Reformation of NeonChaos711
Part 1: Time to reform.
Load Full StoryNext ChapterWithin the walls of Neon's castle, 3 ponies have arrived to take him for his reformation from an anti-brony. They are to take him to Queen Lauren Faust, the one Neon chose for his reformation. Shadow Storm, the first to know of Neon's reformation, has brought his friends Princess Luna and Lovinity Hearts to take him there.
NeonChaos711: "Well now, I suppose now is the time. The time for my reformation." He says silently while standing on the top of his castle. "I've been through a lot as an anti-brony, and now is the time, I guess." He patiently stand at the top of his castle for about 10 minutes, waiting for the three ponies to take him for his reformation.
The three ponies to escort him to his reformation finally arrive at the top of his castle.
Shadow Storm: "Neon, it's time."
NeonChaos711: "...yes, I know."
Princess Luna: "Now, just come with us. Don't try any funny business, or you'll regret it."
NeonChaos711: "I don't plan on trying any funny stuff. I was serious when I asked for this reformation, and I will see this through."
Lovinity Hearts: "Can you take us down through your castle so we can take you there? It was a PAIN going through it."
NeonChaos711: "You could've just flown up here, you didn't have to go through it."
Lovinity Hearts: "......oh."
The three ponies fly down to the front of the castle walls, they take a quick look around and see Neon is nowhere in sight.
Princess Luna: "Where is he?" She says feeling a bit annoyed.
Suddenly, Neon comes down from the sky and hits the ground hard making the area quake a little. He apparently jumped from the top of the castle.
NeonChaos711: "Yes, I could've just flown down like you three, but I found that to be more fun."
Shadow Storm: "...ok. Luna, please."
Luna uses her magic to open a gateway to go back to equestria. Once through there, Neon will be taken to Queen Lauren Faust for his reformation. The three ponies go through the gateway. Neon begins to go through the gateway, but stops for a second and looks back.
NeonChaos711: "I've been through a lot, but now I must put that behind me."
He takes a deep inhale and goes through. The three ponies and Neon wake to find themselves inside of some kind of cave. They all take a look around the place.
NeonChaos711: "This is equestria? It's more rocky than I thought."
Shadow Storm: "Not funny. Luna, why are we in a cave?"
Princess Luna: "I don't know, hang on a second." She tries to use her magic, but her horn just sparks and does nothing.
NeonChaos711: "It still looks a bit rocky."
Shadow Storm: "Luna, what's wrong? Why are we still in here?"
Princess Luna: "I don't know!" She tries to use her magic multiple times, but just ends up with her horn sparking and not doing anything. "Why can't I get us out of here!?"
NeonChaos711: "Calm down, this isn't something that serious, let's just find a way out." After he says that, he pulls out a sword that gets pulled down to the ground. "What the? It's magnetized!"
Lovinity Hearts: "Magnetized?"
NeonChaos711: "This cave must be magnetic, that must be what's cancelling out Luna's magic, and what's holding my sword on the ground."
Shadow Storm: "Neon, quick question, why did you pull out that sword?"
NeonChaos711: "I thought there might have been something in this cave, I was just being prepared. Now let's find a way out."
The three ponies nod in agreement. As they search for a way out of the cave, a cold wind blows and chills Luna. She stops and she begins to shiver.
Shadow Storm: "Luna, you ok?"
Princess Luna: "I-It's c-c-cold in here."
NeonChaos711: "Cold? It feels just fine to me."
Shadow Storm and Lovinity Hearts: "Me too."
Princess Luna: "Well something's giving me a chill. A-achoo!"
NeonChaos711: "It's probably nothing. Come on, let's just find a way out."
After some searching through the cave and more sneezing from Luna, the three ponies and Neon find an odd room which has some kind of shrine in it.
NeonChaos711: "What's this? A shrine?"
Shadow Storm: "Oh great! We're at the end of the cave! We gotta go back."
The ponies make their way to go back, but Neon just stands there looking at the shrine.
Shadow Storm: "Neon, let's go!"
NeonChaos711: "...something isn't right here."
Suddenly, a cold wind blows and chills the three ponies.
Lovinity Hearts: "Why is it so cold? Where did this chill come from?"
Still looking at the shrine, Neon walks closer to it. Neon: "Possibly...that?"
Shadow Storm: "That?"
Just then, a cold wind blows around the shrine and something starts to form from the cold wind. The wind starts to form an ice dragon that appears in front of the shrine.
Dragon: "Who dares come here!?"
NeonChaos711: "Well, that depends. What's this hideous abomination that stands before me?"
Dragon: "Why you!! I'll freeze your soul!"
NeonChaos711: "That's just cold."
The three ponies try to resist laughing.
Dragon: "I'll destroy you!"
NeonChaos711: "Bring it on, it's your funeral."
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