A Little Crush

by marineproductions100

Rating: teen
Tags: Derpy Hooves, Slice of Life, Sweetie Belle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy, Rarity, Dinky Hooves, Romance, Fluttershy
Length: 3236

Dinky has a little crush on a specific unicorn and she doesn't know how to tell her. So she'll just invite her to a sleepover and explain everything. I wonder how Sweetie Belle is going to react. (you spoiled it) Dammit!

How do we start this? Let's start with from the beginning: Dinky has noticed that she has a little crush on somepony. And she finally has decided to tell the special somepony at a sleepover that Dinky has invited her to. Who is this special somepony? Read and find out!

"Jeez, I wonder how Sweetie Belle is going to react to Dinky's feelings?"

"Um.......Cameron?"

"Yeah Taythen?"

"You're still typing."

"Dammit!"

(Description, title, and tags has been changed from it's original thoughts for plot changes. But, still rated teen for mild cussing.)

Published 2013-12-07 03:00:03 UTC
Last updated 2014-02-24 06:54:05 UTC

Chapter 1: Sleepover

A Little Crush

By: Cameron

Happy 20th story everypony!

Chapter 1: Sleepover

Dear Diary,

How have you been? I've been doing good, actually. I got some exciting news to tell. Sweetie Belle is coming over for a sleepover! I don't know what came over me. She said "yes," when I asked her. I'm so excited for her to come over that I even cleaned my room. Then again, I was going to do it tomorrow but it would have been embarrassing to have a friend over when you have a messy room. Especially if this friend is the one you have a huge crush on. I'm also going to tell Sweetie Belle my real feelings. I'm done keeping it to myself. I want her to know that I want to be more than friends. Hopefully, she'll have the same feelings towards me. Mommy is going to be making her delicious muffins! Even though she practically bakes them everyday. They're still yummy. Well, I'm going to wait until she gets here. I'll tell you how it goes as soon as possible.

~Dinky.

Hooves' residence, evening.

Dinky's sitting on the couch in the living room which is right next to the front door. Keeping her eyes locked onto the door as if expecting somepony to burst into the door with confetti littering the air. To Dinky: seconds seemed minutes, minutes seemed hours, and hours seemed days. Derpy walked into the living to see her filly staring at the door.

Derpy chuckled to herself and spoke to break Dinky's concentration. "Oh my little muffin. Are you excited for your little sleepover?" Derpy asked.

Dinky turned her head to face her mother. A big grin formed on her face. "Yes." Dinky replied.

Derpy trotted up to the couch and ruffled her muffin's mane. "I can tell." Dinky giggled and her mother smiled.

*knock knock*

Dinky gasped and Derpy slowly walked up to the door. When Derpy opened the door, Dinky's hopes immediately dropped when she saw who it was. "Hey 'Shy." Derpy said.

"Hello Derpy. May I come in?" Fluttershy asked.

"You don't have to ask me, remember?" Fluttershy sheepishly smiled. Derpy's eyes rolled around in different patterns. "Come on in." Derpy replied.

Fluttershy walked in and saw Dinky with a glum face. "Hello Dinky. Are you okay?"

Dinky looked at Fluttershy and tried her best fake smile. "Hi Fluttershy. Its nothing really. I thought you were somepony else."

"Oh, I'm sorry. Who were you expecting?"

A small shade of crimson appeared on both of Dinky's cheeks. The thought of Sweetie Belle made her heart beat faster and made it more difficult for her to breathe. "S-Sweetie Belle." Dinky stuttered.

Fluttershy noticed the blush that appeared on Dinky's cheeks and she couldn't help but giggle. "Dinky, do you have a crush on Sweetie Belle?"

The blush grew more furious every second. "H-How do yo-I mean-no I d-don't."

"I felt the same way as you do now." Dinky's blush connected both cheeks with the bridge of her muzzle. "Oh my Dinky. You don't have to be embarrassed about it."

"I-I'm not." The blush started to connect on the bridge of her muzzle.

"Oh my."

Derpy noticed the blush on Dinky's face and decided to see what was going on. "What are you doing with Dinky, Fluttershy?" Derpy asked.

"She has a crush and she's really embarrassed about it." Fluttershy replied.

"Oh. Who is it?"

"S-Sweetie Belle." Dinky stuttered.

"You know that you don't have to be embarrassed about that Dinky. Have you planned on telling her?"

"I-I......tonight."

"Aww. Is that why you wanted this sleepover?" Dinky nodded. "Are you nervous?" Dinky nodded again. "Don't worry. I'm sure things will be okay." Derpy smiled.

