Chrysalis' Revenge

by UniqueSKD

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance
Length: 4786

Queen Chrysalis captures Twilight Sparkle, and exacts a rather intimate revenge upon the poor unicorn.

Having been humiliated by the faithful student of Princess Celestia herself not once, but twice, throughout their encounters, Queen Chrysalis finally gets the chance to have revenge upon the one who defeated her and the Changeling race, after her minions manage to capture Twilight Sparkle one fateful night.

And now, the helpless unicorn is going to be punished, Changeling-style.

[size=10](God, have mercy upon my soul for stooping to so low a level in my life…)[/size]

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-11-12 18:56:50 UTC

You're going to do WHAT to me?!

The world was distorted and misshaped as Twilight Sparkle began to regain her consciousness, her vision quite blurred as she slowly managed to open her eyelids, which felt heavy for some strange reason. Slowly, and luckily, the world started to take proper shape and form around her, as her vision began to correct itself, her consciousness completely returning to the purple unicorn.

The first thing she noticed was that there was a lot of luminous green lighting around her. The second thing she noticed after that, was that her room had now somehow transformed into a cave, with rocky surfaces and walls, all coated in some kind of green substance. The third thing she noticed, and the most important, was that she wasn't in her bedroom at all.

Twilight's confusion was interrupted, however, by the sudden realization that there was something thick and gelatinous covering her entire body. Whatever it was, it was also keeping her in place, as she was unable to move her body, nor her limbs. Was she in...a cocoon of some sort?

She tried to open her mouth, but only a muffling sound escaped her. Something was keeping his mouth closed shut. Whether it was the substance within which she was encased or something like a simple gag that prevented her from speaking, she didn't know.

Twilight squirmed around within her jelly-like prison, trying to get a better look at her surroundings outside of her translucent confinement. More green lighting, more stone, some craggy stalagmites over there, and a pair of sinister green eyes staring at her with malicious intent. Not much to go on...

Wait, what was that last thing?

Twilight Sparkle shuffled and found herself staring deep into the eyes of some creature outside her prison. Twilight would have screamed in fright, but her mouth was still clamped shut by the gag covering her mouth, any sound that she attempted to make came out only in a muffled tone. The thing staring at her seemed amused by her scared wriggling, and narrowed its eyes as they bobbed up and down, as though it was chuckling to itself at the expense of the helpless pony.

Twilight's struggling did nothing to better her situation. She was alone - well, not really, but she wasn't enjoying the company she had right now - and she was unable to move even a single hoof. She couldn't speak, and, now that she thought about it, her horn was not responding to her will at all. It was as though her horn was refusing to cooperate with her. She tried to cast a spell - she knew not which one she was casting, she was just trying to cast any spell that came to mind -, but her horn did no glow, with magic.

Twilight felt a surge of panic erupt through her body. She began to feel dizzy, the world blurring around her once more. She was hyperventilating. She couldn't breathe, she couldn't...

Suddenly, something sliced open the side of her prison, rupturing like a burst blood vessel. Twilight felt light-weighted for a brief moment as her body fell out of her cocoon, before meeting the cold, hard floor below. She felt something wet and cold like water fall upon her, pouring from out of the cocoon jail she was encased within only a few seconds ago.

Twilight lay there on the ground for a minute, breathing through her nose as she calmed herself down. She was free from her confinement, though how and because of who, she didn't know, nor did she care about at the moment. She was free now. Free to move her body and limbs as she willed, Twilight sighed as she rejoiced in that little luxury. Reality quickly snapped back to her, as she remembered her current predicament.

Twilight felt her strength return to her, and she picked herself from off the floor, which was now wet with a large green watery-like puddle. What was this substance, Twilight didn't know, but she remembered that something had been looking at her while she was imprisoned. She looked around the cave frantically, trying to spot where the 'thing' had gone to, but saw nothing more than stone, green light, more stone, and darkness.

