Abnormal

by schmeckle
A changeling mare is supposed to be without soul and thought. So what happened when I, CF-9878 refused to attack during the battle for Canterlot. I got discharged, if you could call it that.

Follow CF-9878, a changeling mare that discovered one of the only ways to get booted from the changeling army; rational thought. As she expected, getting thrown away sucks. However, not everything can go wrong, can it?

This takes place right after the changeling attack on Canterlot.



Saw a similar premise to this not to long ago, but that story took a poor turn for me, so I decided to give this a try. Also every chapter will be named after a song.
Pound my face in with constructive criticism please.
Also in extreme need of an editor, first person writing can be nail biting and annoying for me at times, especially when the 'first person character' isn't supposed to be me, or have my mindset for that matter. P.m me if you're daring enough to try that.

Teen
Incomplete
Romance
Adventure
Sex
Random
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
 
FPMCO

17783 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

5 Chapters:

  1. Voices 2013-11-23 21:33:16 UTC
    3528
  2. Mercy Me 2013-11-29 04:33:59 UTC
    2855
  3. Welcome Home 2013-12-14 21:25:12 UTC
    3651
  4. Pitch Black 2015-01-21 22:12:47 UTC
    3458
  5. Separation 2015-05-31 17:29:37 UTC
    4291