I just wanted to go Equestria!:Another Story

by ace_attorneyfan800

Rating: teen
Tags: Slice of Life, Dark, Human, Romance, Comedy, Crossover
Length: 11530

Brad was a brony who liked Equestria Girls, but he prefered MLP as it is, until one day an event changes his whole life forever. Now he must solve puzzles, defend, prosecute, and do anything to solve the mystery of why he's here and how he'

Brad was a brony who liked Equestria Girls, but he prefered MLP as it is, until one day an event changes his whole life forever…

(Author's note: This is inspired off of the original I just wanted to go Equestria!, also Bubble But's character in the original, Lemon Lime/Pat, will be in it as well because the tital says "Another story" meaning another point of view.)

(Also Bubble But PLEASE don't kill me for doing this!)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-11-20 23:30:09 UTC

The begining...

I have to come up and say it right here...I love Equestria Girls. Good thing their's no bronies that wanna go to the Equestria Girlsverse right? I was just one of those that wanted to go to just plain old Equestria. And of course life was a bitch and sent me to the worng place, but I'm getting ahead of myself so let's start from the begining. And it all began with just one dream...

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"Wow talk about new fanfics." I said to myself as I scrolled through the list of new fan-fictions "most of them are for Equestria Girls. At this rate with all the Equestria girls fan-fictions they'll have to make an egfiction.net"

I yawned as I saw the time on my clock was 12:00 A.M.

"Damn that's how long I've been up? I need to get some rest." I said to myslef as I went to the bathroom

I did the usuall and brushed my teeth and went straight to bed in my underwear. Yes I sleep in underwear sue me. Just as I fell to sleep I had the weirdest dream; I was fighting off against Sunset Shimmer and Lemon Lime from I just wanted to go Equestria was helping me. I just knocked it off as a weired coincadence, but then it changed once the fireball in my dream hit me and I awoke in a lot of pain.

"OW WHAT THE F-AAAHHH!" I shouted as the pain continued over and over until it stopped "OK! That is officialy the second most painful thing ot ever have happened to me. First being when I jumped off of a chair thst was standing on my bed and I broke my ankles."

I shook off the pain and went straight back to sleep. What ever caused that pain I'll find out tomorrow. ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Little did I know I would never find out.

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Morning came as soon it arrived. I groaned as I realized it was monday, but when I checked my calender it said sunday.

"OK that's weired." I said to myself

Then I noticed my room, it was different.

"Double weired."

My room was different in desighn and everything. My cloth peice of a closet was now an acctual closet instead of just a sheet covering a cornor ontop of some containers, my room was widerand a lot more neater instead of it being its usuall messy self, my toy twelve gauge pump action shotgun was now a real twelve gauge and finally everything seemed to be fit for a rich man's house and I KNOW for a fact that my family is poor in money as well as the old house, but this looks entierly new.

"If this is Nanny's and Papaw's idea of a joke then it isn't funny." I stated

I went over to the closet and noticed the usuall barage of different cloths were replaced with rows and rows of Phoenix Wright's old cloths from Ace Attorney one through four instead of his new one in five.

"Well I liked the old one anyways." I stated "I mean COME ON! THREE ROWS OF CLOTHING HOW CAN HE EVEN BREATH!?"

I snapped back to reality as soon as I put the cloths on and noticed on the cabinet was an attorney's badge and a prosecutor's badge.

"Well lucky me!" I gleefully said as I picked them up and placed them on each spot where Phoenix would put his on his suit, the attorney's badge on the left and the prosecutor's badge on the right, and headed for the door. then I noticed something...

"No." I say to myself

My hand was no longer it's usual fleshy creamy color, instead it was replaced with a sky blue like color, almost cyan. I then ran into the bathroom and saw all of my skin was now this cyan color and my hair wasn't it's usual messy, beadhead, like styal, it was al spiked to the sides a lot and only a few were sticking upwards.

"Atleast my eyes are still hazel." I said in relief

As I tried to process what was going on, something then clicked into place.....

My name's Twilight Sparkle and-Pinkie Pie?

You're officially up for the covenant princess of the fall formal crown!

Whow! You OK?

Oh I'm not a monster Twilight.

You must be new here.

Did you just transfer here?

Oh. And I'd keep an eye on your dog if I were you. Wouldn't want him to be taken away.

Is that a threat?

The great and powerfull TRIIXIEEEE! Needs some peanut butter crackers.

Oooh bummer.

"HOLY CRAP I'M IN THE EQUESTRIA GIRLSVERSE!" I shouted "But the question is, is what timeline?"

"Eclipse keep it down!" a senile old woman voice shouted "Your first day of school at Canterlot High is tomorrow so don't wast your energey!"

"Aaaaand called it." I stated "Wow. I just figured out a mystery Professor Layton And The Eternal Diva styal. I feel accomplished! Now let us see if I can't solve this puzzle here." I said as i pulled out my clock and looked at the calender "Wait...daylight savings was yesterday."

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                                                       Puzzle# 001

                                                 Time misplacement

Eclipse is having a hard time setting his clock. His calender says daylight savings time begins, but it was passed daylight savings yesterday. how can Eclipse tell the time now?

(Pretend Layton represents me, I'm doing the same animation just to let you know.)

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Correct! Eclipse can view the sun for the time. People used to do it way before clocks anyhow.

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"Well that was too easy." I stated to myself "And the page going into third person for the puzzles will be a little agravating, but I'll get used to it, eventually. Well I better get some sleep it's already night. Jeez time dose fly when you're having fun."

I slipped off my cloths and my badges and got myself ready for dream land as I slipped out of caunchiousness and felt to sleep........

"Well this is the begining of something big I can tell." I stated as I finally fell asleep

The first day...

I awoke the next morning and put on the cloths I wore from yesterday as well as put on the badges and grabbed my backpack which resembled that of an actual eclipse. I finished my usual bowl of Lucky Charms and went to the bus stop where I saw probibly the one guy I thought I'd never see...

"Lemon Lime?!" I thought outloud

He looked at me with confussion and I looked at him in shock.

"How do you know my name!?" He asked

"Um psychic?" I stated

"Then tell me. Do I like this world?" He asked

"No." I answer "I like it though even though I have no idea how this all happened. First I was asleep and then I'm here! Crazy huh?"

"So what's your name?" He asked

"Eclipse, but you can just cal me Brad." I stated

"Lemon Lime, but just call me Pat."

"So how's it been for ya?" I ask "Finding Twilight's gonna be hard is it."

"Ho-"

"Don't question my logic and I won't question yours." I stated

As the bus came up I thought about meeting Flash Sentry for the first time. As me and Lemon entered I ended up sitting next to him.

"Hay Pat who's the guy next ot ya?"

I recognize that voice.

"Well, well, well, Mr.Flash Sentry I presume." I state to Flash

"Ho-"

"Don't quesquestion my logic and I won't question yours." I repeated what i said to Lemon "Name's Eclipse by the way. But just call me Brad."

"And my names just what you said erlier." Flash stated

"You know Flash I have a fealing you and me are gonna get along real-"

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I soon herd the sound of ringtine version of The Fregrence Of Dark Cofiee coming from my poket and as it turns out was my phone sending me a message from nanny to stay after school for something important.

