The Tale Of Teal

by Marx T

Rating: teen
Tags: Slice of Life, Sad, Anthro, Main 6, Gore, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Spike, Other, Fluttershy
Length: 7007

First attempt at writing. This is about a new pony who comes to Ponyville. (A random OC I made up, Sorry if it has been done, just didn't look it up.)

This is my first attempt at writing anything longer then 5 paragraphs. I'd appreciate it if you could point out any problems I made in writing it or any ideas for the story. Please, don't be rude about it and say that it is terrible, just say what I need to fix, thanks. Thanks to Time Centurion for helping me out with the corrections and stuffs. Check out some of his stories :D http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Time+Centurion

This is about a pony, nicknamed teal, who comes to Ponyville a few months after his nineteenth birthday, hoping to make some new friends and explore the new town. I'm pretty much making the story up as I go, if people actually enjoy the story I'll plan a bit more. By making it up as I go, I just mean I don't have a rough draft, I write it and fix the errors as I go. Planning would just make it a bit longer. I will now think through most of where the chapters will go. Not going to think out every word, nor will I stay with what I said. I'll still be making it up as go for some of it, 'cause I write best like that, but I will think about what its going to end at. I'll also try to write the chapters with 1,000 words +, but that might take a bit longer :3, But I got all the time I need. I hope you will enjoy and I may change the title and/or chapter titles. No cover art as of yet. Pm me if you find something good :D

One last thing, right now it is rated teen because it will a little bit more dark in the future chapters, may even turn mature. Just some gore The ponies are human with the wings and horns and still all in Ponyville, just the appearance has changed. Also cutie marks are noticeable, either on pants or some other piece of clothing, and everyone knows what it is. Tags will change later on, when I get the darker chapters it will be added in the tags. :3

I'm currently working on a better story, as a collab with Time Centurion. I'll finish the dark part two tomorrow, and I won't be able to write a good ending. Its boring anyways. Use the elements to go inside his head and get rid of his madness. Wouldn't be two parts. If the 4 people reading this story actually want me to write it, comment it and I will. If not, I'll finish the dark and that'll be the only ending. That's the real ending regardless though.

Published 2013-12-09 03:50:07 UTC
Last updated 2013-12-12 02:11:33 UTC

A New Home

As I sat down, I began to wonder about how my new home would be. Would the ponies there be nice? Would there be any good houses available? No, I can't think like that, I'll stress myself out too much. Lets think happy thoughts, lets assume I find a good home and meet some ponies, maybe even a mare. Now that's good thinking, meeting a good mare. I hope I get the chance to.

I must have been thinking about it for a while, because the waitress came and dropped the food off. She didn't say anything though, just put it on the table and walked off. I wonder if she is okay. I want to ask her if she is okay, but we just met and it would be sorta creepy if I did. I'm sure she is just tired from working.

My food looks really well made, assuming you can make bad salad or water that is... I picked up the fork and found out it taste as good as it looks. I'm just going to say that the water must be good too, since water can't really have a bad flavor, unless its carbonated water, or some other junk that you add to it so it looks fancy.

I continued to think about the possible outcomes of my new home, mainly the positive ones, but occasionally my train of thought would wreck and I'd think about something terrible happening. I do have enough money to buy a decent home, and it was a small town, so I think everyone would be friends with everyone, hopefully. Shouldn't be to hard to make some friends. I sat there for 45 minutes or so just thinking about all the possibilities, until I finally got bored with it and walked back to my seat, ignoring the now happy looking waitress.

As I walked back, I saw the same group of ponies, still alone and either listening to music or reading. I wonder why everyone is alone. I know I'm alone because I'm just getting to Ponyville, so maybe they are doing the same.

I arrived at my seat and took out my mp3 player, and listened to the other DJ PON-3 albums, I had all of them. I really like electronic music, so I was thinking to become a DJ. When I start looking for a more permanent job, of course. I had three hours until the train arrives at Ponyville, so I think I'll listen to an album, then sleep the rest of the way.

The album only lasted about twenty minutes, and I was getting tired from the salad anyways, so it'd be a good time to sleep. I set my alarm to two hours and thirty-five minutes from now, and went to sleep.

