Fallen

by doctormuffin

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Tragedy, Dark, Sad
Length: 602

A story of two OPs and King Sombra

A honest pony who was never jealous of anypony, except his brother. Bright Dagger, a brave solider in Celestia's army was a high ranking solider. Dagger's brother Moon Sword, is jealous of his older brother. Sword hears a voice that tells him that Dagger is going to be the King one day, Sword is pursued enough to kill his brother in order to take his place. But Sword makes a mistake and will never be able to fix his mistake.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-10-26 03:57:54 UTC

Hello

As he fell, I stood there holding the blood-covered dagger. I.. the murder turned and faced Celestia herself. The Great Ruler of Equestria stared at me as she clapped her hooves. Shocked, I dropped the dagger at her hooves and turned away. I... was.. a murderer.. and..

"I'm impressed, you killed your own brother." a dark voice said.

I stopped in my tracks to look at the Princess. Instead I saw a black cloud of smoke appear in front of me.

"Excellent......"

High School

Fallen

By: Dr.Muffin

Chapter 2- High School

"Okay students, get out your books we have an announcement for the new recruits at the Canterlot Castle." said Mr. Flight

All of us grabbed our books as my side of the room chatted about who was going to the Castle.

"I'm totally going there." said Thug Grenade

"The only reason why they need you there is because of your muscle." said Astro Blade

"Hey, how about Sword?" said Bright Idea

"I'm probably not going to make as a recruit anyways Bright." I replied sadly

"Why?" said Bright Idea

I sighed and took out my recruit exam. Bright Idea took it using his magic and looked at it with a shocked expression.

The other guys stopped talking and looked at my exam.

"Nice job Sword." said Bright

"How?" I asked

Bright handed me my exam and turned it upside down, instead of seeing a 66, I saw a 99%! I was going to beat my brother!

"WHOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I yelled

"Dammit!" said Thug

I stopped flying around the class and sat down to hear why Thug was angry.

"What's wrong bro?" asked Bright

Thug handed the paper to Bright and we turned the paper upside down, we saw a 36, not a 93 like Thug said his grade was.

"This can't be correct, we need to ask Mr. Flight about how he graded the notes." said Astro

Both me and Bright nodded our heads, Thug had to get in.

"Mr. Flight, how did you grade our exams?" asked Bright

Mr. Flight looked up at us and took out a chart.

"I graded two ponies' test upside down and those ponies are Thug and Moon, so Moon, Astro, Bright Idea, and those ponies who scored 85% or higher are the new recruits.

The other ponies jumped up and congratulated and comforted the new recruits and the failed students. Astro, Bright, and I walked to Thug and walked him to the café.

"Well at least Sword got in there." said Thug as we walked in the café.

"Yup." I replied

"That's all I care about." said Thug with a smile and we all laughed.

Meet the brothers

   Fallen

                                   By: Dr.Muffin

                                  Chapter 1-Meet the brothers

Dagger and I stood looking up at the castle.

"It's beautiful isn't it bro?" said Dagger

"Yes, I wish I was going with you." I said sadly

"Don't worry, you got a few more years to go." replied my brother as he nuzzled me

I sighed, even if I studied hard, it would take lots of work for me to see the Princesses everyday, but my brother on the other hoof got to go there halfway through high school.

"Okay, I'll study hard to see you there." I said

"Ha ha , I bet you Luna's moon that you have to finish high school to see me there." said Dagger

"Oh ya? I'll race you there." I said and took off flying toward the castle

"Oh no you don't." said Dagger and flew after me. Both us flew laughing towards the castle.