. "Genna... Hang in there, Genna!" She grips my hand in a vice as if she was hanging off a cliff. Her nails cut into my skin and I wince but still hold on. "Genna..." My parents should be here soon, they must be as I called them twenty minutes ago... "I-I'm fine..." Genna said weakly as she gasped but cried out when she felt another contraction. "I'll m-make sure K-Koda will be born sa-ah... safely..." Genna said in pain. "The three of us, you, me and koda, will live together, happily..." Just as she finished I heard the door slam open and saw my parents rush in. Since Genna was an orphan, she never knew who her parents were... "Don't worry we're here!" My Mother said and rushed to my wife's side. "Don't think the cars will move, they're all buried beneath snow... And during a time like this!" My Father said in anger. My Mother turned to my father. "Duncan, please bring some hot water, as much as you can!" "You got it Hannah!" My Dad ran to the kitchen and began doing his task as Mom then sat next to me, inspecting Genna. "Son, be sure to support you wife." She said sternly. "Holding her hand is fine, right?" I said weakly. She then stood up and then walked to where Genna's legs were spread. "Of course, please keep doing that.." I smiled and turned to Genna. "Genna, I'm right here for you, okay?" She breathed hard. "Don't give up, Genna. I believe in you!" I coaxed again. "Okay lets get started... Try breathing slowly Genna." My Mother said and Genna tried her best and began to push. "Yes, that's good. Please keep that up!" Mom encouraged. "Don't let up Genna." I added. This went on for hours, I kept on supporting Genna with words while Mom did her best with preparing for the baby. She's no doctor but right now, anyone is good. The ambulance can't get through the storm and the only helicopter they have is in repair... Go figure... Dad would frequently take out a smoke, then put it back. He did this several times before he gave up and went outside and waited in the cold. Genna kept losing consciousness over and over and would only waken up to the pain seconds later... It was such a cruel scene, I almost covered my eyes. It took forever, eventually I thought this would last an eternity and we will never see the end of it. Even I felt like I would loose consciousness. Maybe my mind couldn't take it anymore... Maybe it'll all be for naught. "Push! Push! The baby is almost here!" My Mother said excitedly. Genna held her breath and with a shrill scream pushed with all her might. At the end she gasped and breathed heavily. "Good job!" Mother said. "Come here son!" I rushed to my Mother. "Cut the umbilical cord, the Father must do this." She said smiling. I quickly finish the job and my mother passed me Koda and I held our new daughter in my hands. "I'll get the hot water" Mother said running to the kitchen. I looked at my new daughter, tearing up with joy. "Look" I said whispered quietly looked to my wife in excitement, only to see her laying motionless bed, breathing weakly. "Genna?" She laid there, her breathing becoming more ragged and fainter breathing. I quickly take her hand in mine and squeeze a little bit too hand. "Genna!" I shout in panic and she slowly opens her eyes. "Ha-Harrison..." She mutters weakly. "She's here Genna! Koda is here." Genna tried to smile but it faltered. Koda began to cry. "You can hear her, right? Our baby is crying" I said smiling, tears coming down my face. "Yes." Genna said quietly. I brought the baby to her vision. "Look." Koda kept crying as Genna got her first look on her. "She so beautiful Genna!" "Ye-yes... She's very beautiful..." "Koda, our baby, she's a girl! A healthy baby girl!" I repeated excitedly. "Yes... I'm glad she was born at home..." Genna said weakly. "I thought it would have been dangerous for her." "You really pulled through Genna." I said sighing in relief. "But... I am bit tried..." Genna began closing her eyes. "Please let me rest... Just for a little bit..." My Mom and Dad came back into the room, only to stop wide eyed as they saw that Genna was loosing consciousness and looked unwell. "Genna?" My mom said in a heartbreaking voice as she walked to her side. "Damn It! Where the fuck are the doctors?!" Dad said in rage while stomping outside again. I'm pretty sure I saw a tear in his eye but I wasn't sure. "Harrison! Get Genna ready to go to the hospital! We're going ourselves!" Dad said taking out his keys "But the cars are stuck!" "Genna please hold on... Le-lets just talk for a little more... You can just listen, okay?" I begged but Genna laid motionless. "Look, it's our baby. She looks a bit like a cute monkey, doesn't she? She's so small! I'll try calling her, okay? Koda... Koda... I'm Daddy, Koda! Over here is Mommy..." Genna eyes slowly closed and I could feel the pressure leaving in my hand. I only squeezed harder as I began to sob. "Look... She's ignoring me! She probably doesn't know, does she?" My voice began to crack and Genna opened her eyes. "I'm sure she'll grow up very fast, enter elementary school, we'll take her there... Maybe during parents' day or something! It'll be our family! I'll be helping Koda with her homework. Even thought I'm absolutely stupid when it comes to that..." I chuckled weakly but noticed that Genna had her eyes closed and stopped breathing. My eyes widened and I could almost feel my world leave me. "Genna?" I raised her arm up and let go, only for it fall limp and droop to the floor. "Genna, look, here's Koda's cheek!" I said tugging on Genna arm "Hey, come on!" I can feel panic begin to set in and I let go of her arm only for it to fall limp again. I choke back a cry as I look at her with watering eyes. "Genna... Y-you said you'd always be with me, didn't you? You said we'd always be together... You promised me many and many times, didn't you? That was our dream! There was nothing good about living.. Someone like me, who went through such a crappy lifestyle... We had finally found a dream! Hey, Genna!?" "GENNA!!!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In the outskirts of Equestria. 2027 in the human year "My army, Chrysalis has been defeated by the royal SCUM!" A wolf whose appearance was as big as Celestia hollowed at his 'WolfMorton' which was an equivalent to a military diversion. The army yelled in disbelief and anger. "Tis is not a lie, but it was her unintelligent tactics that got her changelings and herself KILLED!" He took a moment to let the comment set in. "Her subjects will now die as there is no queen now, unable to feed their city. The race of the Changelings will cease to exist in a couple of months, what are we going to do? NOTHING!" he laugh manically while his army joined in. "QUIET! HER FOOLISH ACTIONS WILL BE THE END OF HER SPECIES-" "My commander!? What did she do wrong? She had an unstoppable army with a brilliant plan-" The commander growled and the wolf who spoke up whimpered in fear. "HOGWASH! Her plan was indeed brilliant, disguising as a pony but as an important princess was foolish of her, also sending that threat to Canterlot had no purpose at all but to feed her dark side for the love of battle and suspense. Not killing the princess and acting like a IDIOT around the prized pupil is insulting, IT'S LIKE SHE ASKED TO BE KILLED!" The commander calmed down and took in a slow breath. "We must wait now, the city's defense is at it's highest and the shield of love is at its peek of strength. We have been pushed around for too long my comrades! Just because our appearance may look deceiving and that we look like mindless carnivores is OUTRAGEOUS!" The army roared, cheering and yelling. The commanding raised his paw for them to quiet. "No, we are much more... Because of their insulting ways, we will take over Equestria and move out of this humiliating place, we will take back our home and turn the royal scum to stone, just like 'poor' old Discord. Go now, my army! We prepare for the long struggling year we will have! I will implant myself inside Canterlot and gain the trust of the princesses, after I have them in my place, we attack... Remember, we are more than just a unit." The commander picks up his wooden old staff with an eye-shape emerald on the tip of the wood. He swings the staff in the air and begins to recite and enchantment. "Der Kind, PLUR ESH DEKIN TON!" The commander is engulfed by smoke which vibrated with power and energy began to thrum in the air, a bright flash and everyone rose a paw to blink back the black light. The wolves look up to their commander to see he has transformed into a stallion. "Always remember that." He sneered and disappeared in a puff of smoke. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 2027 The sun raises from it's prison and awakens the creatures that inhabit a chunk of rock. In a city was an apartment complex named "The Cozy Caves". Inside apartment 1097, a man making breakfast for what seemed for two people. The man hummed quietly in the warm air, enjoying the peace and tranquility. "AHHHHHHH!" He heard a scream and his demeanor instantly changed. Harrison instantly ran to where he heard the scream but he was stopped by a locked door. "Koda! What happened, are you okay!?" He called, looking ready to breakdown the door. "Oh! Sorry Dad! I turn on the shower to cold water by accident!" Came the voice of a young girl. "Okay, good..." Harrison perked himself up and sighed in relief. "Breakfast is almost ready!" he said happily as he returned to what could be called a kitchen. "Okey!" she said with chattering teeth. Harrison took out two white plates and set them on a counter next to the stove. He picks up the handle of the frying pan and shoves some of the scrambled eggs onto the plates. He then moved the sizzling bacon next to the eggs, he did it slowly and with care so as to prevent from spilling any of it to the floor. He put the frying pan down and hears a *ping!