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Pinkie and the Chocolate Factory

by Quill and Brush
Our favorite ponies decide to visit the new Chocolate Factory.

One day, Spike finds a flyer advertising a new chocolate factory that has recently opened in Fillydelphia saying that they are giving free tours. He tries to convince Twilight to take him, and that's where we join them.

This is my first story that I've really written, so constructive criticism is welcome. I don't technically have a proof reader, but I think that I do a pretty good job of catching any mistakes, with some help from spell check.

Um, yeah. Enjoy.

Everyone
Complete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Comedy
Random
Adventure
Crossover
 
MOSP

8850 words: Estimated 44 minutes to read

7 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 2012-03-10 23:19:25 UTC
    1264
  2. Let's go with Chapter 1 2012-07-06 16:42:45 UTC
    1155
  3. Let's keep it up! Chapter 2 2012-07-06 16:39:47 UTC
    1327
  4. And now we're on Chapter 4! 2012-07-06 18:29:16 UTC
    1033
  5. Whoops! I skipped Chapter 3... 2012-08-04 03:47:02 UTC
    1345
  6. Is this Chapter 5? 2012-08-05 23:48:24 UTC
    1158
  7. Great, now I lost count... 2012-08-29 01:12:21 UTC
    1568