
Pinkie and the Chocolate Factory
Our favorite ponies decide to visit the new Chocolate Factory.
One day, Spike finds a flyer advertising a new chocolate factory that has recently opened in Fillydelphia saying that they are giving free tours. He tries to convince Twilight to take him, and that's where we join them.
This is my first story that I've really written, so constructive criticism is welcome. I don't technically have a proof reader, but I think that I do a pretty good job of catching any mistakes, with some help from spell check.
Um, yeah. Enjoy.




8850 words: Estimated 44 minutes to read
7 Chapters:
- Prologue 2012-03-10 23:19:25 UTC1264
- Let's go with Chapter 1 2012-07-06 16:42:45 UTC1155
- Let's keep it up! Chapter 2 2012-07-06 16:39:47 UTC1327
- And now we're on Chapter 4! 2012-07-06 18:29:16 UTC1033
- Whoops! I skipped Chapter 3... 2012-08-04 03:47:02 UTC1345
- Is this Chapter 5? 2012-08-05 23:48:24 UTC1158
- Great, now I lost count... 2012-08-29 01:12:21 UTC1568