Remorse: The Color of Crimson

by Flame-LoneWolf

First published

The story of a young ex-hitcolt by the name of Crimson Rays, better known as the Crimson Shadow. He wishes to retire, despite his age, to a quiet town in which to run away from his past remorse. Since he's been run out of so many towns, he's stumbled onto a fairly segregated town, completely ignorant of his reputation. Will he make new friends on this wild new ride, or be run out of this town like the ones before it?

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*Amazing cover art done by this awesome guy! Go read his fics: Dragon Of The Eclipse and Elder Scrolls: Equestria*


- This will be a fairly gory fic, contain swearing, and contain violence. You've been warned. Also, for most of the fight scenes, the ponies will be on their hind-legs, just telling you to save some confusion.

- There will be shipping in this story..... sorry.

- Tell what I need to improve, your opinions are all welcome!

- All criticism will be appreciated as long as it comes out as respectful.

- No, Crimson is not a self insert.

- Please inform me when I make a spelling or grammar related error and I'll do the best that I can to fix it!

- If it comes off as nerdy at times, I apologize. It'll probably come off as cheesy too, for which I again apologize!

- Many ideas were given to me personally by Super Big Mac. So show him love and check out some of his stuff, even if you hate this fic's guts like I do!~

Enjoy~