eyeless jack in equstria

by toxicman0248

Rating: teen
Tags: Alternate Universe, Human, Crossover
Length: 1044

Eyeless jack a silent killer who steals kidneys just for the sake to feed is now in equestria and might die from nothing.

The killer eyeless jack is now within the world of equstria and must try to find a way out. Also alternate universe so jack acts like this. (:V)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-12-08 00:10:53 UTC

The arrival of jack

Eyeless jack. Well as most call him is a monster to humans. Kidneys where missing and no one knows who there kidneys. Jack was almost never seen...never heard. His silence often made his victims scared not knowing where he might be. Jack check his kidney bag looking for a few kidneys to snack on. His hood was over his head all the time. He enjoyed the taste coming from them. But that's the last thing he recalled before being knock out cold.

   The ponies in pony ville where fast asleep no one notice how a black figure fell from the sky. Jack woke up and saw his blood covered hands. Both coming from his own blood and the kidneys. Jack was still alive but it hurted like hell to him. After pacthing himself up he notice the town. He thought for a second thinking if he just time traveled or he is in a medival fair. He didn't care this place looked like it was filled with something.

He carefully climbed inside a house looking for anyone or any pony for that matter to be there. His dark holes which some say cover whats behind his mask looked around. He could see but it was just black and white. He found what he was looking for. Something was asleep and jack took this as a perfect advantage. His scalpel was ready to strike when he heard"AAAAHHHH MONSTER". Jack reacted fast and quickly dodged the brown unicorns strike with a floating baseball bat. Jack was both alert he was seen but also confused with the pony. The unicorn kept swinging his bat while jack kept dodging. After hearing monster the pony on the bed woke up and screamed very loudly. Most of pony ville was now wide awake and going to where they heard the screams. The room was now full of light from the ponies outside with lanterns or glowing horns. Jack wanted to get out before the come in so he grabbed the baseball bat and sunk his scalpel deep into his neck and ran for the back.

"Dear princess celestia the town ponies have told me of a new creature or monster that has killed a pony. The one that survived said it had no eyes and was wearing black clothing.

All i know is that it is dangerous.

Your faithful student Twilight sparkle."

Twilight gave the paper to her assistant spike. "Send it to the princess now." Her voice seemed worried this was the first time she had a problem involving death. Not only was she worried but every pony else was putting a funeral and felt scared not knowing where the creature was.

  Eyeless jack was his name alright but he didn't make out if he was seen or not. Under a tree he rested looking around for nothing. When he saw just trees and birds he took a nap. Celestia was unsure whether to be concerned or sick. No pony or even anything has killed something before she only hoped that the main six would come to discuss about this monster. "My princess the ponies have arrived." "Let them in now." They soon came in only five of them wondered what happened. "Ponies. We are at danger a new creature has arrived and is considered dangerous. As twilight may know this creature wheres black clothing and has no eyes." Each one looked at one another wondering what they want with a monster that kills. "I am trusting you to capture this monster and bring it back here for questioning. All of them agreed turning around they went outside. Jack woke from his nap only to later find out that six ponies are coming to catch him. One of fluttershy's birds spot jack and quickly flew back to tell where the monster is. The six traveled by train back to pony ville. Pinkie pie was talking about how she loved parties while fluttershy was sad about the dead pony but hearing a few of pinkie's jokes made her put a grin on her face. The farm pony told fluttershy that theres a bird following the train. The bird was caught by RD and handed to fluttershy. The chat lasted only a few minutes. "He says the creatures over at the forest."  "The evergreen forest?" "No that's overused the other one. And its making its way north." Just as they said that the train stopped. The ponies quickly got ready and headed north.

Jack was still wandering in a straight line he couldn't remember when he was lost. The grey world he saw was silent for a few seconds. The sound of guards was heard. The forest was lightly colored and something dark would be seen easy. Jack hid behind a tree in hope that they wont see him. He could make out that two or three looked like what appeared to be bat ponies. Each pony including the bat ones had armor both gold and some dark purple metal. The ponies could overpower him with no problem if hes not careful.

Jack watched as the pony guards trotted away. He could fight but not six armed ponies with full on armor. Jack knew if he stopped something could possibly maul him. The main six where making there way to any place fluttershy's animal friends told her to go. After what seemed like half a hour they finally found the monster. Jack kept hearing the sound of rabbits and birds. It was hard to see what color the blood was on his hoodie and bandages. Eyeless though not blind he notice a slight tap on his side. He looked back to find a pissed blue rainbow pony staring at him. Rainbow was to fast to react to and jack fell after getting bucked in his mask. The world grew black as he saw five other ponies coming closer to the what jack could see a light grey pegisi.

After being in a cart and pushed to canterlot jack woke up only to see the castle walls. There he knew what he had to do....think in his head while saying in his mind"I am totally f@%!". The doors opened showing a very curious god right before him.