The Orgin Of Ace Fire Heart

by AcefireHeart

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Romance, Comedy, Adventure
Length: 2339

This is the story of a pony from a lost clan is found by twilight and rasied back to heatlh (if you are reading this thank you for your time to read this is my first fan fiction

My oc (Ace Fire Heart ) and his story on his first few days in ponyvile

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-22 01:41:48 UTC

The Begining

As the sun was just rising over the distant mountians. Twilight was just waking up. Twlight was adjecting her hazel eyes to her purple furry body all to her horn and mane. She noticed that it was a chill morning and was hoping it would soon warm up. She decided it was time to get up after a few mintues, she liked to start her mornings off early and happy

she cleaned up and sat down in front of her living room window to enjoy the rest of the sunrise with a book she was loaned… she was soon lost in the pages

“Today seems like a good day today” said Twilight as she closed the final book Celestia gave her to study she walked outside only to fine a portal closing by her front door not only a few steps away out came a beautiful pure white Pegasus with a bright red orange and yellow mane came out with black and blue bruises following his ever tall muscle body…wait what she thought”am I being attracted to this pony I never meet before even though I know every pony in this town why don’t I see if he is ok” She walks slowly over even if no pony is outside or even awake she makes sure no pony is watching. She pokes the body with a hoof. The figure moans and rolls up into a ball like he is cold. Twilight picks up the figure finding its really light. She walks inside lying the figure gently down on the couch . Twilight says “well this pony is light better make it something to-“.Twilight gets cut off when his mane catches on fire she backs off as the figure wakes up slowly . She then takes notice that’s he is a statilion aslo that he is weak and needs help right away Twilight thinks about taking him to a hospital but she gets an idea! Twilight walks up stairs to wake up Spike her dragon helper. He gets up with a start” twilight its to early even celestia wouldn’t be up.Spike just write to the Pricness tell her to meet me her now” . “Send it?” Yes said twilight as the letter is sent. Then Princess Celestia forms into a solid state. “Yes twilight what’s is important?”.”just please come down stairs Spike go back to bed”.Celestia shakes her head and follows her. I found a pony outside this morning not to long ago.Celestia looks at the pony. ‘How did he get hurt?’. ‘I have no idea can you heal him?’

Celestia nods ‘yes but before I do may I ask you a question?’ Twilight nods ‘yes’ “do you have a liking for this statilion?”. “what….. kind of question is that ?” Celestia looks at her daring her to refuse but twilight dosent she silentily says “yes…”

Celestia looks up shocked as her loyal student blushed “happy now can you heal him?” Celestia nods and heals him then leaves looking happy. The station gets up looking around “where am i?”Twilight then replied “Your in my house located in ponyvile” He shook his long hair that shown a horn for a few seconds then disappeared in his mane “Look just tell me how I got here I don’t remember anything” Twilight told him that he came though a portal during 1:00 am “ wow this sounds crazy but what and who am i?” Twilight said “Well you have wings so you would be a pegaus but you have a horn so you are an alicorn like me, Princess Celestia Princess Luna and my Friend Candence. He sat up making room for her “Do you have a name?” She asked he instantly replied “Ace Fire Heart”

Ace's Memory

                 Twilight didn't know what to say at this point.She knew she heard the name Ace FireHeart before." SPIKEEE!" Twilight shouted.Ace stood up shaking his head thinking " This spike I hope is friendly".Spike walked down the stairs Ace stepped back a few feet." Spike is a dragon!" Ace yelled loud enough to walk part of ponyvile. Twilight said softly"Shut Up! Skipe is the most frendly dragon then 99% of dragons.I meet qutie a few dragons." Ace calmed down a few as spike walked up to him. "Hi there Im spike as Twilight said a few times.". Spike held out his claw and Ace shook it. "Twilight  you called for a reason i hope.". Twilight nodded "Yes i need to find a book about everypony everborn in equestia." faster then lighting spike found the book and shown it to Twilight."Twilight this is the biggest book in this whole town and you ask me to find it?" Twilight snapped her face sent a mental  note to spike that shut him up. Ace spoke up to break the tenson " lets find out who i am okay then i can go where i belong" Twilight quickly looked over " And if your not there then what?" Ace nodded " then i'll make a name for myself! Build myself from nothing if i have to do it. Ace felt a switch go off in is brain. and twilight seemed to feel it to."you remember something?". Ace felt a strange voice in the back off his head nagging away his Thoughts like a wolf in a flock of sheep

Memorys was flying through his mind. He half hoped twilight couldnt read mind seeing she was an alicorn you can never by to careful.He saw he with a beautiful mare.he was then fighting but this time his fur was red and he even put fear into himself . this was who his.he was Ace FireHeart a hero A lover and a Pycho.Before Twilight can say a word He ran away out of the house and to a nearby pub to hide. he scared himself he was a bit more afraid then he showed.None could help him from himself. His pyscho spoke louder and louder more and more telling him thoughts on what to do

Ace's Return to Twilight

3 years later Ace became 17 years old . He stayed Away from Twilight yet stayed close to her so he knows her actions. In three years Twilight has seached night time with her friends. Ace knew about this before so he made a fake name and made friends with Apple Jack the cowgirl as he called her sometimes. Rainbow dash the pegusis and Flutter shy the shy one. Flutter shy was a hard one to make friends with because of her shyness. Ace found it out that quickly and a the same time learned Angel her pet Rabbit was taking by a eagle. Ace tackled the eagle making him drop Angel and returned him to Flutter Shy. By doing so he earned Flutter shy trust and be friended Rarity ,and Pinkie pie.Under his fake name and new friends he made a name for himself as Ace. He often helped out the normal ponies by solving problems. He even handled his pyscho that tells him about the murders and killing about most of the time.He also made friends with Dj Vinly scatch who kept saying he is like an older brother to her.