''You are awake. Good.''

Twilight whipped her head around at the sound of the strangely familiar female voice. Her eyes widened at the sight of the 'thing' as it walked slowly towards her, creeping from out of the shadows. At first, it appeared to be a pony, albeit taller than herself, roughly the height of the princesses. But as the 'thing' stepped further out of the darkness, the green lights within the chamber revealed more of her features; a sleek body, with long, slender legs adorned with holes towards the hooves. A pair of gossamer wings, with little tears in their design. A pair of large, wicked eyes, and a cruel grin consisting of needle-like teeth that hissed at the pony from behind strands of ocean-bluish hair that fell down the side of her face. Her whole body was black, as such as the darkest of Luna's nights, a protective carapace that concealed her flesh underneath.

And Twilight Sparkle knew all too well the identity of this creature.

It was Queen Chrysalis.

Twilight stared hard at the leader of the Changelings, the cruel witch who had tried to invade the city of Canterlot some few moths ago, who tried to steal her brother away from his beloved Princess Cadence and was defeated by their unified love, who later returned and tried to force her to submitting to her whim, after she had kidnapped the Cutie Mark Crusaders and held them hostage, as well as commanding her forces to masquerade as the citizens of Ponyville.

Twilight's glare would have been serious overkill, if it were possible for looks alone to kill, but Chrysalis merely chuckled to herself, apparently amused by the sight of the little angry pony before her. ''You do not seem to pleased to meet me again, Twilight Sparkle.''

An annoyed grunt was her response. Chrysalis simply rolled her eyes, as Twilight stood on all fours and lowered her head, pointing her horn towards the wretched Changeling before her. Twilight closed her eyes, as she mentally began preparing an offensive spell. But her horn did not respond to her command. Twilight's expression of shock and confusion made the Queen laugh aloud, a gravelly wicked laugh which echoed throughout the stone cavern chamber, bouncing off the walls.

''Oh, poor little Twilight! Did you think I would overlook your magical prowess?,'' mocked the Changeling queen, taking a few confident strides towards the purple unicorn. ''Try as much as you please, but I made sure to cast a special little spell of my own design upon you before having you placed within that pod. Your magic is hindered, and rendered unusable so long as I am close by you to maintain the effects..'' Chrysalis leaned down to bring her face close to Twilight's, her eyes cocky and taunting. ''Though I must admit, you simply are so adorable when you're angry'', Chrysalis chuckled.

Another hard stare from the purple pony, followed by another irritated grunt.

Chrysalis only laughed harder. However, her laughter began to die away as she raised her head up, straightening her posture and assuming a regal, stoic stance. Standing at her full height, Chrysalis looked down upon Twilight, her eyes a spiteful gaze, her mouth twisted into a hissing sneer. Twilight didn't want to admit it to herself, but when the Changeling Queen wanted to appear intimidating, she could certainly pull it off without fault.

''But,'' began Chrysalis, her voice lower and darker in tone, ''I didn't task my servants with capturing you and bringing you before me for the fun of it. No, Twilight Sparkle, you are here because I want to make you pay for humiliating me. For denying my Changelings and I our rights to feed, to harvest the energies of Love so that we may avoid starvation.''

Chrysalis brought her head a little closer towards Twilight, who fell onto her haunches as her eyes met with her captor's, which were filled with anger and fury. Her rage reflected itself through her next words, her syllables practically dripping with venom, and spoken with the coldness of an icy winter breeze. ''Oh, yes. You are going to pay, my little pony. You will pay for robbing my subjects of their feasts. You are going to pay for spoiling my plans. You are going to pay for the humiliation that I have suffered at your hooves!''. She smiled maliciously as she said, ''and I will enjoy every second of your punishment.''

Twilight was, to say the least, quite afraid now at this point. Punishment? What kind of punishment did she have in mind?

