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A broken Sun

by Twilight Best Pony
Even the smallest misunderstandings can cause the most terrible situations.

The two ponies I care for the most, my dear sister and most faithful student, have betrayed me. My most loyal guard says I'm just being paranoid, but what would he know that I don't also? I thought the nightmare was over, but now it's clear it never went away. In fact, it's only gotten stronger and more cunning, as evidenced by how it's turning all that I hold dear against me. Well, it won't succeed, and I'll do whatever it takes to make sure of that. Mark. My. Words.

Co-Written with Razalon
Edited by Razalon
Pre-read by Razalon

Teen
Complete
Sad
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Alternate Universe
 
POTDP

14519 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

6 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1 2013-11-02 17:56:04 UTC
    1680
  2. Chapter 2 2013-11-04 21:36:43 UTC
    1352
  3. Chapter 3 2013-11-10 19:35:22 UTC
    1640
  4. Chapter 4 2013-11-16 20:49:48 UTC
    2392
  5. Chapter 5 2013-11-30 17:15:27 UTC
    2634
  6. Chapter 6 2013-12-22 18:58:01 UTC
    4821