Twilight's vision

by Envy and Christian

Rating: mature
Tags: Derpy Hooves, Pinkie Pie, Twilight Sparkle, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Snips, Alternate Universe, Fluttershy
Length: 4678

Twilight has a vision... a vision that could change equestria forever. can she accomplish this dark of a plan...

Twilight has had it with the way things are going in equestria. What happens if Twilight loses control of her morality and decides Equestria needs to be filled with the strongest, smartest, and worthy. It's survival of the fittest. will her plan fall short? or will she rule Equestria with this devious plot?

Published 2013-12-15 02:50:03 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-04 22:28:28 UTC

The Questions

"I need to do this; most of the ponies here are all being so...so pathetic, even I’m starting to see some flaws in my friends, the power of friendship can only take you so far... I’ve been thinking. I can replace most of them. Like Fluttershy, in bad situations Fluttershy always panics, she can't do anything right… in that state she's better off discorded at least she can help in brawl and stand up for herself. And Pinke Pie! all she thinks about is party ,party ,party a Neanderthal pony can be the spirit laughter and nopony would notice, hay even discorded she's still useless she just becomes a cry baby and cries all day about "I have no friends, they don't like my party" buck this I’m going to do something NOW!
The list
Applebloom- She gets in to trouble with no solution and all she talks about is getting a cutie mark, sure her friends do too but she is the worst out of the cutie mark crusaders.
Status: Free
Derpy hooves- How am I supposed to explain this without being offensive, well... she’s kinda...odd
Status: Free

Fluttershy- Cries too much and only thinks about animals. not useful in ponyville.
Status: Captured

Pinke Pie- Why u no stop party.
Status: Captured

Snips- Snips is no better than a pair of scissors.
Status: Captured

Snails- I didn't know being an idiot would give you a cutie mark.
Status: Captured
That's all for now I better get started

The Story
Today started like any other day, the cakes are baking, Sweetie bell trying to cook for Rarity, Scootaloo is taking flying lessons from Rainbow dash, snips and snails are getting into mischief, applejack is getting groceries and today Applebloom is going to Twilight's house to ask Twilight for any more ways to get a Cutie mark as she rushes to twilight's house waiting for her next adventure to begin. As she got there she noticed Twilight's door was open. Carefree with no hesitation she rushes towards the door but in a matter of seconds the door shuts her inside.
"Twi, ya here, hay it's me Applebloom I’m here for my cutie mark"
Then suddenly a door pops up from out of nowhere it slowly starts to open and then Twilight appears right behind Applebloom
"Oh hey Twi, I been looking for ya".
Twilight stare at Applebloom with cold unforgiving eyes.
"Uuhhhhh Twi, did you find a way you can help find my Cutie mar-"
Twilight interrupts her " I think I can help you and your little crusade... problems, I came up with a way to find a pony... a cutie mark whether or not if the pony yet discovered their special talent and it's just pass that door"
Overjoyed Applebloom jumps and gives twilight a nice huge hug and she says in excitement.
“Oh thank you thank you thank you! I can't wait to tell the others about this.
As soon as Applebloom goes for the door twilight levitates Applebloom and slammed her head against the surface of the wooden floor. knocking her out cold...
When Applebloom awoke, she discovered that she was not alone and she is now chained to the floor all she can move is her head and what she sees... A dim lighted white room with four other ponies each chained in a different way.
“Oh look your awake, we’ve been waiting for you" said twilight with a big smile on her face
"I was just waiting for the right moment t-"
"Where are we Snails?!" Snips said in panic
“I-I don't Snips I don't even know why we are here.”
“Maybe you shouldn't have thrown rocks at my window!” Twilight bursts out in anger
"This is just a joke right, this is a way to scare right!?!" Snips said in denial
Then suddenly multiple tubes start hovering over Applebloom. Then the tubes impale the poor defenseless Applebloom, each one in a different part of her body. One through her back and out her chest “ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!” Applebloom gives a big screech in pain, than one through her neck, Applebloom is still alive by sheer will power. Then a tube goes through where her cutie mark should be. Twilight unchains Applebloom and starts to levitate her
“Look you got your cutie mark, it’s pole dancing” with a grin.
Twilight levitates Applebloom over Snips and Snails. She is bleeding over the two colts. Barely able to talk, tears started to flow out of her eyes.
"Sh-ould've lis-ten to gran-ny smith.
Twilight's horn glowed brighter than before, Applebloom's body went upright and her head was glowing, with the last of her strength Applebloom gives one last loud scream as her skull was getting crushed , then blood pours down her face and in seconds her head becomes no bigger than her hoof, her head implodes..... Blood and brain fragments scattered all over snips and snails.
In shock snails released his bowels.
Twilight stands up on her hide legs and raises her front legs in the air then throws it down and the floor starts to elevate down to a white tube like pit.
"Let’s hope you two are smarter than you look, I’m going to ask the both of you a series of riddles that are so easy… an educated filly can solve it. I'm going to ask you 6 questions. Which means you have 6 chances and if you answer 1. 1! Question right than it will restore my faith in Equestria, but if you get a wrong answer... I’m going to throw the answer at you. "wh-what do you mean" snails said in fear. Without responding Twilight continued with the questions.