"Uuugh." I groaned

"What's the problem?" Lemon asked

"Dang nanny wants me to stay after school for something important." I answered

"And what kind of text tone is that?" Flash asked

"It's caled The Fregrence of Dark Cofiee from Phoenix Wright:Ace Attorney:Trials And Tribulations." I answered

"You mean the third game in the Gyakuten Siaban series?" Lemon asked

"How did you know?" I asked in confussion "You don't look like an Ace Attorney fan."

"Just a hunch." Lemon stated

"Ya a hunch." I muttered

When the bus came to a stop I ran to the front door so I wouldn't get trampled by the oncoming storm of multi-colored humans coming my way. When I went in I emideatly thought to myself...

"No where is Principal Celestia's office." I thought to myself

I thought long and hard about Fluttershy and twilight's first meeting and thought back to where they frst met and ran to it to find the hallway empty.

"Whew. Now think Brad! Think!"

Third door on your left.

"I think that was it." I stated to myself as I followed the directions I remembered and their it was "OK don't let Celestia's funny desighn get to you."

As I entered the door I herd the words "Um what are you doing?" and imediatly jumped up in fright as I found myself in the ceiling now. I was pulled down and was face to face with her highness herself, Principal Celestia.

"Sorry Principal Celestia!" I stated dusting myself off

"Who are you?" she asked

"I just transfered here and my nanny told me to give you this." I stated handing a folder to her which she took

"Ah now I remember!" she stated "Welcome to Canterlot High Eclipse. according to your file you tend to get scared easily."

"Ya I don't know why though." I confess "It's just everytime soething or someone pops up behind me I just jump and almost wanna cry my head off, I get so scared."

"Don't worry I know just the pony to help." Celestia stated "Luna can you get Pinkie Pie please!"

As soon as I knew it the pink ma-er I mean pink woman came crashing through the door and she hit my foot causing me to jump up and down more than a mexican jumping bean.

"*Gasp* OH MY GOSH I AM SO SORRY!" she apologized "I REALLY, REAAAALY, NEED TO START WATCHING WHERE I'M GOING!"

"It's OK." I state as the pain wore off "Happens all the time with my bad luck."

"Which was caused by the mirror you broke last school." Celestia stated looking through my records

"I said that wasn't my fault! If only that stupid pelican hadn't attacked me I would've hit that target!" I stated

"By the way P-"

"I already know her name."

"ARE YOU PSYCHIC LIKE LEMON LIME!" she shoutes as she grabs my suit and brings me closer

"Maybey." I state remembering Lemon Lime's same predicament

"Then tell me what you know." she ordered

"Ok, you work at a bakerey and you have a pet iguana named Gummy." I state

"Wow you are psychic!" Pinkie states pulling out Gummy

I scream as soon as I see it and cram myself into the nearest locker I could find, then I heard a conversation going on.

"Pinkie put Gummy back in your backpack!" Celestia ordered "Eclipse has a massive fear of reptiles!"

"ESPECIALLY SNAKES!" I shout from the locker

"Oops I didn't kn-"

"It's alright Pinkie you didn't know." Celestia stated

"Is it gone?" I ask as I climb out of the locker

"It's gone." Celestia states

I climb out of the locker and notice Pinkie was holding a schedual.

"This my class schedul?" I ask

I noticed the list; Gym-1st piriod

Music-2nd piriod

lunch

Art-3rd

Computers-4th

'And of coarse I'm stuck with the easy classes.' I thought

"Ooh looks like you, me and pat are having luch togeather!" Pinkie stated "Now come on let's get you to gym!" Pinkie stated draging me by my backpack. I now this is a bt childish but I have to do it...Wheeeeeeee!

Fighting the sun...

"Hay Brad I've been meaning ot ask you something." Pinkie stated as she kept draging me

"Ya?"

"Why are you wearing that fake attorney's badge and fake prosecutor's badge? Their-!"

Then I stood up and turned to her.

"These are the real deal!" I shout in anger "I'm an Ace Attorney fanso I should get the right to wear them! As well as Phoenx Wright's suit!"

"You're an acctual attorney!?" Pinkie asked surprised

"And a real deal Prosecutor." I add

"OHMYGOSHICAN'TBELIEVEWEHAVEANATTORNEYFORACLASSMATEASWELLASAPROSECUT-"

"Wow! Whow! Whow! WHOW! Calm down Pinkie!" I state

'Sorry I got a little over excited." Pinkie stated

"A bit too much if you ask me." I muttered

"Come on we gotta go or you're gonna be late!" Pinkie states as she starts draging me again

Wheeeee!

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My first two classesturned out exactly how you would expect it to be, easy. Now it was lunch time and I found myself knowing the way to the lunchroom and noticed Pinkie sitting with Lemon Lime. I checked my backpack and luckaly my luckaly my lunch bag was still in good shape. As I slipped my backpack on I noticed one pony was sticking out of this crowd worser than a sore thumb.

"Sunset Shimmer." I muttered "Or more like Sunset Shithead."

"Where is this new guy!?" she asked Lemon Lime

"For the last time I-"

"Hay Sunset!" I shouted getting her attention "You looking for me."

"Ya I am!" She shouts getting into my face "Nobody beats Flash Sentry at guitar! And he's my boyfriend so I expect you to apologize!"

Well that solves the mystery of the timeline.

"No. So what if I'm better? That dosen't give you the right to make me apologize!"

"What did you just say!?" Sunset shouted grabing my suit

"You heard me!" I shouted back "And I outa kick your ass just for grabbing my suit!"

"Excusse me!" She shouted in rage throwing me down to the floor "You donot talk back to me!"

"Screw you Sunshit!" I shouted giving her the middle finger and then a rasberry or what ever it's called

'I probibly shouldn't have done that.' I thought

And I was right since I saw that everyones eyes were fixated tword me and their pupils were now the size of dots. Then...

"WHAT DID YOU CALL ME!!!" Sunset shouted with all her anger

And now it's time for plan uno...

"RUNING, RUNING, RUNING!" I shouted runing in fear as Sunset kept coming at me with a tray

"HOLD STILL SO I CAN BASH YOUR BRAINS OUT!" she shouted with anger swinging the tray

We were runing for two seconds and then I found myself cornered in a corner.

"GAH! WHERE'S SOME ACE ATTORNEY POWERS WHEN YOU NEED IT!" I shouted in fear

I turned and their she was, the big daddy manifestation of anger herself.

"GOT YOU NOW!" SHe shouted as she prepared to attack

'I have to do it! If I don't I'm dead! It might not work, but hopefully faith is on my side.' I thought

I then pumped my finger tword her and shouted with all my breat the one thing that made me famous at this school...

"OBJECTON!"

And something then literaly blew my mind. As soon as I shouted Objection the words came up in it's usuall red in the shoutbox way. I was amazed by this and noticed it knocked Sunset down, and I could've swore that I heard Apollo's objection theme from Dual Destinies, but it was playing and everybody heard it...

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"Where on earth is that music coming from?" one asked

"It's mighty catchy!" another stated

"GRAAAH! SNIPS! SNAILS! HOLD HIM DOWN!" Sunset ordered her two goons

"You've got it Sunset Shimmer!" they said as they came my way

I then pumped my arm and index finger straight and shouted...

