your mind

by Solar Pony

Rating: everyone
Tags: Dark
Length: 1218

when you have a nightmare that you can't wake up from what do you do? listen to yourself...

when you have a nightmare that you can't wake up from what do you do? listen to yourself…

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-10-25 14:15:01 UTC

Chapter 1

Fluttershy woke to the sound her entire house shaking. she sat up completely terrified with the sudden loud noise. she breathed in taking in her surroundings that is when the realization hit her. she was alone... non of the animals were with her! the animals that usually slept in her room were gone... Including Angel bunny. she got out of bed and went downstairs as quietly as possible so if the animals were still here she would not wake them.

as she crept into the downstairs room in the darkness she could still make out that nopony was in the house. H..hello she said in a scared tone. trying to not panic went to the other side of the room to turn on the lights. as she hit the switch the lights flickered on just for a moment then shorted out and the room was in darkness again. she tried desperately to find to find something or someone but couldn't find anything the house was entirely empty.

she ran out side hoping to find at leased the chickens were still in there coop... nothing was there but a dark forest the entire area had changed from her warm cottage on the outskirts of Ponyvill to a forest to dark and damp forest covered in a thick layer of dense fog. she ran in all directions for hours on end to only find herself lost in the fog. she sat down put her hooves to her face and cried accepting her new cruel fate.

Fluttershy.... said a mares voice comeing from know where around her

looked up with a small amount of hope to see nothing. she must of bin imagining things. she looked back down and said. Somepony... anypony help me

fluttershy...

there it was again. hello fluttershy said. Where are you?

the voice went silent for a moment. Fluttershy i need you to listen to me very carefully the voice said i am going to try and help you but i need you to trust me.

okay Fluttershy said. not having much choice to the strange mares voice. who are you?

my name is not important. you are in a place where no normal pony has gone before. i can help you get back but i need you to do everything i say.

okay but where am i?

fluttershy you are in a place that you must be. you must leave. it is coming. said the voice trying not to say much. all that i can tell you right now is that you are being hunted by something that will do a lot worse than kill you.

fluttershy stood up with a look of terror on her face. w..what do i do?

you must be calm the voice said soothingly. i need you to close your eyes and think of a place you know can you do that?

i can try she said.

fluttershy shut her eyes obeying the voice being her only friend in this dark place. she thought of home and her friends. she thought of ponyville. then she felt something touch her left wing she jumped and screamed. as she looked around she saw the quiet foggy streets of ponyvill. she sighed saying it was just a dream but to her disappointment the voice spoke.

i'm sorry flutteshy but it's not over yet but you are safe for now you.

what is this place? fluttershy asked courteously.

you are in your mind non of this is real but i'm afraid you can't just wake up.

how do i get. she said. and who are you?... if you don't mind me asking that is.

i am... the voice paused for a second not actually given this much thought. i am what you would call your inner conscious but i'm afraid if you want to go home you must go through something first. and i won't lie it wont be pleasant.

what is it?

all i can say is that it will be the thing your mind can think. you haft to go by it to leave.

well umm if there is know other way?

i'm sorry fluttershy but spending the rest of your days here is not an option. and i wont be there to help you this time. are you ready?

fluttershy took in a deep breath knowing all to well that she wasn't ready. I'm ready

the world completely faded into darkness then she found herself in a field. she stood up and then she saw her friends. she was home she ran to them as they sat there not really seeing her. guys you wont believe what a dream i had an...

twilight looked at her with a looked at her with hatred in her eyes. oh what are you doing here? i thought the kicked you out of ponyville.

w...what?

hah she can't even remember the party i through for her leaving pinkie said without her usual smile on her face

allow me explain why rainbow dash said with a snarl on her face. you see fluttershy we don't need a week little pony like you as our friend. we tried to make you better than what you are now but if only it had hit us sooner. you can't change you never will and the great and all powerful elements of harmony don't need somepony as you.

the dirt under my hooves gets my respect from me said rarity.

but why? said fluttershy tears streaming down her face. as twilight levitated some saddle bags on her back.

don't ya worry fluttershy applejack said. we wont miss ya so don't be sad. it will be like ya never were here well for us that is she breaking into laughter

good by fluttershy twilight said waving as fluttershy sunk further and further into the darkness. we hope you die painfully

no i don't. please i can be better i promise. no.....

fluttershy sunk into darkness letting it take over her body. she hoped that she would never haft to see this again.

fluttershy awoke to the sound of a heart monitor slowly beeping away she opened her eyes and then.

FLUTTERSHY... pinkie shouted pulling her friend into a tight hug despite the fact she had just woken up. i was so worried about you and twilight kept getting nerves and.

pinkie!

oh yeah sorry.

fluttershy finally getting put down by the pink pony she took in her surroundings. she was surrounded by her friends.

she jumped up begging please don't kick me out of ponyville i..i can change.

sugarcube why on earth would we want you to change?

but..but fluttershy said trying to come to terms with this.

you'v been in a coma for two months fluttershy. you sit your head on your way to sweet appleacres twilight said in a concerned tone.

i was fluttershy said the realization hitting her.

they all embraced her in a hug.

darling we were so worried about you rarity said we took you to twilight as soon as possible.

after a half hour of hugging and explaining what had happened on both sides fluttershy said. guys can you promise me that you will never make me leave.

we promise they all said.

and that promise they all intended to keep.

THE END.