Ace decided it was time to face Twilight and face her wraith.Ace began walking to her house thinking "If she see's me now it would kill her or me hopefully not no one."Ace knocked on the door and it opened with no one was there. Ace slipped in and shut the door. He heard crying coming from Twilight's room. Ace quietly went up stairs to her room and looked inside to see tilight looking at a board crying it had Pictures of Ace in different area's of ponyvile. Tilight had a book she was writing in and set it down to look carefully. twilight said out loud " He comes and goes he is like a ghost but why did he run away from me? I didnt do nothing to him besides save his life". Ace flew quietly next to her and spoke his first words to Twilight " Messy room Twilight guess i should of came sooner." Before he can say another word twilight tackled him to the ground. Before he knew it Rainbow was there then Pinkie pie, AppleJack, Flutter shy surpired him by hugging him and Rarity just by smiling weridly.Ace said "get off me please..." Twilight laughed "And for what you to run away no we are gonna sleephere and you are to staying right in this house!" Pinkie smiled " oh yay a  party I love parties!"

Before long a party was set up and Ace began to enjoy his friends. He explained to them what he truly was. twilight enjoyed hearing this. Rainbow dash laughed a lot Flutter shy and Rarity both looked scared. Apple Jack spoke up at long last "So you here are aa crazy pony?" Ace said " well more or less... He wont hurt good ponies he respects those but he says any bad ponies he kills and or harms." Rainbow decided to ask a question " can we see your Pycho?!?!" Twilight snapped " No! his pyscho can kill us!" Ace calmly repiled " If he tries to I kill us both thats the thing that sercues his trust so you all are save" Ace started to hand controlover to his pyscho self. Twilight took notes as his fur turned to a blood red and his eyes turned blood shot. Everyone besides Twilight backed off a few steps. "Hello Miss twilight sparkle" the pyscho said with a rasp voice  Twilight calmly said " I seen enough Ace take control again. Ace shifted back into control before anypony said a  word Ace fell down holding his head with one hoove

" I'll be fine just a headache." Ace said as the others fainted besides Twilight. Twilight seemed Bussiness like. " so Ace I never knew how you seem so.... " " Werid?" Ace finshed for her " Yea i wonder myself at times" Twilight got closer to him " I was going to say Awesome but that works to." Ace laughed " You are probably the most easy going unicorn I have ever met." Ace said "well yeabut im not a unicorn anymore I'm like you" Ace repiled " A pyscho?" Twilight laughed for a few " No An Alicorn like you" Twilight leaned to kiss Ace. Ace was surpised at first then enjoyed it. If equestia fell right then and there Ace wouldn't care. Twilight loved him and so Did Ace. twilight fell alsleep next to him. Ace drifted slowy asleep " If i die tommorrow at least i know some pony loves me" Ace fell alseep As Luna watched him from her castle smiling at Ace. "Tell celestia The Ace returns Guard and come moring Ace and Twilight will be here talking to us about  kissing our... Brother. Luna smiled as she walked away

History Of the Hearts

Author's note: Sorry for the wait on had a seroius writers block chapter 2but here is Chapter 2

                                   Chapter 2  The History of The Hearts

In the begining in the badlands the wildlife killed anypony nearby.The ponies group together and made the Clan The Hearts due the the founders cutie mark being a Heart.When a bandit clan formed and attacked the Hearts fought with the power of a Dragon protecting its Hoard they were unstopable till a Giant that has unknown to anypony attacked crushing the oringal area they lived they ran off to settle anew. Ace's Dad came from a portal in Equestia  when he was being crashed by dragons.  When the portal closed Ace's mother found him and knew he was send to slay the giant. they fell in love that day and soon She was pregant with Ace. Sadly she didnt last as long as she hoped She died when a bandit tried to  steal Ace when he was a year old. His father became drunk and started training Ace to the bone.  Ace when he was five killed another heart menber from talking bad about his father.Soon when Ace was old enough they sent him to the rite of passage to kill a bandit by himself. Ace found the bandit that killed his mother. Filled with rage Ace ripped out his lungs out and used his dead corspe to kill the other bandits around him. Ace returned to find the blood of the ponies he killed stayed on his White fur. He returned to find his dad killed by the giant he didnt slay. Filling Ace with more Anger and sadness he forged his own weapon a Buzz saw Axe pure white with a black blade. the giant name was RoJaq the slayer. Ace fooled RoJaq to eating him and Ace sliced open his chest and pulled out his heart.

When Ace returned he found a mare he couldnt help but love her name was Wave Shower her cutie mark was a drop if water because she drowned a bandit in water.Wave fell in love with him to but a problem arose. Well Ace killed the giant he was a bit pyscho seeing that his mom's body was in the giant's stomach being slowy eattin by acid. Ace married her and Wave was pregiant when Ace went off in a mission to destory a entie bandit camo he return with 5 allies alive out of 50. He saved five of them and failed the mission. Ace was then attacked by his own clan menbers and killed defended himself and his wife.When Wave died he went full head on pyscho killing nintiny percent of his clan. he was attacked four days later. being badly wounded and seached for he found the portal his father went through from equstia and fainted inside leaving him at the doorstep of Twilight's Front door

End of chapter Two

Authors note: This chapter was sorta rushed seing how this was a flash back chapter (sorta) I will get back to making chapter 3 right away!