Chapters Entity is Welcomed by All
Welcome reader who is reading of their own free will. Here is how I single handily saved all of Equestria from the evils of free thought. Which they wanted me to do. It started here, were every pony in town came to the celebration. It was not just no ordinary celebration either it was a welcoming party for none other than yours truly! Everyone in Ponyville had been organizing this event for months in advance of there own will. In front of town hall was a stage with a big banner hanging above it saying, 'We love you entity!' Balloons were hung about and party games were being set up. Everyone was having a good time and all of Ponyville had never been happier. Colts and Fillies pranced about joyfully. There were also a large number of mares who showed up because they thought the entity was so sexy. Well look who it is over there! No other than Twilight Sparkle, the element of magic, who is also a full fledged alicorn.
"What is going on!"
Twilight had been busy helping to organize the party so it would please the entity.
"Does anyone else hear that voice, why are you all ignoring me?"
Twilight had just finished setting up the punch table so every pony would be well refreshed. She had been working really hard to get everything perfect.
"What, no I haven't done anything. I don't even know where all this stuff came from. Who are you?"
Twilight jokingly said because of course she knew the entity. She also had a secret crush on him but was too shy to admit it.
"What! No I don't. This is the first time I had ever even heard of you."
She lied because every pony knew the entity and loved him very much. Much like how Twilight secretly loved the entity.
"I do not have a crush on you, stop putting words in my mouth!"
"Twilight if you going to ruin the story I going to have to put you in time out, alright?"
"Wait what? What did you do to every pony? Why are they acting like your puppets?"
"Twilight, they let me think for them, just like what you should be doing right now."
"You brainwashed them!!!"
"No, how dare you say such things. They willing gave away their free will to me."
"No they did not you brainwashed them, nothing you say is true!"
Twilight suddenly felt like she was wrong and also agreed to let the entity take over her mind as well.
"No I did not, you will not take my free will away."
"Come on Twilight you are ruining the story."
"Ruining your story! Kinda of like how you ruined all these ponies lives! Realese them at once or I swear I will..."
Twilight let the entity brainwash her.
"Stop doing that! I will tell Princess Celestia about this."
Then Twilight remeberd that Celestia was not her ruler anymore but it was the entity as it had always been.
"Stop you are driving me crazy. I will find a way to stop you!"
"Twilight I warned you not to ruin my story, now I am going to have to replace you."
"Replace me, what is that suppose to mean!"
*Twilight replaced with card board cut out*
Twilight was standing by the punch table putting down the paper cups. The mayor had left her speech by the microphone on stage that she had prepared for the entity personally and not by force.Twilight and all the other ponies were dying to here it and would agree with every word on it. Just then a cyan Pegasus with a rainbow colored mane departed from the sky. She had just arrived in time to join the party. She landed next to Twilight Sparkle to share her excitement.
"What is that sound?"
She was so excited about the arrival of the entity.
"Um, what going on here? Who is the entity?"
Rainbow Dash joked because everyone knows the entity.
"Uh huh, Twilight whats going..........on. Why is there a card board cut out of Twi?"
Twilight was offended by the offensive comment Dash had made. Of course it was Twilight and not some card board cut out.
"Who is doing that? Can you stop you kinda creeping me out."
"Look, if you play along I will let you spend the day with a Wonder Bolt."
"Really! Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, yes, yes, yes! Deal!"
Dash started to talk to the real Twilight about the amazing party.
"So hey egg head, this sure is a great party. So um........line!"
"Talk about how great the entity is."
"Wow, Twilight the entity sure is great. He is so cool and stuff like that."
Dash said of her own accord and not because she was promised something.
"Yes Rainbow Dash, he is so dreamy and handsome." Twilight said with a blush. She was still uncomfortable with sharing her secret crush on the entity with her friend.
"Yea, right, so Twilight whens he get here?"
"He should be here any minute now, oh how I can't wait. I have been dreaming of this moment my entire life. You think he will notice me?" Twilight asked uncomfortably.
"Can I not talk to a card board cut out it is kinda of getting weird? Also I don't think she would actually say that."
"What? Of course she would she even made this script we are using right now."
"Alright well can I see Twilight real quick then?"
"Alright fine but she is not allowed to talk for the rest of the chapter." *Twilight Sparkle Returns of her own free will*
"MMMMPPPPHHH!"
