Reformation of NeonChaos711

by NeonChaos711

Rating: everyone
Tags: Adventure, Crossover, Dark, Alternate Universe
Length: 3458

The reformation of NeonChaos711, the anti-brony.

This story is about the reformation of NeonChaos711, an anti-brony who wishes to change his ways, and to do that, he needs a reformation. Being escorted to Queen Lauren Faust by 3 ponies: Shadow Storm, Princess Luna, and Lovinity Hearts, Neon will no longer be a hateful anti-brony. It could've been a simple reformation like Discords, but Neon insisted that his reformation be done by Lauren Faust herself.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-11-01 22:16:57 UTC

Part 1: Time to reform.

  Within the walls of Neon's castle, 3 ponies have arrived to take him for his reformation from an anti-brony. They are to take him to Queen Lauren Faust, the one Neon chose for his reformation. Shadow Storm, the first to know of Neon's reformation, has brought his friends Princess Luna and Lovinity Hearts to take him there.

NeonChaos711: "Well now, I suppose now is the time. The time for my reformation." He says silently while standing on the top of his castle. "I've been through a lot as an anti-brony, and now is the time, I guess." He patiently stand at the top of his castle for about 10 minutes, waiting for the three ponies to take him for his reformation.

The three ponies to escort him to his reformation finally arrive at the top of his castle.

Shadow Storm: "Neon, it's time."

NeonChaos711: "...yes, I know."

Princess Luna: "Now, just come with us. Don't try any funny business, or you'll regret it."

NeonChaos711: "I don't plan on trying any funny stuff. I was serious when I asked for this reformation, and I will see this through."

Lovinity Hearts: "Can you take us down through your castle so we can take you there? It was a PAIN going through it."

NeonChaos711: "You could've just flown up here, you didn't have to go through it."

Lovinity Hearts: "......oh."

  The three ponies fly down to the front of the castle walls, they take a quick look around and see Neon is nowhere in sight.

Princess Luna: "Where is he?" She says feeling a bit annoyed.

Suddenly, Neon comes down from the sky and hits the ground hard making the area quake a little. He apparently jumped from the top of the castle.

NeonChaos711: "Yes, I could've just flown down like you three, but I found that to be more fun."

Shadow Storm: "...ok. Luna, please."

  Luna uses her magic to open a gateway to go back to equestria. Once through there, Neon will be taken to Queen Lauren Faust for his reformation. The three ponies go through the gateway. Neon begins to go through the gateway, but stops for a second and looks back.

NeonChaos711: "I've been through a lot, but now I must put that behind me."

  He takes a deep inhale and goes through. The three ponies and Neon wake to find themselves inside of some kind of cave. They all take a look around the place.

NeonChaos711: "This is equestria? It's more rocky than I thought."

Shadow Storm: "Not funny. Luna, why are we in a cave?"

Princess Luna: "I don't know, hang on a second." She tries to use her magic, but her horn just sparks and does nothing.

NeonChaos711: "It still looks a bit rocky."

Shadow Storm: "Luna, what's wrong? Why are we still in here?"

Princess Luna: "I don't know!" She tries to use her magic multiple times, but just ends up with her horn sparking and not doing anything. "Why can't I get us out of here!?"

NeonChaos711: "Calm down, this isn't something that serious, let's just find a way out." After he says that, he pulls out a sword that gets pulled down to the ground. "What the? It's magnetized!"

Lovinity Hearts: "Magnetized?"

NeonChaos711: "This cave must be magnetic, that must be what's cancelling out Luna's magic, and what's holding my sword on the ground."

Shadow Storm: "Neon, quick question, why did you pull out that sword?"

NeonChaos711: "I thought there might have been something in this cave, I was just being prepared. Now let's find a way out."

The three ponies nod in agreement. As they search for a way out of the cave, a cold wind blows and chills Luna. She stops and she begins to shiver.

Shadow Storm: "Luna, you ok?"

Princess Luna: "I-It's c-c-cold in here."

NeonChaos711: "Cold? It feels just fine to me."

Shadow Storm and Lovinity Hearts: "Me too."

Princess Luna: "Well something's giving me a chill. A-achoo!"