The Questions
Question 1!
You’re in a room with a mirror and no doors. The room has no windows or doors. How do you get out?
“You open the door of course” snails say with great confidence.
Wrong! You look in the mirror and see what you saw. You use the saw to cut the table in halves. You put the halves together and create a hole. You jump in the hole.
Twilight constructs multiple mirrors and starts throwing it at them one by one.
Snips escaped with minor injuries leaving his horn with one crack in the middle. But snails took it the worse he gets a shard of glass in his left upper arm. But he is unable to remove the shard of glass because of his firmly chained hooves.
Sorry I guess that was too advanced for you. Aren't you in the special ed in miss Cheerilee's class?
Snips snaps and with angry tone says "hey were not in special e-" Question 2! Twilight interrupts snips.
"A cult walks into a bar and says ouch". Why?
Snails was about to answer with a great big smile but before he can say the answer. Snips quickly stops him then says
“Just shut your mouth Snails you're going to get us kill! I got this one, Ok... here it goes. snips then answers “ he slips on a piece ice and falls down and that’s why he says ouch!”
Twilight gives snips an unimproved look "no, just no there's no piece of ice, no falling down, just a bar, yes a metal bar!
“Oh come on there’s no way anypony would know that” snips protested.
“Oops sorry guess you’re going to hit the bar aren’t you?” Twilight smiles
“Wait what?!” Than before he can react, Snips feels a sharp pain, a pain so intense he couldn’t process what happened to him. All he feels is a warm watery feeling across his head and throughout his legs and the cold marble floor. Snips was unable to see with his right eye all he can barely see is Snails unconscious covered with metal bars throughout his body and his head gushing out blood. He doesn’t seem to move.
Humph! I highly doubt you will make it through the next few questions. I guess I should go easy. Question 3! What’s yours but other ponies use it more then you?
Snails started to gurgle the words… “ ur meme, yoiiur mane!” snips then asks
Wha-what? Your mane?