"Hold it!"

And they froze in place.

"HOW DID HE DO THAT!" Lemon Lime shouted

"He's both a psychic and a hero!" Pinkie stated "BEST DAY EV-"

"Silence!" I shouted remembering that Simon Blackquill would shout that to calm a panik

"Graaah!" Sunset growled getting off the floor and draging the frozen in place Smips and Snails "YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS SOMEDAY!" she shouted

"AS IF!" I shouted back as she left

I then heard the music stop and everybody was....cheering?

"Way to go dude!" Normal Norman stated as hugged me and gave me a noggie

"You just did the impossible!" Pinkie stated as she came up to me

"Impossible?" I asked

"You just tood up to sunset shimmer!" Norman explained "And nobody and I mean NOBODY has ever stood up to Sunset Shimmer!

"You're a hero dude!" Pinkie stated again

"I gusse I am." I muttered

Defending myself...

It's been nearly one hour since I showed up Sunset Shimmer. And in my third period class I heard an announcement was made that I didn't like.

"Eclipse please come to the office!" Luna stated over the megaphone

"I knew that was coming." I muttered "And I've got my evidence ready." I stated as I tapped my backpack "With all the evidence that I've collect against Sunset I'm sure to win against sunset."

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As I entered I saw that another poerson was their.

"Cadence?" I ask

"How-"

"Don't question my logic and I won't question yours." I state

"Like the logic behind beating up Sunset!" Luna states

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"Wh-WHAAAAAAAT!" I shout

"Snips and Snails came and stated that you beat her up and they have photos to prove it." Celestia stated showing the photo of Sunset being thrown back by a punch "This is you in the photo is it not?"

"Yes but-"

"Then it's clear to what we need to do here, you are getting deten-"

"OBJECTION!" I shouted pointing my index finger "Wait! Please let me testify first as to why I didn't do it!"

"But you con-"

"Yes I know I confessed, but this is not a punch! I didn't even hit her!" I shouted "Please let me testify!"

"Fine." Celestia states "One testimony and that's it."

"And if I can't do it through testimony then I can do it through a puzzle." I state as she finishes

Why are they all staring at me?

"I'll explain later." I state

Witness Testimony

I Didn't Do It!

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I didn't do it I sware!

Snips and Snails must've used some kind of photoshop to do it!

They're just doing it to make it look like I'm a danger, but I'm not!

"Hmm it seems solid." Luna stated

"Time for a rebuttal then.' Cadence adds

Rebuttal

I Didn't Do It!

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I didn't do it I sware!

Snips and Snails must've used some kind of photoshop to do it!

"Hold it right their!" Luna shouts "We have an SD card right here from Snip's camera and it clearly show's you're hitting her!"

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"Objection! He could've used some time to photoshop it!" i state "And just to prove it how about a puzzle?"

"A puzzle?" Luna asked "Why a puzzle?"

"It's a crime puzzle. Basicly a contridiction with the photo it'self!" I shout

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"WHAT!?" the three principals shout

"And the contradiction is the punch! My index finger isn't pointing like it originally was, thus making it photoshoped!" I state pointing my index finger

"But how!?" Luna asked "They stated they came after lunch and it was true since it hadn't been long since their lunch started."

"That's what people like them want you to believe." I state putting my right hand in my pocket

"How do you know all this stuff?" Cadence asked

"I'm a lawyer." I state showing my Attorney's badge "And a prosecutor." then showing my prosecutor's badge "I'm always out to find the truth for people who need the truth. And to take a quote from Bobby Fullbright 'In justice we trust!"

"Well you must be because inlight of this new evidence you are free to go." Celestia states

Then I start snikering as I noticed something.

"What pretell is so funny?" Luna asked

"Celestia still has her finger on the spaeker meaning everyone heard it HAHAHA!" I then couldn't help it as I then fell on the floor laughing

Then then saw I was telling the truth and Celestia moved her finger off with a little bit of a giggle.

"I'll show myself out then." i said as I got off the floor and left the room

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As I made my way into the hallway I then saw somepony who I wish I never wanted to meet.

"Well, well, well Sunset." I state

"Eclipse." she growls "You were lucky that you found out about the photoshop, but next time you won't be so lucky!"

"We'll see about that Sunset!" I state as I walk past her

I then crammed myself  into a locker and heard a conversation going on between her and her two goons.

"I WILL break him to working for me!" Sunset stated "And I know just how to do it."

"How?" Her goons ask

"Seduction."

As soon as she stated that I ran out of the locker as fast as I could and began breathing heavy as soon as I realized I was out of breath.

"Oh crap." I state to myself "Something's telling me she looked up something about me."

A new family...and a close encounter with death...

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Today was now Tuesday, I'm not able to sleep on my own after what happened last night. I'm sleeping with Celestia and Luna and it makes me feel better when I'm around them. They told me they were gonna anounce me as their new son later after school so at the morning anouncements she told everyone to call their parents to pick them up at 3:30. And my day went as it usually did except I didn't encounter Sunset Shimmer. I gussed she was still planing her seduction plan. Anyways, after 4th period Celestia made the announcement...

"Attention everyone! Please meet up in the gym for an important announcement!"

After that I ran as fast as I could to the gym to find Celestia and Luna were waiting for me.

"Ah Eclipse! We were waiting for you." Celestia stated as I got next ot her on the stage

When I got on stage everone in the school came rushing in.

"Alright everbody I have a very great anouncement to make!" Celestia stated

"Recintly we just requiered a new member to our family." Luna added

"And that person is none other that Eclipse!" Celestia stated happily

"WHAT!" an all too fimiliar voice shouted from the crowed

"Hay I also have to make an anouncement as well." I stated "I'm no normal human. I have atleast three powers up my sleeve besides my Ace attorney and Turnabout modes."

"And those would be?" Celestia asked

"Psyche Locks, percieve, and Mood Matrix/Heart Scope." I answered "Psyche Locks alow me to see the locks in a person's heart as well as a secret, the more the locks the deeper the secret. Percieve, this allows me to see the habbits in a person's testimony and when percieved they release a secret. And the Mood Matrix/Heart Scope allows me to see the emotions of a person's testiony and bring the true one to life. The Psyche Locks' and Mood Matrix are the only ones everybody can see, the Percieve is iner conflict between mine and another's soul. And I know the perfect person to test my Psyche locks on."

"Who?"

"Luna. When 'nanny' told you about what was going on you seemed rather Ok with it dsort of, like you knew what was going on."

As soon as I finished Luna bit her bottom lip and her pupils dialated to dots. I could praticly see the sweat coming from her forehead.

"You knew about this didn't you."

"I-I-I NEVER KNEW ABOUT THIS!" she shouted

(BOOM! CLANGx4! BANG!)

"WHAT THE!?" eveybody shouted seeing the one psyche lock

'Psyche locks I knew it.' I thought

"What in the world is that thing!?" Celestia shouted

"This should be easy to break." I stated "It's only one after all."

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"Luna tell me the truth." I said as my voice echoed

"I AM TELLING THE TRUTH!" Luna shouted as her voice echoed

"No you're lying and I can prove it."