My alarm went off in a middle of my dream about that I got to Ponyville, and everything was all nice and dandy, and I made friends with everyone, and I got a job as a DJ. Then I woke up and ruined everything. But I guess waking up is better then sleeping in a train and missing my stop. I have five minutes to pack up all of my belongings, since I was being smart and set it to five minutes before. I somewhat neatly shoved everything into my backpack and zipped it up. It was my departing present from my parents, it was a black and dark green bag, which are my favorite colors, and it had the strap that goes diagonally across so it goes on one shoulder and under the other one.

I sat there waiting for the train to stop.I didn't want to look out the window, because I want to take it all in as soon as I step out. Four minutes pasted and I felt the train stop and the doors open. I got up and walked out the closest door, I noticed I was the only one getting off. Oh well...

As I walked out I began to take in all that Ponyville has, a lot of ponies are walking around, and I can see tons of buildings. There is even a tree house, I don't understand why someone would live in a tree, but I'm sure they have there reasons. Ain't like they are living in a library or something. I also saw some pony that had a grey mane, glasses and had a scroll for her cutie mark. I remember reading that that's what the mayor looked like. She didn't look to busy, So I jogged over to her to ask her where I should start.

"Um, Are you the mayor?" I asked.

"Yes I am, what do you need?" She replied.

"I just moved here, and I was wondering if you could help me get situated." I said.

"You, just moved here?' She said, looking a bit worried.

"Yes I did, whats wrong? I asked, wondering if I said anything wrong.

"It's not you, its just that there is a pony who goes sorta all out when a new pony moves here, and I don't know when she will pop up." She answered.

"Well, she probably won't show up for a bit, so you can explain everything." I said.

"Yes, you're probably right, anyways, luckily you got here at the right time, we have a pretty good home available for 200 bits, 100 bits for month." She said.

"That would be perfect, where do I drop off the money?" I asked.

"If you have the money now, just give it to me, I have the papers in my bag." She answered.

"Yeah, I got the money right here," I said as I took out 200 bits from my bag.

She grabbed the money and placed it into a pouch she had. She handed me a few papers that were stabled together, "Fill this out and give it to me by the end of this week." She said. "Oh wait," she got out a piece of paper and began to write something on it. She finished and gave it to me, "The first address it your new home, and second is where you can come to give me the papers." She said.

"Thanks," I said as I read the paper and the signs around me.

"You're welcome, just don't forget to give me the papers," She replied, "Oh, also the house it five blocks that way," she said pointing behind me.

"Thanks, again." I replied.

" No problem," she said as she walked off.

This is turning out as I hoped, I already have a house and a hundred or so bits left. I followed her directions towards my new home. I like this place already!

Author's Note

I'm not to good with the Too and To things, so I might have messed up there. I'd appreciate it if you could tell me what you think and/or any corrections that I should make, thanks for reading. :D

Old Memories.

I turned around to follow her directions, it didn't seem to far away. It shouldn't take me that long to get there. As I headed that way I saw a bunch of buildings, all relatively the same, and they seemed to be homes. I can only assume that is what my house will look like. I also noticed that there are tons of ponies just walking around, I've never seen so many people outside before, then again this is the first day I've been outside..,

Back at Canterlot, my parents said no pony was allowed outside until they were atleast 18 years old, but I see tons of ponies that look younger then that. Maybe it is only in Canterlot. Being stuck inside wasn't that bad, I had three brothers that I could always talk to, and my parents were always there too. Every once in a while my uncles would come over and ask me weird questions, like what I think about, what I wanna be, and other questions about my mind.

I also had to take a pill every night, that my brothers didn't take. When I asked my mom she said it was that I was sick, and the only way to make me feel good was to take the pills. Good thing I had those pills though, I don't know what I would have done without them.

I finally arrived at my new home. Oh look, it looks like all the others, yay... I walked inside and saw that there were two pathways, one to the right, and one to the left. The middle was a closet with a wall separating both sides. It will full of furniture already, so I won't have to get any of them. The left looked like a living room, it had a fireplace, couch, and a TV. Looked pretty cool.

The right looked like where the rooms go, with three doors on the right and one on the left. I'll assume that's the bathroom on the left. The first two doors on the right were medium sized rooms, and the last was a large room. I could use the two medium sized rooms for some sort of DJ room, and the other one for work or games. Games sounds better, but I might need it for work. So I'll decide later.

