Ghosts of Equestria /-/ A broken world

by TheGatekeeper64

Rating: mature
Tags: Tragedy, Adventure, Crossover, Dark, Alternate Universe, Sad
Length: 229

jake was a normal everyday pony but that all changed when the federation fired oden across the world (first story hope you all like it) (going to be alot of errors =/ )

It was a diffrent time a diffrent enemy… sixty men from tear one teams where sent down to face a enemy force of five-hundred… there objective.. to push bake the enemy force from a civilian hospital and keep its occupants alive… three days they held there ground but the force was to grate the sixty where cut down to fifteen they wouldent last another night and the enemy knew it… under the cover of darkness they evacuated the hospital sending only one of there own to lead the way the rest returned to the line and took covoer under the bodys of there allies… as the blood poured over them and the sand stuck to them like a shroud changing them anointing them… when the enemy drew near the soldiers rose out of the desert sand they were like a hunter that couldent be seen useing stealth there enemys couldent defend against when the men ran dry of ammo they used there blades and when the blades ran dull they used there hands when the dust and sand had settled only one of the enemy had survived… he was picked up in the desert wondering aimlessly.. traumatized… he warned others of the force that was so menacing it could only be described as super-natural

Hi there this is my first story i hope lime it some of u will be like [img]http://knowyourmeme.com/photos/270775-what-the-fuck-am-i-reading[/img] (hopefully in a good way) just remember this is the first story ever published by me (yes i know im a horid writer)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-12-02 05:09:31 UTC

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t was a diffrent time a diffrent enemy...    sixty men from tear one teams where sent down to face a enemy force of five-hundred... there objective.. to push bake the enemy force from a civilian hospital and keep its occupants alive... three days they held there ground but the force was to grate the sixty where cut down to fifteen they wouldent last another night and the enemy knew it... under the cover of darkness they evacuated the hospital sending only one of there own to lead the way the rest returned to the line and took covoer under the bodys of there allies... as the blood poured over them and the sand stuck to them like a shroud changing them anointing them... when the enemy drew near the soldiers rose out of the desert sand they were like a hunter that couldent be seen useing stealth there enemys couldent defend against when the men ran dy of ammo they used there blades and when the blades ran dull they used there hands when the dust and sand had settled o ly one of the enemy had survived... he was picked up in the desert wondering aimlessly.. traumatized... he warned others of the force that was so menacing it could only be described as super-natural

one thing i have to ask you. Do you believe in ghosts?