NeonChaos711: "It's probably nothing. Come on, let's just find a way out."

  After some searching through the cave and more sneezing from Luna, the three ponies and Neon find an odd room which has some kind of shrine in it.

NeonChaos711: "What's this? A shrine?"

Shadow Storm: "Oh great! We're at the end of the cave! We gotta go back."

  The ponies make their way to go back, but Neon just stands there looking at the shrine.

Shadow Storm: "Neon, let's go!"

NeonChaos711: "...something isn't right here."

  Suddenly, a cold wind blows and chills the three ponies.

Lovinity Hearts: "Why is it so cold? Where did this chill come from?"

  Still looking at the shrine, Neon walks closer to it. Neon: "Possibly...that?"

Shadow Storm: "That?"

  Just then, a cold wind blows around the shrine and something starts to form from the cold wind. The wind starts to form an ice dragon that appears in front of the shrine.

Dragon: "Who dares come here!?"

NeonChaos711: "Well, that depends. What's this hideous abomination that stands before me?"

Dragon: "Why you!! I'll freeze your soul!"

NeonChaos711: "That's just cold."

  The three ponies try to resist laughing.

Dragon: "I'll destroy you!"

NeonChaos711: "Bring it on, it's your funeral."

Part 2: Out of the dark, and into equestria.

Dragon: "I'll destroy you!"

NeonChaos711: "Bring it on, it's your funeral."

  The ice dragon creates a strong blizzard that blows through the room nearly freezing the three ponies, but Neon appears to be unaffected.

Dragon: "Why won't you freeze!?"

  The dragon throws a icicle at Neon, it manages to pierce through his body, but Neon just pulls it out and breaks it, then the hole left by the icicle repairs itself in a second.

NeonChaos711: "My body just doesn't freeze. I think I'll just go anti-climactic for this."

  Neon quickly starts making signs with his hands. Dragon: "What the...?" Shadow Storm: "What's he doing?"

NeonChaos711: "Fire Style: Blue Flame Blitz!" A blue ball of flame forms around Neon's hand and he throws it at the dragon. The blue ball of flame explodes upon contact with the dragon, causing the dragon to melt. The dragon screams in pain as it dies.

Dragon: "Why is it that easy to kill me!?" The dragon says just before turning into a puddle of water.

  As the dragon dies, the cold winds and the magnetic field stop.

Lovinity Hearts: "Wow, that was anti-climactic."

NeonChaos711: "Told you."

Princess Luna: "Hey, the magnetic field is gone. I can use my magic again."

NeonChaos711: "Good for you, now can you get us out of here?"

Princess Luna: "Don't get pushy." She says felling a little agitated.

NeonChaos711: "Sorry."

Shadow Storm: "Please Luna, just get us out of here."

  Luna uses her magic to open another gateway. Hopefully this one will take them to equestria. The three ponies and Neon step through the gateway. As they step out on the other side of the gateway, they look around and apparently they're in the middle of nowhere.

Lovinity Hearts: "Well, did we make it?"

NeonChaos711: "I don't know, can I break the fourth wall like this?" He pulls out a hammer, throws it at the sun, and breaks it putting everywhere into darkness.

Shadow Storm: "...why did you just do that?"

NeonChaos711: "I wanted to break the fourth wall."

Princess Luna: "You broke the sun!"

NeonChaos711: "Your point?"

Princess Luna: "Grrr..." She punches something in the dark hard.

Lovinity Hearts: "Ow! What hit me?"

Princess Luna: "Whoops! Sorry, I was trying to hit Neon." She hits something else.

Shadow Storm: "Ow! I'm not Neon!"

Princess Luna: "Sorry. Neon, come over here so I can hit you!"

NeonChaos711: He thinks to himself. (Does she really think I'm going to do that? You really shouldn't say that out loud.)

Shadow Storm: "Just try again Luna."

Princess Luna: "Ugh, fine."

NeonChaos711: He thinks to himself. (What's with Luna? She seems agitated. It's like she's having her period or something.)

  Luna tries again, and they appear in a new place.

NeonChaos711: "Are we in equestria now, or did you get it wrong again?"

Princess Luna: "SHUT UP!"

