Fluttershy's Revenge

by EvilFluttershy

Rating: teen
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Tragedy, Gore, Dark, Main 6
Length: 2077

Fluttershy loses it

Fluttershy loses her peace of mind and over takes the meaning of assertiveness, killings off her friends one by one, in very brutal ways.

Published 2013-11-20 05:00:03 UTC
Last updated 2013-11-20 05:00:03 UTC

Fluttershy's Revenge

Fluttershy's Revenge
By: ישראל (Israel)
WARNING!!! Contains graphic content. Reader discretion is advised

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A wretched day in Ponyville; a day that the entire land of Equestria will forever remember. All around Ponyville there was potent smell of decaying flesh. Dead bodies lay scattered and dismembered all over the town, while their blood permeated the ground beneath them. Every pony was dead, all except one, Fluttershy. She sat among the bodies and smiled, but this is not the story I'm telling. This is the story of what lead up to this wretched day.

The girls (Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Twilight Sparkle, Apple Jack, and Pinkie Pie) all gathered on the road outside the Evergreen forest, eagerly awaiting their friend Fluttershy; she had told them that she wanted to show them something. Pinkie Pie, bounced and giggled. “I wonder what Fluttershy's surprise could be!”

Rainbow Dash sighed. “It’s probably just some stupid animal she found.”

Twilight looked over at Rainbow Dash. “Come on Dash, you know she's sensitive and...”

“Not to mention scared of everything that moves.” Apple Jack chimed. The ponies all looked at each other.

“True,” said Twilight. “but she's still our friend.”

A few minutes passed and Rarity began to whine, “Oh, when is she going to get here? My hooves are digging into the dirt and my mane is getting frizzy!” The grey unicorn sat on the grass to avoid getting dirt on her rump and stroked her nearly perfect purple mane.

Every pony sighed. “Will you jus' quit complainin', she'll be here soon,” Applejack reassured her.

Then, Pinkie Pie spotted her in the distance. “Ou! Ou! There she is!” The pink pony bounced and giggled some more.

When Fluttershy arrived, she smiled.“Hi girls! I’m so glad you could come!” There was something different but Nopony could place their hoof on it, she seemed all too cheeky, that was for sure.

”So let’s go!” Fluttershy said pleasantly, and the girls obediently followed, unsure of what to do or say.

As they walked deeper into the Evergreen forest, it seemed to get darker and more ominous. The girls huddled close together, scared something might attack them, but Fluttershy stayed ahead of them.

Pinkie Pie giggled. “Oh girls, there is nothing to be afraid of! Remember what I said? ♪Giggle at the ghostly! Guffaw at the grossly! Crack up at the creepy! Whoop it up with the..♪”

“Pinkie! Shut up!” Rainbow Dash shouted, “This isn’t the time. Fluttershy, are we almost there?”

“We’re here!” said Fluttershy, in a joyous tone. There before the girls was a stone table set up with plates and a simple meal. The girls looked around and slowly wandered over to the stone table. Fluttershy took the only plate that sat at the head of the table, next to her little companion, Angel Bunny.

Fluttershy glanced around. “Well? What are you waiting for? Dig in!” Every pony looked down at their meal and picked at them slowly.

Rarity being the snot she was, asked.“Exactly what is in this, dear?”

Fluttershy smiled, “Oh, just lettuce, tomato, onions… you know my type of meals.”

The girls were hesitant, but kept eating. Pinkie Pie giggled. “Fluttershy, this is awesome! And so good too!”

Fluttershy just smiled and whispered, “It’ll be your last too.” but it was inaudible for everyone else.

Rainbow Dash sighed. “I all of a sudden feel tired.”

“Me too.” said Apple Jack, with a mild yawn. Soon, every pony except Flutters was asleep, and she hastily got to work, dragging her unconscious friends to a nearby cave, where she tied them to tables.

When the ponies awoke, they found themselves strapped to the tables, but one pony didn't awake, Rarity. Fluttershy walked over to her and slapped her, “Get up!"