I went into my new room to see it had a large bed, a wardrobe, a computer, and a good sized TV, but not as big as the living room's TV. I went to the wardrobe, and took out my clothes out of my bag, and hung them up.

I had four different outfits, including the one I had one. A business suit, street clothes, house clothes, and a different pair of street clothes. I always wore a hoodie, unless it was my business suit, of course. I have a black and dark green one, which I'm wearing right now, and a blue and white one. I can't go anywhere without them.

I finished unpacking and went into the kitchen, which was in the back of the house. It had anything a normal kitchen would have, the cabinets, a fridge, microwave, oven, toaster, and your other kitchen using needs. The fridge had some food in it, but I would need to fill it up soon.

I walked into the living room and sat on the couch, there was a small coffee table between it and the TV. I had a pen in my pocket, just in case, and the papers in the other. I took them out and started filling out the paper.

First question, what is my name. That is a tricky one. Everyone calls me Teal, and I still don't know why. I don't wear teal, and nothing about me is teal. Even my parents called me Teal. They said it so much that, that I don't even remember my real name... I'll just put Teal, its a subject I'd rather not think about.

I don't really remember a lot from my childhood except that I had three brothers, two parents, and two uncles. Also that I couldn't leave, I had to take this pills for my illness, and everyone called me teal for some reason. everything before 7 is blurry, I think we lived somewhere else though. Eh, no use going on about the past.

I'll fill the paper out later, the whole name thing kinda got me depressed. I need to do something to take my mind off of it. Normally I'd talk to my brothers, but obviously, they aren't here. I'll go meet some new friends to take my mind off of it. Yeah that's a good idea. I'll go do that...

New Friends

As I head out the door, I stopped to take one last look at my new, beautiful home. It had anything a pony could need, BUT there is one thing I wish it could have. A room, with a mini room inside of it, with a cloud that hangs in the mini room on the ceiling, much like the thing the water comes out of in a shower, but instead of water..it would have..... chocolate rain! GENIUS! I can make a fortune with this idea! But, I wont give it away, its my chocolate....

Anywhooo, I walked out the door into the busy streets of Ponyville, and I saw a few of the same ponies, and a few new ones. One certain pony caught my eye. She had a pink mane, and and pink clothes. Her mane was all poofy and stuff, and her cutie mark had three balloons. They formed a triangle, and the bottom two were blue, and the top was yellow. She was caring like 50 hundred million balloons! Maybe not THAT many, but up there, being the gentlecolt I am, I walked up to her asked her if she needed help.

"Excuse me, you look like you need some help with those balloons." I said.

Suddenly she jumped up, letting go all of the balloons in the process, and inhaled very loudly. Then she, wait, did she just FLY away? She ain't no Pegasus. I didn't see any wings, maybe I'm going crazy, but I'm sure she didn't have wings, but anyway. She flew away really fast, right over my head.

"Okay then....' I said, surprised at what just happened. I decided I might be able to meet somepony else while I go to the market, since I need to fill my fridge up anyway.

In front of me there was a road that led to what looks to be the market center, and the busiest area. Shouldn't be to hard to meet somepony right? As I headed that way I saw the same buildings that look just like my house, and the amount of ponies increases as I got closer to the market. I saw lines for each one of the stalls, the smallest being five ponies.

"I hate lines.." I said, apparently loud enough for the cyan colored Pegasus next to me to hear.

"So do I, that's why I buy my food from Apple Jack." She said, in a voice that sounded like she thought I was talking to her when I said that.

I went along with the talking to her when I said that and asked. "Whats your name, and who is Apple Jack?"

"I'm Rainbow Dash, fastest flier in all of Equestia!" She shouted, flying up into the air and doing a few spins on the way up. She flew down and said "Oh, And Apple Jack is my friend, she sells apples and other stuff with apples in it. She also runs the Sweet Apple Acres. Who are you?"

"I'm Teal, I just got here by train and needed to fill up my fridge, so I was heading to the market." I said.

"Oh, your new here huh? Did Pinkie Pie say anything to ya?" She asked.

"Would she happen to be wearing tons of pink, and have a poofy pink mane?" I said.