NeonChaos711: (Yep, she's having her period.) "Well, what's something that shows we're in equestria?"

  A couple random ponies walk by. Ponies: "Aaauugghh, it's Nightmare Moon!" The random ponies run away.

Shadow, Luna, and Lovinity: Yup, we're here.

NeonChaos711: "Finally! Now let's find Lauren."

Part 3: In search of Faust.

NeonChaos711: (Why was the last part so short? Yes, I broke the fourth wall again. If you don't complain that Pinkie Pie does it, don't complain that I do.)

Shadow Storm: "Now, where should we start our search?"

Princess Luna: "Hmm, Lauren does tend to be in different locations very often. It could be hard to find her. You gave us quite the challenge Neon."

  Neon isn't even paying attention, he's just staring at an ant.

Lovinity Hearts: "Hey, are you even paying attention?"

NeonChaos711: "Did someone say something?"

Princess Luna: "Ugh!"

  Two royal guards come walking up to the three ponies and Neon.

Royal Guard 1: "NeonChaos711?"

NeonChaos711: "Yes, that's me. Is there something you want?"

Royal Guard 2: "You're coming with us."

Shadow Storm: "Huh?"

NeonChaos711: "I'm guessing you're going to take me to Lauren?"

Royal Guard 1: "No NeonChaos711, your going to prison."

NeonChaos711: "Prison!? What for? I just arrived here for my reformation."

Royal Guard 2: "Suuure you are. We got word of an anti-brony coming into our country, and now we're taking you away."

NeonChaos711: (Do they really think I'm going to listen to them? I came here for my reformation, why do they think I have to be sent to prison? They should know why I'm here.) "Just for the record, why do I have to be sent to prison?"

Royal Guard 1: "Because your an anti-brony, your kind only likes to cause trouble here."

NeonChaos711: "That may be true, in some way, but I'm only here to be reformed by your queen."

Royal Guard 2: "Shut it! Your coming with us, and that's final!"

Princess Luna: "Now wait just a minute, this guy is here to be reformed from being an anti-brony. Don't interfere."

NeonChaos711 "I don't need anyone to fight my battles Luna. I'll take care of these two."

Royal Guard 1: "YOU will take care of us?"

Royal Guard 2: "What a laugh!"

  Both guards start laughing. Neon closes his eyes for a second, and then reopens them revealing a sharingan. He uses the sharingan and stares at both the guards. The guards finally stop laughing long enough to see what's staring at them.

Guards 1 and 2: "W-what the...?"

NeonChaos711: "Fear the tsukuyomi."

Guards 1 and 2: "The wha..."

The guards get cut off before they can finish their sentence. In a flash, the world around the guards starts to become distorted, and before they realize it, they find themselves hung up on a wooden board. Trying to struggle free, the guards look in front of them and see Neon holding a sword.

NeonChaos711: "The tsukuyomi is mine to command." Multiple NeonChaos711s appear all around. "I'll keep cutting you like this for the next 72 hours."

  Neon cuts the guards with his sword, then for the next 72 hours, Neon and all of his clones slice the guards with their swords. Then, In a second, the guards find themselves back in reality. What was thought to be hours was actually mere seconds. The guards collapse from pain. Neon stops using the sharingan.

NeonChaos711: "Too easy."

Shadow Storm: "What just happened?"

NeonChaos711: "I'll never tell."

Lovinity Hearts: "Now can we try looking for Queen Faust now?"

NeonChaos711: (That's right. We haven't found anything that could help us locate Lauren. All we've done so far is have our time wasted by these guards. Wait a minute, what's that?)

  Neon goes up to the two unconscious guards and starts to look through the stuff the guards were carrying.

Shadow Storm: "What are you doing!?"

Princess Luna: "It's not enough you made them pass out, now you've got to loot their unconscious bodies?"

  Neon pulls out a scroll and reads a section out loud. "Queen Lauren Faust is expected to be at Canterlot at 2:30 this day."

NeonChaos711: "Well that's convenient."

Shadow Storm: "Convenient? That's perfect! Lovinity, what time is it now?"

NeonChaos711: "Half past noon."

Princess Luna: "Let her look."

  Lovinity look's at the clock.