*knock knock*

"That maybe them." Derpy turned and opened the door. There they were. Sweetie Belle and Rarity were standing right behind the door. "Hello Rarity. Thank you for letting us have Sweetie Belle sleep here for the night."

The unicorn smiled. "Thank you for taking Sweetie Belle under such notice." Rarity noticed Fluttershy. "Hello Fluttershy. Are we still up for the spa this weekend?"

Fluttershy smiled. "Of course. Why wouldn't we be?"

"I'm just checking, darling. That's all." Rarity drew her attention back to Derpy. "I hate to be a rush but I simply MUST get back to the boutique."

"Large order?" Derpy asked.

Rarity sighed. "Huge. I'm sorry but I must be going. I'll pick Sweetie Belle up tomorrow around the evening or so." Rarity replied.

"Its okay. Make sure to get some sleep this time."

Rarity chuckled and turned to make her leave. "Goodbye Derpy, Sweetie Belle, Fluttershy, Dinky, I'll be back."

"Goodbye." Everypony else said in unison.

Sweetie Belle walked inside the house and Derpy closed the door. She turned around and already saw Dinky and Sweetie Belle talking amongst each other.

"So what's the first thing we're gonna do?" Sweetie Belle asked.

"Mommy made some muffins for us to snack on." Dinky replied.

Derpy looked at Fluttershy. "Would you mind getting these two fillies the muffins?"

"Of course. Come on girls, let's get some muffins." Fluttershy walked into the kitchen and the two fillies trotted along behind her.

Five minutes later, Dinky and Sweetie Belle came out of the kitchen. Each of the fillies had their own plateful of muffins. "Fank you Fluhershy," Both said in unison with their plates in their mouths.

"Your welcome girls." Fluttershy said.

Both fillies walked up the stairs and into Dinky's bedroom. Once Fluttershy was sure that the fillies were out of eyesight, she walked up to Derpy and kissed her on the lips. It was more like a quick kiss but it still had passion in it. "How was your day today?"

"It's better, now that you're here."

"What do you mean?"

Derpy sighed. "It's Dinky. She's still getting picked on at school and nopony has done anything about it."

"Are they still on the same subject about her being a fillyfooler?"

"Unfortunately, yes." A tear streamed down her left cheek. "I've done everything I can think of. I've called the school, talked to the parents of those children, talked to the kids, and I don't know what else I can do."

Fluttershy pulled Derpy into a hug. "Derpy, she needs a mother to come home to. Believe it or not, but coming home to a mother who loves her and supports her decision is all she needs. You've done everything you could and there's nothing else you can do except be here for her. You need to be here to cheer her up and remind her that there still is somepony that loves her."

Derpy wrapped her hooves around Fluttershy. "Thank you 'Shy, I needed that."

"It's what I'm here for. Remember that I'm also here for you."

"I will." Derpy broke the hug and kissed Fluttershy's lips. "Thank you."

"Your welcome."

Dinky's room, night.

Dinky and Sweetie Belle finished their plateful of muffins. Dinky noticed that Sweetie has been trying to avoid eye contact with her. But she couldn't really put her hoof on it. "Hey Sweetie Belle, are you okay?" Dinky asked.

"I am it....its just that...I want to ask you something." Sweetie Belle replied.

"You can ask me anything." Dinky smiled.

Sweetie Belle sighed. "Are you really a fillyfooler?"

Dinky's smile slowly faded after Sweetie Belle asked the question. Her face started to turn into a look of worry. "I...I...yes." Dinky closed her eyes. As if she was expecting Sweetie Belle to cuss her out. "I just...hope we can still be....friends."

Sweetie Belle hopped on Dinky's bed and wrapped her hooves around Dinky. "Of course Dinky. Why wouldn't we be?"

Dinky wrapped her hooves around Sweetie Belle. Tears started to stream down her cheeks. "Because everypony else at school keeps on making fun of me for it. They always call me horrible things. They call me: a slut, whore, garbage, and a waste of space."

Sweetie Belle tightened her grip. "That's horrible. Dinky your amazing. Your always cheerful and energetic. Every time your happy, I'm happy. Your the best friend that anypony could ever ask for."

"Thank you Sweetie Belle."

"For what?"

"For being here for me."

Both fillies broke the hug and stared at each other in the eyes. "Whenever you need me, just let me know."

Dinky wiped her cheeks and sighed. "There's something else I have to tell you."

"What's that?"

"I-I have a crush on somepony."

"Who is it?" A smile crept up on Sweetie Belle's face. "Do I know her?"

"Well...she's pretty and she's a unicorn. Whenever I'm around her, I always get butterflies in my tummy. My heart seems to speed up and my breathing becomes more difficult. Whenever I'm not around her, I always think about her."

