war in Equestria

by Zea

Rating: mature
Tags: Sex, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Human, Anthro, Main 6, Princess Luna, Gore, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Other
Length: 2500

The Solar Empire is getting to powerfull can luna stop her sister?

Civil war has broken out in Equestria. It has divided the mane 6 in both sides: AJ, Rarity, and Twilight on the Solar Empire; Pinkie, Fluttershy, and Rainbow dash on the New Lunar Republic. How will they deal with there friends on the other side. Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash doesn't feel right having a new pony to join their side. How will Shadow Venom deal with these two mares that will go through great lengths to keep Luna safe?

will the Shadow guard take Shadow Venom in or will his secret past come out?
(yes the Shadow Guard from my last story will come in to this to.)

( If you want in on this civil ear then let me know.
here are the thing you need to tell my about your OC pony.

Name:

Age: It doesn't really matter what their age is. Your character can be whatever ranging from a Filly to an old Pony.

Race: Any of the original Pony races (Unicorn, Pegasus, or Earth Pony). Your OC can even be a Crystal Pony or a Bat Pony or an Alicorn.

Mane Color:

Coat Color:

Eye Color:

Solar Empire, NLR or Neutral: Pick a side in the conflict. you can always change sides whenever you want.

Rank/Occupation: If your character is a solider what's their rank? If they're not, what is their job? A maid? A teacher? Or do they not have a job at all?

Cutie Mark: What's your Pony's special talent? It doesn't have to have anything to do with the war if you don't want to.

Fighting style: How does your character fight? Do they get physical or do they tend to hang back.

Personality: Here you can flesh out your character. Put what makes them tick and any flaws they have.

back story: if you want it to come up when they join a side or when they change sides. And if they have a dark past let me know that to. I need some that are willing to be the one to start this Civil war.

And all was remember to have fun with this its your pony. and if you join as a solider tell my how they deal with getting orders and commanding troops.)

Published 2013-11-28 11:00:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-11-30 03:54:13 UTC

chapter 1

Chapter one.

Luna was looking at at her paper when Fire Storm got in.

” WHAT DO YOU WANT FIRE STORM!? " Luna shouted after jumping half a foot in the air by the scare his guard gave her.

"Sorry for this, Luna, but you need to see this." He gave her a document that Luna's sister made that very same day.

"...How can this be?" Luna asked while her face showed nothing but fear.

"I don't know but Spitfire and Fleetfoot are waiting outside to get you out of here. We have to go now. The solar guards are on their way to get you." Fire said as he tried to rush Luna out of her room.

Once outside, Fire saw the other two standing in there, ready to accomplish their duty.

"Fire, you ready to go? " Spitfire asked.

"No. I still have something to do in here before I go." With that, Fire left the room and headed down to the hall to see if the portal to Ponyville that he created before was still in there.

"I hope this works. ‘I need your help, Pinkie.’ " He wrote on a paper before sending it through the portal..

"What are you doing in here, Fire Storm? " a voice asked behind him.

As Fire stood in there, he could feel his blood run through his veins.. "This is not good" he thought as he turned around.

"Princess Celestia! What are you doing here? " Fire asked as he is thinking to himself " I am SO done for”.

" I could ask you the same, Fire. " Princess Celestia said as her guards surrounded him..

"Crap! As good at fight as I am I can't win against her solar guards! They’re too strong!" Fire thought as he tried to find a way out of there. It was then that he remembered about his twin Katana swords.

"Don't even try it, Fire. You can't win.” One of the solar guards said as she pulled out a huge sword.

"Well you all are drawing out your swords. What’s wrong with getting out my own weapons? Is it the fact that I am faster than you? "Fire asked smugly as he got ready to fight.

"We will see about that. Princess, you can see up there.” Celestia rushed to the upper floor with two escorts following her. The same guard turned to Fire. “Oh, and don’t worry about your marefriend. We’ll keep an eye on that mare of yours, Fire and..." Before the guard could finish what he was saying, Fire attacked him and wound him.

"YOU LEAVE RAINBOW OUT OF THIS! I'M THE ONE YOU WANT! NOT HER! SHE IS NOT INVOLVED WITH THIS!" Fire screamed as he fought the solar guards.

He dashed quickly to the portal, killing half the ponies in the room that dared to step in his way..

"Well... It has been fun but I got to go."

