Bloodjack, the Human Hunter

by theoneOshen

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Dark
Length: 1860

A lone mare commissioned by royalty is tasked with destroying 'humans'.

A lone mare with a (predictable) mysterious past wanders into Appleoosa. With a bowie knife and lightning fast reflexes, how will she match up against the greatest danger to Equestria, the mysterious 'Humans'.

Will add characters as I go along.
Credit for the cover image goes to 'askbloodyjack.tumblr.com'

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-03-18 22:31:31 UTC

Entering Appleoosa

A lone pony swaggered into Appleoosa, arid dust weaving underfoot , the town quiet except for the low din coming from the local saloon and the steady screech of a rusty weathervane. Her head was angled, a beaten Stetson hat concealing her eyes and casting a shadow on her lower face. Stopping abruptly in the town’s main street, she scanned the horizon slowly, until she located the general store. Resuming her steady gait, she crossed the street and pushed open the door.

“What can I do ye’ for?”  Queried the shopkeeper, a grizzled older colt with an unkempt, cropped brown beard.

“An oilstone and a pound ah’ oats.” She replied, her head still tilted as she approached the counter.

“No apples? This is Appleoosa you know..” the shopkeeper said, trailing off when the stranger raised her head enough to look him in the eyes.

“No. Apples.” She said slowly, her eyes boring into his soul, eyebrows furrowed in annoyance and anger.

“Right.” Moving briskly, the shopkeeper spoke up, hoping to alleviate the tension. “So what’s your name, stranger?”

“Bloodjack” she replied curtly, the lack of excitement in her speech almost transcendent in the way it discouraged conversation.

The shopkeeper peeked over with one eye, scanning the figure. Toned physique, weathered hooves, determined face. Typical frontierspony. Strapped to her front left leg was a supple brown leather sheath, several shades darker than the weathered Stetson on her head. In it was a gleaming Bowie knife, the handle within easy reach of her mouth. Traveling upwards, he met her stern gaze and unconsciously shivered, the unnerving eyes watching him unblinking.

After placing the two items on the counter, he looked up at her nervously and stated the price. “70 bits.” She said nothing and continued to stare at him with a face as immobile as granite. Looking at her, he licked his lips nervously, a trickle of sweat running down his left temple as she watched him. “50 bits?” he said weakly, a self-deprecating stance and timid smile painting the vivid scene of his mental subjugation. Moving slowly, she slid the items into a saddlebag and dropped a small sack of coins on the counter, turning to leave without another word.

The moment she was completely out of the store, he breathed out in relief and rubbed his forehead. Glancing out the storefront window to double check her departure, he fell back when he saw her look back and meet his eyes.

Glancing at the sun, the stranger trotted in the direction of the saloon, prepared to waste time.

Pushing open the saloon doors, she scanned the room. Appleoosa’s really gone to shit, she thought, her sordid gaze displaying her contempt concerning the other patrons. Cutthroats, liars, and thieves. The usual nowadays. What happened to the town I used to know? She took a step forward.

Any normal outsider would have met opposition and seclusion, but at the sight of a lone mare, the predominantly colt crowd bristled, eager to test her mettle. One does not simply “enjoy a drink” in Appleoosa after all. Cited as having Equestria’s Rowdiest Locale, this particular taproom was known as the toughest Dive around.

Walking past the silent eyes, the mare slumped into a barstool in the corner, slamming several bits on the counter and ordered three shots of whiskey. Of course Bloodjack knew the bar was watching her, waiting for any mistake on which to base their cruelty. She had hoped that the show of alcohol would satisfy the crowd, but as soon as the glasses were filled in front of her three drunken colts stumbled towards her.

“Whattayah go’ there, missy?” the ringleader slobbered, the stench of alcohol emanating off his body.

No reply. The mare casually downed the first shot by grabbing it in her mouth and tilting her head back.

“Mebbe she’ss scared..” said another, jeering at her as he swayed from side to side. “Are ye scared, lass?”

The bartender looked Bloodjack in the eyes, ready to intervene at any prompt. She smiled at him and downed the second shot.

Several of the other patrons moved to stand, but their friends held them down. “Wait a bit, Lucky,” said one of them, his leg barring the other pony, “give her a chance. We’ll help if it gets serious.”

The rest of the bar watched on, expressions ranging from apathetic and amused to inebriated and alert.

“Oi, why’re you shmiling? Yer’ not shpose to..” slurred the last pony, hiccupping before turning to look at the ringleader in confusion. The ringleader was sweating profusely, the imagined laughter of the other patrons ringing in his ear at his failure to intimidate the lone mare.

She downed the last shot.

Reaching back to hit her, the ringleader was met with two bucking legs to the chest, a resounding crack filling the taproom. Several ponies stood, but by the time they had begun to step towards the scene, the other two had been taken down with a combination of jabs and hooks, the lone pony’s powerful legs moving fast as a whip.