* sound from the toaster. He reaches over and grabs the two pieces of toast and place them on the plate. He picks them up and carries them to over to a cardboard table. He goes back to a cabinet retrieves a couple of glasses and proceeds to pour some orange juice that he got from the fridge in them. He stares at the almost golden liquid in one of the glasses and takes an experimental sip, sighing as the cool liquid goes down his throat. Harrison then hears his daughter come out of the bathroom, and smiles as he sees her skipping into the kitchen and taking in a deep breath to smell the delicious breakfast. "Wow! This looks amazing Daddy!" Koda says smiling. "Thanks sweetheart, lets get munching shall we?" Koda sits down and the two enjoy their breakfast. They had small talk between taking bites, talking about dreams and how life is just one big confusing mess. As they finish Harrison picks up the plates while Koda walks to her room and grabs her backpack. Harrison places the dishes in the sink, making a mental note that he'll need to do them later. "Hurry along Koda, don't want to be late for school!" "Okay Dad!" Koda holds her Father's hand as they walked down an hallway to be stopped by a door. Harrison opens it to the passage to the world to see the sun slowly rise in the morning, warming their bodies. Two gay humans, living peacefully in a decaying world. They stepped outside to be blinded by the bright circle in the sky. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ One year later after Chrysalis's attack on Canterlot "Sargent Fire Arrow, what is the word on the wolf that was caught on Canterlot grounds?" Asked Celestia to one of her most trusted guards. "Good your highness, he's been locked up since I discovered him three months ago." Fire Arrow said stoically. "Very good, If it weren't for you we might have had another attack on Canterlot. The shield has been up for three months now and I'm thinking of putting it down now that-" But Celestia was cut off by Fire Arrow. "Your highness, no! Doing so would surely cause an opening for attack! We can never be to careful, It's best If we kept it up for good measure." Fire Arrow replied a little too quickly, but if Celestia noticed the slight increase in his voice she didn't show it. "Alright, Shining armor has mastered it now it wouldn't be a problem to keep it up. Thank you Sargent, back to your post and report back any wolf activity as soon as you can." Celestia then left the room, leaving two stallions in the palace. "What the hell is wrong with you Commander! We would've had the shield down! Why did you do tha-" "Silence you fool! If we would not have the shield up then this mission would be failure. By leaving the shield up we can have a diversionary force attack one side of the castle. I'll tell the Princess that I got Intel that a full on attack from the wolves are attacking from the south and It'll be a good idea to put all of the energy to that location. While the battle rages on there, the main army shall attack from the North. I'll assassinate Shining Armour from there and when the shield is broken or when I kill the scum, our forces invade. If we would had token down the shield and attacked the pest would have put it up while we were in, killing us just like the idiot Chrysalis did." The other ' wolf ' nodded. "Let us prepare, we attack at noon. By now the shield will be at full strength at the south, send half of the wolfs there and the rest at the north. Now follow me my comrade!" Fire Arrow laughed and began to make his way down the halls. "Today, this day is going to be perfect..." Author's Note Stay tune for an dramatic and deadly war that will rage on and the tragic past the Harrison will have. This is my first story about an villain and an mature topic, I'm only 15 so it's hard for me to write mature content as I haven't experience the real world yet, If any of you want to tell me about it or want to point out a grammar issues, please point it out, thank you for reading, and if you want more then I recommend reading my story about a teenage boy going to Equestria, God I'm a loser, I got lazy and just ended here but don't worry, I'm still explaining the beginning, anyways have a good day! Was the villain good and well built? I plan to write more about him but for now, how was he? Chapter 2 : Tragic pastTHE MAN WHO FOUND SIX ORPHANS TRAGIC PAST EdgarDoesEverything Edited by Blue Spark 2028 Koda has a fever of 108 and It's been rising with every hour. She's been sick for a whole week and we've visited the hospital three times already. All they can do is give her something for the pain... Apparently, Koda was born with a low immune system so even the common cold can become lethal. Her mother was born with It too... She keeps breathing hard and blacking out multiple times, I did all I can to help her. Her fever is getting worse, I swore under my breath and began to consider taking her to the hospital again. Just as I began to consider the idea, a snowy storm slowly set in. If we didn't start going soon Koda won't be able to get the help that she needs and then she'll... I immediately began to suit up, putting the worried feeling in the back of my mind. I walked to the hall closet and opened it up, sticking my hand inside. Fishing around for a minute I finally pulled out what I was looking for, a black furry coat in my left hand and a much smaller pink plush coat in my right. I quickly walked into Koda's room and sat next to her in her bed. This is the worst that she's looked yet. She burried underneat all the blankets I could find in the house and she still said she felt cold. It didn't help that she was also sweating heavily but I wanted to keep her warm rather then cold. "Daddy..." I held my breath as I saw Koda eye's water and I could see the fear in her eyes. "Am I going to die?" She said with a quiet voice. Her words were as if a lighting bolt struck my heart and feelings of sorrow began to well up in my chest. "What? Sweetie, you're not going to die." I lied, I have no idea what was going to happen, I was so confused... "You're going to be okay, you're just having a bad day... It happens to all of us." I replied with a straight face, hiding the fact that I was on the verge of tears. Koda nodded her head weakly. I lifted her up slowly, not wanting to cause her anymore discomfort. I put the fluffy pink coat on her, her scarf was dirty so I snugly wrapped mine around her instead. She was covered from head to foot expect for her sickly face. I carried her to our doorstep and opened the door only for the chilly winds of frost to hit our faces. I step outside to the balcony of the complex and began walking down the hall, we turn the corner to meet some stairs. Walking down was an excruciating event as I went very slowly so that I didn't slip and possibly hurt Koda. I needed to go slow, the precious that passed during that time was taunting. I finally landed my foot on the ground level and I made my way to my car. The winds were getting faster and beginning to pick up, a sign that an even bigger storm is on it's way. I set Koda down and she stood there awkwardly, seemingly ready to pass out at any given moment. "Just hang in there Koda." I took out my keys and insert them inside the door and turned. It unlocked and I turned on the engine and pressed the button for all of the car doors to unlock. I quickly came out and picked up Koda, carrying her to the passenger seat and buckling her in. I shut the door and walked to the other side of the car and entered the driver seat. Stepping on the pedal the car took off. I was now on my way to the hospital. The storm began to get worse, as if it was deliberately trying to prevent me from getting to the hospital. The car windows became foggy and the inside of the car started to become chilling. I go to turn on the heater the button broke off when I try to turn it. I look at it in anger. "GODDAMN IT!" I tossed the piece of plastic to the floor and continue driving. No one was on the road, just us and the deadly barrier of the so called storm that threatened to block my path. I was half way to the hospital when I heard the engine of my car cough. The tires screech and moved uncontrollably, I try to turn the wheel as best as I can and if I hadn't put enough effort into it we would have crashed into a tree. With a loud thump the car suddenly stops. We're now stuck in the snow and if I don't do anything soon we're going to be stuck here for a while. I turn my head to Koda to see her slowly breathing becoming ragged and faster. I reached into my pocket and and frantically dug around until I felt my cellphone. Grabbing it I take out and raised it's cover. I speed dial my father and place the phone to my ear to hear the phone ring. "Hello?" "Dad! I need you to drive us to the hospital immediately! I'm on street 3434 east Burdon, Koda is sick and the car broke down. I'll be running down the road, honk at us when you see us!" "Son stay in the car, well pick you up! We're going to be in the red jeep. We'll be there as fast as we can!" I slapped the phone down and put it in my pocket. Ignoring my father's warning I get out of the car and walk to the other side of my SUV. I opened the door to Koda, unstrapping her, and I take off my coat and covered her even more. I then take out my pocket knife and cut some of the cloth from my undershirt and cover Koda's face with it in a way to keep the wind off of her face some. Her teeth were violently chattering. I picked her up and began moving to the hospital, I didn't care what happens to the car, it's stuck under a foot of snow and it's freezing out here. I began running, the winds beating me across the face. The chilling winds began to freeze up my body, my ear's went numb and I began to loose the feeling in my fingers. Adrenaline starts kicking in and I run harder, adn faster. I run and run and run, not caring for my own sake, only for my daughter's. I don't care If I die but Koda needs to live on, she has so much to live for! She always loved being around my parents, mom