And with that, Fire jumped the portal closing it behind him.

Meanwhile...

"Do you think Fire will be ok? " Fleetfoot asked as she looked at Spitfire and Luna with concern.

"Are you kidding me? Fire is smarter than that to get captured by the solar guards. Remember that he has trained with Luna about how to use his shadow powers... and besides, that Shadow won't let Fire get in over his head." Spitfire said as they ran down the hall turning left and going to the balcony.

"It’s time to fly, Princess. " Spitfire said as they spread their wings and took off.

"Where are we going? And please, call me Luna. You worked in my guard long ago to gain that privilege." Luna said as they flew over Canterlot.

" PonyVille. " That was Spitfire's answer as they flew toward the tiny village.

"Why PonyVille? " Luna asked over the wind going by them.

"Well... that is where Fire Storm wants us to meet him and the elements. " Fleetfoot chimed in.

As the three of them made their way to PonyVille, Fire Storm was making his way there, too.

Back to Fire Storm

"Twilight are you here?" Fire yelled as he teleported into the library with a loud “bang”.

"I think it would be better if you wouldn’t blow up all my books, Zach. " Twilight said rather grumpy that all the books on the north wall just flew around the room when he showed up..

"Sorry about that. And the name’s Fire Storm now. Remember that? " As he moved to help pick up the books that he had sent all over the room. One book stood out from the rest of them. A copy of “magic on the go. Everything you need to know about magic for now.

"Why do you have this Twi? "

"Oh, you know... I like to keep the library up to date with all the new books. " She answered while looking to another place.

"Oh, yeah.Then, why it has no pages? It has only only letters from you and princess Celestia on it.” He suddenly froze when a sudden chill ran through his back.

He could remember all the recent things that he saw.

“You do know she is trying to kill her own sister right? " He said as he took the book from the floor.

Twilight instantly turned against him with her face blushing of rage.

"You don't know that, Fire! Luna could have been trying something that forced her to do what she do." Twilight said as she took the book from Fire’s hands.

"What could Luna have done that would justify killing her? I don't see how that is possible! Luna is a good pony. She would never do something like what Celestia’s saying she did. Besides that Celestia tried to attack me just a few hours ago! I don't see how this is ok! " Just then, Spike came in the room with a look on his face that said “You are too loud”

" Well think back to what you did to bring it on yourself. " Twi said as she tried to defend her mentor.

"It doesn't work that way Twi. Shinning could see this coming. That is why he go to the crystal empire 4 years ago." Fire said finally to Twilight. " If you can't see it, then you need to grow up. A war is coming… and you need to chose a side, girl." And with that Fire left Twilight standing there, thinking about what she just heard.

Author's Note

well here is the First chapter.

ALL HAY THE NEW LUNAR REPUBLIC!

thanks to my editor for helping me with this.

Chapter 2

" Why cant she see this! " Fire yelled out as he made his way back to the Shadow guard H.Q. where every one in the guard was ether training, reading, getting some thing to eat, in the range getting some weapon training in at this hour, or the Lieutenant and up in the officer club. All of them minussing Spitfire, Fleetfoot, and Scootaloo thow. the three of them where there with him as they when with him to the castle to get Luna just this morning and now they where their looking at him as they all moved to the Command room that Fire had been forced to work in upon getting promoted to general. " It is nice to see you three. but I need you to fallow me t..." Fire was cut off as a covolt blue and rainbow main bullet came and raped its self around him.

" FIRE " it screamed at him.

" Hi dash please get off me. " fire said trying not to passe out from the crushing hug.

" Is that any way to talk to me after you left last night from are bed? " she asked kind of sad.

" Well no but I had to for a good reason thow. Come with us and you will see why. " fire said as they moved to the command room where Luna turn on them and had her long sword pointed at them. All but Fire stopped where they where. More over Rainbow dash stopped dead in her trakes. " Luna it is us you will be safe here. We are here to help you. Besides that they are all trained to give to give there life to save yours. With out you we can not get the republic to what it should be. " Fire said.

" Princess Luna. " rainbow said as she bow like she all was dose when royalty is in front of her.

" Rainbow dash please rise. You need not bow for me you are part of the Shadow guard after all you are granted so leeway with the laws and don't for get that shadow guard is above the law when doing missions of me or the crown. " Luna said with a kind hearted smile.