"Yeah, that's Pinkie Pie alright." She said.

"Then yes, I was going to help her carry some balloons, then she freaked out and flew away"

"Oh, Pinkie always does that, no one really knows how she can fly and do all that, but we don't ask. She freaked out because she throws parties for all the new ponies." She said,

"Oh, that's nice. Anyways, you think I could buy some apples from Apple Jack?" I asked.

"Yeah, AJ will hook you up, you said your name was Teal right?" She said.

"Yeah, why?" I asked.

"Well, your not anywhere near teal.. and normally ponies are named after a color they are or something. Like I'm Rainbow Dash 'cause of my mane" She said as she showed off her mane.

"Well, Teal isn't my real name, just what everypony called me.. I don't remember my real name, guess they just called me Teal so much I forgot." I said.

"You, don't remember your real name?" She asked, looking sorta confused and sad at the same time.

"Yeah, buts its no big deal." I said. It was a big deal, but I don't want to seem like I want attention or anything.

"Oh, okay. Anywa- She began but was interrupted by Pinkie Pie

" Dashie!!! You know the new pony!? She asked. She called her Dashie, Heh, that's Hilarious.'

"Yeah, his name is Teal, and we were going to AJ's place to get him some apple stuff." She said.

"Oh cool! Can I come! Did you tell him about the party!? What else are you going to do? Is he going to meet everyone else? Is h-" She wanted to continue but "Dashie" Interrupted her by putting her hand over her mouth.

"Yes Pinkie, you can come, and I did tell him about the party, where is it going to be?" She asked, ignoring her other questions and taking her hand off of her mouth.

" Its going to be at AJ's farm! I told her about it and she agreed to have it at her place since the Cakes were to busy to have the party there." She answered.

"Okay, the three of us can head there and do the party thing, and get Teal his apples!" She said.

"Do I have a say in this?" I asked.

"Yeah, but you wouldn't want to miss one of pinkie's parties anyway. We were going to head there anyways, so why not?" She said.

"That's a good point, lead the way." I said.

"Yayyyy!!!" Shouted Pinkie Pie, causing a few other ponies to look this way.

"Not so loud, Pinkie." Said Rainbow Dash.

"Hey Rainbow Dash, you got a nickname or something, 'cause saying Rainbow Dash takes too long" I asked.

"Just call me Dash," She answered.

"You can call me Pinkie!" Said Pinkie Pie.

We started walking to Apple Jack's farm. Then I noticed that Pinkie was bouncing. Okay..... That's not odd..

I made a few new friends and I'm going to a party, on the first day! This is going to be fun.

Author's Note

I'm just going to hope that you can call the market stand thingy things stalls. If you now what they are please tell me :D. Also if you forgot, I did say hand 'cause of the anthro. They all are considered ponies still though :3 Over 1,000 words, yay!

The Party

"So, have you ever been to a party before?" Asked Dash

"Naw, I've never even been outside!" I said, jokingly

"No, seriously. Have you been to a party or not?" Ask Dash, a bit more demanding.

"No, I've never been outside before. This is my first day ever being outside." I said in a more serious tone.

"Wait really?" She asked. "Why?"

"Because my parents said it was against the law for any pony under the age of 18 to leave their home." I said.

"Err,against the law?" She said. "Where are you from again?" She asked.

"I'm from Canterlot, isn't it illegal there, or am I mistaken?" I asked.

"I don't think so, but I'll ask Twilight, she'd know." She said

"I KNOW!!!" Shouted Pinkie, luckily this time no pony was around.

"Stop shouting Pinkie," Dash said, "You know what?"

"I know that it isn't against the law in Canterlot!" She said, proudly.

"Well then," Dash said facing me. "looks like your parents lied."

"I wonder why they lied, it's not like I'm a danger or anything." I said. Why would my parents lie to me? I didn't do anything wrong..

"Well, that doesn't matter anymore, you're outside now and that is all that matters." She said, trying to cheer me up.

"Well, I guess your right." I said. "How much longer till Apple Jack's farm?" I asked, trying to change the subject.

"Its right there!" She said, pointing directly ahead of us.

"Oh, cool." I said, "So who's going to be there?" I asked.

"Us, Spike, Twilight, Applejack, Fluttershy, and Rarity. She answered as if I knew them.