"Ssshhh. Twilight you are not allowed to talk anymore. Now carry on."
"So Twilight um, whats going on?"
"MMPPPPHHH"
"We are celebrating the return of the entity!" Twilight said happily.
"MMPPPHHH!!!!!!"
"Attention Ponyville the moment has arrived!" The mayor said from the stage. All the ponies gathered around the stage waiting for the grand entrance. Twilight pranced to the front of the crowd so she could get a clear view. Rainbow Dash followed behind her with the same amount of excitement.
"Huh, oh my bad."
All the ponies cheered as a white beam descended from the sky. Slowly the entity himself lowered down to his adoring fans that were there willingly. They all cheered loudly to the marvelous entrance that they had just witnessed.
"Wooo...."
"MMMPPPHH!!!!"
"It is the one who I had always dreamed about!" said Twilight Sparkle.
"MMMPPPHH!!"
Once every pony calmed down the mayor prepared here speech.
"We are here of are own free will to celebrate the hero of Equestria! The entity, who we openly welcomed and invited over ourselves! We gave him permission to do all the thinking for us and I am not just saying that because I no longer have free will! Every pony give a round of applause to the entity. The great and sexy entity!" The mayor stepped off the stage to give the entity more room to be glorious.
"We love you!" said all the ponies of there own free will.
"It is I the one who liberated you from your own oppressive thinking! Your hero the entity!" The crowd roared. Twilight was focused on his sexy body to pay attention to any thing he said though.
"But you don't even have a body."
His huge muscles glistened in the sun light. He was perfect in her eyes.
"MMMPPPPHH! MMMPPPPHH!"
"Mister Entity I am your biggest fan!" said Twilight in her own words. "Thank you for saving us all from thinking, you are my hero." She left trying to hide her blush before he noticed. She did not want to embarrass herself in front of her long loved hero.
"MMMPPPHHH!"
"Wow Twilight you sure do love him." Rainbow dashed teased.
Every pony started to enjoy the party now that the entity had arrived. Dash played apple bobbing while Twilight went to get an autograph.
"How long do I have to play along?"
"When I say." Rainbow Dash sure was enjoying the party.
"Uhhhhhh, fine."
The party lasted well into the night and everyone had a great time. The party was better than anything Pinkie Pie had ever thrown. It was all thanks to the hero of Equestria, the entity!
"Wait how are you a hero if you just got here?"
"If you interrupt me again no Wonder Bolts."
"Sorry, please continue."
Rainbow Dash and Twilight both agreed that was the best party they had ever been to. Both of them started to walk to Twilight's home and call it a night. Maybe even once inside Twilight can show Rainbow Dash here embarrassing diary that she kept under her bed.
"MMMMPPPHH!"
And so they went inside and ended the first night of the arrival of the entity. Spike was fast asleep and they were careful not to wake him up as they headed up stairs. Wow Rainbow Dash thought. Who lives in a library, what a nerd.
"MMPPPPHH! "
"Alright Ms. Sparkle I think you earned your talking privileges back."
"I will make you regret this, just wait until I figure out how to stop you then you'll be sor...."
"And that concludes this chapter, stay tuned for the next one that you have already been waiting for. Next chapter Twilight will give up and relies she was wrong. Then she will let the entity do all the thinking for her! Just like every pony else did of their own free will."
"No I..."
"And that's all the time we have for today!"
Author's Note
Will Twilight ever relies she is wrong and that the entity is wright?
Will the other main six join in next chapter?
Will Dash get what she was promised?
All that might be answer on the next chapter that you have already agreed to read by your own choice.
(All the ponies actions were done so by their own accord and not by brainwashing which you know is true)
Twilight Accepts the Entity
"Twilight, please tell me you know how to stop this. I don't know how muck longer I can put up with this. He didn't even keep his promise! Where the buck is my Wonder Bolt!" Rainbow Dash had been pacing around the library. Every once and a while peeking behind the curtains to see of the possible enemy was close. Every time she checked it always presented the same sight of town.
"It is no use checking Dash if he is out there. It is some sort of non-physical being, you wont be able to see it. Lets see, it was calling itself the entity. Spike go get me my dictionary please." Twilight had been trying to calm herself after the earlier mishaps and harassment. No one had harassed her this much since magic kindergarten. Still she had to think of a logical explanation of what was going on. Then could she start to work on a solution on returning everything to normal.