Twilight then smiles and replies “is that your final answer?”
For a minute Snips looks at Twilight’s expression seeing for any sign of approval. Her smile seems hopeful. Snips had decided his final answer.
“ *sigh* it’s your mane.”
Twilight’s facial expression quickly changes from happiness to a great disapproval that Snips has never seen before. She has her teeth clenched together, her mane overshadowing her eyes as she looks down on him…
“You idiot!” Twilight grunted “you couldn't see that snails was trying to give you the answer that could change your pathetic fate! he was trying to say your Name! Twilight looks at Snails and says
“I’ll go easy on you. You do deserve to be in my world. But let us hope Snips doesn't kill you on your way to freedom.”
Once again Twilight proceeds to dish out punishment. Twilight constructs a single snail and places it gently on snails head… as for snips. she was turbulent towards him. She puts her hooves together in a rainbow motion. Scissors magically appear in the direction she moved her hooves. Then she lifts both hooves in the air and the scissors started to multiply behind her… it looked like a beautiful magic show. For a moment Snips was bewildered. Then she continued to put her hooves back together. She slides her hooves against each other as if she were a dealer in the Equestria poker tournaments. It was a barrage scissors raining down on him. As if she practice this for months… the scissors cut though him missing his vitals.
“I-I can’t feel my hooves” Snips said with tears flowing down his eyes
“That’s right, all you can do is sit th____ then suddenly snips urinates himself interrupting Twilight.
“Well your weak mind always seems to find a way to disappoint me. Might as well proceed to the next question….
Question 4! What goes up a chimney down, but won't go down a chimney up?
“um-um-um……a rock” Snips answers with all hope in him lost…
“you really want me to bash your head in with a rock?
“ Noooooooo! I-I----- mean smoke”
“Nope an umbrella” Said Twilight with a with a little smirk
“th-that’s it. no hitting us? No stabbing? You’re not going to shove the umbrella down my throat?
“No… but I will be needing it soon. Twilight said with her broad smile still on her face.
“What do you mea-
Question 5!
Three lives have I.
Gentle enough to soothe the skin, Light enough to caress the sky, Hard enough to crack rocks. What am I?
“Well I don’t get what you just said but may I have time to think about this?” looking up at Twilight
For a second Twilight looks back down at him “fine. But I think your friend won’t be able to help you.
“ Huh? He slowly turns with tears filling his eyes…… S-Snails…
Snails’ right leg was under his body and the left still managing to keep his appearance as if he were alive. Though his head is tilt down and his pupils are hollow…
“Well it’s up to you; don’t make his death be in vein.
“*stiff* *stiff* Snails I’m so sorry… I promise I’ll get this one right for you and turn this maniac in for you and Applebloom.
“I would like to see that. Now proceed to your answer.
With the last hope in his words Snips begins his conclusion. “I do know that the answer has something to do with that umbrella of yours. But I never heard of water being able to break a rock and the hardest thing of the umbrella is the handle bar of umbrella. So the handle of the umbrella is the answer.
Twilight is speechless. All she can do demonstrate her emotion. Her horn starts to aluminate. Snails’ lifeless body begins to move.
“Snails you’re alive!” Snips rejoice “I think I got it we c-can go home now”
Than Snails body levitates no more than 3 inches off the ground than starts slowly rotating. His hooves still Chained to the ground. His legs begin to break. The right front dislocates and frees itself from the bonds. The left front leg rips off completely, spreading blood around the floor. The left hide fractures to the point where it’s noodle like and slips off. The right hide hoof rips off and stays chained.
Snips eyes open wide to the horror in front of him. Snips looks at Twilight, Twilight just points at Snails.
Midair, faster and faster Snails rotates upward outside the pit. His body stops. Then his neck snaps, facing towards Snips…
“If you haven’t noticed. there is a lot of blood for a body as scrawny as that and Snips do you understand my message of why I did this to Snails lifeless body?
“No! No I don’t your just a m-m-monster!
“Hmm… not quite. What I’m trying to tell you is Snails is rolling over is grave. Do you know what was the answer is?”
“*stiff* *stiff* …” Slips reply
“Water”
The blood begins to go upward. Then the blood begins to slowly purify into water. Making a roof of water over Slips and Snails. When Slips Looks up at Snails it gives the allusion as if he is standing on the water looking up at him upside down.

