Final Destination Lifespan (MLP Story) Part 1/9: Premenition

by DashianceThe1st

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Tragedy, Alternate Universe, Human, Sad, Dark
Length: 2046

Warning. The Following story contains Death, Gore, and most importantly, creepy ways to die. If you are under 17, this may not be suitable for you. Please, enjoy. If you would like to, you may do a read-out, or a comic of this, but you have to credit me on my YouTube: Jeremy DPancakes.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-12-05 00:47:08 UTC

Premenition

Final Destination Lifespan (an MLP story)

                                                                            Chapter 1:

  Premenition

It was a normal day at McKinley High School. Everyone was doing something, well, school-worthy. All except 10 people, who were working in the gym, cleaning up the Thanksgiving party/dance from 2 weeks ago. These people were not like other people. These 10 people came from a "different" school, though only them knew where. Secretly, they were The EG Mane 6, Vinyl Scratch, Octavia, TGAP Trixie, and Big Macintosh. Though McKinley High School had a DARK history of death from 7 years ago. 8 people got off the Devil's Flight roller coaster and they all died 1 by 1 after. Someone finally decided to break the silence after 2 hours of nothing. "I honestly have NO IDEA when we get out of school.I mean, really. This school's bell schedule is crap." This voice belonged to none other than Rainbow Dash, Element of Loyalty, and Mane 6 Member. "Because Rainbow, it's 1:30, not 4:35. Not yet." This belonged to Twilight Sparkle, Magic and Mane 6. "True, but I want to go home. I'm famous here and i'm stuck disposing of unwanted TABLECLOTHS. I think i'll keep some." Rarity said, exposing some of her new-found greediness. "SURPRISE EVERYONE! BACK FROM MY SHOP!" exclaimed a voice from the balcony. "Pinkie where have you been? We've needed you helping us for hours!" Applejack said, as she was putting some silverware into the boxes. "Eyup," said Big Mac, or Macintosh for short. Also I think you know the Mane 6's elements, so yeah. "Oh i've been busy making some CUPCAKES!" The amunt of cupcakes she made? 32,400. "I made 180 batches of 180 cupcakes, but no matter how hard I try and wish, that clock WON'T say 1:80!" the pink bouncing human said. Remember this is the Equestria Girls Mane 6, just with white skin color, and human names. "Wait, 180 cupcakes and batches?" asked Twilight. "Yeah! I went BEYOND on this one! A guy named "D" ordered them and said wait until the clock strikes 1:80!" Pinkie screamed. "180. Celestia and Luna told us to watch out for that number. They said it caused 5 groups of people a LOT of trouble. Ah well, back to cleaning stages." Twilight thought to herself. "Stand back for The GREAT and POWERFUL Trixie has come back from the restroom!" Trixie said. Trixie was a former rival of Twilight's in Ponyville, but she never knew her at CHS. "Oh, hey Trixie. Did you HAVE to make that AMAZING entrance?" Rarity said with a little bit of sarcasm in her tone. "Yes, it was absolutely neccessary." she said back. The intercome turned on at that moment. "Hello McKinley students! Now for the announcements. As of 8:40 P.M tonight, the Devil's Fright roller coaster accident and the survivors death's memorial will be held tonight. And also, the weekly song of the day is...End of the World by R.E.M, recommended by student Kimberly Corman." The song started playing. "AWWWW YEAH! HE ACCEPTED IT!" Vinyl Scratch jammed along to the lyrics, but there was something off, that only Rainbow understood. She could only hear "End of You 10." She then noticed that there were 10 people in the gym CURRENTLY. "Oh come now Vinyl, my recommendation is next." Octavia said to her roomate. "Aw come on Tavi, no-one wants to listen to YOUR music." The intercom turned on again. "And for the next song...Diamond in the Rough by our own, Octavia Robin Anastasia!" Vinyl's mouth opened WIDE. Her song was better than her recommendation. "Nice song Octavia, got a nice rythym to it. Also like the idea of putting some