
Twilight of the Citadel
"Over three thousand years ago, I was a queen ruling over a vast hive, one of many across Equus. The troubles of my hive lead me to desperation and the near annihilation of my race. We were given a second chance at the gate's of the Barrier Wall of Audacia, it was also the day that the Changelings died-out and the Changed came about. But that's a story for another time…
As for me, I went on to serve our saviour. In three thousand years I have gone from being apart of her personal guard to being her personal doctor and adopted sister. This new place I call home, is a place that is ruled by the Grand-Duchess and a place which the rest of Equus knows nothing about.
However, I now fear for the future…
The bastard of Baal has forced our hand and now my home will be forced to open its hidden world to the rest of Equus, revealing not only the glories of Audacia but the horror of it's deepest darkest secrets as well as the most tragic life of my beloved Grand-Duchess.
I have spent a thousand years seeking penance for my crimes against my race, as well as in service as a knight of the Iron Aegis and another 2000 years recovering from the pain and agony caused at the hands of the Crystal Empire and the Equestrians, but what matters most to me now is the safety of my sister. The future looks bleak, but I see hope in the Twilight of the Citadel."
Sir. Dr. Chrysalis Callaicus, Knight(emeritus) CPMc(7th). Phd.
Chief Medical Officer of the 7th Medical Directorship(Citadel) and personal physician of the Grand-Duchess.
Sublime Apothecary Eternal of the Iron Aegis
This story will be a multiple perspective story, told from the from point of view of multiple characters.
This is my first story, so I would like as much criticism as possible from everyone who reads it in order to continually improve it please.
Note:
Although Twilight Sparkle is a character, she is not the reason for the title. So please don't assume so.
The most gracious thank-you to Hell00001 for all his help in proof-reading, idea bouncing and everything else.
1 Chapter:
- Prologue: Freedom of the Illusion 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC2479