The Adventures of Moon Bright

by MoonBright

The War of Fire and Ice

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Now comes some actual dialogue.

Knock. Knock. Knock
"Just a minute." Faith Flame says aloud to whomever was knocking.
"Moon," she said turning to her son, who she was home schooling. "Yeff mum?" He said looking up from his paper, the pencil in his mouth muffling his speech. "Go to your room, and read chapter 6 in your mathematics book. I'll be up after whoever is knocking has gone.

"Offay mum" he got up, pencil still in his mouth, got his paper and went upstairs and pretended to go to his bedroom.
Faith waited a minute before she walked towards the door, and opened it with a smile, only for said smile to be turned into a frown at the sight of Fire Kingdom Military officials standing at her door. "Good evening, Faith Fla-" "It was until you showed up," Faith spat out, interrupting the official holding a scroll.

"My, my, Faith Flame. Is that any way to address a superior, or an old friend?" he half-smirked. "What do you want?" She said, obviously faking a smile. "We are here to inform you that a war is about to take place between fire and ice ponies." "And?" raising an eyebrow towards him. "You are required, as a eligible fire pony and former commander, to help in the coming slaughter." the last couple words he said in a whisper.

"You know I'm retired from that job, AND I have a kid."
"Would it help to know that your father was caught on their territory and is now their prisoner?"
She gasped, putting a hoof to her mouth.
"GRANDPA?" Moon exclaimed leaning on his front hooves, and slipping down the stairs, ruining his hiding.
"Moon!" she exclaimed as she rushed over to help him up. "I thought I told you to wait upstairs until I called you." obviously annoyed that he hadn't followed her orders.
"I-I.....um.....but.......................you did" he said head hung low. "Sorry mom"
"It's okay sweetie" she said, giving him a kiss on the forehead and turned back around to the visitors at the door.
"Just give me 24 hours. M'kay?" she said in a soft voice that was clearly full of concern.
"We will wait for your arrival" he said, and his assistant used his magic to teleport them both away, leaving a burn mark on the ground where they had stood.

"Moon," "Yeah mom?" "Pack up your stuff, we're going to visit your dad" Moon rushed upstairs, happy but confused by the sudden visit to his dad while he was probably at work.


Author's Note

Fun Fact: Fire and Ice ponies were the idea of a pony from Ponysquare.com called Frost Bite. In one of her roleplays she describes how the two species are feuded against each other. Frost, if you're reading this: Why'd you leave? I'd love to roleplay some more sometime.

If you feel my story could be any better, feel free to tell me. Like the formatting, actual dialogue, or general info. I'm gonna be doing these mostly at night, where my formality and grammar are worse but I have better ideas.

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