But she didn't respond. Fluttershy, punched the grey pony’s snout, breaking it in the process. Bone splintered out though Rarity’s skin, blood rushed from her wounds and snout. Fluttershy, checked for a pulse: dead and based on her temperature, for a while “Hmm, probably choked.” Fluttershy said.

Then, she walked over to a covered table, as she uncovered it, Rainbow dash gasped. “What are you going to do to her?!”

Fluttershy looked down at the extensive array of medical tools before her and selected the precision cutter. She placed it at Raritys neck and pressed hard, cutting deep into her flesh.

As Fluttershy sliced at Rarity's neck, the others cried and yelped. “Why Fluttershy!? Why would you do this!?”; but, needless to say, Flutters, kept cutting.

The blood flowed like a river down Fluttershy's neck, sending her into a maniacal laughter. Fluttershy hit Rarity's spine. Noticing this, she dropped the knife, and grabbed hold of the spine and jerked violently, removing the head and part of the spine from the cold corpse. She carried it over to a massive stone table.

Apple Jack smiled. “That's what ya get, ya preppy pony!” the others stared at her, terrified.

“What? She was gonn’ get it sooner or later.”

When Fluttershy turned back towards them, she held Rarity’s skull in her hoof with her face plastered on hers as a doctor's mask. She took Rarity’s corpse and slit it open rear to neck stub, and rummaged through her innards, pulling out intestines, lungs and her heart, placing them into a bowl.

“I’ll keep these for later. Now Twilight, it’s your turn.”

Twilight squirmed. “No! Fluttershy, what did I ever do to you?” Fluttershy walked towards her and shoved a knife into her open chest.

Flutters sighed. “You treated me like a pushover. Now, you’ll get your once over!” Fluttershy dragged the knife down Twilights underside and laughed maniacally at her screams.

“You’re pathetic, “Flutters screamed. “You call you yourself a princess?! You being an alicorn means nothing!” Twilights innards spilled on the cold stone floor, releasing a putrid smell of bodily fluids. Twilight upchucked what was still in her stomach and fainted.

Fluttershy laughed. “Wow! Still alive after all that? Let’s fix that.” She took hold of Twilights heart and ripped it out, drenching her mask and mane with blood.

Laughing maniacally, she said. “What to do, oh, what to do?!” She grabbed a saw off the table and sawed Twilights wings and horn off, and put them aside.

“I will also need these. Hey! Are you guys having fun yet?!”

The other ponies cried and screamed, then she once again took the saw to Twilight and cut away her legs, and head, while draining the blood into a basin. She took off the mask and threw it, and, smiling a wicked smile, she dipped her hoof into the blood and turned away from the others.

Rainbow Dash screamed, “Fluttershy! What are you doing?! And why?! We are your friends!!”

Flutters, turned slowly to face Rainbow Dash, her face smeared with blood, “I’m just getting you guys back for treating me like a pushover, that’s all.” She smiled cheerfully, exposing blood stained teeth.

Pinkie Pie’s mind began to race. “So, why drag us out here when you could do what I do?”

Apple Jack and Rainbow Dash looked over at her, “What? Ponies are my special ingredient. How did you not know that?”

Apple Jack wanted to puke, “And to think of how much I liked your baked goods.”

Pinkie laughed, “Silly! You’re kinda dumb!”

Fluttershy instantly remembered something, “Shut up! I need to get back to work.” She took a knife to Rarity’s and Twilight's flank, cutting off their cutie marks. The others, except Pinkie, whimpered.

Pinkie yelled. “What the hay!? You stole my idea!”

Apple Jack looked over at Pinkie. “Pinkie, you are nuts.”

Rainbow dash laughed solemnly. “Well hay, AJ, how’d you guess that?”

Fluttershy snapped. “Shut the hay up!! I need to concentrate.”

The others became quite, but again Pinkie spoke out. “Hey, Fluttershy! You should let me go. You know, maybe we could work together.”

Fluttershy spun around knife in hoof, and threw it at Pinkie Pie. “No!!” she yelled. The knife missed, embedding itself into the wood beside Pinkie’s head.