"Uh, who are they?" I asked.

"My friends, they're cool." She replied "You'll like them."

We kept walked the rest of the rest of the way in silence, except Pinkie, who bounced in silence. We got to the door and Dash yelled.

"Hey, let us in! We got the new pony!"

"All right, calm down, I'll open the door." Said a southern voice from the other side.

The door opened and I saw the inside of the barn was filled with balloons and pieces of hay. There was a pretty big, circular table in the middle, with eight chairs. The table has a big cake in the middle and some plates with forks. The girl who opened it was wearing a cowboy hat and boots, I can only assume that's Applejack.

"Howdy, My name is Applejack, welcome to Ponyville... She said, making a gesture that looked like she wanted my name.

"Teal," I said, "The name is Teal."

"Howdy Teal, come on in." She said as she moved out of the way to let us in.

"Hey Teal!" The ponies at the table said in unison. All but one of them, the pink maned one didn't say anything, she just looked at the table. Her mane wasn't poofy like Pinkies, or as dark. Hers was straight and a lighter pink. She was probably just shy...

I started to worry, because I thought I was the only guy. I wasn't to comfortable talking with a group of all mares. Then I saw a guy, who looked like he was 13, sitting between the mare with purple hair, and the mare with purple hair but with a pink stripe going through it.

I walked over and took a seat in one of the chairs with no one on either side, so I wouldn't make anyone uncomfortable with a stranger next to them. Dash sat next to me and started to introduce me to every pony.

"Teal, these are my friends. "Fluttershy," she said pointing at the pink maned one. She responded by looking up a little bit and waved."Rarity," she said pointing to the purple maned one, who also waved. "Spike," pointing at the thirteen year old. "and Twilight." pointing at the mare with purple and pink mane. She waved.

"So what brings you to Ponyville Teal?" She asked.

"Well, I was finally old enough to move out of my parents place, so I came to Ponyville." I said.

"Why did you choose Ponyville of all places?" She asked, looking genuinely curious.

"I was reading about a few places, and this seemed like the most fun." I said.

"It is fun!" Said Pinkie.

"So where'd ya move to?" Twilight asked.

"One of those houses that look the same.." I said.

"Do you remember the address, so we could reach you if we needed to?" She asked.

"Yeah," I said as I handed her the same paper the mayor gave me." You can write it down, but I need it back." The second address is where I need to drop my rent off at, and the first is my place." She got out a pen and paper and wrote it down.

"Here," she said as she finished. Man, she writes fast.

"So, what do you think you'd want to do for a job now that your in Ponyville?" She asked.

"I've always wanted to be a DJ, I listen alot of DJ PON-3 and it seems like a really cool job." I said, sorta sounding like a fanboy.

"You do know that she lives in Ponyville right?" She asked.

"WHAAAAA???" I asked, completely shocked that I live so close to DJ-PON-3

"Yeah, Vinyl lives in ponyville, you can hear her music from my house!" She said.

"That's awesome." I said. I wanna meet her!

"Is your cutie mark something related to being a DJ or music?" She asked.

"No, I don't really know what my cutie mark is. It's just some symbol." I said.

"Can we see it?" She asked.

"Sure, I guess." I said as I pulled my left jacket sleeve up. It has a bracelet that has a symbol on it, which is my cutie mark. "There it is." I said as I showed them the symbol. Its a circle while eight arrows coming out of the sides, symmetrically.

"That looks like something that Zecora would have." Said Twilight. She noticed my confusion and said, "Oh, Zercora is our Zebra friend." "I'll look it up when I get home, mind if I take it?" She asked.

"Sure, I don't use it.." I said as I gave her the bracelet. "I want it back tomorrow, okay?" I said.

"Yeah, I'll give it back tomorrow, don't worry." She said.

"Teal, didn't you need something from Applejack anyways?" Asked Dash

"Oh yeah," I turned to Applejack, "You think I could buy some apples?" I asked. "My fridge isn't that full."

"Sure, I'll give ya a bag for free this time, but next time I need 15 bits." She said as she got up to grab a bag. Apparently she kept bags of apples in the farm.

"Thanks, but you sure you don't want me to pay for anything?" I asked.