"Does she have a cutiemark?"

"No." A small shade of crimson appeared on her cheeks.

"Can you tell me who it is?"

"How about I show you who it is."

Dinky leaned her head towards Sweetie Belle's and kissed her lips. Time seemed to slow down and both of their eyelids slowly closed. Then, Sweetie Belle started kissing back. She's kissing back! Dinky thought. Both fillies slowly broke the kiss and opened their eyes. "Is it me?"

Both fillies chuckled. "Yes."

"Good. I was going to plan on telling you. But it looks like I don't have to."

"Really?"

"Of course. I was also going to express how I feel around you. But-"

"It looks like you don't have to?"

Sweetie Belle chuckled. "Yeah."

Dinky smiled and than began to yawn. "I think I'm getting tired."

Sweetie Belle yawned as well. "Yeah, me too."

"How about we go to bed?"

"That sounds nice."

Dinky and Sweetie Belle buried themselves under the covers. Both fillies cuddled up together and yawned. "Goodnight Sweetie Belle." Dinky kissed Sweetie Belle on the lips and then laid her head on a pillow.

"Goodnight Dinky."

Best night ever. Dinky thought to herself. Soon the noises of the world became silent and she was asleep.

(This chapter has been re-styled and re-edited)

Author's Note

I cannot express on how long this took. TWICE. I had to remake this chapter TWICE. Ugh! Oh well, I hope you guys enjoyed. I'm going to brace myself for critics. 'Cause you guys seem to stalk me now. (HELP!) Have a good day or night. :twilightsmile:

Chapter 2: Next Day

Chapter 2: Next Day

"Wake up, Derpy." Fluttershy cooed into Derpy's ear. Derpy replied with a simple groan. Fluttershy slowly pulled the covers off of Derpy. "Come on, you need to see Dinky and Sweetie Belle, right now."

Derpy sat up on the bed. "What time is it?" Derpy asked, sleepily.

Fluttershy giggled. "It's nine o' clock." Derpy got up and out of bed. She yawned and looked at Fluttershy who gave her a kiss on the lips. "Good morning, sleepyhead." Fluttershy giggled, again.

"Where are the-" Derpy was interrupted by an unexpected yawn. "Fillies?"

Fluttershy giggled to herself. "Come with me, I'll show you." She wrapped her wing around Derpy's back and started to guide the sleepy pegasus to her daughter's room, slowly. "It's so cute."

Derpy was dumbfounded to what Fluttershy wanted to show her, but whatever it was, it must be pretty good. Finally, they arrived at their destination. Fluttershy pulled Derpy closer to the door so Derpy could get a good look at what she's been wanting to show her this whole time. Ever so slowly and quietly, Fluttershy pushed open the door and gazed at the sight. Derpy's eyes slowly started to get wider and wider, as she comprehended on what she was looking at: Dinky and Sweetie Belle were snuggled up in each other's forelegs and heads close to each other.

Derpy's heart melted at the sight, tears welled up in her eyes, and a huge grin was plastered on her face. The same reactions were happening to Fluttershy as well. Fluttershy wrapped a wing around Derpy and brought her close to her side. Fluttershy looked down at Derpy. "Aren't they so cute?"

However, Derpy didn't take her eyes off of the sight, instead, she kept on staring with one thought in her head; my little muffin is getting older. "Yes," she said softly. A tear of happiness streamed down her cheek. "They're very cute," she sniffled.

Fluttershy noticed this and took immediate action. "Are you okay?" She asked with a caring tone to her voice. She squeezed Derpy just enough to show affection and care. "What's wrong, Derpy?"

"Nothing." Derpy replied. She looked up at Fluttershy with a huge grin plastered on her face and tears welled up in her eyes. "I am a very proud mother, that's all."

Fluttershy gave Derpy a gentle kiss on the lips. "You're a good mother, Derpy," she said. "Don't ever think otherwise."

"Thank you, 'Shy."

"You're welcome." She gave her another small kiss on the lips. "Now..." Fluttershy started to lead Derpy down the stairs and into the kitchen. "How about we make some breakfast for the little fillies?" Fluttershy suggested.

Derpy smiled. "That's sounds wonderful." Derpy walked up to the counter and reached in the cupboard for flour mix. "And I know just what to make."

Fluttershy trotted up next to Derpy's side. "What's that?" She asked.

Derpy looked at Fluttershy with a big grin on her face. "Muffins," she replied.