''Perhaps you wonder how I am going to make you pay?'', spoke Chrysalis, as though she had read Twilight's thoughts. ''Well, despite what you may think of me, and despite how much I would love to have it be done, execution is not something that I would have arranged for you. A quick and painless death would be far too easy, and would offer no true satisfaction.''

Twilight went quite relieved upon hearing that. Hearing that she was not going to die here made her feel a little more at ease about her situation. But if she wasn't going to be executed, then what was going to happen to her?

Chrysalis continued, as she began to walk around Twilight Sparkle, circling her like a vulture observing its prey. Twilight followed her movements, cautious of whatever the Queen might attempt to do. Though she couldn't use her magic, Twilight was not completely helpless. If need be, she could buck her captor once the opportunity presented itself, and make a break for it. After all, if Chrysalis' magic-nullifying spell only worked while she was in close proximity to her, then she only needed to put distance between herself and the wicked witch before she would be able to use a teleportation spell and escape.

''No, no, no'', Chrysalis continued, ''I would let you live, but only so that your punishment remained with you for the rest of your days, rather than out of mercy. I want your punishment to be sweet, scarring, something that you will not forget for a long, long time.'' She stopped right behind Twilight, eyeing her with a thin smile. ''And I know just what to do with you, Twilight Sparkle.''

Chrysalis brought her face close to the unicorns, her eyes half-lidded, that same thin smile beginning to widen into a large, unnerving grin. She reached out to Twilight's face with one of her holed hooves, and removed the gag from her little prisoner's mouth. Twilight drew in a taste of fresh air through her mouth, and growled in the face of the enemy standing in front of her.

''You're wasting your time if you think I'm going to give in so easily to you,'' said Twilight. ''I won't let you break me!''

Strangely, Chrysalis seemed to brighten up upon hearing this. She smiled, and approached the pony with a quickened pace. ''Excellent! Then we'll get started on your little, 'punishment'...''

And before Twilight knew what was happening, Chrysalis threw herself upon the purple unicorn, and locked her lips with Twilight's, her snake-like tongue quickly forcing its way into the stunned pony's mouth. In mere seconds, the tall Changeling's tongue was exploring the insides of Twilight's mouth, wrestling with the unicorn's own tongue for control, for dominance. Chrysalis moaned into her prisoner's mouth, as she continued to probe around, her snake-like tongue lapping against and around the sides.

Twilight Sparkle, meanwhile, was absolutely shocked at what was going on. Chrysalis was making out with her? What in the wide world of Equestria was going on?

Twilight attempted to break the kiss, but the Changeling quickly threw her hooves around the little unicorn and held her head in place. Twilight struggled, but to no avail. She soon managed to slip her forelegs between Queen Chrysalis' body and hers, and pushed with all her strength. She was able to pry the Changeling's mouth from her own, a strand of saliva connecting to both their mouths as the kiss was broken. The Queen opened her eyes and looked at her victim seductively, an aroused grin on her lips.

''What's the matter?'', asked the regal villain, smacking her lips and breaking the strand of saliva between their mouths.

''W-what, I mean, why, you, huh?'', Twilight was still dumbstruck at the thought of her nemesis entering her mouth, probing around like some perverted investigator. So unlike the Chrysalis she knew well. Or at least, the Chrysalis she THOUGHT she knew.

Chrysalis' jagged horn suddenly flared a bright green, and a magical aura surrounded and grabbed hold of Twilight's forelegs with her magic, and removed their hold against her chest. She pinned the pony's forelegs flat-out by her sides, and held them there in her magical grasp. Her hooves no longer keeping them apart, Chrysalis fell back down upon Twilight, who was starting to blush a deep red, her eyes still wide with surprise.