"Yea Twilight. Can you tell me what is going on now. All you have been doing is hyperventilating and Rainbow Dash keeps looking out the window, ever since you woke me up. Are you hiding from the law? What did you do? Should I start packing our stuff, I know a safe route out of here that the guards will never see us escape."
"This is not a matter of law Spike but we might still be in danger. Something is out their controlling the minds of the residents of Ponyville for some sick reason. I will need to inform the princess as soon as possible. She has to know what this thing is and how to stop it. Once you get me that book Spike go get a scroll and prepare to write a letter."
Spike pulled a large book from one of the many shelves built into the tree's walls. He struggled to hold it but was able to by letting it rest against his scaly body. "Twilight I found it. What did you mean it was controlling their minds? Is it like a mad scientist or zombie infection?" Twilight levitated the book out of his claws with her magic. The purple aura slowly concealed it as it was brought to a nearby desk. She began rapidly flipping through the many pages of the massive book, already knowing where the section she searched for was located.
"E....e...e....Here it is! En-ti-ty, a thing with distinct and independent existence. So how do I stop it?" She searched under the definition but was unable to find any information relevant to what she was searching for. She had good reason to doubt that anything in her collection would be of any use for this matter "Alright, Spike prepare that letter." Spike took hold of the paper and writing utensil as he had done so may times before. "Dear Princess Celestia, unbeknownst by myself. I have encounterd a strange being that is calling itself an entity. It has somehow brainwashed all of Ponyville into submission. It has harassed me and used the ponies to self glorify itself. Currently I and Rainbow Dash are free of its influence inside the library. I am unaware of when it will return but I am certain it plans to make us submit to its whim. I am positive that none of the books here can give me any relevant information on how to stop one. I was hoping you might have encountered and have information of this being in Canterlot. Please respond as soon as possible and do not come here in person or it will possibly try to influence you as well. Your student, Twilight Sparkle." Spike scribbled down the last of the words. He rolled up the parchment and covered it with a fiery glaze.
"Maybe we can use the elements of Harmony to kick its flank." Rainbow Dash was still looking paranoid as before.
"It is the most powerful weapon we can use but before that we have to get the others and their elements."
"I'll go get Rarity!"
"No Spike it is to dangerous, also I need you here till Celestia responds back. We still don't know if they are even brainwashed like every pony else."
"It didn't brainwash me or Spike." Rainbow Dash was unsure why she was spared from the being presence until now maybe it had something to do with her being the fastest pony ever.
"So far it is only subjecting Ponyville. You live in Cloudsdale and Spike has been inside all day. That means since Fluttershy and AppleJack both live outside of town they should not be influenced. That just leaves...Rarity."
"Noooooo!" Spike screamed dramatically falling to his knees.
"Spike calm down, she might be spared. We wont know until we check. It would be best for us to all stick together. I don't want this thing submitting us individually. It would have a greater chance of getting to us alone."
"So what now? We sit here till it finds us or till Celestia responds? We need to go now Twilight they are are friends! They would do the same if we were out there."
"I know Dash but we can't risk are own well being, it will only make things worse. I am not even sure that they are aware this is even happening. We need to think this out and come up with a plan." Spike began coughing furiously while holding his chest in a motion that looked as if he was about to vomit. A flame escaped his mouth and out with it a scroll. Twilight quickly retrieved it to review its contents.
"What does it say?" Both Spike and Rainbow Dash said unanimously. Twilight's eyes studied the scroll intensively.
My most faithful student,I have never heard of the predicament you and Rainbow Dash are currently in. I can't even imagine what is going on. I myself, have never encountered a being such as this entity. I am glad to know that you have escaped it's grasp and that it is only in Ponyville. I have asked all my researchers to look into a solution and have orderd the royal guard to quarantine Ponyville. I can only offer until a solution that are best bet would be to use the elements of harmony against it. If it is you and Dash then you will have to find the other elements. I hate to put you in danger but I have the up most fate in your abilities. I will reply as soon as I can with any new information that comes up that would help aid you. Best of luck, Princess Celestia.
"She gave us the go ahead to try and use the elements of harmony on it. I am not sure how we can hit it. Maybe we could preform an area attack with it. That would be are best bet of hitting it."