"Nah, take em." She said as she tossed me the bag

"Thanks." I said.

"WHO WANTS CAKE!!!??" Shouted Pinkie Pie.

Everyone shook their heads in approval, so Pinkie began to cut the cake. "Teal should get the first slice." Said Twilight.

"I'm good with that." I said, cake did sound pretty good.

"Okay, here ya go Teal!" Pinkie said as she gave me a plate with a big piece of cake.

"Thanks Pinkie." I said.

"Twilight, what time is it?" I asked, "I need to get home by 11:30, want to get a good rest for tomorrow."

"Its 11:24, if you head home know, you can get home by then." She said.

"Oh, I was hoping to stay a bit longer, but I can't." I said, I do wish I could have stayed. "Thanks for the party everyone." I said as I walked out. "Bye!"

"Bye Teal!" Everyone said.

It was a fun night, met 7 friends on the first day, and they are all pretty cool. I hope we get to do something tomorrow.

Author's Note

Kinda rushed towards the end, sorry. Wanted to finish the chapter but I had to do a bunch of crap. Hope yall like the chapter and the next chapter is going to be interesting :D

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Twilight was right, because as soon as I walked in, it was 11:30. Shouldn't take me that long to fall asleep, I'm pretty tired anyways. I walked towards my room and threw my hoodie on the floor next to it. Pretty much how I deal with everything, just throw it on ground. I should make a song about it. I'll name it, "Threw it on the ground.". Perfect!

Anyways, I need some sleep, I'll use my genius in the morning. "Goodnight me!" I said to myself. As I lay on the bed, I began to wonder about how tomorrow with turn out. Will I get to hang out with my friends? Will Twilight figure out what that symbol means? What if it's bad! Ahh geesh, I need to stop thinking like that or I'll never fall asleep! Time to sleep!

I was awoken by a banging noise on my door. "Come on, I was sleeping! I said to myself, It better be important.."
I got up and walked to the door, not before taking my hoodie off the floor and putting it on. They began knocking again, "I'm coming, I'm coming." I said, irritated.

I got to the door and saw that it was Twilight and the rest of the gang. "What ya need?" I asked, trying to hide the fact that I just woke up.

"Last night, when you left. I went to Zecora's house, and she told me what the symbol mean't." She said.

"Really?" I asked, Surprised. "What does it mean?"

"It's an old zebra symbol, it stands for.." She said, purposely building up the suspense. "Its wierd what it means, because I don't know why you would have it." She said, ignoring the fact that she just skipped over what it mean't.

"What does it mean!?" I asked, irritated that I was waken up at, what time is it? Nine? I don't know, she just needs to tell me!

"Well, it stands for insanity." She said, confused of why I had it.

Suddenly, I remembered everything, but it was too much for me to handle apparently because everything went black.

I woke up on my couch, with Twilight next to me and the others standing around me.

"What happened?" Twilight asked, surprised that I just blacked out.

"As soon as you said insanity, I remembered everything." I said.

"What do you mean everything?" She asked, curiously.

"I remembered why I couldn't go outside, why my uncles asked me weird questions, why they called me teal, the pills! Everything!" I said, angered that I didn't know until now.

"You couldn't go outside!?" Twilight asked, shocked by what I said. Then I remembered I didn't tell her yet.

"Well, my parents said it was "Against the law to go outside before age 18" and I just believed them." I said, mad at myself for believing something as stupid as that.

"Tell us everything!" Dash said, already knowing that I couldn't go outside.

"Well, When I was six, I had a passion to burn thing, and hurt other ponies. Who didn't? Apparently, I was the only pony, and I was taken into a mental facility, that they made look like a home. They even hired my "Parents, Uncles and Brothers." The "Uncles" were the psychologist, and everyone else was just there to make me believe. The pills were so that I'd forget about the burning and hurting, and just believe what they said. I couldn't go outside because people would remind me of who I am, and I'd go crazy. They called me "Teal", because there was a different pony by the name Teal, who had the exact same problem, and they did the same thing to them. They let me go at 18 because they thought I'd taken enough pills to make me forget,permanently. Obviously that didn't work."

"Does that mean you'll go crazy again?" Twilight asked, worried.

"Nah, I think I know how to fix it." I said, reassuring her.

