The Shriekers came over and then they killed many ponies as Twilight was too sad, Burt was dead, and Braeburn being stupid and

Excuse me but why is this story so terrible?

----IN REAL LIFE----

"What do you mean 'terrible', it was good, it had death, adventure, and sadness, all of my favorite traits in a story." said Dr. Torture.

"Yeah, but it's too fast with no feeling." said Di-Al.

"OH YEAH, WELL ..." started Dr. Torture. Their fight went on for quite a while.

The End!!!

Author's Note

Thank you all for commenting, liking, and helping me with this story, but think of this as a preview story, not the real deal story if you wanna call it that. I'm gonna make the real story as soon as I can and i'm gonna take all of your advice. Thank you.