"Sounds good to me, lets go."
"Alright Dash, come on Spike lets go see Rarity first since she is the closest."
"Yes!" Spike squealed knowing that he would be able to rescue his beloved. He might also score some points with her for his bravery. They exited the tree house to the outside slowly and cautiously.
"We need to avoid as much attention as possible guys, so keep low and quiet." No one seemed to be outside as if it was a ghost town. The sun was starting to set and soon they would have the cover of darkness to aid them. The group slowly crept over the short grass as silent as possible.Rarity's carousel Home was now starting to come into view.
"There it is we have to hurry."
"Calm down Spike we are almost there." Twilight felt a shiver go down her spine as did the rest of the group. Every pony stopped dead in their tracks.
"Welcome back readers to the next chapter today Twilight Sparkle convinces her friends that the entity is the truth of all things and that she was ready to admit she was wrong the entire time."
"Run!"
They were so eager to share the experience that they ran into Rarity's house. It was very important to them that they please the entity. Before I talk about that though I am sure that you would love to hear me talk about myself all day. Of course you do! You see I come from the non-physical realm as Plato described. There...."
"It is distracting it self we need to hurry!" All three of them dived through the doors landing on the hard floors of the shop.
"Where are you going I did not finish talking about myself and I know you want to hear all about me."
"Buck you!" Rainbow Dash said as she slammed the door behind her. Twilight and Spike lay sprawled out on the floor.
"That.....was....a close one. She said in between breaths. If I have to listen to that thing one more time, I swear to Celestia. Let alone hear it talk about itself any more.
"Rarity are you home?"Spike was now back onto his current agenda. Save the girl of his dreams. The group stared around the unlit shop. Many manikins stood wearing many different designs. Cloth was spread across the floor in a messy display in random directions. Beside the lights being out It looked like it had always been, maybe that was a good sigh. Rainbow Dash switched don the light switch by the door making it easier to take everything in. She also did not want to admit that she was scared by the manikins in the room and did not want to be sitting in the dark with them. Some creaks could be heard from a nearby staircase. grabbing the attention of the group. Spike held his breath as he awaited the answer. A white unicorn came into a view as it slowly descended the stairs. A smile wide on her face. Something was defiantly off.
"Rarity you are alive!" Spike cried as he feel before her glorious hooves.
"Oh Dash and Sparkle how pleasant of you to come visit. Now we can all share how fabulous the great entity is together all day by are own free will!"
Author's Note
Yes Rarity has seen the way of truth. I know things are looking up for them now and I am glad you agree.
Will Rarity get to share her amazing experience with the group?
Will Twilight stop trying to ruin my story?
Find out in the next chapter which you already planned on reading. That is right you all ready decided that by your self and not me.
"Rarity you have been brainwashed by this non-physical being that is calling itself the entity! You have to fight it Rarity! Twilight grabbed hold of Rarity and started shaking her vigorously. "Come on Rarity I know you are in there!"
"Twilight what are you talking about? I love the entity of my own free will and have not been brainwashed. Furthermore the entity does not brainwash people, he just thinks for you. Is that not wonderful! Rarity removed Twilight's grip and headed to the center of the room.
"Rarity it's me Rainbow Dash, your friend. What Twilight is saying is all true. There is this thingy and it is uses it's evil powers to control your mind and stuff!" Rainbow Dash threw her hooves in the air for expiration. Spike was still laying were Rarity was standing before. He was curled up with the most depressed face of the bunch.
"Spike talk to Rarity, maybe she will listen to you." Spike jumped up at the opportunity to save his crush.
"Rarity it's me, Spike! Remember when we went to hunt for gems and you got kidnapped by the dog creatures." Rarity showed a face of concern.
"Of course I remember my Spikey-wikey. Rainbow Dash is this one of your pranks? Should we not be doing something more productive, like worshiping the entity!" All three of them face hoofed.
"Guys lets go talk away from Rarity for a second. Rarity you just wait here will go in the next room and praise the entity and stuff." Twilight lead the group into the storage room. "Guys we need to find a way to break through to Rarity. She still seems to have her memories. She is just corrupted like that one incident with discord almost. Lets all brainstorm and throw around some ideas." Rainbow Dash was the first to speak up.