"How! You have no evidence that I knew about it!"

"If that's true then why didn't you..."

"Why didn't she what?" Celestia asked with no echo

"Take that!" I shouted sending chills down everybody's spine as it echoed "The only way I know is the fact that when 'nanny' told Celestia about it her face was sad, yours looked like one of understanding. How do you explain that?"

"I just uh simply understood what was going on."

"No. You knew about it and Celestia's expression shows it. If this was the first time you heard this then you would've had the same expression."

"...."

Luna then looked down and back to me with a happy grin.

"Wow." she states "You really are an ace attorney."

(SHATTER! RATTLEx3)

Whew. That's done.

"What the heck was that!?" Celestia shouted

"A Psyche Lock." I answered

"That's what happens when a Psyche Lock is around!?" Someone shouted

"And yes. I've known about this since you first started. It all started when you left for gym. I got a call from your nanny about you staying after school and she told me of why. I was in shock at first and then she told me why and I understood. It was when I heard her tell me to never tell you about it I understood." Luna stated

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All of a sudden I found my arm being pulled up into the ceiling along with me hiting it and stoping in the middle of the crowd.

"NOT GOOD NOT GOOD!" I shout as I realize the grip on my hand was fading

Then it's grip was gone completely.

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"OH DEAR AAAAAHHHHH!" I shouted as I fell

"SOMBODY SAVE HIM!" Celestia shouted in fear

"I've got him!" Lemon Lime shouted getting under my falling spot

As soon as I landed I landed ontop of his arms and was now safely back on the ground.

"Oh thank goodness your safe!" Celestia said huging me and then releasing me

"I just got one thing to say." I stated "WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT!"

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I didn't know it at the time. But that event, that one single event that almost costed me my life, would lead me on one of the bigest adventures I've ever seen or done since I last played Professor Layton And The Merical Mask....

Oh no...

It's been exactly one day since that event in the gym, and I've gotta say...I never expected this to happen at all.

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"Remeber students! It's eactly four more days until the fall formal and their is still time to cast your vote." Celestia stated over the intercome

Speaking of Celestia, since I'm her son now she wants me to call her mother so from now on I'll just call her mother, I'll still be calling her celestia from time to time, but it will be hard to talk about aunty Luna with calling her aunt and Luna t the same time, but I'll think of something. As I made my way inside i met the one guy which I KNOW fit's perfect with this theme...

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"Hey Eclipse!" Flash stated as he got in "How's it going son of the principal?"

"Don't call me that and second, I'm doing fine." I answer

"I've been having a rough time lately." Flash confessed "Me and Sunset broke up yesterday and I was wondering if it was Ok for me to crash at your place for a while until things can get settled?"

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Wait...what did he just say...oh crap.

"Um I gusse, I'll have to check with mother and Luna later." I stated

"Oh. Wellif you know what their answer is let me know." Flash stated as he left

This...is...BAAAAD!!!!! I'm gonna screw up the timeline if-no wait me AND Lemon Lime are gonna screw up the timeline!

"I need to get to Lemon Lime and fast!" I shouted as I ran past Flash Sentry

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I was searching for hours and then I saw the map of the school.

'This map is HUGE!' I thought

"Wait a minute." I thought outloud "This map isn't a map! It's a puzzle!"

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                                        Missleading Map

                          Eclipse is trying to find a way to look for Lemon Lime,

               but the map keeps leading him in circles with the map he took.

                 "This map is ike a maze!" If it is like a maze how can Eclipse

                           find his way around?

A)go straight foward

B)Follow the left wall

C)follow the right wall

(Pretend Layton represents me, I'm doing the same animation just to let you know.)

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C is correct! If Eclipse keeps following the right wall he should reach Lemon Lime in no time!

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"Hmm. If I keep following the right wall I should be able to find him." I thought outloud as I put the map back on the billboard

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It was two hours before I reached the end of the hallway and I found myself in the same place Twilight and Sunset met for the second time.

"Oh rats not this place." I stated to myself as I saw the electrical lights about to go out

"I knew you'd get here."

I know that voice. I turned to se Sunset was right behind me.

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"I knew my puzzle would be easy for you." Sunset stated with the coldest grin on her face

"What do you want?!" I asked keeping my gaurd up

What ever she's planning it won't work!

"Oh all I want is to tell you this." She stated as she came right next to me "You know me and Flash broke up right?"

"Of couarse."

"Well I want you to be my boyfriend."

"Forget it! Their's no way in hell you can get me to be your boyfriend!" i shouted

"Oh , but I will." Sunset stated "And when I steal the crown from Equestria you WILL have to be mine."

"Not in a million-wait how did you-"

"I might not be part of Equestria, but I know what gose on."

"Well I won't let you!"

"Oh, but you have too! If you even TRY to stop me you'll upset the balance of time."

"Grrr! You have me their."

"If I were you. I'd get lemon Lime ready to be zombified as well as you."

"Who knows." I stated "We might just be imune!"

"Like you said who knows. Not you." Sunset said as she left

"She's right." I stated to myself "Who knows if I'm imune or not!? Who knows if Lemon Lime is imune! The only way this could possibly get any worser than it already is, is for Sunset to make a love potion that could get Twilight on her side!"

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I didn't know it then, but somebody was listening in on my monolouge and they put a new plan into action. But what really started it, is what happened when i found out  yesterday...

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By the time I got down to the first floor it was already lunch time and I rushed to the lunchroom as quickly as a lightning bolt and sat down with Pat/Lemon Lime.

"Hay Pat how's it going?" I asked

"Ah alright. All incredibly wiered things concidered."

"What kindf of weired?"

"You don't wanna know."

"HAAAAY GUYS!"

Well if it isn't the only pony with a voice would fit with Detective Gumshoe's theme...

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"Hay Pinkie." Pat said as he ate from his bowl of fruit

"Hay Eclipse how's it going?" Pinkie asked

"Eh good." I stated "How's it going with the rest of your friends like Fluttershy?" I asked

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Um is she glaring angerly at me?

"I don't talk to her anymore. Not after what she did!"

My pupils then dialated to dots as I put another spoon full of fruit into my mouth and spat it out into the bowl.

"WHAAAAAT!?" I shouted

"She said she wanted a big party, but when I got their we started fighting!"

"Huh." Pat said as he put another spoon full into his mouth

"Uuhhh Pinkie could you save our seats or a minute we need to talk." I stated as I grabbed Pat off of the chair and dragged him out

"Okie Dokie Lokie!" she said as the door closed

"What the heck dude!" Pat shouted at me

"Dude we have a MAJOR problem here!"

"Uh what problem?" Pat asked

"The movie's plotline is starting to come togeather! If we don't make sure the time line gose correctly we are done for!"

"Wait..movie as in the entierty of the movie?" Pat asked

"YES!" I shouted in fear "AND IF WE DON'T MAKE SURE THE TIME LINE IS CORRECT A TIME PARADOX WILL HAPPEN!"

"And just where do we begin? I havn't even watched the movie!" Pat confessed

"We start by trying ot postpone the Fall Formal for another week." I stated

Protecting the timeline...sorta...