of Vinyl's type in there." Rainbow said. "W-Well thank you Dash, no-one's ever thanked me for using Vinyl's type." Vinyl still stood there, mouth still opened and everything. The intercom turned on for the 3rd time. "And our last recommended song is...Breakneck Pace by Rani Deresh! The song started playing. "Who's is this?" Vinyl asked. "Yes, I know all the popular musicians here, and NONE of them do THIS." Octavia asked curiously. "Oh that's my song. You heard my initials there didn't ya?" Rainbow said braggingly. No-one knew she was kind of a musician. "Wow. Not bad Dash. This is coming from a person of music here-" "AHEM! 2 people of music." Octavia said, interrupting Vinyl. "Right, 2 people. Anyways, this is like the GOD of fast paced dubstep and rock." Vinyl said. "Hey thanks." Rainbow replied. Everyone in the gym suddenly clapped. Elsewhere, the balcony that Pinkie Pie was standing on and is STILL standing on started to loosen. Propane was leaking underneath and on the stage. Rarity then spilled some leftover drink, which was moldy from the party/dance. "EWWWWWWW! MOLDY CIDER!" she screamed as she picked it up, then she spilled it on an electrical socket. Applejack then laughed at her misfortune of moldy cider. "What's so funny farm girl? Laughing at your terrible cider?" Rarity still had an unusual grudge with Applejack over drink worth. "Is that a fact? Maybe i'll take your stupid sparkle water, and throw it all over you. Melting the witch side of you." Appelajck replied. "Oh IT...IS...ON!" Rarity then grabbed a fork and ran after AJ. The clock started to change numbers 30 then to 40 then to 50 before finally reaching 1:80. "Oh no. The number Celestia and Luna worried about. It's on the clock." Twilight said aloud. "What number? 180? Please. NOTHING bad has ever happened with that number. It's just a conspiracy." Rainbow assured her. Just then a newspaper flied into her face. It was a newspaper from "Stonybrook." "Hmmm, maybe a news article worth reading." Then something caught her eye. She saw a "Flight 180 crash memorial tonight at 8:40." This was the same number Twilight had been talking about since 4 months ago when they first arrived. "Oh crap." Rarity and AJ were fighting with a fork and a spoon, but Mac took both utensils out of theis hands. "Unhand me you beastly, but handsome, freak of nature!" Rarity screamed at Mac. "Well i'm sorry Miss Rarity, but you dont need to be fighting with my sister. You have no right." Mac said. Rarity sighed, then she apologized to Applejack. "Listen, i'm sorry AJ. I'm just so stressed after we moved here. I left all my friends behind to go into hiding because Sunset came back." she said. "Yeah me too, hey whatever happened to those pony versions of us? Hope they got rid of her." Aj replied. Mac took the fork and slipped on the cider and the fork SOMEHOW ended in the electrical socket. He screamed and they tried to pull him out, but with fear if being electrocuted as well. "MAC!" AJ screamed, " Oh my gosh Mac! I'm coming down!" Pinkie said, but at that moment she slipped on the balcony and fell down right onto her head! "Not Pinkie Too!" Octavia screamed. She rushed over to her, but the balcony fell on her skull, killing her instantly. Vinyl went to get her tunes, and stayed with Tavi's corpse for 3 seconds. "Okay, no more entrances. ONLY EXITS" Trixie screamed as the propane finally ignited, and set her on fire. She only said one more thing before her last breath was taken, "At least I went out in a blaze of glory." She didn't speak again. Rarity helped Fluttershy, who had been not-surprisingly silent through-out the day. Rarity noticed the curtains on the stage, and her greediness got the best of her. "MINE!" she exclaimed, and rushed over to get them. "RARITY WHAT ARE YOU DOING GET OVER HERE!" Twilight and Rainbow screamed. "What now! Can't hear you! Getting inspiration!" The curtain she didn't know was highly flammable and caught on fire, along with Rarity's hands. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" she screamed as she rushed to get it off. Unfortunately, she put her hands in the cider near the electrial socket, and she blew up from the fire and electricity, currenting inside and outside her now broken body. "OH MY DEAR CELESTIA RUN!" Fluttershy yelled as she, Vinyl, Rainbow, Applejack, and Twilight ran out. Applejack nor Fluttershy made it out, each a seperate death. Applejack got impaled by falling forks and spoons, and Fluttershy's was slow and painful. "Wait! I forgot Angel" Fluttershy said, as she rushed back inside. "FLUTTERSHY NO!" Vinyl screamed as she and Rainbow ran back inside. Fluttershy grabbed Angel, but her lowerhalf was cut off by a piece of a stage light. She screamed and they got to her. Fluttershy said, "Please, leave me. Take Angel with you." "NO! I WON'T LEAVE YOU!" Rainbow said to her. "Just...go" That was Fluttershy's last breath. The stage fire from earlier incinerated her body. Vinyl and Rainbow came out, tears streaking down. Vinyl said "I can't do it," then grabbed a nearby nail-gun, and set the fire speed to MAX. "Vinyl, don't do it." Vinyl aimed at her head. "DON'T" Rainbow and Twilight yelled. She pulled the trigger, but nothing happened. "Oh thank CELESTIA I didn't die." It was short-lived, for as she said that, the balcony from earlier blew up in the stage and flattened Vinyl's head, arms, and legs, leaving only er body and MP3 Player, which still played "A True, True Friend." "Vinyl, no!" Twilight screamed, as she tripepd and the nail gun finally went off, filling her heart and skull with super speed firing nails. Rainbow gasped, and got out of the building, right as it collapsed. She sighed, but not before hearing a voice. The voice said "No-one escapes Dashie. You and your friends will survive this, if they believe you..." the voice said as it fainted away. Rainbow looked confused, then screamed, for a steel 2x4 beam flew directly at her head. (Rewind to premention beginning.) "OH IT...IS...ON!" Rarity then grabbed a fork and ran at AJ. Rainbow gasped and then ran to Twilight. "Rainbow? What's wrong, you look like you saw a horror movie." she asked. "Oh WE ARE IN ONE RIGHT NOW! THE GYM IS GOING TO EXPLODE AND/OR COLLAPSE AS SOON AS THE PREPANE UNDER THAT STAGE LIGHTS! PINKIE COME DOWN FROM THERE!" she yelled. "Okay Dashie!", she leaped down and landed behind them. "Oh please. Your stories are AMAZINGLY real. It's like they're actuallygoing to happen." Trixie said to her. "NO I'M SERIOUS! DOES THIS FACE LOOK LIKE A FACE FOR A STORY!" Rainbow yelled so loud, that everyone there could hear it. Trixie looked into her eyes, and saw the premenition, for this was a skills she had learned from her parents. "No way. She's telling the truth. I'm OUT!" Trixie and Rainbow ran out of the gym. "Well if it's an excuse just to fight and watch, then lets go!" Rarity said to AJ. Vinyl, Octavia, Mac, and Fluttershy followed. Twilight and Pinkie ran after them, trying to convince them to stay. They got outside and the fight had ended. AJ got knocked out cold by Rarity after apparently, a "SHORYUKEN!" move. Looked like a move from a VERY strong Japanese guy. Then suddenly, the gym EXPLODED. It LITERALLY burst into pieces. Everyone moved out of the way of the debris. "Wow. She was right." Twilight said. "No way." Vinyl and Octavia said. AJ got up from that cheap shot and apologized about the laughter, after she saw the gym was on fire. Rarity apologized back. Pinkie just fainted. "I knew it." Trixie said. Rainbow just looked around and said, "We won't live." "Why do you say that Miss Dash?" Mac said. "I heard a voice that said "No-one escapes Dashie, You won't survive the after-coming party," or something like that. "We need to know EXACTLY WHAT THIS VOICE SAID! NOW WHAT DID HE SAY!" Mac yelled at Dash. "Hey calm down man! I don't remember." She said back. Mac didn't get a chance to reply back, because the balcony from the gym flew nto the sky like helicopter blades, and decapitated him. "OH MY DEAR CELESTIA!" Dash exclaimed. "It's happening" Twilight thought. "Out of all these people, and its US. What did we do?" She immediately knew the answer. "We cheated Death's plan. We are all going to die."

Stay tuned for Chapter 2: The Second Way.