Dinky fluttered her eyes open to see that she was facing the white ceiling that belonged to her room. She breathed in to let out a small and quiet yawn. After her yawn, she noticed that something was pressed up against her chest. She slowly looked down to see Sweetie Belle's head laying on her chest with her forelegs wrapped around her. A huge shade of crimson appeared on Dinky's face as the blush were both connected by the muzzle.

Dinky's blush became redder as she noticed that her forelegs were wrapped around Sweetie Belle's upper body. Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh! She exclaimed in her head. How did this happen? She started to think about what happened last night before her and Sweetie Belle went to bed.

Dinky started to remember about how they were having small conversations in their room. Then, she remembered about confessing to Sweetie Belle that she had a crush on one of her friends, and then, she remembered kissing and being kissed by Sweetie Belle. If her blush could get any redder, it did. Her face looked like a ripe tomato.

Oh my gosh! It actually happened. I kissed Sweetie Belle and she kissed me! Oh my gosh! This is so much like a dream. But it can't be because it feels so real. And it smells real.....wait? Smells real? That can't be right. What's that smell? The room started to fill with the scent of fresh baked goodies.

"Oh my little muffin, you looks so cute." Derpy interrupted Dinky's thoughts.

Dinky jumped a little, but, enough to cause Sweetie Belle to open her eyes and look up at her. Dinky looked down at Sweetie Belle, making eye contact. A huge blush formed on Dinky's face as she realized that she was laying in Dinky's chest and had her forelegs wrapped around Dinky's chest. Both fillies smiled sheepishly as they stood still.

"Aw. you're so cute." Fluttershy interjected.

Both fillies turned their heads to face Derpy and Fluttershy staring at them with huge grins on their faces. Sweetie Belle and Dinky immediately left their grasps and sat up on their rears while rubbing the back of their necks with a hoof. Both Derpy and Fluttershy giggled at their actions.

"Well, I brought you two some breakfast." Derpy laid a plate of muffins that she was holding in her hoof onto the bed. "Enjoy." Derpy said. Then, her and Fluttershy walked out of the room with the door wide open.

Dinky and Sweetie Belle looked at each other, blushes still formed on their faces. Both of them sheepishly smiled and started to eat the muffins that were brought to them. Silence filled them room. Neither one of them knew what to say to each other as they continued to eat the delicious baked goodies.

Dinky decided to break the silence. "So..." She nervously rubbed the back of her neck, searching for something to say. Something popped up in her mind. Something that started to make her wonder and worry at the same time. "Was I good, last night?"

Sweetie Belle looked at Dinky with a confused expression on her face. "What do you mean?"

Her mind started to get very worried. Her face showed it very well. "Well.....you know? The kiss?" Dinky said while forming a circle on her bed with her hoof.

"Oh." Sweetie Belle realized what Dinky was talking about. She stared up at the ceiling to think back on how it went last night. Sweetie Belle remembered how much she enjoyed it. She remembered her mind going wild and her heart exploding with joy. A smile started to grow on her face as she remembered everything about the kiss. She looked back at Dinky. "You were great," she finally answered.

A wave of relief washed over Dinky as she started to calm down at those three words. "Good." A smile started to form on her face. "Because that was my first kiss and I was hoping not to screw it up."

"You wanna know a secret?" Sweetie Belle asked.

"Sure." Dinky replied.

"That was my first kiss too."

"Really?"

Sweetie Belle leaned toward Dinky and gave her a quick peck on the lips. "And that was my second."

A small blush appeared on Dinky's face. "I guess that was my second as well." Both fillies started to chuckle. Then, they went back to eating their breakfast that was kindly given by Dinky's mother.

Somewhere in another universe. A young author named Cameron has just entered his room to sit down and relax after yet another long day of high school. He noticed that there was a sticky note on his laptop. He picked it up and read it. The note read: MORE!

Fear began to creep into Cameron's mind as he was confused to what the note meant. He looked at his laptop and noticed that it was turned on and the story "A Little Crush" was on his screen.

(This chapter has been re-styled and re-edited)

Author's Note

I decided to be goofy.

Hi guys. I got four things to share. 1: Technically, school starts tomorrow and I'm supposed to be asleep. But, I say screw that! 2: changed the cover picture for this story because it looked cuter. I don't know who drew it, but, whoever drew it, you know who you are. 3: I edited the first chapter and changed the description for this story and changed my whole plot for it because this story deserves much more then what I had planned for it. And 4: I decided to write but I didn't know what to write. I went on YouTube and checked out my favorite brony band: MandoPony to see what song can inspire me to write. I stumbled onto a song and I found it SO cute :rainbowkiss:. And I decided to write another chapter for this story because this story is cute. Here's the song.