"ARE YOU SURE A BOMB IS A GOOD IDEA!?" Pat shouted as I placed the HH-3000 bomb in the announcers stand

"Trust me pat I know what I'm doing." I stated as I pulled out the remote

"I'm not sure about this." Pat stated

"Trust me lemon Lime. You're in good hooves."

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It was the next morning and everyone was getting everything ready for The Fall Formal, when I went up to the announcer's stal and pretended to find the bomb.

"AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!" I faked screamed

"What is it?" Celestia asked

"THEIR'S A BOMB UP HERE!" i said as I pulled it out from it's hiding place

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"GAH! PUT THAT DOWN NOW!" Celestia ordered

"NO! EVECUATE THE STUDENTS I CAN DISARM IT!" I shouted "TRUST ME!"

As celestia and the rest of the school evactuated the building I noticed something...

"Oh no. Where is that remote!"

"Looking for this!"

I looked down and saw Sunset had the remote.

"SUNSET DONOT PRESS THAT BUTTON!" I shouted in fear

"Too late." Sunset stated as she ran out the door and pressed it

"Oh that bitch." I said as I saw the bomb's counter going down "GAAH! ONLY TEN SECONDS LEFT!" I shouted as I got out of the announcer's table

I tried to run away, but I kept slipping over and over due to the slippery streamers, then I heard it go off.

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                                                         Principal Celestia

I was paceing for seconds hopeing that Eclipse could get the bomb deactivated when all of a sudden Sunset came out.

"Sunset where's Eclipse!?" I asked

"I dn't know! I didn't see him!"

Then I saw an explosion, and my heart almost stopped.

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"ECLIPSE!" I shouted runing back into the school

"Wait sister it's too dangerous!" Luna shouted back at me

I payed no attention though as I kept runing tword the gym

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As soon as I saw the explosion I saw rubble coming down ontop of me, one I think crushed my spine. I felt dizzy, like I wanted to go to sleep, but I didn't. I tired ot climb out, but it was rubble after rubble and then I yelled as loud as I could yto get somebody's attention....

"HEEEEELLLLLLP!"

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                                                        Principal Celestia

"HEEEEELLLLLLP!"

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I recognized that voice.

"Eclipse I'm coming!" I shouted as I entered the gym

"HEEEEELLLLLLP!"

I heard the sound coming from the moving rubble, I went over and got it out of the way to reveal a weak Eclipse. I pulled him out and dragged him out to the front lawn of the building where I heard gasps.

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I heard gasps as I was being dragged, my vision was blurred, but I could tell that some of the students, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Sunset Shimmer, were circled around me with worried expressions on their faces.

Thanks to my percieve I could tell Sunset WAS feeling sorry for even pressing the timer in the first place. I was put down infront of the horse staue and Sunset placed her hand over my forehead and was she...crying?

"I-I'm so sorry." she whispered in my ear "I didn't think you would make it in time."

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Why?! Why did I press that switch!? He could be dead now because of me. Oh I should've know this would've happened.

"I'm so so sorry." I stated into Eclipse's ear

I then noticed his eyes were closing, I felt his pulse then....

"HE'S LOSING VITALS!" I shouted

"Call 911 right now!" Celestia ordered Luna

"Right on it!" Luna stated pulling out her cell phone and dialing 911

Why?! Why did this have to happen!?

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                                                                Eclipse

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It's been nearly two weeks snce I was hospitalized. I still remember it, the bomb, Pat was right, it was a stupid idea. The doctors had recintly told me yesterday that my bones were back to it's usuall shape and that I'd be going home agsin in two more days. I also heard that the Fall formal was postponed for three weeks, this week is the last, well atleast I protected the timeline...sorta.

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I didn't know it at the time. But a question I've been wanting answered ever since it happened on the day I was announced as Celestia's son was soon gonna be answered.........But it wasn't what I expected at all............

Well...that escelated quickly...

It's been three days since I was out of the hospital and the gym was back to normal, mening time can now go back to normal...hopefully. I went to my locker to get my stuff for first period, when all of a sudden when I opened it...

"Uuuugh. Another puzzle? Jeez I'm not Professor Layton so stop throwing these puzzles on me! But then again I could've gotten rusty over the years so I gusse it couldn't hurt."

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                                                       Puzzle# 003

                                                         Location

                         Eclipse has discovered a map that tells of a location.

                         However it only tells in step form.

                         Take 20 steps foward, 30 steps left, adn finally 2 right

                         Where on the map will he land if follows the steps?

                         a)Janitor's closet

                         b)More lockers

                         c)Vice Principal Luna's office

(Pretend Layton represents me, I'm doing the same animation just to let you know.)

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A is the correct answer!

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"Hmmm. I don't know why it leads me to the janitor's closet, but I'll know soon why."

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It took me two minutes to get to the janitor's closet, but I eventually made it.

"Wait...that door is never open until the janitor gets here. Hmm."

I went in completely unaware of what would happen to me. But I didn't care, afterall, I just had a close expeirence with death at the hands of a HH-3000 bomb! Anyways, when I went in I heard it shut behind me and a click, like a lock being locked.

"The good thing about janitor closets are the facts that they use a different lock, and they're good for..."

The lights then came on to reveal a naked Sunset Shimmer.

"Sex." she finished

"GAH! PUT SOME CLOTHS ON!" I shouted covering my eyes

Sunset then pulled my arm, that was covering my eyes, down and I was met face to face with her eyes.

"Why fight it?" she asked in a seductive way

"Never in a million years would I lose my virginity to you!" I stated

"Then let me take it away." Sunset stated as he held my arms down and removed my pants

'ESCAPE ESCAPE!' I shouted in my mind as she removed my underwear 'GOTTA ESCA-oooooh.'

"Ooooh. That feels so good." I moaned in pleasure

"I knew you'd break." Sunset muttered to where I heard it

Then my body felt numb as I passed out in pure pleasure. I didn't know it then, but Sunset laied me on my back and proceded to ride my newly grown erection and when I woke up, her vagina was pounding my dick. It was over, my virginity was gone, lost to a power crazy woman trying ot take over Equestria, I felt aweful durning this and my sad expression showed it.

"Oh? Sad that you lost your virginity to me!" she stated in an evil way

I continued to moan in pure pleasure as she continued to pound my dick, I felt so weak, so helpless, and then...

"I'm gonna make you get me pregnant so you'll HAVE to be with me!" Sunset shouted laughing evily as her thrusts on my dick got faster and faster

I couldn't hold it anymore. I was about to orgazam and Sunset knew, which was probably why she was getting faster in her thrust.

"I'M GOING TO CUM!" I shout

I then released my seed which most likely reached her womb to the brim, I panted very fast after that and Sunset did too. I felt her place a kiss on my lips and then my forehead as my dick shrank back down to size. I saw her put her cloths on and as she left me to fall asleep with my dick covered up she stated "See you tomorrow boyfriend. And just to let you know, I was the one who made you almost have that instant death when you were anounced as Celestia's son." I then saw her leave and locked the door, my vision the got blured and I found myself in a deep sleep.

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I didn't know it at the time, but she recorded the whole thing, audio and all, and when she released it to the internet........................................my life never was the same again.............................................................

And after all that, this is where it ends.