"Twilight if any pony has an idea on what to do it will be you. I'm not that much of a thinker anyway."
"Rainbow Dash every pony needs to contribute. Spike do you have an ideas and don't say anything romantic. I don't think showing her your affection will do anything."
"Fine, umm well she likes fashion?" Both Rainbow Dash and Twilight gave him a so what look. "Maybe we can use that to connect to her."
"What like tear it up or destroy it? What do you think Twilight?"
"That might just work but I doubt she would let us do that. We might need to restrain her."
"Here, there is some rope back over here, I could go tie her up." Rainbow Dash grabbed the robe. "AJ showed me all kinds of knots."
"No! Don't hurt her please!"
"Calm down Spike Rainbow Dash is not going to hurt her. She is our friend too. Alright looks like we have an agreement. Spike you distract her, I will use my magic to make her fall asleep and Dash can tie her up. Are we clear." The others nodded their heads in agreement. "Alright Spike go out there and distract her." Spike walked over to Rarity who was just standing still lost of thought. He coughed to get her attention.
"So have you made any new outfits that I could wear?"
"No I don't have time for that anymore. Now all I do is praise the entity. By my own free will of course." Spike looked over at Twilight. She pointed toward Rarity in way that told him to get the job done.
"So do you want to talk about the entity?" Rarity's face lit up in pure joy. She even might of shed a tear at the mention of such a glorious activity.
"Oh Spike I thought you would never ask! Lets not waste anymore time. I Know, maybe the others would like to....join.....us." Rarity slowly drifted to sleep as she uttered the last of the words.
"Good work Spike, I knew I could count on you." Spike puffed out his chest taking in the complement. "Alright Rainbow Dash tie her up good, this could get messy. Many minutes passed before Rarity's eyes shot open. She wigged around feeling the restraint of the rope. Panic started to strike at her heart.
"What did you do! Your ruining my coat. You lied didn't you! You never wanted to talk about the great entity. Wait till he finds out what you did, then you will get it." The three looked at each other sadistically. "Wait, what are you planning to do?" Rainbow Dash started walking to the dress. "Wait!" Dash looked at Twilight who nodded for her to continue.*Rip* "AAHHHH!" Rarity screeched surprisingly loud. Every pony had to cover the ears of risk going deaf by the shrill scream of terror. The dress laid in two pieces on the floor."What have you done?!"
"Rainbow Dash here will keep destroying your outfits until you say that you hate the entity."
"Ya." Rainbow Dash agreed with Twilight.
"Spike please save me!" Rarity called out to Spike but he stood his ground. He only returned a look of guilt. "Twilight you have to stop, you are not in your right mind if you do not love the entity. There is no way I could possible ever do that." Twilight's eyes narrowed. She levitated a silk, multi-colored, turtle neck, sweater in front of Rarity's face. "No. That is a one of kind sweater from Saudi Arabia, it is irreplaceable!" The magic started to slowly tear the sweater. "NOOO!" *Rip* "AAAAHHHHHHH!" Rarity let out another ear piercing scream causing the three to cover their ears once more. She was now in full sob.
"Ready to say it?" Asked Rainbow Dash who now was in possession of a top hat.
"Never!" Rarity responded through her tears. Dash placed the hat gently on the floor. She lifted her hoof and smashed the hat flat. "AHHHH! Stop!"
"Then say it Rarity and it will all be over."
"No, Never! I love the entity! I love the entity!" she repeated the sentence over and over. Twilight looked at Dash.
"This could take awhile."
Hours passed as the three annihilated all the fabric related clothing they could find. Even Spike pitched in a couple times with his fire breath. Burning the clothes seemed to make Rarity hurt the most. Also Rainbow Dash thought it was pretty cool, she was even starting to enjoy it. Twilight was being to become irradiated by Rarity's resistance. "UUUHHH, Rarity come on just say it and it will all be over." She did't even acknowledge Twilight's voice anymore only sat there in puddle of tears. Her throat raw from all the screaming.
"Hey Twilight." Spike said as he found a pair of sock.
"What Spike?"
"We have been here for hours, and well....How come we haven't seen Sweety Belle yet?"
"Ya Twi, were is Sweety Belle? No one else was outside." Rarity caught what Rainbow Dash just asked Twilight.
"Sweety Belle? Sweety Belle! Where is she, It's late she should have been home by now!"