She gulped. “Well, that was close.”

Fluttershy was furious; she trotted over to Pinkie, cleaver in hoof. Pinkie was finally scared. It was as if Cthulhu himself had possessed Fluttershy and was taking his revenge against pony kind, one drop of blood at a time.

She gathered up what was left of her voice and shallowly said. “So whatcha gonna do, buddy ol’ pal ol’ friend of mine?”

Fluttershy smiled, once again exposing blood stained teeth. “I’m going to make this worthwhile.”

Pinkie tried to cower away, forgetting that she was bound to the table. Flutters went directly for her flank, making a slight incision around both cutie marks, then she slowly peeled away each cutie mark from the pink pony’s flank, giggling as she did so. When the skin was hanging by a thread, Flutters gripped tighter and pulled as hard as she could, tearing the skin from Pinkie’s flesh. Pinkie howled and cried, but knowing the way of torture, did not say a single word.

Fluttershy smiled, happily. “Yay! You know your place!” She leaned over to look at her tray, and spotted something she wanted, she trotted over to it, leaving Pinkie to grovel in pain.

Pinkie cried and said to Dashie. “I want you to kill her, and get away from her, or at best just get away. Wiggle out of your cuffs when she’s not looking.”

“But!”

“Shh, yours are loose enough, and take Apple Jack with you.”

“What then?” asked the blue pony, with tears in her eyes.

“Just keep running, and warn every pony you come across.” Pinkie sighed, “And whatever you do, don’t get caught.” Rainbow Dash gave a steady nod and looked away.

Fluttershy trotted back over to Pinkie, with an entire tray of tools, varying from liquids to knives. Fluttershy whispered to herself, “Pick your poison Flutters.”

After a few seconds she exclaimed. “Acid!! Yes! This is what I need.”

The blood-covered pony picked up a vial and poured in on Pinkie’s open wounds, watching as the flesh dissolved and leaked to the floor, but Pinkie didn’t make a sound. The putrid smell of blood, acid, decaying flesh and urine filled the air. The acid had dissolved Pinkie’s entire bottom half away, but Pinkie still made no sound. Flutters looked up at her, and seeing no color, knew she was dead. Pinkamina Diane Pie, had died minutes ago, which explained the smell of urine. Flutters grabbed her friend’s face and silently said. “Goodnight, Pinkie Pie.”

Rainbow Dash hadn’t seen a thing. She had been too busy wriggling out of her cuffs and freeing Apple Jack, and thankfully she hadn’t alerted Fluttershy, for they would have been dead. They ran for the exit, but AJ accidentally hit the table making a cup crash to the floor, alerting Fluttershy. She span around, Seeing them run towards the exit of the cave. she screamed. “Dammit!! Get back here!!” and flew after them, knives in hooves and mouth. Thankfully for Flutters, she knew the exact route to the way out, so it was easy to catch up to the runaway ponies.

When she caught up with them, she laughed. “There you are my pretties!!”

Rainbow Dash and Apple Jack looked at each other. “Goodbye, my friend” said Rainbow Dash, as she saw Flutters Flying towards them, the ponies hugged and cried.

Fluttershy started to fly around them, as fast as she could, releasing the knives into flight. This tornado of pink, yellow, and steel, soon turned to pure red.

Fluttershy landed. “Hmm, a great smoothie, I would say.”

She trotted back to the main room, humming to herself. “Time to make a new pet.” she said, collecting the pony parts off the table, she worked hastily putting her new pet together.

Fluttershy awoke with a start. “Thank Celestia, it was just a dream.”; but to her surprise, she woke up in the cave, covered in blood and surrounded in pony parts, she smiled, but started to cry. Her new pet came to her side to comfort her; then Fluttershy thought of all the ponies in Equestria and what they had done.

She whispered to herself. “Time to make Equestria pay,” and began to plot out the demise of Equestria as she trotted back to her quiet little cottage in the woods.

Author's Note

Soon i'll add a GDOC link, it will be a re-write but with an alt. ending