Coma - Unlocking the Secrets of Earth and Equestria

by Treble_Sketch

Rating: everyone
Tags: Princess Celestia, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Main 6, Princess Luna, Original Character, Comedy, Other, Adventure
Length: 3721

When all the bronies in the world are gone and there families devastated, where did they all go?

When all the bronies in the world are gone and their families devastated, where could they have all gone? Come find the answers out as our three ponified friend brave the dangers and fun of Equestria as they help the whole world of bronies and also the whole of Equestria find its secrets and its origins.

This is book 1 out of the 6 book series.
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This story will be on hiatus until I can find a time to finish it. You can message me if you really want me to finish it.
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And now thank you for the help of exswaggerwes for editing and pre-reading.

The story will now pick up it's pace soon. I will really hope that I can add more chapters soon.

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I just quickly found a image, because this is starting to get boring with no cover art.

Published 2013-12-02 15:20:12 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-07 05:22:23 UTC

1 - Prologue. The Start

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Equuis

Equestria

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In the deep dark depths of the Everfree forest, there lay a portal that connects the magical world of Equsetria and to our own very real Earth.

But in that portal, something has corrupted its use that has been forgotten for the past ten thousand years ever since it was last used.

The problem has grown from a little glitch in the calculations of WhenSIT (When Should I Teleport) to the most important part of the device;

the WhoSIT (Who Should I Teleport) mechanism. As the name suggests it will calculate who should I teleport from what time I’m teleporting.

And now that corrupted machine is getting ready to teleport a special group of people, people who have been; discriminated, stereotyped,

bullied and be treated like they are some alien from another world, and the machine is going take them away from the world, what most people want,

one person at a time.

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13:05 28/01/2014

Earth

Australia

Bordertown

Train Tracks

Titus Huang was on the train to Melbourne, he was going to one of Australia's only Brony Conventions, held in Marebourne, Melbourne.

This was his first ever bronycon event that he have ever went to, he had been in the brony community for only four months and he is getting invited

into lots of shows and events. He is also making music, art and stories for the fun and enjoyment of it. PonyCon Au has specially invited to showcase

his latest work and the inspiration behind it, he is also the youngest brony in the worldwide community. Titus was just going to the buffet trailer

when a wave of nausea hit him, his legs gone immediately soft. Causing him to fall on the spot,

it wasn't until a few seconds later when someone came around the corner and helped him up. "Are you okay?” asked the gentlemen.

"Yes, I think, I'm fine now. Thank You." replied Titus. Only to immediately drop again.

Then it went black.

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01:15 11/05/2013

Earth

Australia

Darwin

McLachlan Street

George Smith was at home, in his comfortable bed, it was one fifteen in the morning and he was waiting for the live broadcast on

Hubworld on his computer. This was the Season 4 finale, where she have to defeat Nightmare Moon in order to save Equestria to prevent

the moon to crash into Equsetria. The finale was his very first MLP episode that he has watched live.

It was just minuets till the broadcast when he too started to feel a small dizzy sensation, like the whole room is put in a boat and let a drift,

he got worried, so he went down stairs to take some aspirin to lessen the effect of the headache.

Or so he thought

He would not want the headache to ruin his very special day. Just as he headed up the stairs, the world fell beneath his feet.

Then it went black.

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08:42 01/08/2014

Earth

United States of America

Boston

Logan International Airport, Terminal 1

Edmund Stevens was very excited today, today is the day where he would be going to one of the world’s biggest convention of its type,

it was predicted that approximately 10,000 people will attend over the three day event held in Baltimore Convention Centre and the

Hilton Baltimore Hotel in America. “Purple Tinker” will invite again Tara Strong, John de Lancie, and the MLP: Fighting is Magic development group

saying how much they thank the generous donations and help from the brony society and other voice actors involved.

He had just arrived from down under, when just as he stepped on American land, he started to feel nausea and dizzy.

But he discarded the feeling and continued to the flight attendant when he fainted. The world was spinning like an out of control roller coaster.

Then it went black.

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18:10 20/12/2014

Earth

Australia

Adelaide

Channel 7 News Broadcasting Room

"Welcome back, and now after the break the latest new from around the world." said the Adelaide new anchor men John Riddle. "We have startling new news from around the

world, reporting that a group of people who call themself: Bronies. Have been suspected to be targeted by a secret terrorist group sited in the jungles of the Amazon,

these 'bronies' are fans of a peculiar show called 'My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'. This group of people happened to be also men,

the reason to why are they targeted are still known but we will keep you updated on this still developing story throughout the night. Now Jane on to you."

