The creatures of Equestria have left their homeworld to explore the reaches of space and have found colonies on worlds throughout the galaxy. The stars are a wondrous and amazing place, but filled with danger and despair. The New Lunar Republic and Solar Empire fight for control of pony space, while others bide their time to strike when both are weakened. In the midst of all this, two ponies', brother and sister, fight to find a end to it all and find the ship of their mother.

My first story, so please comment to tell me what I should improve.