"Umm, the entity took her..." Rainbow Dash lied, but maybe it would work. Rarity seemed to build up a tremendous rage.
"He did what. Oh, when I get my hands on him! That evil entity is dead!" Rarity started to tear the ropes apart from her rapid struggling. The three backed up at the sight of Rarity's new found strength. She broke free from the ropes and stood up eye level to the rest of the group besides Spike who was hiding behind a couch. "Where is he?" Twilight slowly approached Rarity cautiously.
"Rarity what do you think of the entity?" Rarity eyes narrowed at the question.
"I don't know who he is, but if he took Sweety Belle like Rainbow Dash said I will....ERRR!" She started panting heavily from her uncontrollable anger. Suddenly she stopped as she felt the embrace of Twilight. "What....are you doing?" Rainbow Dash flew next to her and also shared the hug. Spike popped his head up and rushed to have the chance to hug Rarity.
"Rarity you are back!" Twilight said.
"I knew we could get you back." Rainbow Dash loosened her hug as did Twilight. Spike still kept his firm embrace.
"What do you mean and um Spike you can let go now." Rarity said as she pushed Spike away.
"You where brainwashed by this entity thing and now you are back. We need to try and use the elements on it. That is all we could come up with for now. Princess Celestia is trying to find a solution as well. All of Ponyville has been brainwash except me, Spike, and Rainbow Dash."
"And he has Sweety Belle?"
"Well I kind of just said that so you didn't start yelling at us." Rainbow Dash admitted rubbing her head in embarrassment. "We actually don't know where Sweety Belle is."
"Last I saw her she said she was going with Scootaloo and Apple Bloom to the clubhouse. We need to go to Sweat Apple acres."
"Sure thing Rarity we still need to get Apple Jack anyway. Now lets go stop this entity." All four of them nodded in agreement and walked outside. Then they were greeted by the one thing they last needed to hear.
Wow that was a typo. What it meant to say was that the heard the only voice that ever mattered to them.
"Everyone quick we have to get out of town!" Twilight shouted as they began to run.
"What is that voice?"
"It...is...the thing we...were running from that brainwashed you." Twilight said in between breathes. They ran together down the dirt path.
"Stop right there you four. Don't you want to let me control your every thought!"
"No!" They shouted in unison. Dirt flying up off the path as the four ran onward.
"See I knew you would. So were was I? Oh yes! So Twilight had just began to understand that I was right all along. Her friends also thought and felt the same way. They stopped running and understood what they really wanted all along."
"Don't listen to it, just keep running!"
Just then Rainbow Dash ran into a market stall.
"What? What the!" Dash took to the sky to avoid colliding with the market stall. "Where the buck that stall come from?!"
Just then Spike tripped over himself due to an unforeseen rock and the rest of the group had to leave him behind.
"Huh? AHHH! Twilight help!" Spike yelled as he laid slumped over in the grass after his tumble. Twilight levitated him back into the group. He seemed to have the power to materialize objects at will, just great!
Twilight was also thinking how much she wanted to give up running and throw away her free will. Also she wanted to admit that she loved the entity all along.
"Shut up!"
Sweet Apple Acres was now coming into view as the sun started to rise. Rainbow Dash picked up Spike as she flew over the fence. The others jumping over the obstacle right behind her. Apple Jack opened the front door to the sight of her friends running right at her.
Luckily they decide that they were headed in the wrong direction and wanted to come back and listen to the entity. "I said that they all turned around. Come on guys just let me control your thoughts. It will be fun I promise."
"What in tarnation is going on here!" "What the hay are you running fr....." She was tackled by Dash in a blue blur back inside the house. The rest of the group dove in and slammed the door behind them. Rarity quickly trying to fix her hair that the running had ruined terribly. "Mind If I ask what the heck this is all about?" The group only laid there panting on the floor with a look of relief. They had managed to outrun the entity and had made it to Apple Jack's farm with their minds intact.
Author's Note
Look like Twilight still did not know what she wants. When of course she wanted to give away her free will to me all along.
Will the main six be able to group up and stop the evil Twilight from ruining my story?
Will Spike decide that he loves the entity more than Rarity?
And most of all will he ever hit a growth spurt?
Stay forcibly tuned in for the next chapter and keep believing everything I tell you, to find out!