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07:29 25/12/2014

Earth

United States of America

Langley

FBI agency HQ

"Morning Mr de Lancie and Mrs Faust, I really appreciated that you came here so early in the morning. I assume that you already know about the incident with the

bronies who you are part of. All of these people who the doctors around the world have been pronounced that they are in a very weird kind of Coma,

these people have been read a high rating of PCI or Perturbation Complexity Index. This means that even though their body is not in motion,

but their minds are behaving like they are operating a full functional body. *cough* Sorry, I'm a bit sick lately." croaked Mr Anderson. "It's okay,

but is that all you've got in that report?" asked Mr de Lancie. "*cough* Oh, no. There is just a tiny bit here on the lower left hand corner," replied Mr Anderson.

"It says here, 'This event was described by local and worldwide psychics to be a supernatural and scientific event that this world has never seen before.'

This is the even more mysterious bit about this is that, that phrase was never written in the report but no matter how many times we have tried to reprint

this over and over again. Do you know anything about this, Mr de Lancie? Mrs Faust"

Mr John de Lancie and Mrs Lauren Faust looked at each other nervously, then looked at Mr Anderson and said,

"Not sure, but we will find out soon"

2 - Chapter 1. The Void of Consciousness

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13:09 28/01/2014

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"Ugh, my head" groaned William Huang, "What happened?" He looked around, he was in the entrance of a dark forest. When he tried to lift up his

arm, a weird sensation swept through his body. "Weird... What happened to my arm?" thought William, he looked down and saw a

arm that doesn't look like his. The arm had dark blue fur all over and a shiny light blue coloured hoof at the end of it.

He fainted again.

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01:23 11/05/2014

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George Smith woke up with a sound that sounded like a growl. He opened his eyes and saw himself in front of a dark, gloomy forest with a

sign saying 'Keep Out' and a wolf looking at him with its teeth barred. "Ahh-" screamed George, just as the wolf attacks.

George held up his hand and only saw a leg and a hoof come up instead of a hand with fingers, he had just enough time to process the thought

before the wolf came down on him, he felt it bit on his leg and the sharp intense pain that came afterwards.

Then out of nothing came a lavender kind of beam came and hit the wolf on the side, who yelped at its singed tail and ran off.

All George could see was six horses, no wait, ponies to be exact, walking towards him and the one with blonde hair asked,

"Yer alright, sugarcube?"

Then he fainted again.

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08:50 01/08/2014

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Edmund Stevens was a guy, who likes things done in a neat orderly fashion. Everything done had to be in order and also in the right sequence.

But when he wakes up outside a forest with is hair full of dirt and twigs, you get very grumpy Edmund.

It would be even more shocking is that when he tried to clean his hair in a river nearby, his reflection is totally different that his

usual face. He then screamed and fell into the river.

As he tried to get his breath he saw a yellow pegasus flew come overhead with another pegasus this time blue, after some failed

attempts they finally grabbed him and hoist him out of the river. The blue pegasus asked, "What is your name and are you okay?"

He coughed some water and tried to speak but he didn't have the strength,

and he fainted.

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10:15 15/05/2014

Earth

Australia

Adelaide

Royal Adelaide Hospital

"Doctor Anderson. You said that this isn't serious, right?" asked Mrs. Smith.

"Maybe, but that was before I examine his consciousness levels and looked up the symptoms online" replied Dr. Anderson,

"This seems to be more than just local, this same type of incidents have been recorded around the world."

"But doctor, I am just asking one simple question 'IS MY SON ALRIGHT?'" questioned Mrs Smith quite seriously.

"... Well. Yes and No. You see, everything about him is all fine, in tip top conditions you might say. But up top, in his mind. Something

strange has happened there. There is no one up there. But for some reasons, well, it is too hard to say. I'll just say it like this.

He has got no one controlling his body because for some reason, that person up there driving his body is just not there.

But before you say anything, in the report that I've read there has been connections or similarities in these cases. It has been

recommended that this questioned had to be asked."

The doctor then looked Mrs. Smith in the eye, and also at the same time not to laugh is educated mind off.

"Has your son been in contacted or had heard or even knew someone who is a 'Brony'?" asked the doctor.

"Yes." replied Mrs. Smith

"Well then it looks like we have a big problem."

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09:02 25/11/2014

Equiss

Equestria

Ponyville

Ponyville General, Room 709

"We really need to tell Princess Celestria about this, there has been a dramatic increase in patient admittance in hospitals right

from outside the Everfree forest all the way to Canterlot. This is news that has got to go to the princess, Ms. Sparkle!"