and dad always wanted another child but couldn't because times were tough while growing up. *HONK* *HONK* The sound of a car horn grabs my attention and I turn around to see a red jeep with my parents inside. A middle age man who just starting to grow gray hairs and a beautiful women who loves to cook. I smiled despite the ice I began to feel forming on my body. I wave and Koda slowly opens her eyes and smiles. I began to walk slowly in the direction of the jeep when I suddenly see it get rammed by a grey van, the van bends in a awkwardly position and the jeep is crushed. The crash went very slowly, everything went very slowly. I gasp in shock and let out a silent scream as Koda stared wide eyed at it all, tears beginning to form on her face again. "NOOOOOO!" I began running to the crash. "NO! FUCKING NO!" Tears began to fall down my checks and I stumble, trying to regain my balance. The grey van catches on fire and I set Koda down and run to my parent's jeep. The car was upside down. I run to the door and pulled on the handle but it wouldn't budge. I lash out at it in rage though I soon come to my senses and start to pull with all my strength, my anger fueling me. It eventually budged but I was short on time, the van looked like it was ready to exploded. I grab my unconscious parents by the collar of there jackets and I began to pull them out but there was a resistance. They wouldn't move because they still had there seat belts on. I soon began to feel panic setting in and I grab my pocket knife I had, slicing the belt straps. I frantically move to get them out, feeling the temperature beginning to rise from the engine of the grey van. I chance a glance to see who's inside only to see a man with bottles of beer scattered everywhere around the roof, his car was upside down as well. Go figure, a fucking drunk driver, this entire moment was his fault. I pull my parents out of the car and began to drag them out where Koda was lying and I hear a high pitch noise from behind me as the car blows up sending shrapnel flying everywhere, tossing me a good several feet away because of the explosion. My head was ringing and for a while I thought I was deaf. I quickly remember though about mom and dad and go to check them. They laid there motionless, bleeding from their heads. I place my head on mom's chest to not hear a heart beat. I move my hands around my father and mother to see the shrapnel had hit them, I saw a hole at my father chest, It entered his heart and out. I feel a stab at my heart and I quickly move my head to my mom who's result was the similar... "D-Dad... M-Mom... Pl-please be okay..." I whisper in a pleading voice, hoping that they would miraculously be okay. I suddenly turn my head to Koda who was laying in the snow and I rush to her and cradle her in my arms. Her eyes were closed and breathing was getting weaker. "Ko-koda?" I sniffed, tears dropping onto her face. She slowly opened her eyes and looked at me directly though her eyes seemed unfocused. I began to hear the sounds of sirens in the distance but I ignored them. "Da-dad?" she said weakly "Yes?" I said, my voice cracked. I choked up a little, unable to clear my throat and the tears in my eyes. "Are we in the hospital?" "Ye-yeah, we made it to the hospital" "It's getting da-dark, Is it night?" "Y-yeah, It sure is. it's getting late" "Oh... Daddy" I hold my breath, holding Koda with one arm while I caressed my mothers hair. "I-..... I love you Daddy..." "Ye-yeah... Daddy loves you too very much" "I love you daddy..." This time her voice cracked. The realization made my eyes go wide as her head dropped and her arms went limp. Feeling that she wasn't warm anymore but was instead as cold as the storm that surrounded us. "No... Anything but this! Genna! Please save Koda... GENNA!? So-someone! Someone help her!" I started to sob uncontrollably, as I look around hoping for someone magically to help her out. It was like god was playing some cruel joke on me. First he takes my wife, then he takes my parents and just as soon after my daughter. Now I'm alone... So alone... Author's Note Stay tune for an dramatic and deadly war that will rage on Canterlot 11/27/13 Got amazing help from an editor named Blue spark, thank you very much, anyways. The story is now progressing to the war, I'm sorry to tell you blunty but I haven't wrote a single word for it. The reason for this is because I'm writing two other stories "A man and his daughter in equestria" and "One way ticket to Equestria'... Geez I just realized I suck at titles, Anyways, Lot's of more details in chapter one, Hope you enjoy. . This is my first story about an villain and an MATURE topic, I'm only 15 so it's hard for me to write mature content as I haven't experience the real world yet I do not own any of the characters of the series My Little Pony and I do not intend ANY copyright infringement. If i do break a law then i truly sorry and i will have the story taken down. I'm just an 15 year old teen that enjoys to write stories. Thank you for your time. Chapter 3 : The battle is just beginningTHE MAN WHO FOUND SIX ORPHANS The battle is just beginning EdgarDoesEverything It was the brink of dusk, 8:32 P:M to be exact. Fire Arrow sneaked out of Canterlot grounds to meet up with his army. The wolves were all ready for battle, longing for this moment, anxious for the moment when their enemies blood will be spilled and all were harden elites. They were last of the wolf species and the last battalion. None were citizens, all deadly "murders". Fire Arrow was standing on a rock while all his warriors were below him waiting patiently. He picked up his emerald encrusted staff and swung it in the air while reciting ancient words and he transformed back into a wolf, a wolf who had a gashing scar on the left side of his face, covering his left eye. It was just a white eyeball with no black pupil or such. It was a miracle he can even see with it. "SILENCE MY ARMY, SILENCE!" The commander yells. "The commander speaks!" They cheered. "Everywolf, QUIET!" The commander growled. "Our leader speaks!" The wolf army chanted again and began to settle down, all out for blood. The commander then walks forward to the stand. "MY BROTHERS AND SISTERS! Today will be the day of that Equestria falls! Vaidseelow will over take its place! We have been pushed down for long enough! We are not savages! We are not warriors!" The commander paused for effect. "We are actual living beings! The day of us being treated wrong and abused ENDS TODAY!" The army cheered and then quieted down as the commander raised his paw. "Now my brothers and sisters," He continued. "A third of us will attack from the south, you'll be the diversionary force that will distract them so that another third can attack the shield from the north where it'll be weaker and less powerful. Once I kill Shinning Armour, or until our forces chip away at the shield, I'll single the rest of you to attack with a green beam in the sky! Then, we began the slaughter." The commander pick up his staff and swung it in the air once more to turn into a pony. He then ran inside the woods to Canterlot Castle to set the rest of the plan in motion. Celestia was in the throne room, sitting on her throne, pondering about life's mysteries. She sat in silence, joined by two royal guards that stood vigilantly. She eventually snapped out of her day dreaming and look outside to see the moon rising. The moon came over the horizon slowly and steadily. Celestia gazed at it when suddenly, the moon sparked with blue lighting. The starts grew brighter, lighting up the world below and giving the land a majestic look. The moon gave off a light blue glow while the center of the moon remained a darker blue. The beauty of the night... This night... Was so different from the usual nights. The doors to the sister's throne room opened and she saw Luna trot inside, the guards giving a quick bow and then resumed attention. "Luna?" Celestia said. "Yes sister?" Luna replied, tilting her head a little. "Why is the night sky so... Different?" She said admiring the calming night. "You don't remember about today?" Celestia shook her head. "Tonight marks the 10th year that we defeated Vaidseelow." "Ahh... All I remember from that is another chapter of pony history." Luna walked up the stairs and sat besides Celestia. She laid her head on her big sisters shoulder. "I know sister... I know" Out the window, fireworks flew to the air. Explosions boomed. Ponies cheered. Lights grew bright as they celebrated the 10th year of the wolf's defeat. "You may go now, guards... Have fun tonight, celebrate." Celestia said straining to hold back tears. "Your majesty? Are you sure? We are willing to miss the festivities just for your safety..." The guard said honestly as he stood next to his counterpart. He was responded by a white hoof with a golden shoe following the motion "go away", "Right your majesty, come along brother, lets let them be." Iron Hoof and the other royal guard then left the throne room. Luna hugged Celestia tightly and began crying a small river. She had her eyes shut tightly. Celestia's eyes began to water too. "Tia" Luna said in a high voice. "I miss our parents" Celestia began crying and hugged Luna tightly as well. The two sat in the room, comforting each other. Iron Hoof and his brother walked down the hallways when Iron Hoof's brother nudged him. 