Author's Note

I'm making a good and dark ending to it, that's why it seems unfinished.

Dark Ending (Part One)

"Nah, I think I know how to fix it." I said, trying to reassure Twilight.

I got up. “Follow me," I said as I walked towards the kitchen. I went to the drawer that held all of my knives and forks.

I took out one of the bigger knives, the ones for cutting meat, and said. "You see, if you take this knife, and shove it right here," I said as I stabbed her in the neck, "You won’t have to worry about me anymore, you'll have to worry about the fact you'll bleed out or suffocate." I took the knife out of her throat, and pushed her to the ground. Everyone started screaming, and Spike came running at me.

"You’re going to pay for that!" he yelled, as he began to blow fire at me. Luckily, I still remember how to throw knives from that one kid I practiced on when I was six! I flipped the knife, so that I held it by the blade, and threw it at his head. Wasn't my best throw, but the blade went a good few inches into his skull. He died before he hit the ground.

Fluttershy was curled up into a ball, crying. Dash looked like she wanted to kill me, which I'm sure she'd try. Pinkie, Applejack and Rarity just looked confused, but still capable of defending themselves. Rainbow flew as me, screaming.

"I'll kill you!!" She yelled. She flew towards me. Luckily for me, she flew diagonally. I ducked at the last second and punched her in the stomach. She came crashing to the ground, hitting her head on the wall behind me, presumably knocking herself out.

"I'm not going to take any chances with you," I said as I grabbed another knife out of the drawer. I walked over to her to see she was, indeed, knocked out. That didn't change that fact that I stabbed her right in her temple, going up to the hilt in her skull. It's wasn't big enough to go all the way through to the other side, but was still enough to kill her.

Next was Pinkie and Rarity. Pinkie looked extremely mad, probably because I just killed "Dashie". She couldn't contain herself and ran at me.

"I'll get you for killing Dashie, you big meanie!" She said, in a slightly louder voice than usual. I didn't want to kill her, I had other plans. She attempted to punch me, but I easily dodged her, and punched her in the temple. Good trick for knocking someone out. Doesn't always work, but hard enough it should. Luckily, I hit hard enough to knock her out.

Applejack got a piece of rope. Don't even know where she got it from, but she is a cowgirl, so I ain't going to question it. It was big enough to tie me down twice, so I had to act fast. I ran to the drawer. It had one knife left. I took out the knife and ran to Applejack, before she could get her rope ready. I stabbed her in the neck, the knife went all the way through to the other side, and I pulled it out, causing her to fall on the ground, trying to breath. Unfortunately for her, her own blood was getting in the way, so she was basically drowning in her own blood.

"Halarious, I said, you're drowning in your own blood." I started to laugh. Funny how that can happen.

Rarity was still standing, and she look pretty upset. Well, I did kill all of her friends, I'd be upset too. I forgot, she has magic! I've learned that somethings, if you throw a knife like you hold it, the handle might hit them in the face. It might be enough to knock her out too, I have plans for her as well. She started to run at me, getting her magic ready. I threw the knife at her, attempting my plan to knock her out. Luckily, the handle hit her, but only slowed her down.

I ran at her, grabbed her head, and smashed it into the counter, knocking her out. She didn't seem to be bleeding from the head smashing, so that's good. I'll need her to be alive for my plans to be fun.

Last was Fluttershy, she was still crying and in a ball.

"Awww, are you upset that I killed all your friends? I asked, mockingly. Well, I didn't kill two of them, death comes later for them."

"Why did you do this? She asked, in a small voice. I thought we were friends."

"We were friends, I said in a casual tone, I just haven't killed or burned any pony for what, 12 years maybe? That's too long to go without murder, Fluttershy. Don't you enjoy to kill?" I asked

"Well, I guess this is the only time I'll get to confess." She began. I wonder what she's talking about. "I have the same passions as you, but I never was strong enough to get a pony. So I used my animals. I've killed, burned and dissected tons of my animals. Normally the ones that no one wants. I personally like dissection the most" She said, in a casual tone.

"In that case, would you like to help me with Rarity and Pinkie?" I asked, shocked that Fluttershy, of all ponies liked it too.

"Sure, but I wanna cut open Pinkie," She said in a normal tone, which is much different from her normal, quiet voice.