Lovinity Hearts: "Half past noon."

  Before Neon could say anything, Luna quickly says: Don't say it!

NeonChaos711: (What is it with everyone that a guy can't say something funny every now and again?)

Shadow Storm: "Let's just take Neon to Canterlot."

Princess Luna: "Fine."

Part 4: Faust found, let the reformation begin!

  After arriving in Canterlot about one hour after finding the note, the three ponies and Neon wait patiently for Queen Faust to arrive.

NeonChaos711: (Those guards were just annoying. Why didn't they know that I'm here for the reformation? Were they not informed about this? I'm pretty sure Celestia should've informed her own guards about this. Unless, she thinks I'm just trying to get to Faust to hurt her.)

Shadow Storm: "Neon."

NeonChaos711: (Why doesn't anyone believe that I just want to change my ways?)

Lovinity Hearts: "Yoo-hoo, you there Neon?"

NeonChaos711: (I just want to change, is that so wrong? But I guess bronies and anti-bronies have had their differences.)

Princess Luna (In her royal canterlot voice): "NeonChaos711, WHY ART THOU JUST STANDING THERE LIKE A STATUE AND STARING OFF INTO SPACE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"

NeonChaos711: "Huh, oh sorry, I must of dozed off."

Shadow Storm: "Well please, pay more attention, it's almost time for Queen Faust to arrive."

NeonChaos711: "Right."

  The time is about 2:00, the three ponies and Neon still wait.

Lovinity Hearts: "How much longer do we have to wait?"

Shadow Storm: "Let's see, it's 2:00 now, so we got about 30 minutes left."

  Neon appears to be staring off into space again. Luna comes from behind him and hits him in the back of the head with her hoof.

NeonChaos711: "Hey, what was that for?"

Princess Luna: "You're staring into space again."

NeonChaos711: "I can't help it, I bore as easily as I get distra...ooh an ant!" He stares at an ant. Luna sighs.

Princess Luna: "You are the most complicated being I have ever met."

NeonChaos711: "I know."

Shadow Storm: "It's almost time. Neon, we should get you to canterlot castle."

  By the time the three ponies and Neon reach canterlot castle, the clock strikes 2:30 and the Queen appears at the castle.

Lauren Faust: "Well, it certainly has been a while since I was last here."

Princess Luna: "Mother!" Luna runs up and hugs Lauren.

Lauren Faust: "Luna! It's so great to see you again!" Lauren hugs Luna. "Say, where's that anti-brony I'm supposed to reform?"

Shadow Storm: "He's right here, your majesty."

  Shadow Storm and Lovinity Hearts bring Neon up to Lauren.

Lauren Faust: "So you're the one I'm supposed to reform? Well, it's nice to meet you." She holds out her hoof.

NeonChaos711: "Nice to finally meet you too." He shakes her hoof.

Lauren Faust: "You three are finished for now, thank you for your cooperation."

Lovinity Hearts: "Your welcome!"

Shadow Storm: "No problem."

Princess Luna: "Anything for you, mother."

  The three ponies take their leave, leaving Neon alone with Lauren.

Lauren Faust: "Well, are you ready for your reformation now?"

NeonChaos711: "Ready as I'll ever be, might as well get it over with."

Lauren Faust: "Before we begin, I need to know what I'm working with." She uses her magic to bring a life-size pony doll into the room. "I want you to show me what you normally do when you see a pony."

NeonChaos711: "Do you want me to do what I would do before I wanted to be reformed?"

Lauren Faust: "Yes."

NeonChaos711: "Alright, but you won't like it."

  Neon cracks his knuckles, lets out a growl, and charges at the doll. Within seconds, Neon starts to brutally attack the doll. Lauren stands there in shock from the horrifying display in front of her. The brutal attacking of the doll is a horrible sight, one that cannot be expressed in words, a truly horrifying experience would be the closest thing that can be expressed through words alone. After a few minutes of complete brutal attacking, Neon takes the doll and swallows it, whole.

NeonChaos711: "Got what you needed?"

Lauren Faust: ".........I've got quite the challenge ahead of me."

Part 5: I'm not that easy to reform, or am I?