'I don't feel like we should had left Iron, it feels... Wrong for some reason." He said, confused. "Well, Silver Tail, some times in life, you have to leave things alone, even though you feel like you can make it better" He said putting a hoof on Silver Tail. "Like when mother told us to not risk our-" "Yeah, yeah....Like that brother." The two stopped and saw Fire Arrow rushing the halls. "Hey! The princesses don't want to be bother-" Fire arrow pushed Iron Hoof out of the way and pursued on. "Come on, we got to stop him" Silver Tail said infuriated. "Right!" The doors to the princesses throne room flew opened as Fire Arrow galloped inside. "YOUR HIGHNESS! I HAVE INTEL THAT THE WOLves are going to att-" Fire arrow stopped and saw the princesses crying. "Your majesty... What's the matter?" Celestia and Luna stopped hugging each other and wiped their eyes. He waited patiently, hoping that maybe he can get some kind of information to use against them. "No-nothing, Sargent Arrow, what was it you were going to say?" Celestia sniffed. "Princess... What the matter?" Slightly put off. "Do you not remember?!" Luna said, sounding little angry. "Luna..." Celestia tried to reach out to her, to tell her that he wouldn't know anything about the wolves from the war, but Luna ignored her. "My memory is a little hazy" Fire arrow said, feeling uneasy. "That those SAVAGES KILLED OUR PARENTS!" Luna screamed, eyes closed as she continued to cry. "Savages?" Fire Arrow whispered at first, before a fire over took his eyes and he went right up to Luna's face, surprising her. "WE DIDN'T KILL THEM! THAT WAS NOT OUR FAULT!" Fire Arrow screamed, though as soon as he said it, he backed off, quickly raising a hoof to his mouth as his pupils shrink'd. Celestia and Luna's mouth slowly opened and closed, unsure as what to say, their eyes a mixture of confusion and anger. In a moment though they both stood from their seats, horns a glow, suspicion now evident on their face. They took a step forward and Fire Arrow responded by taking a step back. "What do you mean... 'Not our fault'?" Celestia asked, though in her mind she already knew. "I-I said nothing!" Fire Arrow said quickly, nervously taking steps back for every step that the sisters took forward. "GET HIM!" Luna yelled and Celestia followed up with firing a beam of light at the Sargent where he stood incredible speed. Fire arrow quickly pulled his staff out of the pocket of space where he kept it and blocked the magic with it, making it ricochet and bounce all over the room until it evaporated. Both of the Princesses then proceeded to fire magic missiles, knowing he can't dodge all of them. The pony could only reflect one and the other hit him, causing his entire body to be engulfed in a flash of white. A second later, the one that stood there was instead a large wolf, just as big as Celestia. He grunted and used his staff to regain his balance from the blast. When the Princesses realized what he was they were shocked. "DIE, ROYAL SCUM!" The Commander raised his staff at the Princesses when suddenly the doors flew open once more and revealed the guards who were previously there. "HALT!" One of them charged at the wolf who was at least three times his size and tried to jump on his back was thrown off to where the Princesses were standing. He looked up just in time to see a beam fly overhead toward the wolf. The Commander then brought up a shield of magic around him, reflecting the projectile, raised his staff at the guard who was now in front of him, defenseless. "Die!" The Commander said as a black electric like bolt fired from his staff. It exited his shield without pause and headed straight for the guard. When it came on contact the guard screamed in agony as a bolt of electricity went his body, burning his organs and singing his fur a sickly black. A moment later he crumpled to the ground, unmoving. "IRON HOOF!!!" The other guard shouted, running over to his fallen comrade. "HOW DARE YOU!" Celestia shouted, fire raging in her eyes. "PREPARE TO FACE OUR WRATH!!!" Luna shouted, firing more rays of magic at the shield, only for it to bounce off. The remaining guard drew his spear and swung at the shield, which surprisingly went straight through, as it seemed it was only meant to repel magic. He slashed at the Commanders foreleg, which he yelled in agony before pouncing on the guard and forcing all of the air out of him. The Commander opened his mouth and lunged at his neck, the sound of flesh tearing signaling that he made his mark. The guard gagged on the murky blood that now flowed out of his wound and slumped to the ground. Princess Celestia flew into the air and dove at the Commander, bucking him and hard as she could. He was knocked back a ways from the imact but recovered, spitting out the flesh of the guard he just gouged out and started to run out of the throne room. Luna ran after the wolf while Celestia rushed to the bodies of the guards, holding them in her hooves. She began to tear up, as Iron Hoof turned his head to see his dead comrade. He weakly moved his hoof and shut his eyes. He began to tear up as he looked up to the solar princess who was trying to use magic to heal his wounds. "I-its n-n-no use pr-princess. It's t-too late f-for us..." His vocal cords cracked, burned from the electrical damage they sustained but Celestia pressed on. "Just hold on Iron Hoof! I-I'll fix this! I'll fix this!" Celestia said more to herself. Iron Hoof put his hoof on her shoulder to get her attention. "D-D-Don't te-tell our mo-mother th-that we came b-back... Sh-she w-wouldn't under-understand." He chocked out a large amount of blood. "Iron Hoof?" Celestia whispered, pleading, watching as his already faint breathing began to grow fainter. "Di-did I do g-good your ma-majesty?" Iron Hoof smiled and then looked straight at the ceiling and closed his eyes. Celestia's eyes opened wide and her mouth opened in a silent scream as she held her dead guards. Iron Hoof's body went lax in her embrace, his chest no longer rising and falling with life. Celestia tightly closed her eyes and sat the dead brothers besides each other. "Your deaths will not be in vain..." She sobbed, but eventually she stood up. "I will avenge your deaths... ON MY NAME I'LL KILL THAT MONSTER!" Celestia galloped out the door, hoping to catch up with her sister in hunting down the beast. "Shit! I'm in some deep trouble now... I had to snap right then and there! Those royal scum, thinking we are savages, HOGWASH!!! It wasn't suppose to go like this... They're the savages! Using an obliteration spell to destroy our beautiful homeland... All of those wolfs... Subjects... Friends... Parents... Family... My family....... GRAHHHH!" The Commander jumped out the window, followed by a blue beam flying next to him and obliterating a piece of concrete. As he was in mid air, he swung his staff and shot a light green beam into the sky. As it rose into the sky in a large arc it made a loud whistling noise until it reached it's apex, where it blew up and created a large glowing flare. The celebration all saw this but proceeded to "Oooo" and "Aaaah", thinking that it was part of the fireworks. Then, the ponies began to notice the large plumes of smoke coming out of the castle, as well as the large hole in it's side from which one of their Princesses flew out, and she was mad. Soon, all the festivities came to a halt as they began to grasp what happened. Everypony began to scramble, every guard ran to their chain of command. Everything was completely disorganized. Chaotic. Several were trampled, many were arrested, most were beat down by guards. Shining Armour stepped up and began giving orders as well as the Princesses when suddenly, a war horn was heard. "ATTACK MY BRETHREN! IT IS TIME TO STORM CANTERLOT CASTLE!!!" A voice could be heard and soon an army of wolves ran at the gates of Canterlot. Fully armored and fully equipped, a massive wave of fearsome destruction charged their way towards the shield. At least 50,000 wolfs were spotted, all of them ready to kill, ready to plunder, ready for revenge. When Celestia finally made it through the hole in the castle to join her sister she nearly fell out of the air in shock, her eyes wide with fear. "Sister what's going on!?" Luna said fearfully, turning to her elder sister for guidance. "It seems this is the last of the wolves, the ones we thought that died in the head quarters of Burnton. We make our stand here. We will either survive this battle of war or this'll be the final stand we make." Princess Celestia gulped. Yes... Another day of war Author's Note I finally got some TIME! I finished it, re read it like 2 times and proud to release it at freaking 11:19 P.M at night. Great, well. Enjoy! Finally getting to the war part eh? This is my first story about an villain and an MATURE topic, I'm only 15 so it's hard for me to write mature content as I haven't experience the real world yet I do not own any of the characters of the series My Little Pony and I do not intend ANY copyright infringement. If i do break a law then i truly sorry and i will have the story taken down. I'm just an 15 year old teen that enjoys to write stories. Thank you for your time.