*sigh* Question 6…..
“The pony, who makes it, sells it. The pony who buys, it never uses it. And the pony who uses it, doesn't know they are. What is it?”
“*tch*you know… I don’t even care anymore .after seeing that… that was the icing on the cake and I don’t think…… I know I can’t solve that question. So might as well try one more thing…
“Huh? And that is?
Snips cracked horn glows with a great power and he shoots a beam at Twilight… but the beam did not even make it part way. The beam in fact faded as if it never fired, and the horn keeps on glowing to a blinding state and overflowing with magic then the horn breaks in half… shocking him close to death. All snips can feel is his back on the floor and just realized his chains were released. The blood pouring from where his horn used to be was purifying to water.
“No the answer “I don’t care” is not right…it was in fact a coffin.
Then the water surrounding snails turns into a coffin incasing him in it. Than snips starts to float and as he goes up. he sees his reflection in the water…and he sees a coffin coming out of his reflection and it opens and sets him inside.
“ hmm and I thought snails would have the strength to survive…but you killed him and yourself…… time to drown in your own failure.”
Twilight opens 6 holes in snips coffin, 3 holes on each side and drops the coffins. Landing face down preventing snips from being able to open the coffin…Snails’ coffin falls perfectly as if he was able to have the chance to escape. Twilight fills the pit with the purified blood water and she can hear snips scream till his lungs fill in with the water. She smiles.
Twilight stumped closing the pit and walks away satisfied…