Queen Chrysalis just kept grinning. Her smile seemed to be one of both sexual lust, and sinister intent. When she spoke, her voice was quiet, almost a whisper, but loud enough for the pony to hear clearly her words. ''You humiliated me in our previous encounter, Twilight Sparkle, so now, I shall return the favour to you. I shall teach you a lesson in humility, one that you shall not forget for as long as you may live. Rather than take your Love, I will give you my Love, but the price of receiving that Love comes with humility. You will discover the depraved lusty creature deep inside of you, and you will release it, all for the want of sexual gratification unlike anything you'll ever feel in your life. You can try to fight it, little pony,'' Queen Chrysalis narrowed her eyes, and showed her rows of needle teeth in the form of her wicked smile, ''but you will find that my techniques are...'' Queen Chrysalis pondered over how best to finish that statement. ''...skills acquired from the field, shall I say. And I have had my share of mares before.''

Queen Chrysalis' left hoof shot down to Twilight's marehood, and began gently and ever-so-lightly massaging it. As Twilight's eyes looked close to bursting out of her head upon feeling her private area being violated by her enemy, Queen Chrysalis leaned her head forward to whisper into the pony's ear.

''And you'll break just as easily as those before you.'' Her tongue slithered out of her mouth and entered the still blushing pony's ear, who listened in shock, whilst trying to hide her slowly growing arousal, trying to keep herself from moaning as the offending hoof began to play with her clit, rubbing the inner sides with experienced motions.

''That, I promise you.''

An Unforgettable Experience (unfortunately...)

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Twilight Sparkle gasped as Chrysalis' holed hoof began to vigorously rub the insides of her private area, much harder and with more enthusiasm than before. Twilight's face began turning from purple to a bright shade of red, which did not go unnoticed by the Queen, who giggled at her embarrassed little plaything.

"Do you like being touched there, my little pony?", cooed the slender Changeling, amused by Twilight's struggling efforts to avoid yelping from having her clit touched so inappropriately.

As Chrysalis continued to rapidly stroke the folds of Twilight's clit, the unicorn squirmed and wriggled her body, trying in desperation to shake off her molester, a task that would have been easier if Chrysalis hadn't taken away her ability to utilize magic, or if she hadn't been using her own magic to keep the unicorn's forelegs pinned to the ground, preventing her from fighting back through physical means.

Although her forelegs weren't able to help her now, Twilight realized that she could still move her hind legs. She could raise one of her back legs up and kick the perverted witch right in her face. While she didn't have the kicking power of an Earth pony like AppleJack, She felt confident that one good kick would be all she needed to at least temporarily daze the Queen, giving her the time to get far enough away from her so as to be out of range of her magic-neutralization spell.

But just as Twilight managed to clear her mind of all thought alluding to her captor's cruelty, she suddenly felt her entire body freeze up, her eyes nearly popping out of their sockets, as Chrysalis pushed her hoof further into Celestia's student's pussy, sending a wave of ecstatic pleasure throughout Twilight's body. An involuntary moan followed suit.

The unicorn's mind became a battleground in that instant, a set stage for the civil war occurring between her thoughts. On one side, Twilight's thoughts reflected on how immoral this all was. She knew that what Chrysalis was doing to her was wrong, so wrong. She shouldn't be letting Chrysalis do this to her, she couldn't just give in to her cruel nemesis and simply let her have her way with her body, as if she had a right to inappropriately and physically violate the purity of her lower regions.

But on the opposing side, however, Twilight's thoughts reflected upon a deeply hidden longing, a primitive base desire for sexual gratification. What Chrysalis was doing right now was only wrong from a hypocrite's point of view, but it felt so good, like a tidal wave of pleasure in its purest and most heavenly form crashing over her, sweeping the book-smart unicorn off her hooves and carrying her to some magical destination.

Right now, Twilight's perverted thoughts were winning the battle raging within her head.

No! I, I shouldn't be thinking like this! It's wrong!, Twilight mentally told herself, as she tried to bring herself to break through her dirtied euphoria. But then Chrysalis, much to the unicorn's surprise, suddenly pulled her hoof away from Twilight's clit, which had now gotten rather wet from the incredible hoof-job.