"Fo sho, I just need some supplies, this house didn't come with anything." I said. I'd be surprised if the house did come with the supplies though.

"I have tons at my cottage, I even have a space to tie them down!" She said, getting excited.

"We could just do it at your place, but how will we get them there?" I said, pointing at the two knocked out mares.

"How long do you think they'll be out?" She asked.

"Maybe for and hour or two." I said, knowing from experience that ponies normally stay KO'd for an hour.

"Perfect, take AJ's rope, and we can carry them to my house. We can say that they fell and I'm taking them to heal em up. I fix up a few ponies now and then, so it shouldn't be that suspicious." She said, it sounded like the had been planning this.

"What about they bodies?" I asked, pointing at the dead mares and dragon looking dude, who were still bleeding.

"Leave here for now, she said, no one aint going to come in here anyways. We can burn em when we finish with Rarity and Pinkie." she said, still suspiciously sounding like she planned it.

"Okay, I'll go change and get my bag, my clothes have a bit too much blood on them." I said as I walked to my room to pick out some clothes.

"Okay, I'll pile the ponies up, don't take too long!" She called back.

"I'll try not to!" I called back as I opened my wardrobe. I'll just wear my other pair of street clothes and my jacket. My shoes didn't get any blood on them, surprisingly. I threw my jacket on the floor and took the clothes out of the wardrobe. I walked to the bathroom and placed the clothes on the sink. I turned the shower on and locked the door. I undressed and stepped into the shower.

Its going to be a fun day, I get to cut and dissect ponies with a friend! First time I've done that. I'm still surprised that Fluttershy, of all ponies shared my passion. I continued to think of the possibilities of Fluttershy and I cutting open ponies together as I took my shower. Its going to be so awesome!

Author's Note

Planned on it being one part, but the dark ending is how I wanted it to end, and I have to go to bed. I'll finish it up tommorrow, or later today actually since is 1 in the morning. Thanks for reading

Prologue

I am finally old enough to move out of my parents place in Canterlot, and I think I might want to move to a small place called Ponyville. It sounds like a nice place, fun too. Tons of stuff happens over there, like the time Discord was there making it rain chocolate milk and causing chaos. Most ponies would say that's dangerous, but who cares! Its chocolate rain. Who doesn't want that?! I bought a one way ticket to Ponyville and went off to my soon to be home.

Its been two hours so far, the train is supposed to take 6 hours to get there, so I still got along way to go. I listened to the newest DJ PON-3 album like fifty times, and its getting pretty old. Not having anything better to do, I got up and walked around the train. As I got up I heard my stomach growl.

"Man, I haven't eaten all day." I muttered to myself. I walked up to the closest pony who seemed to know what he was doing and asked, "Um, would you happen to know where I could get some food?"

"Yeah, the next two carts that way, He said as he pointed to the door behind me.

"Thanks," I replied as I turned around and started heading to the food cart. As I was heading there I didn't see that many other ponies, and the ones I saw were listening to music or reading. None of them sat together.

"Guess I wasn't the only one," I muttered as I continued to walk forward. I finally arrived the the cart and saw that there was three tables on one side, and a counter on the other. I walked up to the girl at the cash register and ask her, "Do you have anything to eat?"

"Yes, She replied, we have a couple of different salads, and a few different drinks."

"What kind of salads do you have, and do you have water? I asked,

"We have a Garden Salad, lettuce, cheese, the essentials. Then we have the Griffin Salad, which has all of the ingredients that the Garden has, but with grilled chicken, and yes, we do have water. She said

"I'll take the Garden Salad and a water, please." I said, not wanting anything to do with the meat.

"Okay, that will be 7 bits." She replied.

Luckily, my parents gave me 300 bits, for the ticket, food, and some sort of shelter, the ticket was only 15 bits, so I still had a lot and could afford a good meal. "Here ya go," I said as I gave her the bits.

"Your order will be read in 2-7 minutes," She said as she walked into the kitchen on the other side on the counter.

I took a seat in the middle table and waited for my food. Two and a quarter hours down, three and three quarters to go...

Author's Note

This was kind of a small chapter, just am really tired right now, next chapters will be longer, and it will get better when he gets to Ponyville. Seemed like a good place to stop.