Remember the Spectrum

by Eclipse
Dash had gotten into high straits before, but this one ending in her getting hospitilized

Rainbow Convinced Fluttershy, and somehow Gilda to come with her for some high-stakes training in the Everfree Forest. The experience doesn't end well, for any of the party involved.

[THIS WAS EXTREMELY RUSHED. So I'll see to it as re-written, the ratings are… Well bad, but I still love this concept. Even though I killed two of the Mane 6 in it, but after writing a remake of 'cupcakes' two did not even compare. The scene in the Everfree Forewst will be extenended, I'm going to add more dialouge, and ultimately spruce up the ending a bit. Plus my browser messed up italicizing half of the story. I'll try to not rush anymore, i'll take my time from now on. I have great ideas, but they're wasted because of my dreadful habit as to rush the damn things. So, I'll work on one for a while until It gets to a point where I can alternate stories. Thanks for any criticism, it has insprired me to take slow pride in my writing. Don't let the feeling of imcompleteness ruin it, I'll have a redux within the time zone of two months.]

Everyone
Cancelled
Sad
Tragedy
Slice of Life
 

2159 words: Estimated 11 minutes to read

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