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Rocket to the Stars(comment driven story)

by DonShine
Dave is an average man, tossed into a world of his dreams. Sounds wonderful right? Wrong. Every second is a constant terror, and all the while, someone is behind it all, deciding fate. (this is my first try on a text adventure, so please support me)

Dave is an average man.

He goes to collage, works at a boring old job, and spends his time doing boring old things. His life is pretty Stale. But his dreams, his dreams is where he truly lives. Dave dreams of worlds of wonder, and mystery. Worlds that are chalk full of adventure, and excitement. He dreams of places never seen by human eyes.

But his dreams always end, they are never real, and he is always forced to come back to this stale old life.

But what if his dreams come true?

What if the world of wonder he dreams about, aren't dreams at all? Would he find pleasure in a world meant only for him?

Or will his dreams be too real, and cause him to fear every second, and every breath?…. That, my friends, is up to fate to decide.

(this is my first take on a comment driven story. Though, I am still writing it, you are just telling Dave what to do.)

Teen
Incomplete
Human
Dark
Adventure
 

8410 words: Estimated 42 minutes to read

3 Chapters:

  1. A Stranger... 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1620
  2. ...In Stranger Lands 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    4305
  3. Sticks and Stones, May Break my Bones... 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    2485