A Careless Mistake

With a big headache Pinkie Pie slowly regained consciousness unaware of the outcome that happened around her.
“Oh that was a doozy” said Pinkie pie as she awoke from unconsciousness
“Wh-Why can’t I move?!” Pinke screamed in panic
“Fluttershy!” Pinke screamed once more
“Hello Pinkie …why are you in my house?” Fluttershy said in confusion
“What! This is your house?! Why did you have me chained in this chair and yourself chain on a freaking table! What kinda party game is this?
“but I… Don’t own chains” Fluttershy said terrified
“But you said this is your hos-“
“No it’s my house” Twilight furiously interrupted Pinkie
“And this is no party game, in fact this is a test, you see it’s time for a new ruler… one that goes by the rule of natural selection or in other words survival of the fittest, I need a new Mane 6, one that would rule Equestria by my side with an incredible power that Celestia nor Luna can withstand.”
“Is this a joke? You’re not that good at jokes Twilight “said Pinkie in judgmental voice
Twilight chuckles and points to the remains of Applebloom
Heh heh you know comedy isn’t your cutie mark Twilight. But you going into dark comedy is okie dokie to me! ☺
With an instant rage twilight roared at an unamused Pinkie “could you for once know you’re in danger!? Look Fluttershy fainted”+
“That just means she’s a good actor, and I guess that her acting skills are much better than your dark comedy skills. You should just stick to magic missy. Tee he! You look mad Twilight want to see a funny face to made you feel better ☺
Why do you always act so- than suddenly A loud crack erupted in the living room
“All great …I swear to Celestia if I find snips and snails throwing rocks at my house I’ll-oh wait I killed them…who is that?” cautiously Twilight goes upstairs to investigate the sounds.
“What did you do to my house?!, you stupid gray little-“
“Oh hi Twilight, what are you doing here?” said a warm hearted and confuse Derpy Hooves
“This is my house, you’re in my house Derpy” grinding her teeth, trying to keep a clam mind
“Hey Derpy could you help me pack a delivery box for Princess Celestia, it’s a very important package and sense you’re a Delivery mare I guess you are the best mare for the job“
With a patriotic salute and a ready face that will make you chuckle “anything for the princess”
“Good it’s in the basement”
With twilight leading the way “Have you ever wanted to help ponies in need?”
“I love to see the warm smiles of everypony when I deliver their mail”
“As you see Celestia is starting to make mistakesand I think-“
Derpy notice Pinkie and a unconscious Fluttershy, without delay Derpy rush across the room “twilight your friends they need your--”
“What! You got Derpy in this joke too, look twilight this isn’t funny anymore and I think it time for you to let me go”
“Yes, I think it is time for you to go, Derpy I want you to cut Pinkie into small pieces and deliver it to Princess Celestia”
“Oh ha ha there you go with the dark comedy again, look your not made for-“
Without warning twilight throws a knife at Pinkie and gashes her shoulder
With a quick look at the cut, Twilight turns her back “there I started for you, I’ll go get the box”
Knowing fully of the evil deed she is about to commit. Derpy was paralyzed with tears streaming from her eyes “I…I…I think I can’t do this Twilight”
“Hmm maybe I guess killing somepony is something unpleasant for you to bear alone, hey I know. How about getting help by no other than the element of kindness herself. Hey Fluttershy I can tell you where conscious six minutes ago”
Twilight begin to drag a horrified Fluttershy “Please Twilight I don’t what to die!”
“This could be your initiation too, look at the bright side it’s like killing two birds with one knife “
Twilight puts Fluttershy next to Derpy, they both look at each other with tears in their eyes. Twilight clears her throat then tells the two ponies “you have 60 seconds to end Pinkie Pie’s life, I’ll go get the box and you two start right now. “
Twilight leaves the room closing the door behind her. Fluttershy then begins to hyperventilate; Pinkie cries hysterically “there’s no way out if this, could you at least make it quick”
Affected by what Pinkie said. Derpy was looking down with her mane leaving a shadow that covers her eyes. Fluttershy begins to make out words “If you do this I-I think I’ll be ok with this, Pinkie said its ok and this will save us and I thin-” within 15 seconds Twilight returns with the box “ok you two cut up Pinkie I’ll write Celestia my last letter to her. Enjoy the 30 seconds you have left
With an alerted tone Fluttershy begin to talk once more “um why aren’t you doing what Twilight said? You do know what she’ll do to us if you don’t right? you have too d-
“10 seconds lef-”
Derpy with all her speed rushes at Twilight, she shoulder charges Twilight forcing her to fly face first against the wall. In a moment’s notice Twilight regains consciousness and quickly turns to the view of Derpy rushing again for another shoulder charge that will most likely kill her. With a blink of an eye Snips coffin emerges from the floor throwing Derpy to the roof of the room. Twilight then begins to hit her over and over again with the coffin. Stopping for a moment to let Derpy hit the floor and Twilight then proceeds to slam the coffin repeatedly over her head
“What! Bet you’re thinking about your pathetic daughter huh? About the ponies who care about you? Well, you’re nothing! I hope you can hear me you fool! You could have been something! Inspiring other ponies! But now you’re nothing but a smudge on my roof and floor”
“She was just trying to do right thing”
“What did you say?! You ignorant litt-
The door suddenly opens “what! Who’s there?” asked Twilight
Moments pass than Spike emerged from the shadows of the door “Twilight you’ve been here for weeks and I’m worried about you and an-What did you do! Oh Celestia, oh Celestia!” Spike beings to hyperventilate, Twilight just looks with unwelcomed eyes. It took a while for Spike to work up the confidence to ask Twilight “what happen here?!”
Everything was quiet until Fluttershy let out a scream “Twilight is going to kill us!”
“What?! Why do you have to do this to Fluttershy, she’s your friend she took care of Owlicious every time you needed to go to Canterlot, she never did anything to you!”
Spike noticed the blood pouring out Pinkie’s shoulder and looked at Twilight staring her in the eyes “Sometimes you know, you do things that make me feel like hitting you with something big and this is one of those times. Pinkie treated you like you were part of her family, she was always thinking about you even after you became a shut in again, even when Applejack give up on trying to get you out of this house, Pinkie still been thinking of ways to get you out of the house, even for a second, she even went as far as to convince Luna and Celestia to make a solar eclipse over Ponyville just for a small chance to get you out of the house to see what’s going on”
Spike begins to walk towards the pit. “Twilight, why do you have a pit, you don’t have more ponies in there do you?” he goes on his knees and looks into the watery filled pit and notices the coffin. “Don’t tell me you got some-“
“There’s another coffin next to me you know, why don’t you take a look”
Spike gets up slowly “Ok I will” Spike begins to walk up to the coffin when he was about to open it, he feels a something fall on the top of his head “wh-what” Spike grabs the wet meaty cold bottom jaw of Derpy Hooves, he can see her tongue hanging, her teeth that could be easily plucked with little effort
Pinkie starts to cry “Derpy…”
Fluttershy hiding behind her hair, looking at the floor “she was brave “
Spike looks down and sees the mangled remains of Derpy, the look in her eyes are empty, cold, and looking right at him, Spike falls to the ground filled with fear as he looks across the room and see the pieces of Applebloom in the corner. “Yup, I’m going to report this to Celestia, there’s no way nopony will not notice the missing ponies”. Spike gets up and sprints towards the door, as he passed Twilight he feels light, weightless, soon the door looks like it’s getting farther from his gasp, what he doesn’t know that he had been pickup by one of Twilight’s Spells. Twilight throws Spike inches away from the pit before Spike can react Twilight shoots a beam trough his chest, Spike looks down only to be greeted by the remanding blood oozing out of his chest, he wish he could talk, to tell Twilight how much she has fallen, to tell her that he was looking only for the best for her, to tell her that she was like a sister, a mother, and his best friend
“Looks like you won’t be joining us,that’s fine I could always find another baby dragon egg, oh and Spike, you can die now”
As spike falls in the water Fluttershy tries to grab his little hands before he falls, but was unsuccessful, Spike moves backwards and falls into the pit, with a single bubble emerged from his new watery grave. “How dare you?!” Said Fluttershy with a burst of rage
“How dare I what, kill a dragon?” Twilight respond
“He was your friend” said Fluttershy hovering over Spike’s warty grave
“Never needed him”
“What?!”
“Yeah, he just gave me books off the shelf that I could easily get with a telekinesis spell, so I guess he was a waste the whole time”
“…”
“Fluttershy?” Asked Twilight with curiosity
“What?”
“Are you angered by my actions?”
What were all your lessons about friendship, all the times you said we could do this together?

