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Outstanding

by TheGuyWithAPen
A mistake in time-travel leads to a dystopian reality in which a human-turned-pony must restore the world. Problem is, he has to convince the world that it's wrong in the first place.

THIS STORY IS NO LONGER BEING WORKED ON. IT WILL NOT CONTINUE TO BE UPDATED.
IN OTHER WORDS, IF YOU DON'T LIKE GETTING ATTACHED TO CHARACTERS AND THEN BE LEFT WITH AN UNRESOLVED STORY, DON'T CONTINUE.

Why is it that the biggest responsibilities are placed on the most undeserving of beings?
Why is it that Marshall Bradley was sucked away by a portal into a land of equine creatures? Why is it that said creatures had to experiment with time travel and ruin the entire world? And why is it that Marshall is the only one who knows about it?

Maybe it is so they can grow into something better, something more.
Maybe it's time to be outstanding.

This story contains copious amounts of Nyx. If you haven't read Past Sins, you might get a bit lost. All credit for Nyx and Past Sins goes to Penstroke. (Except for the stuff that I wrote in this story. That goes to me. I'm so selfish.)

Teen
Cancelled
Science Fiction
Adventure
Human
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Alternate Universe
 
PTCFO

34892 words: Estimated about 3 hours to read

7 Chapters:

  1. Space Portals? 2014-12-04 00:10:40 UTC
    8274
  2. Chapter 2 2017-02-27 09:13:12 UTC
    7715
  3. Chapter 3 2017-02-27 09:13:33 UTC
    4490
  4. Chapter 4 2017-02-27 09:13:40 UTC
    8288
  5. Chapter 5 (Unfinished) 2017-02-27 09:13:49 UTC
    1259
  6. Notes and things 2017-02-27 11:04:37 UTC
    3424
  7. A couple more character sheets, because I think they're interesting 2017-02-27 11:13:47 UTC
    1442