It's been nearly three days since I found out about the video, I've never been able to live with myself after I watched it, everybody at school watched it and when they saw me they all glared angrey looks at me, like as if they were ashamed of me. I'd be ashamed too if I found out that my savior went and had sex with his own enemy. I started hanging out with Sunset more after that. And let me tell you.......I now know why people fear her, I fear her more now than when I saw her deamon form from putting on the crown at the end of the movie. She was always ordering me around and telling me what to do and what not to do, it was driving me crazy. Then one day, the biggest event of my life happened.....

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It was right after first period, I had just gotten my stuff for second out of the locker when all of a sudden...

"Whow! You OK?"

"Wait...I know that line." I muttered to myself like Ray in Ghostbuster the Video Game

I looked over to see Flash was helping up....

"TWILIGHT!?" I shouted to myslef in the quietest voice I could muster

I immediatly ran away from the scene closing my locker and heading straight for the bathroom. I turned right and found myself in the area where Twilight found Sunset and Fluttershy.

"I knew the events of the movie were falling into place." I muttered to myself "And know I just have to-"

"Oh their you are honey!"

"Crap."

I looked over to see Sunset was interogating Fluttershy. And then I got pissed off...

"Honey are you trying ot interogate her?" I asked confussed

"Yes what dose it look like I'm doing!"

"That's not how you do it!" I shouted as I pulled Sunset out of the way "This is how you do it! Fluttershy, sorry to ask, but can you please give a testimony as to what happened to the crown?" I asked

"Um I'll try." She stated

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                                    - What Happened To The Crown-

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Well I was busy passing out fliers to the local school kids

by the statue this morning.

When I got down on my butt to cry it slammed right into my fore head.

I don't know how it ended their. It's just like it came from nowhere!

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"Hmm."

"You see anything honey?" Sunset whispered in my ear

"I don't know. mabey a rebutall will help. Or maybey a little bit of percieving."

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                                    - What Happened To The Crown-

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Well I was busy passing out fliers to the local school kids

by the statue this morning.

When I got down on my but to cry it slammed right into my fore head.

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When..I..got..down..on...my..but....to..cry...it...slammed..right...into.....my...fore..head.

"Fluttershy, when you got to the h e the right side of your head twitched a little."

"S-s-s-s-s-so?"

"So it means you're hiding something."

"I am."

My percieve them wore off and my vision was back to normal.

"It hit me on the side of the head and I turned it into Celestia."

"YOU WHAT!" Sunset shouted as she got into Fluttershy's face pulling me out of the way

"Hay leave her alone!"

"I turned and saw Twilight and I smiled for once in all my days here at Canterlot High and at the same time cried tears of joy.

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"My hero." I muttered to myself

"You can't do that to her!"

Sunset then took one good look at her...

"You must be new here." Sunset stated as she flicked her nose up "I can do what ever I want when ever I want." she stated coming tword me

"Oh! Um right!" I stated as I grabbed her arm "Listen I'm gonna follow that new girl, their's something suspicious about her."

I lied

"Good thinking." Sunset whisspered in my ear as I let go of her and she left

"Who the hay is that guy?" Twilight asked Fluttershy

"That's Eclipse. He used to be the school hero until Sunset Shimmer uploaded a video of them having sex togeather, nobody can trust him due to that, it ruined his reputation so badly, I still forgive him though. Oh sometimes I wonder why people can't just give others a second chance like me." Fluttershy stated "Ooh if he wasn't hanging around with Sunset most of the time I could help him start a new."

"You'd do that for me?" I asked as I herd the conversation

"I would." Fluttershy answered handing out her hand "Just take my hand and you can start a new."

I thought about this, Sunset would kill me if she found out, but hell if I care what she dose to me. I reached out and held her hand, in which she gripped it.

"Where do I start." I asked

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"Are you sure about this?" I asked

"I'm sure." Fluttershy stated

As we walked out of the bathroom I was, if you were near by, in fact had a pice of hair poking out from my forehead of hair, infact it all looked like Phoenix Wright's hair, make sense if you were an awesome cosplayer like me and wears nothing , but his cloths, infact my suit had completely changed.

(My OC looks like this now if you wanna know, just pretend Phoenix represents me:

Now I looked like Phoenix from Dual Destinies, I hated his voice, but I loved his new desighn.

"Now what?" i asked

"Now? Now it's time for lunch." Fluttershy stated

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It was around Fluttershy's lunch time when I came out of hiding and greeted her.

"Now it's time to show the schol the new you." Fluttershy stated

I nodded as I put the hood and cloak over me, and we went in, Fluttershy was getting a little bit of akward stares, but then she turned around and I did to...

"Fellow students."Fluttershy announced "We all know about the event that happened with Sunset and Eclipse. But now he's changed and so I introduce THE NEW ECLIPSE!"

She then threw my cloak off to reveal my new look, I wasn't surprised at the reactions from everyone. Everyone looked in both awe and with an angrey look, some of them were probably still not happy.

"Should I show them my new voice?" I asked Futtershy

"Go ahead." she stated

Incase you don't know, I've been practicing on how to get Phoenix Wright's new voice in Dual Destinies, so far it's not really that hard.

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"Ahem. OBJECTION!" I shouted in my new voice as well as the comic shout box with the word Objection appeared "Hold it! Take that! Eureka! Not so fast! Gotcha! Silence!" I shouted Silence in the deepest Blackquill voice I could muster "Got it!"

Everyone's faces soon turned to that of fear, probibly because of Silence. I then turned to Fluttershy who just happy, then I saw Twilight who lloked like she seen a ghost.

"Twilight? You alright?" I asked

"But-but-but-but-but-but-but-but-but-but-but-BUT THAT'S IMPOSSSIBLE!" Twilight shouted

"Nothing's impossible with the powers of an ace attorney." I stated as I got a tray

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My day then went normal as usual, but then it came the next day, it was around lunch when all of a sudden, I herd trays and clapping.

'I know where this is going!' I shouted hapilly in my mind

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After I got through dancing and the music ended it was time for next period, I felt so alive than I ever was after that, I even got to make amends with everypony else, then their was trouble.... It was right infront of me, my so-called girlfriend Sunset was right infront of us, me and the other mane 6, and was she smiling?

"Twilight, I want to give you something." she stated

'Wait........THAT WASN'T IN THE MOVIE!' I shouted in my mind with a paranoid face outside

She then held out a glass cup filled with some kind of pink liquid.

"A toast to your victory, clearly you've beasted me." she stated

Something was off and I knew it.

"Don't drink that!" I shouted "It could be poisoned or worse!"

"Now why would I do that?!" Sunset shouted in confussion

"To make sure Twilight dosn't win!" I stated

"I'll drink it." Twilight stated

"WHAT!" I shouted as I turned to her "HAVE YOU LOST YOUR MIND!"

"I know it's safe." Twilight stated as she grabbed the glass

Then I noticed as she drunk an evil smeerk was appearing on Sunset's face as she gulped down the last drop. I KNEW something was off!

"TWILIGHT SPIT IT-NO BARF IT OUT IT HAS POISION IN IT!" I shouted

"A LOVE POISION!" Sunset shouted as she laughed evily

I ran over to Twilight to find I was too late, she ran to Sunset and laied a kiss on her mouth with Sunset returning it.