" Yes princess. " rainbow said not looking at her.

" well Fire your team here seams like they have never sean royalty before do they not know you your states or are you all was going to stay human and not in your pony form? " Luna looked at Fire Storm with this you should show them what I am talking about look on her face.

" you are right Luna. " Fire said. as he put a cigar in his moth. he was about to light it when Luna came up and took it from him. " hay I was going to smoke that Luna. "

" Show them your pony form or you don't get this back. " Luna said as she lite the cigar up taking a pof on it. Then looking to Rainbow dash asking her. " You to have been a copel for three month now and he never shoud you his pony form? "

" Well there was this one time when he had black with red fur and wings after we helped Spitfire and Sorian on a mission that went wrong very fast on us. I asked him about it and he just srouged it off. "Rainbow said.

" Well you see... " Luna started to say when Fire cut her off.

" Ok you win Luna I will show them my pony Form. You may want to stand back Dashie. " Fire said with a dark rainbow colored light srounding him. when it finlay disuperd there in his place was a black with red fire wing and rainbow main and tail was Fire Storm in all. Rainbow moved around him looking at him from his head with the hourn on it to is rainbow colored tail.

" Like what you see Dashie? " asked Fire as she moved around him gasing all over her coltfriend body.

" Well that will have to wait till we are alone to night in are room my stallion. " Rainbow said will her bedroom eye and a lustfull smile on her face.

" Later Dash as much as I want to right now w you need to wait till tonight. " Fire said as Rainbow started to rub his cutey mark of a fire in a lighting shape on his flank. Rainbow and Fire have been a thing ever sine he came to PonyVille three years ago.

" Well can you blame me you have been a teas sine day one lover colt. " rainbow said to Fire as he moved over to her to give her a kiss on the lips.

" Now that you two love birds are done can we move on? " Luna asked of every one there in that room.

" Yes we ca... " Fire was cut off as Applejack came barging in the room and Looked at Fire how was looking like he was ready to attack the door.

" Fire I heard from Twi that you to got at it over Luna what in the wide wide world of Equstra happened? " asked Applejack as she looked at him.

" Well it will come down to this Celestia is trying to kill her over her wanting to make the New Lunar Republic in the out scurts of Equstra's territory. past the Crystal empire. Why? " stated Fire.

" Celestia said that Luna wants to bring out eternal darkness agean. " Applejack said looking at her.

" Never said such a thing Applejack. " Luna said with a hurt look. " why would she say that? I only want to make a new republic where every one can be free and happy to do what they want. "

" YOU LIE LUNA OR SHOULD I SAY NIGHTMARE MOON! " yelled a mad Twilight looking like will be blood lust.

" Twi A.J. stop this now! " Fire Storm yelled at them pulling his twin Katana on them. " You to need to stop this Luna did nothing wrong all she did was tell her sister that she wants to make the Lunar Republic and now she a wanted mare? Have you to gone and lost you heads!? Look at her dose she look like some pony that would here anypony? " Fire was mad madder then any time he had been at any time earlier.

" Well no not right know thow. But she still can. " said Twilight.

" Grow up Twi look at her! " Yelled Fire

Just then Fluttershy came in to the room with Rarity. Fluttershy went right for the Medical supply that where in the room.

" Fluttershy what happened to Rarity? " asked Applejack.

" She said the night guard did this to her on Luna's order. " Fluttershy said working on paching her up.

" WHAT TIS A LIE! " screamed Luna

" There you see Zach its as I said! " yelled Twilight to Fire as they move out of the way of Fluttershy mover all over to get the things she need.

" ARE YOU KIDDING ME TWILIGHT HOW WAS THIS LUNA'S DOING SHE WAS HERE THE HOLE TIME WITH SPITFIRE AND FLEETFOOT! " Yell Fire Storm back at twilight.

" Stop it you two. Rarity needs some time to rest and you two yelling at each other is not helping her. If you two are going to fight you need to take it out of here. " said Fluttershy with that stare of hers.

" OK " they said as they made there way out of the room.

" Twilight see you in the fight arena in 30 minutes." with that Fire Storm went of to get his gear ready.

" fine you are on. " said Twilight going to get her things to.

Rainbow Dash moved to Fallow fire storm to his waiting room and slipped in with nopony seeing her.

Author's Note

possible clop chapter/fight chapter next