"Calm your horses Dr. Well. We don't want to wake up all the other patients. Also, I just need a bit more time to find out why they have been

appearing non-stop in this region for the last 10 months."

There came a groan from bed number 715.

"Well you better hurry, all the beds in Ponyville General have been full so we have been using civilian's house for quite some time now.

I have been monitoring all the patients across Ponyville and some signs show that they will wake up soon. If any more come in,

I could not imagine what are we going to do? We might have to transport them to Manehattan." exclaimed Doctor Feel Well, "Oh Celestria, think of all the costs.

A report just came in recently, it say that approximately 1.5 million patients across Equestria now have these same symptoms.

And just think of-"

"Wait doctor, I would just like to talk to this trying-to-fake-sleeping pony here a few questions." interrupted Princess Twilight Sparkle. "Come on,

I know that you are awake."

The mysterious patient suddenly jumped up on his hind leg and started jumping up and down on the bed and started asking questions so rapidly that,

nor the doctor and Twilight could understand what this pony is saying. There was also one thing about this pony that Twilight couldn't shake.

Was it the way how he stand that she had seen a year ago, while on her trip to Earth to retrieve the crown stolen by Sunset Shimmer.

Twilight winced at the thought. The pony was asking all sorts of questions like "IS your name really Twilight Sparkle or are you just

Tara Strong pretending to be Twilight. Oh my God. The fur, the wing and the uniform. They all looks so real, is this real real or just another

artificial world where I am bolted to it so that it can get power. Or that I must be imagining things." said the mystery patient enthusiastically,

"Oh and also, just out of the curiosity. Where am I?"

"We are in Ponyville General in Ponyville, which is in the world of Equestria. Just due south of the Crystal Empire and am just another big lump of

rock floating in space. Which could be one of the many-"

"Thank you Ms Sparkle, I think that would be enough for this gentlecolt here." interrupted the doctor,

"He just now needed to calm down and answer some questions to give us some answers. but now we need to ask you; Who are you? Where are you from? and

Why are you here?"

"Well...I hope this wouldn't shock you doctor, but I'm sure Twilight wouldn't mind. I'm actually a human that got transferred here by some random

reason that I don't know. And oh! My name is William Huang. And it is such a nice pleasure to meet you Princess Twilight Sparkle.

Plus I have no absolutely no idea what has happened and why am I here. And from the number of suddenly appeared ponies, I'll say we've got the world's

brony community here too! Wow, I always know that any fictional world could be just an alternate universe that the creator saw in their dreams.

But I never thought that the theory could be true! WOW!"

After some long awkward silence and considerable thoughts, the doctor said, "Ms Sparkle, I think it would be appropriate if we but this mad pony on some

strong medication for the next few weeks and let's see what happens."

"No, No, No. If what he said is true, we may have a big problem on our hands." replied Princess Twilight, "I have to report this to princess Celestria

immediately, he may have come through the portal. But this seems like it is not the case."

"Oh! You mean the magic mirror in the room somewhere in the Crystal Empire's castle. The one that you used to travel to Earth, but not the Earth I'm from.

You see, it was just another fictional story or a spin-off from the original story line. just nothing much." said William casually.

"What!!! Now how did you know about this mirror, only Celestria, Luna, Cadance, my friends and I know about this mirror."

"Nah, nothing much. Just saw this from the movie released last year on my computer with all my friends and stuff. If I remembered correctly, it was called...

ah.. yes... My Little Pony: Equestria Girls. And it was about how you went to the Crystal Empire and one night a mysterious mare called Sunset Shimmer came

and stole you crown, you found out in the nick of time and chased her to mirror but the crown fell through and- arnhgph!"

"Yes, Yes. We all know that." then she whispered in my ear, "Now that is my only we know about the mirror. Now you better hush up or I'll do a memory wipe

on that piece of memory. Would you like that?" William shook his head "Good, now that’s what I like to see. Now, what was that you said about computers?"

