Rise Of The Equestrian Hero (Revised)

by kal66black

chapter 1 (Revised)

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It is the year 2018 in Equestria, this beautiful land is almost uninhabitable. It's of the trant, named Fransis Alderate Grigor. There have been many human in Equestria before but none like him. He is the more destructive than any other villain. He has wiped out everypony, except the Four Alicorn Princesses and the Elements of Harmony.

" We must find a way to defeat Fransis." Celestia said to the group

"We have no way of beating him!" Luna exclaimed, stomping her hoof hard on the ground in frustration, the act creating a small cloud of dirt and grass.

" I think I may know of a spell that can help." said Twilight

" What did you have in mind?" asked Cadence

" A high level summoning spell." answered Twilight

" How will that help us?" asked Luna

" We can summon a great hero, then we should send them to the past in hope of changing our future." said Twilight

" That sounds like an amazing idea, we should begin at once." said Celestia

As the small group of ponies begin to put there plan in motion, our hero is at home sleeping the day away.


HELP US!!! PLEASE!!!!!

" huh what's going on, where am I?" I asked myself

I looked at my surroundings it looked like something out a movie or video game. There were destroyed building everywhere, and no one in sight. This was really weird. I started to walk in hopes of finding someone, but I find no one.

" What happened here?" I wondered

HELP US!!! PLEASE!!!!!

" Hello, is someone there?!" I asked hoping someone would answer.

I continued my search, I noticed my shadow was getting longer. I looked behind me to see a giant ball almost like the sun, heading straight for me. Right before the giant ball hit it's target. I hear "Sir, it is time to wake up." I wake up to see that my alarm clock is going off, and me being the nerd I am. I have a J.A.R.V.I.S app on my iPhone to wake me up. I sit up and grab my phone to turn off my alarm.

Not five minutes after I turn off the alarm, I get a text from my girlfriend.

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I looked at my phone for the time, it was about an hour before class starts. So I can grab a quick shower. I found some clean clothes to wear, and went in to the bathroom. I put my phone on the ihome speaker I have in my bathroom, so I can listen to music well I shower. Well I was washing my hair my favorite song started playing. Sometimes I have a bad habit of singing in the shower,

Well I was singing. I didn't know that my girlfriend come in my apartment. And listening to me singing in the shower, when I got out I found sitting on my bed laughting her ass off.

" Vi, when did you get here?" I asked her

" Oh I don't know, maybe when you were singing that last song." She said trying to hold back her laughter.

" Urgh... give me a few minutes and I'll be ready." I told her a little pissed

As I was getting my boots on, Vi told me it was cold outside. So I grab my Survey Corps jacket from my hall closet. I loved this jacket, I looked good in it too.