The Odd Creature

by TehEpicFace

Rating: mature
Tags: Other, Sex, Human, Main 6, Romance, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1159

A human is somehow transported to Equestria and doesn't know how he got there.

I know it all seems rushed, but it's all more understandable in Chapter 2.

Published 2012-03-12 05:44:02 UTC
Last updated 2012-03-12 05:44:02 UTC

The Odd Creature

It's quiet in Ponyville. Everyone's asleep. Winter Wrap Up had been another success! The silence broke with strange sounds and sights. Hypnotic swirls, beaming lights, screeching. It all stops after the big loud bang. Ponyville was once again quiet. But Ponyville felt as if it were being watched over. The silence once again broke with a big explosion. The smoke was fading away very slowly. Twilight and Spike awoke to see what the commotion was about. After the smoke faded there was a figure. It looked nothing like a pony, nor a goat nor buffalo. It stood on it’s hind legs. It had pose able fingers, thumbs and toes. It was a human. All of Equestria had never seen such a creature. The figure became completely clear now. He had blue eyes, short brown hair, torn up shorts, a torn up t-shirt and a sock. The lights inside other pony’s homes turned on. Everypony was angry. They look out their windows to see the human. Rarity, who was in her finest night gown, came up to the human and said with a kind and generous voice “Oh you pour, pour thing. Look at your terrible clothing. However do you live like this darling?” He stood up and said with a frown “I, I don’t know. But there is one thing I want to know.” “Well what is it darling?” Rarity said with confusing “How did I get here?” He got back down and laid on the ground, shivering. “Wow,” said Twilight “I’ve never seen a human before!” Rainbow Dash flew in next to Twilight and said with a confused look on her face “How do you know what that thing is?” “In the Starswirl the Bearded wing in the Canterlot Archives there’s a scroll with his discovery on humans. There’s also a spell for one to make a portal to the human’s world. But I’ve never been able to do it. It’s a very tough spell.” Twilight replied. “Well, we can’t let this pour soul alone in the outdoors, we must take care of him until you can successfully complete the spell!” Said Rarity while helping the human to get up and place him on her back. “You’re right. Who would like to take care of him for the time being?” Nopony answered. Silence once again filled Ponyville. Rarity broke the silence by saying “I would like to take care of him. Besides, I can design a new wardrobe for him too!” “Great!” Said Twilight. “It’s settled then, you shall take care of him.” Everypony went back into their homes and settled into bed once again. Rarity carried the human to her house. Once they arrived she placed him in her bed and placed him under the bed sheets. She took off her outfit and put it in her closet. She squirmed into bed with him and dozed off.

Rarity woke up the next day to find herself on the floor. She screamed in terror. There was mud and dirt all over her house, her bed sheets were a mess, the window was broken and the human was gone! She called a handypony to come and fix her house, while she went off looking for the human. She went over to Twilight’s house to see if she could help. She knocked on the door. “Twilight dear, are you home?” She called. Rarity heard Twilight’s hooves clopping towards the door. The door opened. Rarity was in shock to see Pinkie Pie answer the door. Rarity looked around behind Pinkie Pie to see if Twilight were there. She was relieved to see that Everypony but Fluttershy was there. “Hiya!” Pinkie said in her normal happy voice. “May I come in?” Rarity asked. “Okey dokey lokey!” The two mares entered the room. Everypony was talking about the human. Rarity wondered why, she looked around to see that Twilight’s home had been trashed aswell. “Where’s Fluttershy?” Rarity asked. “We don’t know, we tried going to her place but the door was locked. It looked like Nopony was home so we left.” Said Rainbow Dash. “We saw a light turned on in her room, but we just assumed that she forgot to turn off her light.” Said Twilight. “So we left” Finished Applejack. “So, are you gals having the same problem with your homes?” asked Rarity. “Yuppers!” said Pinkie Pie. “I’m assuming it was that human, because he was missing when I woke up.” Rainbow Dash got up and said with a grin “Did you look in your bed for clues?” Rarity’s eyebrows raised slowly. Her eyes widened. “Oh dear,” She said quietly to herself. She ran out of the house and headed towards her own. Everypony else looked at each other and ran after Rarity. They arrived and as Rarity walked in, she paid the handypony. She lifted the bed sheets to see that his torn clothes and sock were on the mattress. “Not only is he out loose.” Rarity started “He’s out loose, in the nude!” Twilight had an idea “Let’s go check Fluttershy’s house again” she said. The others nodded and followed Twilight. They arrived at Fluttershy’s house. They opened the door and called out for Fluttershy. They heard moaning from her room. They ran in to see something they wish they never saw. Fluttershy’s legs were spread, the nude human on top of her. His cock slowly entering Fluttershy’s vagina. She had a look in her eye that said that she was enjoying it. Everypony gasped. The human glazed back noticed everypony and got up off of Fluttershy and jumped out her window. Everyone but Fluttershy had wide eyes and wide mouths. Fluttershy began to explain, “I was asleep, and when I woke up, well… There he was.” She said blushing. Twilight walked up to Fluttershy and said “Don’t worry, I figured out how to do the spell, so we can send him back so he can’t do that again. Fluttershy’s eyes opened widely and said softly, “I don’t want him to go,” “WHAT!?” Yelled everypony else. “He destroyed half of Ponyville!” Twilight exclaimed “If you can learn to keep him control like all your animal friends then you can have him live with you.” Rarity Started. “But I don’t know why you want him to stay…” Rarity stopped and realized, she’s in love with him. “Oh, I see. It’s hard when you have a crush darling, we all know that. But as your friends we will leave you be, as long as you can learn to control him.” Fluttershy formed a smile on her face. “Thanks so much guys. This means a lot!” She said happily. “Well, you better go find him before he starts destroying Ponyville again.” Twilight said with a giggle. “Oh, yeah. Bye everypony!” Said Fluttershy, flying away to go find the human.

TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 2!

(Chapter 2 release date should be anything before March 20th 2012)