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13:30 Around 2014 Christmas

Earth

United States of America

Las Angeles

CEO Meeting Room

It was an intensive mood as the group entered the meeting room in an orderly kind of shuffle. They were trying to lighten the mood a little but know that

would be done in vain. 'It was like trying to stop a storm cloud from raining' as suggested by Ashleigh Ball, who is the voice actress for

Rainbow Dash and Applejack, weird, right? It is kind of funny right there. If you would to first stripe away all the fancy animations and just look at the

voice actors perform their role, you would see Tara Strong voicing Twilight and then you would see Ashleigh doing Rainbow Dash and then the sarcastically

reply that she would give herself but in Applejack's voice. As they each took a seat the Hub boss took note of each and one as they turned and looked at him,

John de Lancie (who voiced Discord) sat on the left side of him, Lauren Faust (the creator of the series) helped herself with a cup of cold water,

Meaghan McCarthy (who is one of the major writers of the series) was having a short conversation to M. A. Larson (who also writes episodes),

Ashleigh Ball (voices Rainbow Dash and Applejack) and Cathy Wesluck (who voice Spike) and Andrea Libman (who voices Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie) are having

a conversation about the gossips that are trending in Hollywood and James Wootton (the director) was just looking a bit worried at the sudden call to the

Hub boss's special meeting room. "Ugerhum, could we get onto business now?" said the boss once they were starting to get noisy.

"Also, where is the rest of the crew?"

"Oh... Tara is out auditioning for some other movie that her agent has said was urgent, Tabitha (who voices Rarity) is on a holiday with her family

Nicole (who voice Princess Celestria) is also on holiday and the rest, who knows where they went!" replied James Wootton, who was all too happy to

break his silence streak. There came a sigh from the other end of the table. "Well, looks like we will just have to begin without them."

"You all know why I asked you all to come to my office this close to Christmas, do you all?" "Yes" came a chorus of replies from the other end of the table.

The mood in the dropped another record-breaking low, if that is even possible. "Well you see, I have recently just received news from my management group

that the views have plunged record low, the lowest views on television world-wide. We have become a laughing stock of American TV.

Even the Australians are doing better than us! The sales of merchandise have shrined by 97%!

Parents are scared that if their kids watch the show they would all fall into comas, just like all the bronies around the world!

The authorities are trying to find logical reasons of why this is happening and I am now very worried that they may blame it all on us!" exclaimed the boss,

"Imagine what if we got sued or, or, or. I just couldn't imagine it. It could cost us millions for this. IT WOULD BE A-" BBBUUUUZZZZZZZZZZ.

Everyone around the table jumped up 6 centremetres. "Mr. ??? you now need to take you anxiety medicine now please." buzzed Mrs. Brice through the intercom,

"And also, sorry about that." There came a murmured sounds of "That’s ok" or "It's fine, no need to be worried about it" and stuff like that.

After the medicine was swallowed and water drunk, Mr. ??? continued with the meeting. "So after some very thoughtful consideration,

I have decided to cut all My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic production after Christmas.

One, due to the lack of cast and staff no one would be able to make the animations. It also seems like that you were not informed that some of the cast

have fallen into these mysterious comas that have already spread world-wide. Two, the public's safety has also been considered. It was not my decision,

the government has told us to stop broadcasting the show and if we don't, as I said before. Lawsuit would be involved. And Three, it is also getting costly.

James got out of his chair and stood up. "But come on, just give us one last chance. We will try to figure out what happen to the bronies and I will

find all the information you need before-"

THUMP! CRASH! THUD!

Now James Wootton is lying on the ground with a flower jar broken next to him, as he fell he bumped the jar along the way. James Wootton is now added to

the long list of pony-related coma or now known more commonly by doctors Broma, a mix of brony and coma. Everyone except the boss got out of their chairs

and helped James up, who was already unconscious. As Andrea and Larson got out of their chairs they went back down immediately lying on the floor in a heap of

meat and bones, next the victim of the coma was Cathy "Quick, we need a medical team here ASAP!" commanded Cathy, like as if she was Princess Celestria

"We also need the ambu-"

THUMP

She then fell onto the floor.

Mr. Goldner then calmly pressed his finger on the intercom, "Mrs. Brice, could you please all the medical team to my meeting room ASAP and call the

ambulance and also tell them it's a serious coma case." "Should I tell them to hurry as well?" replied Mrs. Brice, "Yes please, thank you Mrs. Brice and

also tell them that they might need to send a couple more, just in case."

By the time he looked back there was all but one person that had drifted away to some unknown place. Suddenly the med team burst into room,

and just in time, as Lauren Faust's mind finally gave way to the force that drags her to some unknown place.

She slips from our reality consciously and entered the world of her dreams, the world that she envisioned five years ago that has taught the world to be

loyal to others, to have kindness, be generous, be honest, to laugh and to have the occasional spark of magic.

She and her friends are about to enter the world that she got the ideas from, the world of

Equestria.

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