Was this it? Was it over? Twilight allowed herself a sigh of relief, glad that the ordeal had come to an end.

Chrysalis took notice of the look of relief on the unicorn's face, and smiled deviously. Her little plaything didn't realize she was nowhere near finished yet.

She pushed Twilight's hind legs as wide apart as she could, and dove her muzzle straight into the wet folds of her clit.

The unicorn's scream echoed around the whole chamber.

Chrysalis closed her eyes as her tongue slithered deep into the pony's clit. It explored it with the same enthusiasm as when it had been exploring her mouth, feeling every little detail within, and lapping at the taste of the salty wet juices covering her folds. Chrysalis opened her eyes half-way when she began hearing Twilight groaning blissfully. Peeking upwards, while keeping her tongue firmly inside the pony's snooch, she mentally chuckled to herself as she noticed the even deeper red blush covering her cheeks, as she tried futilely to fight the pleasure she was experiencing.

Losing control over her own body, Twilight began pressing her hips upwards just a little against each stroke of Chrysalis' tongue. With each lick of her tongue, Twilight felt another shiver run up her spine, and a tingling sensation erupting throughout her very being, like a shockwave of pent-up lust and carnal desires.

I, I shouldn't...I mean, I can't...But...I don't...want...

Oh, who was Twilight trying to fool other than herself? No matter how wrong and immoral she tried to make it seem, what Chrysalis was doing to her felt absolutely amazing. Each playful little stroke of her tongue against her delicate treasure was  bliss enough, but then she would occasionally stop just to suck at her folds, and that resulted in elevating her to a level of euphoric satisfaction she thought only ever existed in the cheesy romantic novels lined upon the shelves back in her library. To read about such a subject was one thing, but to actually experience first-hoof was a completely different thing altogether.

This was something that you just couldn't describe in a book at all.

Twilight felt something building up lower down, which had made its presence known to her some point during the Queen's feasting on her pussy. Every stroke of Chrysalis' tongue had since been intensifying the build-up, and now it was reaching the point where Twilight wasn't sure she could hold it back much longer. It was becoming too much for her, and she badly wanted to let it out in one big release. If Chrysalis just kept this up for another minute...

And then, just as she felt she was close to letting it go, Chrysalis' tongue pulled out of her flower, with a wet slurping sound as it returned to the mouth of the Queen. The fantastic euphoric feeling Twilight had been enjoying suddenly faded away, along with the build-up she had been so close to letting loose. Why did Chrysalis stop?

"I see you're enjoying yourself now, yes?". Twilight's eyes looked downwards at Chrysalis. She stared back, her lips curved into the biggest smirk the unicorn had ever seen. Chrysalis raised an eyebrow, waiting for a response. ''Well?''

Slowly, Twilight nodded her head. There was no point in trying to lie, especially after her near-the-edge moaning, and the bright red blush still present on her face. She just wanted Chrysalis to hurry up and finish her off so she could experience the feeling of a release. ''Y-yes,'' stammered the little pony, ''I-I am. Please don't s-stop. Finish me. Please!''. Her tone oozed with desperation, as she begged for the Queen to be kind.

''But my dear, you are here to be punished, not to enjoy yourself'', replied Chrysalis, who gave the clit a final, slow lick before rising onto all fours again. ''That was the whole reason why I had you brought here,'' she added, smacking her lips as she savored the taste of Twilight's pussy on her tongue.

Twilight looked at the Queen curiously, not understanding what was going on here at all. She tried to stand up, but the Queen's magical hold over her forelegs was still present, keeping her firmly pinned to the floor.

The changeling took notice of this and smiled. ''Oh, don't bother trying to get up. You're a long way from the finish line, yet,'' she chuckled, rather darkly in fact.

