Ponyville's Correction

by lol_hard

Rating: teen
Tags: Derpy Hooves, Pinkie Pie, Twilight Sparkle, Gore, Dark, Doctor Whooves, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Spike
Length: 989

Pinkie corrects Ponyville.

Pinkie corrects Ponyville in a way that will make them SMILE!

Published 2014-08-11 16:00:04 UTC
Last updated 2014-08-11 16:00:04 UTC

Chapter Two: The First Subject

TWO
The room went dark. Twilight was slowly falling asleep and had a sharp pain on her back. It was from a sleep dart.
About an hour later she woke up. She felt some liquid fall down from her mouth. It was warm. She put her hoof on it. She looked at it. It was blood.

She got up and ran out back to the library. She looked in the mirror and saw a smile cut into her face, on her forehead by her mane she saw the word CORRECTED written with Red Marker.
Spike ran in and said ''Twilight, Princess Celesti- WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU?!??!''
''CORRECTED. YOUR NEXT.''

There was a scream and that was the end of... well... Spike... At least the normal Spike... that's when he got corrected.

Author's Note

Yeah, enjoy!

Chapter Three: The Correctional Facility

THREE

After Spike got 'corrected', he went missing, never to be seen again. Everyone seemed to forget about Pinkie Pie, until Doctor Whooves noticed Derpy was gone for a long period of time.

He thought she was delivering mail to the ponies, she was the mailmare after all. But Doctor Whooves knew that something was wrong. He decided to look for Derpy.

At last he arrived at his final destination. Sugarcube Corner.

Doctor Whooves entered Sugarcube Corner and it was pitch black. He walked up to the basement entrance as he heard Derpy's voice..
"Derpy! Please stop knocking the tools over!"
That voice sounded familiar.
Doctor Whooves realized who it was.

"Pinkie?" said Doctor Whooves confused.
"Oh. Sorry Pinkie! Want a MUFFIN?" Derpy replied to Pinkie Pie"
Derpy sounded very.... happy.
Well, she always is! But she was acting a bit too... happy.

"No thanks, Derpy. We have someone to correct." Pinkie grinned and opened the door.
"It's time... Doctor. It's time to join us." Pinkie turned towards the Doctor and lunged at him. In her hoof seemed to be an injection.
The Doctor was stabbed in the back with the needle and fell into a deep sleep.

Little did The Doctor know, he was about to enter The Correctional Facility...

Author's Note

Well that was a long chapter! Hope you liked it.

Chapter Five: Epilouge

EPILOUGE

After the correction no one saw those five ever again. They were saw last at Sugarcube Corner. It seems like some pony goes missing every day. The Canterlot Police have launched a full investigation dedicated to the Correctional Incident. They entered Sugarcube Corner and nothing seemed out of place. Or so they thought...

"P-P-Pinkie?" "Are you the-"

The Cutie Mark Crusaders aren't looking for a fight.
Could The CMCs escape The Correctional Facility?

Sequel coming soon.
Ponyvilles's Correction 2: The Cutie Marks Crusaders

Sneak Peek:
"Today The Cutie Mark Crusaders... and Button will get our cutie marks in Solving Mysteries!" announced Scootaloo
"But what exactly do we solve." said Sweetie Belle
Scootaloo pointed towards Sugarcube Corner. "The Correctional Incident" she announced..
"What's that?" asked Apple Bloom.
Well...

Chapter One: Intro

Pinkie Pie was always a nice pony, Cheerful and loud. But can sometimes go totally insane. This is how the correction happened.

Now let's find out what caused this catastrophe here in this tiny little village.

ONE

It was Early Morning in Ponyville and the sun was coming up. Twilight was awoken by Spike. Spike whispered,
''I heard a noise around the Sugarcube Corner area, I think it was a scream.''
''Really? Who do you think it was?'' replied Twilight.
''Hmm'' Spike scratched his head and began to think. ''I will go to Pinkie. She might know what to do.''

Twilight had arrived at Pinkie's and she opened the door. ''Hey Pinkie, Spike told me he heard a noi-'' Pinkie wasn't there.
''Oh well, I guess she's not here...'' Twilight was about to leave when she heard a faint voice. ''Hehehe''
''Who's there?'' exclaimed Twilight. And then there was another scream. Twilight ran but the voice was getting louder. And louder. And even more louder. Twilight was frozen. She couldn't move. She couldn't even speak.
It was Pinkie Pie. Twilight was unfrozen and looked towards her. She had a smile on her face and her eyes started to swirl into spirals.

End? No, it's only just begun...

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy!

Chapter Four: Join Us

FOUR

The Doctor woke up and was stuck to a table. He couldn't move what so ever. He was wondering what the hell was happening.

"Derpy. The scalpel" asked Pinkie.
"Yes, Pinkie." replied Derpy, handing her the Scalpel
The Doctor tried to scream but it was no use. He couldn't speak.
"Hold still, Doctor!" Pinkie joked. She put the scalpel to the left his mouth and placed it just under his lips, not touching his gums.

She pulled the scalpel left moving away from his mouth, stretching his mouth into a grinning position. She repeated this process for the other side of his mouth.

"Needles and thread, Derpy" Pinkie asked again.
"Of course, Pinkie." replied Derpy. "Yay, Doctor will join us!" she shouted.
She made an incision on the edges on his bottom lip. She then stretched his bottom lip and stitched it near to his chin.
"Derpy, send him to the... second phase" grinned Pinkie Pie.
The Doctor fell about two stories into another table with a bright light above him.

Pinkie and Derpy walked into the room and positioned The Doctor's head towards a still hypnotizing spiral.
"Now remember, Don't look down! Focus on the..." Pinkie was interrupted by Derpy.
'MUFFINS!" shouted Derpy.
"joy..." finished Pinkie.

She pressed a go button and the spiral started spinning around.
Doctor Whooves now noticed that Derpy and Pinkie had spirals in their eyes and they had a permanent grin.
"The process is complete" announced Pinkie.
"Welcome, Doctor" said Derpy.

Until Next Time...

Sequel Coming Soon. Make sure you read the Epilouge!