Chapter 1 - The deadly battle up aheadTHE MAN WHO FOUND SIX ORPHANS THE DEADLY BATTLE UP AHEAD EdgarDoesEverything 2045 I find myself driving towards the graveyard where my family is buried. I drive inside the compound, passing the gates. It was 4:47 in the morning. Stopping in the deserted lot I get out and make the slow trek to the destination I had on my mind. I eventually approach three graves, two were close together and the other was a large one. I knee down on the grass, looking at the graves, kneeling down in front of the one in the middle. "Here lies Genna Dernen. 1998-2023 -R.I.P-" I look at my wife's grave and place my hand on the cold smooth stone, trying to fight back the tears. I sniff and looked to the right to read the other grave. "Here lies Koda Dernen 2023-2028 -R.I.P-" The sight of my daughter's grave pierced my heart, remembering the moment when she passed away in my arms. The feeling lingered in my heart and I could feel one of the tears fall down my face. It fell slowly, taunting me me that I couldn't hold on to it like I could with my daughter anymore. I blink back into reality when I heard the pit pat of more water. It was so quiet that I could even hear my heart beat increase slightly. I wiped my eyes and took out a small daisy out of my shirt pocket and settled it down between the graves. Eventually, I stood up and walked to the other tombstone and sat down this time and read the words slowly out loud, despite how there were no people around to hear them. "Here lies Duncan and Hannah Dernen. 1976-2028. 1980-2028 -R.I.P-" "it's my fault you're both dead, If only I stayed in the car that day..." I chocked on my words, making it hard to breath. "Its all my fault that your all dead!" I yelled, cursing myself how the ones I once held dear were now dead... "Its all my fucking fault" I dropped to the ground sobbing. I began to lose my mind, pounding the grass and ripping it out of its now muddy soil. Eventually, I feel a hoof rest gently on my back. I continue to cry as the sun just begins to crest the horizon behind me. I eventually find myself huddled on the ground, when six equine like shadows surround surround me and I can feel myself taken into a warm, loving embrace. "It's not your fault, Dad..." I hear one whisper in my ear. I cry as I hug them back in turn. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 2023 Snow started to come down heavily. Cars and trains stopped, as if the spirit of the city was paralyzed from an illness. Genna, my beautiful wife, Developed a fever. To make it worse, she was in labor around four weeks earlier than we had expected. I sat down next her, holding her hand as she breathed hard and moaned with pain. "Genna... Hang in there, Genna!" She grips my hand in a vice as if she was hanging off a cliff. Her nails cut into my skin and I wince but still hold on. "Genna..." My parents should be here soon, they must be as I called them twenty minutes ago... "I-I'm fine..." Genna said weakly as she gasped but cried out when she felt another contraction. "I'll m-make sure K-Koda will be born sa-ah... safely..." Genna said in pain. "The three of us, you, me and koda, will live together, happily..." Just as she finished I heard the door slam open and saw my parents rush in. Since Genna was an orphan, she never knew who her parents were... "Don't worry we're here!" My Mother said and rushed to my wife's side. "Don't think the cars will move, they're all buried beneath snow... And during a time like this!" My Father said in anger. My Mother turned to my father. "Duncan, please bring some hot water, as much as you can!" "You got it Hannah!" My Dad ran to the kitchen and began doing his task as Mom then sat next to me, inspecting Genna. "Son, be sure to support you wife." She said sternly. "Holding her hand is fine, right?" I said weakly. She then stood up and then walked to where Genna's legs were spread. "Of course, please keep doing that.." I smiled and turned to Genna. "Genna, I'm right here for you, okay?" She breathed hard. "Don't give up, Genna. I believe in you!" I coaxed again. "Okay lets get started... Try breathing slowly Genna." My Mother said and Genna tried her best and began to push. "Yes, that's good. Please keep that up!" Mom encouraged. "Don't let up Genna." I added. This went on for hours, I kept on supporting Genna with words while Mom did her best with preparing for the baby. She's no doctor but right now, anyone is good. The ambulance can't get through the storm and the only helicopter they have is in repair... Go figure... Dad would frequently take out a smoke, then put it back. He did this several times before he gave up and went outside and waited in the cold. Genna kept losing consciousness over and over and would only waken up to the pain seconds later... It was such a cruel scene, I almost covered my eyes. It took forever, eventually I thought this would last an eternity and we will never see the end of it. Even I felt like I would loose consciousness. Maybe my mind couldn't take it anymore... Maybe it'll all be for naught. "Push! Push! The baby is almost here!" My Mother said excitedly. Genna held her breath and with a shrill scream pushed with all her might. At the end she gasped and breathed heavily. "Good job!" Mother said. "Come here son!" I rushed to my Mother. "Cut the umbilical cord, the Father must do this." She said smiling. I quickly finish the job and my mother passed me Koda and I held our new daughter in my hands. "I'll get the hot water" Mother said running to the kitchen. I looked at my new daughter, tearing up with joy. "Look" I said whispered quietly looked to my wife in excitement, only to see her laying motionless bed, breathing weakly. "Genna?" She laid there, her breathing becoming more ragged and fainter breathing. I quickly take her hand in mine and squeeze a little bit too hand. "Genna!" I shout in panic and she slowly opens her eyes. "Ha-Harrison..." She mutters weakly. "She's here Genna! Koda is here." Genna tried to smile but it faltered. Koda began to cry. "You can hear her, right? Our baby is crying" I said smiling, tears coming down my face. "Yes." Genna said quietly. I brought the baby to her vision. "Look." Koda kept crying as Genna got her first look on her. "She so beautiful Genna!" "Ye-yes... She's very beautiful..." "Koda, our baby, she's a girl! A healthy baby girl!" I repeated excitedly. "Yes... I'm glad she was born at home..." Genna said weakly. "I thought it would have been dangerous for her." "You really pulled through Genna." I said sighing in relief. "But... I am bit tried..." Genna began closing her eyes. "Please let me rest... Just for a little bit..." My Mom and Dad came back into the room, only to stop wide eyed as they saw that Genna was loosing consciousness and looked unwell. "Genna?" My mom said in a heartbreaking voice as she walked to her side. "Damn It! Where the fuck are the doctors?!" Dad said in rage while stomping outside again. I'm pretty sure I saw a tear in his eye but I wasn't sure. "Harrison! Get Genna ready to go to the hospital! We're going ourselves!" Dad said taking out his keys "But the cars are stuck!" "Genna please hold on... Le-lets just talk for a little more... You can just listen, okay?" I begged but Genna laid motionless. "Look, it's our baby. She looks a bit like a cute monkey, doesn't she? She's so small! I'll try calling her, okay? Koda... Koda... I'm Daddy, Koda! Over here is Mommy..." Genna eyes slowly closed and I could feel the pressure leaving in my hand. I only squeezed harder as I began to sob. "Look... She's ignoring me! She probably doesn't know, does she?" My voice began to crack and Genna opened her eyes. "I'm sure she'll grow up very fast, enter elementary school, we'll take her there... Maybe during parents' day or something! It'll be our family! I'll be helping Koda with her homework. Even thought I'm absolutely stupid when it comes to that..." I chuckled weakly but noticed that Genna had her eyes closed and stopped breathing. My eyes widened and I could almost feel my world leave me. "Genna?" I raised her arm up and let go, only for it fall limp and droop to the floor. "Genna, look, here's Koda's cheek!" I said tugging on Genna arm "Hey, come on!" I can feel panic begin to set in and I let go of her arm only for it to fall limp again. I choke back a cry as I look at her with watering eyes. "Genna... Y-you said you'd always be with me, didn't you? You said we'd always be together... You promised me many and many times, didn't you? That was our dream! There was nothing good about living.. Someone like me, who went through such a crappy lifestyle... We had finally found a dream! Hey, Genna!?" "GENNA!!!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In the outskirts of Equestria. 2027 in the human year "My army, Chrysalis has been defeated by the royal SCUM!" A wolf whose appearance was as big as Celestia hollowed at his 'WolfMorton' which was an equivalent to a military diversion. The army yelled in disbelief and anger. "Tis is not a lie, but it was her unintelligent tactics that got her changelings and herself KILLED!" He took a moment to let the comment set in. "Her subjects will now die as there is no queen now, unable to feed their city. The race of the Changelings will cease to exist in a couple of months, what are we going to do? NOTHING!" he laugh manically while his army joined in. "QUIET! HER FOOLISH ACTIONS WILL BE THE END OF HER SPECIES-" "My commander!? What did she do wrong? She had an unstoppable army with a brilliant plan-" The commander growled and the wolf who spoke up whimpered in fear. "HOGWASH! Her plan was indeed brilliant, disguising as a pony but as an important princess was foolish of her, also sending that threat to Canterlot had no purpose at all but to feed her dark side for the love of battle and suspense. Not killing the princess and acting like a IDIOT around the prized pupil is insulting, IT'S LIKE SHE ASKED TO BE KILLED!" The commander calmed down and took in a slow breath. "We must wait now, the city's defense is at it's highest and the shield of love is at its peek of strength. We have been pushed around for too long my comrades! Just because our appearance may look deceiving and that we look like mindless carnivores is OUTRAGEOUS!" The army roared, cheering and yelling. The commanding raised his paw for them to quiet. "No, we are much more... Because of their insulting ways, we will take over Equestria and move out of this humiliating place, we will take back our home and turn the royal scum to stone, just like 'poor' old Discord. Go now, my army! We prepare for the long struggling year we will have! I will implant myself inside Canterlot and gain the trust of the princesses, after I have them in my place, we attack... Remember, we are more than just a unit." The commander picks up his wooden old staff with an eye-shape emerald on the tip of the wood. He swings the staff in the air and begins to recite and enchantment. "Der Kind, PLUR ESH DEKIN TON!" The commander is engulfed by smoke which vibrated with power and energy began to thrum in the air, a bright flash and everyone rose a paw to blink back the black light. The wolves look up to their commander to see he has transformed into a stallion. "Always remember that." He sneered and disappeared in a puff of smoke. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 2027 The sun raises from it's prison and awakens the creatures that inhabit a chunk of rock. In a city was an apartment complex named "The Cozy Caves". Inside apartment 1097, a man making breakfast for what seemed for two people. The man hummed quietly in the warm air, enjoying the peace and tranquility. "AHHHHHHH!" He heard a scream and his demeanor instantly changed. Harrison instantly ran to where he heard the scream but he was stopped by a locked door. "Koda! What happened, are you okay!?" He called, looking ready to breakdown the door. "Oh! Sorry Dad! I turn on the shower to cold water by accident!" Came the voice of a young girl. "Okay, good..." Harrison perked himself up and sighed in relief. "Breakfast is almost ready!" he said happily as he returned to what could be called a kitchen. "Okey!" she said with chattering teeth. Harrison took out two white plates and set them on a counter next to the stove. He picks up the handle of the frying pan and shoves some of the scrambled eggs onto the plates. He then moved the sizzling bacon next to the eggs, he did it slowly and with care so as to prevent from spilling any of it to the floor. He put the frying pan down and hears a *ping!* sound from the toaster. He reaches over and grabs the two pieces of toast and place them on the plate. He picks them up and carries them to over to a cardboard table. He goes back to a cabinet retrieves a couple of glasses and proceeds to pour some orange juice that he got from the fridge in them. He stares at the almost golden liquid in one of the glasses and takes an experimental sip, sighing as the cool liquid goes down his throat. Harrison then hears his daughter come out of the bathroom, and smiles as he sees her skipping into the kitchen and taking in a deep breath to smell the delicious breakfast. "Wow! This looks amazing Daddy!" Koda says smiling. "Thanks sweetheart, lets get munching shall we?" Koda sits down and the two enjoy their breakfast. They had small talk between taking bites, talking about dreams and how life is just one big confusing mess. As they finish Harrison picks up the plates while Koda walks to her room and grabs her backpack. Harrison places the dishes in the sink, making a mental note that he'll need to do them later. "Hurry along Koda, don't want to be late for school!" "Okay Dad!" Koda holds her Father's hand as they walked down an hallway to be stopped by a door. Harrison opens it to the passage to the world to see the sun slowly rise in the morning, warming their bodies. Two gay humans, living peacefully in a decaying world. They stepped outside to be blinded by the bright circle in the sky. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ One year later after Chrysalis's attack on Canterlot "Sargent Fire Arrow, what is the word on the wolf that was caught on Canterlot grounds?" Asked Celestia to one of her most trusted guards. "Good your highness, he's been locked up since I discovered him three months ago." Fire Arrow said stoically. "Very good, If it weren't for you we might have had another attack on Canterlot. The shield has been up for three months now and I'm thinking of putting it down now that-" But Celestia was cut off by Fire Arrow. "Your highness, no! Doing so would surely cause an opening for attack! We can never be to careful, It's best If we kept it up for good measure." Fire Arrow replied a little too quickly, but if Celestia noticed the slight increase in his voice she didn't show it. "Alright, Shining armor has mastered it now it wouldn't be a problem to keep it up. Thank you Sargent, back to your post and report back any wolf activity as soon as you can." Celestia then left the room, leaving two stallions in the palace. "What the hell is wrong with you Commander! We would've had the shield down! Why did you do tha-" "Silence you fool! If we would not have the shield up then this mission would be failure. By leaving the shield up we can have a diversionary force attack one side of the castle. I'll tell the Princess that I got Intel that a full on attack from the wolves are attacking from the south and It'll be a good idea to put all of the energy to that location. While the battle rages on there, the main army shall attack from the North. I'll assassinate Shining Armour from there and when the shield is broken or when I kill the scum, our forces invade. If we would had token down the shield and attacked the pest would have put it up while we were in, killing us just like the idiot Chrysalis did." The other ' wolf ' nodded. "Let us prepare, we attack at noon. By now the shield will be at full strength at the south, send half of the wolfs there and the rest at the north. Now follow me my comrade!" Fire Arrow laughed and began to make his way down the halls. "Today, this day is going to be perfect..." Author's Note Stay tune for an dramatic and deadly war that will rage on and the tragic past the Harrison will have. This is my first story about an villain and an mature topic, I'm only 15 so it's hard for me to write mature content as I haven't experience the real world yet, If any of you want to tell me about it or want to point out a grammar issues, please point it out, thank you for reading, and if you want more then I recommend reading my story about a teenage boy going to Equestria, God I'm a loser, I got lazy and just ended here but don't worry, I'm still explaining the beginning, anyways have a good day! Was the villain good and well built? I plan to write more about him but for now, how was he?
Chapter 2 : Tragic pastTHE MAN WHO FOUND SIX ORPHANS TRAGIC PAST EdgarDoesEverything Edited by Blue Spark 2028 Koda has a fever of 108 and It's been rising with every hour. She's been sick for a whole week and we've visited the hospital three times already. All they can do is give her something for the pain... Apparently, Koda was born with a low immune system so even the common cold can become lethal. Her mother was born with It too... She keeps breathing hard and blacking out multiple times, I did all I can to help her. Her fever is getting worse, I swore under my breath and began to consider taking her to the hospital again. Just as I began to consider the idea, a snowy storm slowly set in. If we didn't start going soon Koda won't be able to get the help that she needs and then she'll... I immediately began to suit up, putting the worried feeling in the back of my mind. I walked to the hall closet and opened it up, sticking my hand inside. Fishing around for a minute I finally pulled out what I was looking for, a black furry coat in my left hand and a much smaller pink plush coat in my right. I quickly walked into Koda's room and sat next to her in her bed. This is the worst that she's looked yet. She burried underneat all the blankets I could find in the house and she still said she felt cold. It didn't help that she was also sweating heavily but I wanted to keep her warm rather then cold. "Daddy..." I held my breath as I saw Koda eye's water and I could see the fear in her eyes. "Am I going to die?" She said with a quiet voice. Her words were as if a lighting bolt struck my heart and feelings of sorrow began to well up in my chest. "What? Sweetie, you're not going to die." I lied, I have no idea what was going to happen, I was so confused... "You're going to be okay, you're just having a bad day... It happens to all of us." I replied with a straight face, hiding the fact that I was on the verge of tears. Koda nodded her head weakly. I lifted her up slowly, not wanting to cause her anymore discomfort. I put the fluffy pink coat on her, her scarf was dirty so I snugly wrapped mine around her instead. She was covered from head to foot expect for her sickly face. I carried her to our doorstep and opened the door only for the chilly winds of frost to hit our faces. I step outside to the balcony of the complex and began walking down the hall, we turn the corner to meet some stairs. Walking down was an excruciating event as I went very slowly so that I didn't slip and possibly hurt Koda. I needed to go slow, the precious that passed during that time was taunting. I finally landed my foot on the ground level and I made my way to my car. The winds were getting faster and beginning to pick up, a sign that an even bigger storm is on it's way. I set Koda down and she stood there awkwardly, seemingly ready to pass out at any given moment. "Just hang in there Koda." I took out my keys and insert them inside the door and turned. It unlocked and I turned on the engine and pressed the button for all of the car doors to unlock. I quickly came out and picked up Koda, carrying her to the passenger seat and buckling her in. I shut the door and walked to the other side of the car and entered the driver seat. Stepping on the pedal the car took off. I was now on my way to the hospital. The storm began to get worse, as if it was deliberately trying to prevent me from getting to the hospital. The car windows became foggy and the inside of the car started to become chilling. I go to turn on the heater the button broke off when I try to turn it. I look at it in anger. "GODDAMN IT!" I tossed the piece of plastic to the floor and continue driving. No one was on the road, just us and the deadly barrier of the so called storm that threatened to block my path. I was half way to the hospital when I heard the engine of my car cough. The tires screech and moved uncontrollably, I try to turn the wheel as best as I can and if I hadn't put enough effort into it we would have crashed into a tree. With a loud thump the car suddenly stops. We're now stuck in the snow and if I don't do anything soon we're going to be stuck here for a while. I turn my head to Koda to see her slowly breathing becoming ragged and faster. I reached into my pocket and and frantically dug around until I felt my cellphone. Grabbing it I take out and raised it's cover. I speed dial my father and