Fluttershy started to inch towards Twilight.
“Fluttershy… are you challenging me?”
Twilight was infuriated by this and began to float towards
As they were about to meet in the middle of the room, Twilight’s horn began to glow its bright magenta color and a sudden tremor hit the room. As the ground shook, Fluttershy fell to the ground staring straight into Twilight’s eyes.
Fluttershy thought to herself “an earthquake in Equestria, only the Pegasi can do this”
“You can’t start an earthquake; Everypony in ponyville will begin to investigate this!
“It’s a tremor you idiot, It’s only concentrated into this room. I’m going to drag you to the darkness place in Equestria where nopony can hear you scream in agony, this is where you cry.”

In panic Fluttershy shielded her eyes full of tears and thought to herself “somepony help me, I’m scared, please make it stop”
“Would you stop thinking about how hopeless you are?” Twilight said with a smug look
“I can tell just by looking at you that you’re in a state of shock by the raw power I’m abo-“
“Fluttershy stop Twilight!” Screamed Pinkie Pie.
As quick as she can. Fluttershy goes for an all-out assault, knowing if she backed away she will die in this conflict, as she dash across the room, gooey black orbs emerged absorbing her wings making her unable to fly, Fluttershy tries to regain her balance by landing. But before she can land she notices hind legs has disappeared, Fluttershy belly slide half way across the room, stopping in center of the room. Horrified Fluttershy began to crawl away from Twilight in hope that she'll survive.
A black orbs appeared at the behind Fluttershy absorbing her slowly.
“You know, this was all your fault for being so foolish thinking you can kill me. Poor little Fluttershy is going to die in vain, oh think about the animals, those poor-poor animals".
The black orbs have reached Fluttershy’s face and no words were needed to describe the fear in her eyes.