Hypnosis Fault: Uprising

Hey internets, Pixelmix here.

I've been thinking, and I realized that by far, the majority of feedback on this story has been negative. I can sort of understand why. It is a rather mixed-up story. Also, if you guys come in expecting the "psychological thriller" part, you won't get it yet. The story is currently in the buildup phase.

Bear in mind, though, my writing conditions. I prefer strongly to write in private, and the only laptop in my house that I'd be willing to use to write this fic is broken. I have school, and a jampacked afterschool day, so I write and post the story with my iPod. If it sucks, that's because I have to write this on a keyboard the size of my mouth.

I'm going to tell you guys a bit about what the fic will be in the future. I'll try not to spoil anything.

-There will be cameos from other fics.
-There will be blood and stabbing.
-Characters will die.
-There may also be some shooting.

When I say Grimdark, I mean it. I really don't want to kill this fic, but if it keeps getting all the dislikes and bad reviews, I will have to put it down.

MOST IMPORTANTLY: LEAVE A MOTHERF@CKING REVIEW. I can't stop screwing up if you don't tell me what I'm doing wrong! Jeez! That's common logic! God damn!!

Ok, that's all. Remember these things. Have a great one, guys. Pixelmix out.