place the phone to my ear to hear the phone ring. "Hello?" "Dad! I need you to drive us to the hospital immediately! I'm on street 3434 east Burdon, Koda is sick and the car broke down. I'll be running down the road, honk at us when you see us!" "Son stay in the car, well pick you up! We're going to be in the red jeep. We'll be there as fast as we can!" I slapped the phone down and put it in my pocket. Ignoring my father's warning I get out of the car and walk to the other side of my SUV. I opened the door to Koda, unstrapping her, and I take off my coat and covered her even more. I then take out my pocket knife and cut some of the cloth from my undershirt and cover Koda's face with it in a way to keep the wind off of her face some. Her teeth were violently chattering. I picked her up and began moving to the hospital, I didn't care what happens to the car, it's stuck under a foot of snow and it's freezing out here. I began running, the winds beating me across the face. The chilling winds began to freeze up my body, my ear's went numb and I began to loose the feeling in my fingers. Adrenaline starts kicking in and I run harder, adn faster. I run and run and run, not caring for my own sake, only for my daughter's. I don't care If I die but Koda needs to live on, she has so much to live for! She always loved being around my parents, mom and dad always wanted another child but couldn't because times were tough while growing up. *HONK* *HONK* The sound of a car horn grabs my attention and I turn around to see a red jeep with my parents inside. A middle age man who just starting to grow gray hairs and a beautiful women who loves to cook. I smiled despite the ice I began to feel forming on my body. I wave and Koda slowly opens her eyes and smiles. I began to walk slowly in the direction of the jeep when I suddenly see it get rammed by a grey van, the van bends in a awkwardly position and the jeep is crushed. The crash went very slowly, everything went very slowly. I gasp in shock and let out a silent scream as Koda stared wide eyed at it all, tears beginning to form on her face again. "NOOOOOO!" I began running to the crash. "NO! FUCKING NO!" Tears began to fall down my checks and I stumble, trying to regain my balance. The grey van catches on fire and I set Koda down and run to my parent's jeep. The car was upside down. I run to the door and pulled on the handle but it wouldn't budge. I lash out at it in rage though I soon come to my senses and start to pull with all my strength, my anger fueling me. It eventually budged but I was short on time, the van looked like it was ready to exploded. I grab my unconscious parents by the collar of there jackets and I began to pull them out but there was a resistance. They wouldn't move because they still had there seat belts on. I soon began to feel panic setting in and I grab my pocket knife I had, slicing the belt straps. I frantically move to get them out, feeling the temperature beginning to rise from the engine of the grey van. I chance a glance to see who's inside only to see a man with bottles of beer scattered everywhere around the roof, his car was upside down as well. Go figure, a fucking drunk driver, this entire moment was his fault. I pull my parents out of the car and began to drag them out where Koda was lying and I hear a high pitch noise from behind me as the car blows up sending shrapnel flying everywhere, tossing me a good several feet away because of the explosion. My head was ringing and for a while I thought I was deaf. I quickly remember though about mom and dad and go to check them. They laid there motionless, bleeding from their heads. I place my head on mom's chest to not hear a heart beat. I move my hands around my father and mother to see the shrapnel had hit them, I saw a hole at my father chest, It entered his heart and out. I feel a stab at my heart and I quickly move my head to my mom who's result was the similar... "D-Dad... M-Mom... Pl-please be okay..." I whisper in a pleading voice, hoping that they would miraculously be okay. I suddenly turn my head to Koda who was laying in the snow and I rush to her and cradle her in my arms. Her eyes were closed and breathing was getting weaker. "Ko-koda?" I sniffed, tears dropping onto her face. She slowly opened her eyes and looked at me directly though her eyes seemed unfocused. I began to hear the sounds of sirens in the distance but I ignored them. "Da-dad?" she said weakly "Yes?" I said, my voice cracked. I choked up a little, unable to clear my throat and the tears in my eyes. "Are we in the hospital?" "Ye-yeah, we made it to the hospital" "It's getting da-dark, Is it night?" "Y-yeah, It sure is. it's getting late" "Oh... Daddy" I hold my breath, holding Koda with one arm while I caressed my mothers hair. "I-..... I love you Daddy..." "Ye-yeah... Daddy loves you too very much" "I love you daddy..." This time her voice cracked. The realization made my eyes go wide as her head dropped and her arms went limp. Feeling that she wasn't warm anymore but was instead as cold as the storm that surrounded us. "No... Anything but this! Genna! Please save Koda... GENNA!? So-someone! Someone help her!" I started to sob uncontrollably, as I look around hoping for someone magically to help her out. It was like god was playing some cruel joke on me. First he takes my wife, then he takes my parents and just as soon after my daughter. Now I'm alone... So alone... Author's Note Stay tune for an dramatic and deadly war that will rage on Canterlot 11/27/13 Got amazing help from an editor named Blue spark, thank you very much, anyways. The story is now progressing to the war, I'm sorry to tell you blunty but I haven't wrote a single word for it. The reason for this is because I'm writing two other stories "A man and his daughter in equestria" and "One way ticket to Equestria'... Geez I just realized I suck at titles, Anyways, Lot's of more details in chapter one, Hope you enjoy. . This is my first story about an villain and an MATURE topic, I'm only 15 so it's hard for me to write mature content as I haven't experience the real world yet I do not own any of the characters of the series My Little Pony and I do not intend ANY copyright infringement. If i do break a law then i truly sorry and i will have the story taken down. I'm just an 15 year old teen that enjoys to write stories. Thank you for your time.
Chapter 3 : The battle is just beginningTHE MAN WHO FOUND SIX ORPHANS The battle is just beginning EdgarDoesEverything It was the brink of dusk, 8:32 P:M to be exact. Fire Arrow sneaked out of Canterlot grounds to meet up with his army. The wolves were all ready for battle, longing for this moment, anxious for the moment when their enemies blood will be spilled and all were harden elites. They were last of the wolf species and the last battalion. None were citizens, all deadly "murders". Fire Arrow was standing on a rock while all his warriors were below him waiting patiently. He picked up his emerald encrusted staff and swung it in the air while reciting ancient words and he transformed back into a wolf, a wolf who had a gashing scar on the left side of his face, covering his left eye. It was just a white eyeball with no black pupil or such. It was a miracle he can even see with it. "SILENCE MY ARMY, SILENCE!" The commander yells. "The commander speaks!" They cheered. "Everywolf, QUIET!" The commander growled. "Our leader speaks!" The wolf army chanted again and began to settle down, all out for blood. The commander then walks forward to the stand. "MY BROTHERS AND SISTERS! Today will be the day of that Equestria falls! Vaidseelow will over take its place! We have been pushed down for long enough! We are not savages! We are not warriors!" The commander paused for effect. "We are actual living beings! The day of us being treated wrong and abused ENDS TODAY!" The army cheered and then quieted down as the commander raised his paw. "Now my brothers and sisters," He continued. "A third of us will attack from the south, you'll be the diversionary force that will distract them so that another third can attack the shield from the north where it'll be weaker and less powerful. Once I kill Shinning Armour, or until our forces chip away at the shield, I'll single the rest of you to attack with a green beam in the sky! Then, we began the slaughter." The commander pick up his staff and swung it in the air once more to turn into a pony. He then ran inside the woods to Canterlot Castle to set the rest of the plan in motion. Celestia was in the throne room, sitting on her throne, pondering about life's mysteries. She sat in silence, joined by two royal guards that stood vigilantly. She eventually snapped out of her day dreaming and look outside to see the moon rising. The moon came over the horizon slowly and steadily. Celestia gazed at it when suddenly, the moon sparked with blue lighting. The starts grew brighter, lighting up the world below and giving the land a majestic look. The moon gave off a light blue glow while the center of the moon remained a darker blue. The beauty of the night... This night... Was so different from the usual nights. The doors to the sister's throne room opened and she saw Luna trot inside, the guards giving a quick bow and then resumed attention. "Luna?" Celestia said. "Yes sister?" Luna replied, tilting her head a little. "Why is the night sky so... Different?" She said admiring the calming night. "You don't remember about today?" Celestia shook her head. "Tonight marks the 10th year that we defeated Vaidseelow." "Ahh... All I remember from that is another chapter of pony history." Luna walked up the stairs and sat besides Celestia. She laid her head on her big sisters shoulder. "I know sister... I know" Out the window, fireworks flew to the air. Explosions boomed. Ponies cheered. Lights grew bright as they celebrated the 10th year of the wolf's defeat. "You may go now, guards... Have fun tonight, celebrate." Celestia said straining to hold back tears. "Your majesty? Are you sure? We are willing to miss the festivities just for your safety..." The guard said honestly as he stood next to his counterpart. He was responded by a white hoof with a golden shoe following the motion "go away", "Right your majesty, come along brother, lets let them be." Iron Hoof and the other royal guard then left the throne room. Luna hugged Celestia tightly and began crying a small river. She had her eyes shut tightly. Celestia's eyes began to water too. "Tia" Luna said in a high voice. "I miss our parents" Celestia began crying and hugged Luna tightly as well. The two sat in the room, comforting each other. Iron Hoof and his brother walked down the hallways when Iron Hoof's brother nudged him. 