Now Twilight was really confused. ''B-but I don't understand. You said you wanted to humiliate me. I thought that's why you were-''

Twilight was cut off by the sound of the Queen's laughter. Again, her hysterical giggling echoed around the chamber. ''Ah, Twilight Sparkle, did you think I was trying to pleasure you? What sort of punishment would THAT have been?''. The chamber echoed once more with another laughing fit.

''I don't understand what's going on. If you weren't trying to pleasure me, what was all of that about then?'', questioned the unicorn. ''You couldn't have done it so you could feed off my Love. It would have left me fatigued, and I felt fine throughout.'' Well, maybe 'fine' isn't the right way to describe how amazing it was, she thought to herself, a little daydreaming smirk on her lips.

Chrysalis turned her head and gave the little librarian a look which caused her smirk to disappear, replacing it with a nervous frown, as she motioned to the empty room around her. ''My dear, that was all just a warm-up for you. And for their amusement, of course.''

Their? ''What do you mean, 'their'? Who's 'their'?'', asked Twilight, now becoming just a little worried as to what Chrysalis was up to.

Her question was answered not by the Queen, but by the sudden sounds of chitter and chatter that began to fill the chamber. Twilight thought at first it was coming from Chrysalis, but the noise sounded more like it was being made by a crowd than an individual. Then Twilight slowly lifted her head up to look above, and gasped. Up above her on the ceiling, ten pairs of blue eyes revealed themselves from within the shadows. Another ten pairs came into view soon after, followed by thirty more, a hundred. Soon there were a thousand pairs of eyes staring down at her, and each pair seemed to have a look of impatience, as though they were growing tired of waiting for something.

Chrysalis chose that moment to speak up again, attracting the unicorn's attention. ''This whole time, my faithful servants have been with us both. They've been as eager to get their own back at you as I have been, so I decided that they would have their wish.''

Twilight's eyes widened as Chrysalis began to take a few steps back. From up above, the Changelings began baring their teeth at Twilight, some smacking their lips and others drooling as their mouths began to water up, and all of them were shaking in excitement, and chattering ever louder.

Chrysalis continued. ''My Changelings were your punishment, Twilight. I was just helping them along with their arousal, as well as softening you up for what was coming. Emphasis on 'coming'.'' Chrysalis giggled lightly at her own humor. ''They've been very well-behaved, don't you think?''. She now turned her attention to her minions, who looked to her with pleading eyes.

''And they do say that 'good things come to those who wait', after all.''

Twilight gulped, sweat now running down her face. She realized what was going to happen next. ''Oh, sweet Celestia, help me...''

Chrysalis raised one hoof slowly into the air, and a few Changelings very nearly lost control over themselves the second it left the floor. Their Queen stood there, keeping her hoof in the air, teasing with them. They had waited long enough. Waiting any longer would be torture to them, but it also made exacting their 'payback' all the more sweeter.

Chrysalis shot Twilight a quick glance. ''I hope you didn't have any plans made for this week,'' she teased, ''because it might be a while before we send you back to Ponyville.''

And at that, Chrysalis gave the signal, waving her hoof towards the unicorn. Immediately the chamber was filled with cries of lustful cheer, as thousands of Changelings dove downwards towards Twilight, who could only look on in horror as she saw that each had a large throbbing member, some of them already glistening with pre-cum.

Chrysalis sat down on her haunches and chuckled as she watched the massive sex-crazed orgy show unfold before her. Twilight's screams were quickly muffled by the the large dicks being shoved into her mouth, as well as her plot and her vagina. And as her Changelings took turns ejecting their pent-up loads  - and fight over whose turn it was next - into the poor pony, Chrysalis cheered on her brood, urging them on and praising them with compliments and the like.

''Yes! Yes, my loyal subjects!'', Queen Chrysalis cackled, as several Changelings blew their loads into - and onto - the helpless unicorn. ''Teach her the true meaning of humility! Show her what happens to those who cross the Changelings! Go, my children! Go, and seed!"

(Oh Lord, I'm such a terrible person, thought the author)

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