"YOU BITCH!" I shouted as my anger rose "DO YOU REALIZE WHAT YOU'VE DONE!"

"Ye-"

"NO YOU DON'T! YOU JUST CREATED A TIME PARADOX!"

"Uh oh." Sunset said realizing her mistake "No matter! I will have victory!" she stated as she walked away with Twilight

"I GOTTA GET PAT!" I shouted as I ran past the others

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I ran for hours and soon I found Pat a.k.a Lemon Lime.

"Lemon Lime!" I shouted as I ran infront of him, blocking his path "We have a big problem!"

"What problem?" he asked

"Twilight's been fed a love potion and now she's with Sunset!"

"What. Did you say." Pat asked in an almost angered tone

"Twilight's been fed a love potion and now she's with Sunset must I draw you a picture!"

OK either I'm going crazy, or is Pat's skin changeing color! Infact his temper was of the charts on the Mood Matrix! And when he released it he grabbed my suit and shouted...

"WHERE ARE THEY!"

"WHOW WHOW WHOW! CALM DOWN!" I shouted

"I WON'T BE CALM UNTIL YOU TELL ME WHERE THEY ARE!"

"We can do this togeather i have a plan!" I told him

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I can't believe it. It's finally here, the day my wghole life changed forever. It was the day of the corination. As me and Pat slowly made our way in we doned on our disguises, Pat was dressed as Apollo, and instead of Phoenix I was now Edgeworth. We made our way into the gym just in time to here Twilight won the corination, thne we saw Spike and our opritunity arrived. I grabbed him and exited just in time to here him shout "TWILIGHT HELP!" and Twilight and the others as well as Sunset coming ot the rescue as we made our way outside to the statue. And where my finally confrintation would happen.

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"HAVE YA'LLS GONE AND LOST YER DERN MINDS!" Applejack shouted

"Pat, Eclipse have you two gone evil!" Pinkie shouted a little worried

"No Pinkie I'm trying to protect the future!" I shouted

"And I just want Twilight free of Sunset's grip!" Pat shouted

Then Spike bit down on my hand and I yelled "OW SON OF A BITCH!" as I waved my hand "I'M GONNA NEED A RABBIES SHOT BECAUSE OF THAT SPIKE! Pat now!" I shouted as I used my rope from the back of my pocket to grab Twilight's crown and thus dristracting them long enough for Pat to get Twilight, then I prepred to throw the crown into the portal.

"One more step and it's history!" I shouted

"Wait we don't need to do this!" Sunset shouted in fear

"Pat here!" I shouted as I gave Pat the crown and he handed me Twilight

I put her in the right posistion and then with my right hand I bitch slapped her across the face snapping her out of the trance.

"Ugh. What happened?"

"NO!" Sunset shouted in defeat as she ran to Pat and wrestled him to get the crown, then she got it and heded for the entrence, "FINALLY! MORE POWER THAN I COULD EVER DREAM!" Sunset shouted as she placed the crown on.

"Aw shit." I said as I saw her transform

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She transformed like she did in the movie only this time when she finished a newly added horn was on.

"Looks like shit just hit the fan!" Pat shouted

"Seconded!" I added

Twilight then woke up and saw what happened to Sunset and picked up Spike to protect him.

"Finally! I'm more powerful than ever!" Sunset stated, or at this point I like to call her Sunset Saitain

"No!" I shouted, then I saw other classmates were out and then went back inside

"I've been trying so hard to get this crown and this is how you repay me! But lets bygones be bygones, I am your princess now!" she stated as she moved the wall away and entered the school.

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"Mehahaha! Wilhelm Scream." I laughed to myself imitating Peter Griffion's laugh

Then I remembered.... "OH CRAP!" I shouted as I covered my head. Sunset then used the element of "dark" magic to hypnotize the school into being zombies, me and Pat were luck we were out of range and outside. "Spoiler alert. I don't want to rule this pesky school! I want EQUESTRIA!" Sunset shouted

"IF YOU WANT EQUESTRIA YOU"LL HAVE TO GO THROUGH ME!" I shouted as I acted as a shield infront of Twilight and the others as the others pulled her and Spike away.

"Fine then." Sunset stated as she charged up a fire ball "DIEEEE!" she shouted as she threw it my way and it hit

"AAAAUUUGHHHGGHH!" I cired in pain as I was flung backwardsnext to the statue

"ECLIPSE!" Pat and the others shouted as the headed to me, I knew because I still had my eyes open, then I felt my pulse growing weak "*Cough, cough* g-girls?" I asked in a weak voice

"He's losing vitals!" Fluttershy shouted

"Please...don't die." Pat stated as a tear came in his eye

"A tear Pat?" I asked wiping his tear away "Now don't cry, while their's life." I stated repeating a line the third doctor once said "It's the end, but the moment has been prepared for." I added copying the fourth doctor's line as I lost all my vitals and went into an eternal sleep.

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"No. No! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOO!" I shouted as I felt the last vital of Eclipse leave his body "ECLIPSE NOOOO!"

"Oh what's the matter?" Sunset asked in a humiliating tone "Babby wanna cry?" she taunted

I couldn't take it anymore then. That was the finnal straw, when someony murders another you know imediatly then they're far from redemption. I turned to face her with the most angeiest look I could pull off.

"You. Will. PAAAAAAYYYY!" I shouted with every it of anger I could muster, I then cried like I never did before and I could've swore that my tears were heading straight for Eclipse, and when Iturned around and cried tword him the tears were circling around him making a water tornadow that lifted him up into the air and engoulfed him and it slowly shrank and it was dropping him down to earth, when he landed his suit was no longer the three layer, but his old two layer along with his old hair styal and badges. He was alive, for I knew it to be true when he opened his eyes

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I opened my eyes to see my old cloths, in fact desighn, was back to it's old self, and Twilight hugged me with the happiest smile ever.

"Don't ever die like that again!" she stated in between sobs

"I promise." I stated

"WHAT!" Sunset shouted in fear

"Sunset their's one power you cannot control! It's a power that's all around us!"

I then said down the lements like Twilight did in the movie, and in order I think.

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"Honesty. Laughter! Kindness. Generousity. Loyalty! Magic." I said down the names of each of the elements as they transformed into their pony forms as well as me with my pony ears, pony tail, and wings, and horn to complete it "Togeather they make a force more powerful than anything you can ever dream of!" I shouted as the element of magic on Sunset's head powered us "Togeather as one we make the most powerful magic ever! The magic of friendship!" i shouted as a rainbow engoulfed Sunset and oe headed for Flash's fore head and went to each of the students curing them "Here and in Equestria it's what unites us all, and defeats all evil!" I shouted as the others whitred out except me.

I woke them up and looked back to reveal a crater with a normal Sunset in it.

'Your power is gone! What ever magic you had here is gone too. You've showed everyone who you really are Sunset." I stated as everyone went ot see Sunset's crater

"I I'm sorry." She stated with tears "I didn't know their was another way."