  After seeing how much of a challenge she was given, Lauren takes Neon to an empty field to begin reforming him.

Lauren Faust: "Alright, let us begin with your reforming."

NeonChaos711: "Why did we have to come to this open field for my reformation?"

Lauren Faust: "I figured if you are in a peaceful environment, it should be a little easier to work with you."

NeonChaos711: "This field is quite nice. I am willing to cooperate with you, so long as nothing sets me off."

Lauren Faust: "Sets you off?"

NeonChaos711: "Yeah, I'm willing to work with you, but if something manages to affect me in my mind, such as a horrible image, I go berserk until I completely destroy the source of that image."

Lauren Faust: "Oh my, well you won't have to worry about that, we're in a nice, calm, peaceful place. There's nothing here that could possibly set you off."

NeonChaos711: "Yeah, your right. So, how should we begin my reformation?"

Lauren Faust: "Hmm, I suppose we should start by helping you control your anger towards ponies."

NeonChaos711: "I only attacked that doll because you wanted me to."

Lauren Faust: "I know, but this is to make sure your anger doesn't come back. By helping control your anger towards ponies, you won't be tempted to hate them. Let's try this first."

  Lauren pulls out a blank piece of paper and starts drawing something on it. It is a drawing of Pinkie Pie.

Lauren Faust: "Do you know who this is?"

NeonChaos711: "Pinkie Pie."

Lauren Faust: "Good."

  Lauren uses her magic to bring Pinkie Pie to her and Neon.

Pinkie Pie: "What the...? Oh, Queen Faust!" Pinkie gives a bow. "What do you need?"

Lauren Faust: "I just need you to act like Pinkie Pie around this fellow." She points to Neon.

Pinkie Pie: "Okey Dokey Lokey!" She hops towards Neon and gives a big smile. "Hello, I'm Pinkie Pie!"

NeonChaos711: "Hello."

Pinkie Pie: "Let me tell you about myself. Ahem, my name is Pinkie Diane Pie, although I told the cakes that my name was Pinkie Responsible Pie, my real middle name is Diane, what's your middle name? *she starts speeding up* Is it something like Jones or Michael? Ooh,orisitsomethingfunnylikeMarian? Thatwouldjustbesofunnyand...

  Several hundred hours later.

Pinkie Pie: "...and that's how equestria was made."

  Neon just stands there asleep. Lauren begins to wake up and removes the soundproof headphones she was wearing.

Lauren Faust: "*Yawn*. Ok Pinkie, you can go home now."

Pinkie Pie: "Yay!"

  Lauren sends Pinkie home with her magic. Neon begins to wake up.

NeonChaos711: "Is it over?"

Lauren Faust: "Yes, and you've done well listening to Pinkie talk for so long without going mad. Now that that's been taken care of, let's move on to the next step. Let's how you can assist other ponies."

  She uses her magic to take them to Ponyville and she starts to look around.

NeonChaos711: "What are you looking for?

Lauren Faust: "Wait for it."

  Just then, a pony carrying bags with a lot of items trips and falls over, and all the stuff falls out of the bags.

Pony: "Oh no!"

Lauren Faust: "There it is. Now I want you to help that pony out." Just then...

Pony: "Thank you!"

NeonChaos711: "No problem."

Lauren Faust: "What...how...when...?"

NeonChaos711: "I already helped pick all that stuff up after you said: There it is."

Lauren Faust: "Hmm, I'm impressed. It's almost as if you've already been through this kind of thing."

NeonChaos711: "Yet, I have not."

  Lauren uses her magic to take them back to the field.

Lauren Faust: "You've passed the first two tests quite well, now it's time for your last test."

NeonChaos711: "...and the last test is?"

  Lauren quickly pulls out another blank piece of paper and quickly draws something on it.

NeonChaos711: "What are you drawing now?"

Lauren Faust: "A little...something for your final test."

  She starts using her magic on the drawing, brining it to life. The drawing coming to life is King Sombra.

NeonChaos711: "Sombra?"

Lauren Faust: "Yup, your final test is to defeat Sombra."

NeonChaos711: "Heh, you call that a challenge?"

Lauren Faust: "Let's see if you can do it."

NeonChaos711: "Well alright then!"