Returning to her seat calmly, she smiled at the dumbstruck barkeep and ordered another three shots, the crowd erupting in raucous laughter at the three ponies groaning on the floor.

One of the ponies who had moved to help her before walked up to sit next to her. “Howdy, Stranger! I’m Lucky Strike, and that was some damn good fighting.” Said the pony, a broad smile on his face and an outstretched hoof held in greeting. She smiled politely at him, the corners of her mouth faintly curving up.

“Tweren’t no trouble to take out three drunk colts. You shouldn’t congratulate me.” She said quietly, so that only Lucky (and the experienced bartender) heard.

Lucky was taken aback. He smiled at her again. “May I ask you your name?” he said, hoping to learn more about this mysterious mare.

“Bloodjack.” She replied curly, displeased at the query. She downed another shot.

“Well, Miss,” he said, sensing her discomfort, “may I perchance, ask you what you’re doing in this quaint town?”

“No, Sir. No you may not.” Lucky was eager to change the subject and careful to avoid her name, but apparently this subject wasn’t good either, as evidenced by her hard tone.

Shit! The second a pretty mare walks into town you alienate her! Lucky blew out air in a resigned manner. “Well, if you need anything, ask for me at The Red Stallion down the street.” He said and turned to leave.

She said nothing, preferring to let her silence speak for her. The other colts, observing the dialogue, left her alone as well. If Lucky can’t strike, how could we compete? They all despaired in union silently.

Lucky Strike

A/N: Really short chapter, I know. Explanation at the end.

The mare stepped out of the saloon shortly after, having learned all she could from the now friendly patrons. They had not, in fact, seen one of the mythical ‘humans’. She took in a deep breath of the night time air, and a lone breeze brushed her face. Outside, the street was silent, the only source of noise being the low din of the bar behind her with the occasional laugh piercing the stillness. Looking left and right she started off in the direction of the Red Stallion, hoping to find a bed for the night. I hope that colt is staying at a hotel. Now what would I do if it was someplace disgusting, like a brothel?  She walked on slowly until she came to a stop in front of the Red Stallion. A derelict sign swung slowly above the door, the image of a red pony barely visible due to the harsh, arid wind. She held out her hoof against the door and slowly entered.

Once inside, a mare behind a broad mahogany counter called out to her. “Need a room, dear?”

“Yes ma’am.” Replied Bloodjack while gazing around the parlor. She locked eyes with Lucky Strike, who had been carrying a conversation with several rowdy looking ponies.

“Miss Jack! How pleasant to encounter you again.” He called to her, his characteristic smile falling into place as he nodded his head at an angle in greeting. The three ponies around him turned to look at her, each meeting her gaze with looks of indifference and calculated cunning.

She nodded her head, tilted the edge of her hat, and leisurely strolled over to speak with him. “I need to ask you some questions.” She stated, more of a command than anything else.

“Mmm?” said Lucky, as he raised an eyebrow in question. “Before that, I would like to introduce you to my associates.” She stared at him skeptically. “This here’s Red Eye.” He gestured to the nearest stallion, a beige colored pegasus with a dirty blonde mane. His eyes were, in fact, red. She gave a curt nod, which he responded to with an abrupt nod. “This one’s Gold Curtana.” A silver colored unicorn shook hoofs with her as he pushed a golden lock of hair out of his face. “And last, the beautiful Cerul Cyme.” At this, the inconspicuous dark blue mare between the two previously mentioned stallions gave a gracious bow, which Bloodjack returned in full.

“Pleased to meet y’all.” She looked at Lucky, her eyes questioning his impromptu introduction.

“My associates here and I have come to the understanding that you’re searching for something.” He began. “Something Human.” The four stared at her.

She narrowed her eyes. This didn’t sound too good. “And where’d you hear this?” she probed.

“Why my dear, the key to success in this town is about having the most connections. And I happen to have the most connections.”

“And what business does you and your connections have with me?”

“Why, Miss Jack, we just happen to know where several might be. And we want you to lead our foray.”

She was in her room, staring up at the ceiling from her grungy twin sized bed. Hanging on one of the bedposts was her Stetson, and on the side table next to her was her Bowie knife in its sheath. In the corner of the room, a lone tallow candle cast off a dim, flickering glow, and through the paper-thin walls she could hear a couple arguing. In her head, she replayed the day’s events, until she came to the point where Lucky had made his proposition. Sighing softly, she turned on her side and curled up, slowly drifting into solitary slumber.

A/N: So, yeah. Mindblowingly short, right? I was gonna publish it on Friday, but the magic of Friendship (and a certain green holiday) beckoned to me.. Also, I got punched in the temple by an irate drunk 6'3 Puerto-Rican/German guy. (It's all good, his shit was bitchmade). I actually held back about a third from the chapter, cause I'm at an impasse and I didn't want to leave a comparatively worse chapter ending. Anyways, happy Day (or Night, rather) After St. Patrick's Day! Also, feedback on omitting that last paragraph after the previous page break for next chapter?