"Here and in Equestria the magic of friendship is everywhere." I stated as I helped her out of the crater

"But. All I've done since I've been here is drive everyone appart. i don't even know the first thing about friendship." she stated with tears still

"I bet they can teach you." Twilight interjected pointing to her other friends

"Twilight i need to ask you some thing." I told her

"What is it?" Twilight asked

"I-I wanna go with you back to Equestria." I answered

Twilight then walked back a little at my answer.

"But wha tabout your family?" She asked

"We understand." Celestia said coing through a group of kids "His whole life here has been nothing but sadness. It's time now for a new change."

"Thank you mother." I said to Celestia

"Please, call me Celestia."

"Thank you then, Celestia." i corrected myself

"Hay Twilight." Both at and Flash asked "Wanna dance?" Then they looked at each other and got into an all out brawl

"Boys." both me and Twilight said togeather causing us both to laugh

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"Hay Canterlot High!" i shuted over the microphone "This one gose out ot all of you!" I shouted as the music began and I got my song out

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Who got it? Whose got it? We got it!

It's the right to arm bears

It's the right to arm bears

Well my dear, let's show 'em some fear, and see who easily scares

It's the right to arm bears

Mr. Bruin, what you doin'?

Mr. Buck, you takin' aim

We're going to be the party

Yeah, and they're going to be the game

It's the right to arm bears

It's the right to arm bears

The Constitution is an institution

Change is not our ambition

The solution now is obvious

Ban all the ammunition

Hail to the Chief with a shotgun in his teeth

It's the right to arm bears

Mr. Hunter, eyes are mighty red

It's the right to arm bears

Whose going to eat you when you're dead?

It's the right to arm bears

Caught in the headlight, see who's going to fight

It's the right, it's the right to arm bears

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it was after my song that I sung, which was Paul Westerberg's song Right To Arm Bears which I first heard in the movie Open Season, I went to see Twilight and Spike were waitning for me with the others huging her. They saw me as I came down the stairs next to Twilight.

"Well, it's time to go." I said

"Good luck Eclipse." Rarity said to me

"We'll miss you." Pinkie stated

"You'll watch over her right?" I asked pointing to Sunset who was forced to put the wall she broke back togeather

"Yep. And of coaurse she'll be handing out A LOT of appologies." Rainbow stated

"Then my work here is done." I stated as me and Twilight  and Spike walked through the portal

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When I woke up I found myself in the room with Twlight as a pony, I looke in the reflection of the crystals to find I had transformed; I was almost as Cyan as Rainbow Dash, My mane and Tail were as messy as it was before, and instead of me having my blue suit, it was replaced with a red tie, but most of all I was an alicorn with hazel dragon eyes like Nightmare Moon. And finally my cutie mark, my name really fits because it was an actuall eclipse. I smlied at this and in my head sang some of the lyircs from Trishia Yearwood's song You're Where I Belong, one of my favorites from Stuart Little...

'I am home now, home now...............

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"Wow that's one adventure!" Pinkie said as I finished my story

"Yep. It was." I said as we continued our trek down the hall

"Eclipse if you are the adoptive son of that worlds Celestia and luna then be ours." Celestia stated

I stopped in my tracks and looked at them.

"You-you want me to be your new son?" I asked her

"Absolutely." Luna added "It would only make sense."

I looked down and when I looked back up their faces became ones of concern while mine was happy.

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"Th-th-thank you." I finally mustered out as I hugged the both of them

They returned it as I cried tears of joy and now as I finish my story I say this....

"I am finally home."

A text...and a text from before reveals a truth...

Fourth period was over FINALLY! I then went over to the bleachers in the school gym and herd my text tone to see a mysterious person had sent me a text.

Meet me by the bleachers outside. I know what you want.

OK that is creepy on so many levels. But I did as it said and found myself outside at the bleachers to come face to face with a hooded person.

"Who are you?" I ask

"My name is not important." He answered "I know why Sunset said what she said."

"How? are you the one who's been hacking my computer and other electronics!" I ask

"No." He answers "She knows that you have a hidden power."

"Wait. Do you mean my ace attorney powers?"

"No. Another."

"Turnabout mode?"

"Even more powerful."

"What's more powerful than turnabout mode?!"

"You will see when the time is right." he states as he disapears into the shadows

"Wow. Talk about freaky." I state

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I then left and noticed Lemon Lime was outside so I went up to him.

"Lemon Lime?" I ask "What are you doing out here?"

"Waiting for my mom to come get me." He answers

"Well I just got back from the bleachers at the football field after getting a weird text."

"A, text?" he asked in a bit of shock

"Ya, some crazy person told me that I had a hidden power more powerful than turnabout mode, imagin that." I answer

"I got a text two days ago about Twilight." he stated

"You don't think our destinies were ment to cross do you?" I ask

We stared at each other for about ten seconds until we looked away from each other and shouted "Nah!"

"Lemon Lime!"

"Oh it's my mom gotta go!" Lemon Lime stated as he entered the car with his mother

And then their was me. As i watched the sunset I saw Principal Celestia and Vice Principal Luna come out of the front doors.

"Eclipse?" Celestia asked "What are you still doing here?"

"Nanny sent me a text to stay after school for some unknown reason." I answer

And speak of the devil, I know that blue Chevy anywhere. I saw my nanny getting out of the car and noticed she was carrying a folder.

"Um nanny what's with the folder?" I ask

Um is she deaf I asked her a question. I then saw her whisper something in Celestia's ear and Celestia got a shocked face for a minute and then it turned into a face of unsure, to a face of sadness. She then whispered something into Luna's ear and she had the same expression changes except a sad face was replaced with a look of understanding.

"Um what's going on?" I ask

"Remember that text your 'nanny' sent you?" Celestia asked

"Ya I still have it on my phone." I state

"She told us that you are to 'go home with us." Celestia stated

"Fine by me." I state

As I got in Celestia's car I then pulled out my MP3 Player and put on a tune that I've loved since Dual Destinies came out.

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"That's a might catchy tune." Celestia stated

"Well it's orchestrated what were you expecting?" I ask

"By the way how old are you?" she asked

I wanted to say fourteen but I digressed.

"Um I've actually forgotten." I lied

"According to your record you're sixteen years old and is in the tenth grade." she stated

Well atleast I don't have to go through 8th and 9th grade. And atleast my zits are finally gone.

"Hay Celestia where's Luna at?"

"She's riding behind us."

I turned to the rear view mirrior and saw her diving her own car.

'Conveniant much?' I thought

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It took us atleas an hour to get to Celestia's house, but we eventually made it. Celestia and I got out and Luna unlocked the door. we went in and I asked Celestia "Why am I here?"

Celestia then looked at Luna and turned tword me.

"It's about your family." Celestia stated

"I know. Only two of them are still alive and they're the ones I've been living with."

"They said that they want us to take care of you from now on." Luna stated

I then turned my back towrd them and stated "Well my life has always been smeared by gadgets and..." I then turned around to show my sadden face to them "Tricks." I finish before crying a river.

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I then got down to my kneas as I continued to cry and I felt a hand get put on my shoulder.

"It's alright." Celestia stated hugging me "We're here for you."

I continued to cry into her shoulder and heard Luna state "Your stuff will be here tomorrow so you won't miss anything." I continued to cry as the thought of my family abandoning me continued to plauge my mind. Why were they doing this to me?!