'I don't feel like we should had left Iron, it feels... Wrong for some reason." He said, confused. "Well, Silver Tail, some times in life, you have to leave things alone, even though you feel like you can make it better" He said putting a hoof on Silver Tail. "Like when mother told us to not risk our-" "Yeah, yeah....Like that brother." The two stopped and saw Fire Arrow rushing the halls. "Hey! The princesses don't want to be bother-" Fire arrow pushed Iron Hoof out of the way and pursued on. "Come on, we got to stop him" Silver Tail said infuriated. "Right!" The doors to the princesses throne room flew opened as Fire Arrow galloped inside. "YOUR HIGHNESS! I HAVE INTEL THAT THE WOLves are going to att-" Fire arrow stopped and saw the princesses crying. "Your majesty... What's the matter?" Celestia and Luna stopped hugging each other and wiped their eyes. He waited patiently, hoping that maybe he can get some kind of information to use against them. "No-nothing, Sargent Arrow, what was it you were going to say?" Celestia sniffed. "Princess... What the matter?" Slightly put off. "Do you not remember?!" Luna said, sounding little angry. "Luna..." Celestia tried to reach out to her, to tell her that he wouldn't know anything about the wolves from the war, but Luna ignored her. "My memory is a little hazy" Fire arrow said, feeling uneasy. "That those SAVAGES KILLED OUR PARENTS!" Luna screamed, eyes closed as she continued to cry. "Savages?" Fire Arrow whispered at first, before a fire over took his eyes and he went right up to Luna's face, surprising her. "WE DIDN'T KILL THEM! THAT WAS NOT OUR FAULT!" Fire Arrow screamed, though as soon as he said it, he backed off, quickly raising a hoof to his mouth as his pupils shrink'd. Celestia and Luna's mouth slowly opened and closed, unsure as what to say, their eyes a mixture of confusion and anger. In a moment though they both stood from their seats, horns a glow, suspicion now evident on their face. They took a step forward and Fire Arrow responded by taking a step back. "What do you mean... 'Not our fault'?" Celestia asked, though in her mind she already knew. "I-I said nothing!" Fire Arrow said quickly, nervously taking steps back for every step that the sisters took forward. "GET HIM!" Luna yelled and Celestia followed up with firing a beam of light at the Sargent where he stood incredible speed. Fire arrow quickly pulled his staff out of the pocket of space where he kept it and blocked the magic with it, making it ricochet and bounce all over the room until it evaporated. Both of the Princesses then proceeded to fire magic missiles, knowing he can't dodge all of them. The pony could only reflect one and the other hit him, causing his entire body to be engulfed in a flash of white. A second later, the one that stood there was instead a large wolf, just as big as Celestia. He grunted and used his staff to regain his balance from the blast. When the Princesses realized what he was they were shocked. "DIE, ROYAL SCUM!" The Commander raised his staff at the Princesses when suddenly the doors flew open once more and revealed the guards who were previously there. "HALT!" One of them charged at the wolf who was at least three times his size and tried to jump on his back was thrown off to where the Princesses were standing. He looked up just in time to see a beam fly overhead toward the wolf. The Commander then brought up a shield of magic around him, reflecting the projectile, raised his staff at the guard who was now in front of him, defenseless. "Die!" The Commander said as a black electric like bolt fired from his staff. It exited his shield without pause and headed straight for the guard. When it came on contact the guard screamed in agony as a bolt of electricity went his body, burning his organs and singing his fur a sickly black. A moment later he crumpled to the ground, unmoving. "IRON HOOF!!!" The other guard shouted, running over to his fallen comrade. "HOW DARE YOU!" Celestia shouted, fire raging in her eyes. "PREPARE TO FACE OUR WRATH!!!" Luna shouted, firing more rays of magic at the shield, only for it to bounce off. The remaining guard drew his spear and swung at the shield, which surprisingly went straight through, as it seemed it was only meant to repel magic. He slashed at the Commanders foreleg, which he yelled in agony before pouncing on the guard and forcing all of the air out of him. The Commander opened his mouth and lunged at his neck, the sound of flesh tearing signaling that he made his mark. The guard gagged on the murky blood that now flowed out of his wound and slumped to the ground. Princess Celestia flew into the air and dove at the Commander, bucking him and hard as she could. He was knocked back a ways from the imact but recovered, spitting out the flesh of the guard he just gouged out and started to run out of the throne room. Luna ran after the wolf while Celestia rushed to the bodies of the guards, holding them in her hooves. She began to tear up, as Iron Hoof turned his head to see his dead comrade. He weakly moved his hoof and shut his eyes. He began to tear up as he looked up to the solar princess who was trying to use magic to heal his wounds. "I-its n-n-no use pr-princess. It's t-too late f-for us..." His vocal cords cracked, burned from the electrical damage they sustained but Celestia pressed on. "Just hold on Iron Hoof! I-I'll fix this! I'll fix this!" Celestia said more to herself. Iron Hoof put his hoof on her shoulder to get her attention. "D-D-Don't te-tell our mo-mother th-that we came b-back... Sh-she w-wouldn't under-understand." He chocked out a large amount of blood. "Iron Hoof?" Celestia whispered, pleading, watching as his already faint breathing began to grow fainter. "Di-did I do g-good your ma-majesty?" Iron Hoof smiled and then looked straight at the ceiling and closed his eyes. Celestia's eyes opened wide and her mouth opened in a silent scream as she held her dead guards. Iron Hoof's body went lax in her embrace, his chest no longer rising and falling with life. Celestia tightly closed her eyes and sat the dead brothers besides each other. "Your deaths will not be in vain..." She sobbed, but eventually she stood up. "I will avenge your deaths... ON MY NAME I'LL KILL THAT MONSTER!" Celestia galloped out the door, hoping to catch up with her sister in hunting down the beast. "Shit! I'm in some deep trouble now... I had to snap right then and there! Those royal scum, thinking we are savages, HOGWASH!!! It wasn't suppose to go like this... They're the savages! Using an obliteration spell to destroy our beautiful homeland... All of those wolfs... Subjects... Friends... Parents... Family... My family....... GRAHHHH!" The Commander jumped out the window, followed by a blue beam flying next to him and obliterating a piece of concrete. As he was in mid air, he swung his staff and shot a light green beam into the sky. As it rose into the sky in a large arc it made a loud whistling noise until it reached it's apex, where it blew up and created a large glowing flare. The celebration all saw this but proceeded to "Oooo" and "Aaaah", thinking that it was part of the fireworks. Then, the ponies began to notice the large plumes of smoke coming out of the castle, as well as the large hole in it's side from which one of their Princesses flew out, and she was mad. Soon, all the festivities came to a halt as they began to grasp what happened. Everypony began to scramble, every guard ran to their chain of command. Everything was completely disorganized. Chaotic. Several were trampled, many were arrested, most were beat down by guards. Shining Armour stepped up and began giving orders as well as the Princesses when suddenly, a war horn was heard. "ATTACK MY BRETHREN! IT IS TIME TO STORM CANTERLOT CASTLE!!!" A voice could be heard and soon an army of wolves ran at the gates of Canterlot. Fully armored and fully equipped, a massive wave of fearsome destruction charged their way towards the shield. At least 50,000 wolfs were spotted, all of them ready to kill, ready to plunder, ready for revenge. When Celestia finally made it through the hole in the castle to join her sister she nearly fell out of the air in shock, her eyes wide with fear. "Sister what's going on!?" Luna said fearfully, turning to her elder sister for guidance. "It seems this is the last of the wolves, the ones we thought that died in the head quarters of Burnton. We make our stand here. We will either survive this battle of war or this'll be the final stand we make." Princess Celestia gulped. Yes... Another day of war Author's Note I finally got some TIME! I finished it, re read it like 2 times and proud to release it at freaking 11:19 P.M at night. Great, well. Enjoy! Finally getting to the war part eh? This is my first story about an villain and an MATURE topic, I'm only 15 so it's hard for me to write mature content as I haven't experience the real world yet I do not own any of the characters of the series My Little Pony and I do not intend ANY copyright infringement. If i do break a law then i truly sorry and i will have the story taken down. I'm just an 15 year old teen that enjoys to write stories. Thank you for your time.
